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Camryn Chandler
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15 November 2017
Sally Kempton, a feminist, said, When men imagine a female uprising, they imagine a
world in which women rule men as men have ruled women. Sally Kempton is explaining that
men fear women being in control and/or in a leadership position that are supposedly only set out
for men. Kemptons quote and feminist theory are supporting that women, even today, live in a
patriarchal society. Feminist theorys main focus is to show the audience or reader that womens
cultural identity is primarily viewed as negative or weak, while men are usually viewed as
dominant. To add, Much feminist criticism, that is, although it assumes the existence of unequal
gender-based relations of power (Newton & Rosenfelt). The movie Mulan, projects all of
those characteristics of feminist theory. The Walt Disney film is about a Chinese princess
warrior who is trying to take her ill fathers place in the Chinese military. However, a woman in
this patriarchal regime is unable to serve in the military, but she impersonates a male figure to
train and be recruited to fight. Along the way, she uses her brains to fight off a hun invasion and
falls in love with the captain. All in all, this movie is portraying women are supposed to be
beautiful, a wife, clean and do what they are told. But, if they fail, they are immediately
dishonored by their family. However, Mulan breaks away from the norms of society and remains
In Mulan, the norms of society is to mold a woman into becoming a wife for a man that is
selected for her. However, if she fails, she is dishonored by her family. According to StudyLib,
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Feminist criticism is ways in which literature and film undermine the political, social, and
psychological oppression of women and how this critique strives to expose the explicit and
implicit misogyny in male writing about women. In the beginning of the film, it shows Mulan
waking up late and being a mess, which is not how a lady should act, according to this era. She
later is needed to get hair, makeup, and wardrobe change to have an interview to show if she is
worthy enough to be a wife. In Mulan, the matchmaker calls Mulans name and she says
Present! and the matchmaker says under her breath while writing on the clipboard, speaking
without permission. as if women are not allowed to speak without authoritys permission.
However, she makes a fool of herself and lets her family down. These scenes portray women
during this era to be trained and formed into a wife for the man she is forced to marry in her
town. Altogether, Mulans culture is forcing her, other women in her town and country to
become a wife to the men and do as they say, even though they may not want to.
Next, Mulan portrays her savage and warrior-like behavior throughout the movie while
facing obstacles while impersonating a man. In the film, there is a war breaking out in China and
men in the military are being called to fight and Mulans father is one of them. However, her
father is too ill to go, but is still called to train for the fight. In the film, Mulan says to Chi Fu, the
military advisor, Please Sir, my father has already fought bravely and she is suddenly cut off
mid-sentence by Chi Fu and he shouts, Silence! You would do well to teach your daughter to
hold her tongue in a mans presence (Mulan). Sadly, her father tells Mulan she dishonored him.
With that being said, Mulan takes matter into her own hands and impersonates a man to take her
fathers place in the war. She goes through training and struggles and plans to give up, but she
overcomes her weakness and becomes stronger than all of the men and is seen as dominant and a
leader. Overall, Mulans strong and vigorous behavior during training is causing the men in the
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military to follow and look up to her, but the military men still believe she is a man. Sadly, she is
only viewed as tough, because she is impersonating a man. Therefore, if she was to reveal her
true self, Mulan would be killed, because fighting was not a part of a womans role.
Lastly, women are not the only ones who have stereotypical roles in Mulan. The men are
also supposed to be viewed a certain way. According to the Prezi about gender roles in Mulan,
the men are viewed as strong, dominant, messy, unable to cook, etc. Also throughout the film,
men are only seen as doing masculine activities (Anna & Heffering). In the film, the soldiers
and Mulan are singing the song, Ill make a man out of you (Mulan). During the song the
soldiers are performing masculine duties. For example, they are setting off bombs, fishing,
fighting, and other activities to train. However, during these activities, the men are struggling and
Towards the end of the song, Mulan is defeated and is told to go home, but Mulan
overcomes the norms of society. She escapes the mold that is placed on women and defeats the
obstacles that she faced on the way. In result of Mulan facing her challenges, the men followed
her and gained confidence. Therefore, societys beliefs on women are simply wrong. Mulan is a
warrior and towards the end of the movie- when she is viewed as her true self- she saves China
and the Emperor honors her and offers her a position on his council. Not to mention, as a
woman. Societys expectations are shattered from Mulans abilities and Mulan continues to
remain true to herself. In the end, Mulan defeats societys roles for women from her warrior-
In conclusion, the movie Mulan, portrays stereotypical roles for both men and women.
First, women in this era live in a patriarchal society and this movie proves it. Mulan is a
powerful, smart, and committed woman who did not want her ailing father to fight in the war.
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So, Mulan mimicked a man for her fathers sake. She ended up becoming a leader in the military
and the men followed and worshiped her. However, when they found out she was a woman they
dishonored her and sent her home. But, that did not stop her. She did not want being a woman to
keep her from finishing the job and saving her country. In the end, Mulan proved her worthiness
and made society overlook the fact she was a woman, and she was finally seen for the hero she
truly was (Anna & Heffering). Next, the men are also forced to play a special role in society-
dominant, superior, messy and for the most part, lacked military skills. They struggled to train
and were weak. However, they had to keep working hard in order for them to be able to do the
training and get through it. Their strength was not given, but was earned from working hard. To
add, the only activities the men were doing were viewed as masculine. There was no cooking
or taking care of themselves, so that led to show stereotypical roles were played with both
genders. Finally, gender should not decide whether or not you fight for your country, decide who
is the leader, and measure a persons strength. Women and men are both capable of doing
whatever they set their mind to as long as they remain true to yourself.
Work Cited
Anna, Jace and Heffering, Lewis. How Disney Portrays Gender in Mulan, Prezi. 17
and-feminist-criticism#
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https://www.netflix.com/search?q=mulan
Newton, Judith and Rosenfelt, Deborah. Feminist Criticism and Social Change. RoutLedge,
2013.
https://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=uZBQm79z9WwC&oi=fnd&pg=PP5&d
q=feminist+theory+in+literature&ots=Vf7mXLa3i0&sig=tyYFtQKGyQWAFDOsoTA0a
kNrjyg#v=onepage&q=feminist%20theory%20in%20literature&f=false
W.1.a: Thesis (Fully and (Demonstrated) (Attempted, but (Attempted, but (no attempt
Your score: 3 creatively The last a couple errors multiple errors made) The last
demonstrated) sentence is a exist) The last exist) The last sentence is a
The last thesis statement sentence is a sentence is a thesis statement
sentence is a that is clear, thesis statement thesis statement that is clear,
thesis statement sophisticated, that is clear, that is clear, sophisticated,
that is clear, and insightful. sophisticated, sophisticated, and insightful.
sophisticated, and insightful. and insightful.
and insightful.
W. 1. a: Topic (Fully and (Demonstrated) (Attempted, but (Attempted, but (No attempt
Sentences creatively Each body a couple errors multiple errors made) Each
Your score: 2 demonstrated) paragraph exist) Each body exist) Each body body paragraph
Each body begins with a paragraph paragraph begins with a
paragraph clear, begins with a begins with a clear,
begins with a sophisticated, clear, clear, sophisticated,
clear, and insightful sophisticated, sophisticated, and insightful
sophisticated, topic sentence. and insightful and insightful topic sentence.
and insightful topic sentence. topic sentence.
topic sentence.
claims.
Comments:
Total: 89/100 B+
This is a good start. The essay focuses a lot on summary, though. Remember, in an analysis
essay you should write your essay as if the reader has watched or read what you're analyzing.
You don't need to summarize or tell the story. Instead, you should focus on analysis. Use the
movie to support you analytical points, not your analytical points to support your telling of the
story. Right now the focus is on telling the story instead of the analysis. The analytical points
need to be more clear. The elaboration of the evidence should explain what you are supposed to
take away from the evidence or how it supports your analytical point.
Rubric rating submitted on: 12/16/2017, 10:14:25 PM by danielle.cook@redstreaks.org
4 3 2 1 0
W.1.a: Thesis (Fully and (Demonstrated) (Attempted, but (Attempted, but (no attempt
Your score: 4 creatively The last a couple errors multiple errors made) The last
demonstrated) sentence is a exist) The last exist) The last sentence is a
The last thesis statement sentence is a sentence is a thesis statement
sentence is a that is clear, thesis statement thesis statement that is clear,
thesis statement sophisticated, that is clear, that is clear, sophisticated,
that is clear, and insightful. sophisticated, sophisticated, and insightful.
sophisticated, and insightful. and insightful.
and insightful.
W. 1. a: Topic (Fully and (Demonstrated) (Attempted, but (Attempted, but (No attempt
Sentences creatively Each body a couple errors multiple errors made) Each
Your score: 3 demonstrated) paragraph exist) Each body exist) Each body body paragraph
Each body begins with a paragraph paragraph begins with a
paragraph clear, begins with a begins with a clear,
begins with a sophisticated, clear, clear, sophisticated,
clear, and insightful sophisticated, sophisticated, and insightful
sophisticated, topic sentence. and insightful and insightful topic sentence.
and insightful topic sentence. topic sentence.
topic sentence.
examples and up major claims examples and examples and up major claims
details to back in each body details to back details to back in each body
up major claims paragraph. up major claims up major claims paragraph.
in each body in each body in each body
paragraph. paragraph. paragraph.
Comments:
Total: 94/100 A-
You did a good job adding in some analytical statements to give the essay more of an analytical
focus. The essay still has a lot of summary, though.