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Section 1: General Information


Student Name Ms Ammara Kanwal

Student Roll # F15-PBA-002

Student & azzal.kanwal@gmail.com

Supervisor awaisimam@gmail.com

Email Address

Title of The mediating role of psychological empowerment with structural

Research empowerment and job satisfaction: An empirical evidence from Banking

Thesis/Paper Sector of Lahore.

Major Area of Management

Research

Section 2: Correction Details


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Title improved
Checkout various research papers onnet
which involves role of mediating variables
and from their learn how to improve the
Title of title of of thesis..I am mentioning some
1 samples here:
thesis
• Manager emotional intelligence
and project success: The
mediating role of job satisfaction
andtrust

• The mediating role of job


satisfaction in the relationship
between job training satisfaction
andturnover intentions.

I have C
used
2 Formatting Correctformattingasper MS thesis
guidelinesof LGU specially of pages
vii and ix
Ix,x,xi / I have correct

3 Table of
Correctspellingmistakes

contents

I have changed

4 Page Pagenumbersaremissing onsomepages


numbers including appendices.

changed it

Example:
Tables: Tablesofch2:
Table2.1,Table2.2

5 Numbering Tablesofch3:
of table and
Table3.1,Table3.2, Table3.3etc
figures
Figures:Figuresofch3:
Figure3.1
Figuresofch4:
Figure4.1,Figure4.2
6 Page xv / Arrangeabbreviationsin alphabetical have changed
Abbreviation order.
7 Page 4 / • Addsignificanceof banking sector i have added
Introduction specifically bankingsectorofPakistan.
• In problem identification, add
problems of banking sector of
Pakistan also. E.g percentageof
dissatisfied employeesinbanksof
Pakistan.
8 Page 6/ Afterpage6add definitionoftermsin write the
Chapter 1 chapter1
definition

9 Literature As you are focusing onintrinsic, changed


review extrinsicandrelational satisfaction so
give detail explanation about them in
literature review.
10 Page 21 - 25 Topicscoveredinthese pages arepartof added
chapter3 soshifttheminthat chapter.
11 Page 27/ Sequenceofchapter3 will beasfollow: wrote

• Research theory
Chapter 3
• Conceptualframework
• Independent and dependent variables
of study (in tabular form mention
independent, dependent and
mediating variables- no need to
explain what is dependent or
independent variable.
• Hypothesesdevelopment
• Methodology
Research design
Instrument development
Reliability
Validity
Pilot study
• Procedure
Sampling(youcan adjust
populationunder thisheading)
Datacollection
Dataanalysistechniques
Arrange chapter 3 as per this sequence
and add missing content.
• Replace‘hypothesized research
model’by ‘conceptualframework’.
• Change model as per given figure:

Page 21/

Model

changed it
• Nameofchapter4is ‘resultsand
Chapter 4 discussion’ (pg30)
• Discussionportionwillbe partof
chapter4notchapter5(pg78)
• In demographic analysis remove
column of valid percent. Moreover
check out sampletablewhichi have
madeonfirstpg ofch4
• Incorrelationanalysis tableonlyuse
abbreviations (pg42)
• Check corrections which i have made
on pg 42. At end of correlation
analysis do mention in one linewhich
ofthehypothesis areacceptedand
which are rejected.
• Remove reliability results from chap
4 (pg 31) and add them in chapter 3as
perabove statedsequence.
• Noneedtoadd reliabilitystatisticsof
pilotstudy.
• Followcorrectionsmade in page44
throughout chap4.
changed it
• Giveheadingof ‘appendices’on
separate page
• Thenagain on separate page give
heading of
appendixno.1
Questionnaire
Page 95/
• Make’part1demographic’ of
Appendices questionnaire presentablebyarranging
positionsofboxes.
• Bettertouseword ‘foreign banks’
insteadof international banks
• Inquestionnairethereis no needof
giving headingofvariablesbeforeitems
• Forguidelinesregarding listingof
bankscheck 102pageofthesis
• Youwilladd
• Appendixno.2
Listofbranches

• Appendixno.3
Listofbranches
(aftersimplerandom sampling)

• Appendixno.4
Listofbranches
(Participatedinstudy)

• Appendixno.5
(plagiarismreport)
Page 83/ ‘References’isnota chapter changed it

Oncerecheckyour references byusing


References APA6th edition guidelines.

Page 99 to No need to add these pages in thesis

101

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Supervisor Name:
Student’s Name: Ammara kanwal Co-Supervisor Name:
sir khaliq

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