Statement of Purpose/ Evidence/Elaboration Editing/Conventions Focus and Organization Weight: 40% Weight: 20% Weight: 40% The response is fully sustained and consistently and The response provides thorough and convincing The response displays adequate command purposefully focused: support/evidence for the controlling idea or of all grade level and preceding level main idea that includes the effective use of conventions of writing: • controlling idea or main idea of a topic is sources, facts, and details. The response focused, clearly stated, and strongly maintained achieves substantial depth that is specific and • some errors in usage and sentence relevant: formation may be present, but no • controlling idea or main idea of a topic is systematic pattern of errors is displayed introduced and communicated clearly for the • use of evidence from sources is smoothly purpose, audience, and task integrated, cited, comprehensive, relevant, • use of punctuation, capitalization, and and concrete spelling is adequate The response has a clear and effective organizational structure creating unity and • a variety of effective elaborative techniques completeness: is used
• a variety of transitional strategies is consistently The response demonstrates strategic use of
used to effectively clarify the relationships language to produce clear communication: between and among ideas • precise language clearly and effectively • progression of ideas from beginning to end is expresses ideas logical • use of academic and domain-specific • introduction and conclusion are effective for vocabulary is clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose audience and purpose
• appropriate sentence structure variety
produces strong connections among ideas
References and Citations
When referring to evidence and information from passages, students should use paraphrasing and short quotations. To credit sources, students should use informal, in-text citations (e.g., MLA author or title tags). v 1.2