sing quotations only as the smallest amount of weight .

Citation nail a point for you, not

make it for you. Most of your work cited page would reflect stats rather than quotations.

Pos

Logical Sequence.
Starting with the origins of the problem
Good transitions ad a clear thesis.
Good use of stats.
Breaking down the study.
First paragraph, page 2.

Neg

Lack of personal bias.

Employing logic that divorces logic from the work.
Pathos - Human angle.
Anecdotes, hypothetical, some sort of emotional value adding to the paper.
Second paragraph, - bringing the counter argument to undermine my own argument.
They dont have a big effect on crime however they have these. Dont bring in any
positives.
Whoever, we shouldnt make laws based on how people feel

Addl Info

Explain how the ticketing process and economic impact.