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Mrs. Davis
Composition 1
03 November 2017
Social media was intended to be a tool for communication. It was meant to be a web,
interconnecting people. The way it is used, however, is as speckle is on drywall. It is a filler for
the parts of our lives that we feel have cracks or holes. An idea that was supposed to bring people
behavior is a growing issue in terms of social media. In a study regarding personality traits found
in Facebook users, narcissism and vanity held the highest percentage of traits among
participants. “The results of the studies by Buffardi & Campbell (2008) and Mehdizadeh
(2010) indicate that people with high levels of narcissism engage in frequent use of Facebook.”
(Tracii, Xenos). Social media is an online realm of self-promotion. What is posted is what a
person wants others to see. Often offering only the misleading snapshots of pieces of one’s life.
However, just as Facebook draws out those without humility, it also pulls those without esteem.
Based on it’s core concept, it is no surprise that social media offers a certain appeal to
those who are lonely. “In regards to Facebook usage habits, it was expected that shy and lonely
people would spend more time using Facebook per day, while conscientious people would spend
less.” (Tracii, Xenos). It seems that people who are lonely join social media to find
companionship. The problem there is that these friendships are often artificial. They offer
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temporary satisfaction and a feeling of belonging, often confused with genuine affection.
“Similarly, Sheldon (2008) found that people who are socially anxious like to use Facebook to
combat loneliness.” (Tracii, Xenos). Therefore, even when used properly, if social media is
relied upon too heavily as a source of companionship it can still be toxic. The previous research
Teenagers seem to feel the affects of social media full force. This is no surprise
Media, 75 percent of teenagers in America currently have profiles on social networking sites.” (
Ramasubbu). Statistics like these make you wonder how social media will affect the mindset of
this generation as they mature. As their main outlet of communication, social media is an
important part of their lives. However, the convenience of online messaging should not replace
the effort that goes into face to face conversations. At this rate, conversational skills will become
as foreign as self-awareness among teens. Even though social media seems like a completely
different realm, it is just as potent as what happens in the physical world. Bullying is no
exception to this.
Cyberbullying is a real issue among teens. “32 percent of online teens admit to having
experienced a range of menacing online advances from others.” (Ramasubbu). This is a modern-
day goliath for students to deal with, but also for school systems to combat. Much like a ghost, it
is hard to resist something you do not see happening until it has already happened. This form of
bullying spares physical pain, but leaves unpleasant feelings of discomfort and a lack of privacy.
“Pew research found that 15 percent of teens were disturbed and uncomfortable about having had
their private message forwarded or posted in a public forum.” (Ramasubbu). This may link back
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to the polar ends of esteem issues found in many Facebook users. Another result with negative
Seeking validation through social media can be a toxic ordeal. The idea that popularity
compares to a person’s net value is an appalling misconception found in avid social media
consumers. Most people in this mindset likely do not see it as an issue. They are hooked by the
anticipation and excitement that waiting for a response brings. The gratification of a compliment
brought on by another person. On the other hand, it can bring on a humiliating or disappointed
feeling when approached with criticism. The world of social media is based on approval and
acceptance. Criticism, even when constructive, is not often welcome. This is no different in a
professional setting.
Social media in the workplace has it’s pros, but also it’s cons. Along with being a
distraction, it damages worker productivity. As brought up before, social media can become an
addiction. This can consume an employee’s time, even though seemingly harmless at the start. It
also affects human relations. Just as in a school, the more you communicate through social
media, the less you have to engage in messy face to face conversations. This can damage the
mission of a company. Not having every employee communicating as a team could cause
The affects of social media largely depend on the person using it. “Another study
showed that Facebook makes us happier and increased social trust and engagement among
users.” (Ramasubbu). Though it has its downfalls, social media can be a useful tool. If used
properly and in moderation, it can be a healthy source of communication among family and
friends. It has the potential to unite communities and peoples of different beliefs. Not everyone
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falls into a pit of narcissism and self-loathing brought on by the hand of social media. One day it
is possible that no one will. Social media has much potential, but also much work to do.
In conclusion, social media just like anything else has potential to be misused. It is used
as it was intended by few. Social media can become an addiction just as nicotine or alcoholism.
A parent should monitor closely what a child engages in on the internet, but more specifically on
social media. If not regulated, social media can cause issues of insecurity or an inflated ego.
Though convenient, social media should not replace personal or face to face conversations. A
workplace has a place for social media, but must also be careful with it. Lastly, self-worth should
not be based on the likes of those you do not know when the ones you do are who matter.
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Work, Cited
With active links, this article has relevant information that was recently updated. The
information hits on target with my topic in terms of age range and current issues. This article was
written by the CEO of mobiclip.com, a tool that offers parental controls on mobile devices.
Active links are contained in the article in relation to the studies shown throughout the column.
Lastly, this is an informative piece offering facts based on teens and social media’s effect on
them.
Homayoun, Ana. “The Secret Social Media Lives of Teenagers.” The New York Times, 07
The information provided in this article is up to date and touches on recent topics. It is useful to
see a common issue in another light. Written by the author of a book regarding social media
among teens, Ana Homayoun’s insight and opinion is an asset. Much of Homayoun’s provided
insight is based off studies, in which she provides access to. In conclusion, this article contains a
broad look at the countries youth and their social media epidemic.
Blaszczak-Boxe, Agata. “Social Media Use in Teens Linked to Poor Sleep, Anxiety.” LiveScience,
This article shows the progression of our youth and its involvement with social media throughout the
past two years. The topic is geared towards a health oriented hindsight on the effects of long term social
media usage. Blaszcak-Boxe is a dedicated graduate level writer who focuses on health, and psychology.
Within the article statistics are provided showing the links between depression, anxiety, and increased
stress levels. Links are attached for each. In addition, the included information shows a look at the
Tracii, Ryan. Xenos, Sophia. “Computers in Human Behavior.” ScienceDirect, 09 January 2011,
http://www.sciencedirect.com.
The information in the article is drawn out throughout a study, but discussed in depth throughout.
Contained is factual evidence throughout a strict procedure that supports my stance. Both writers
are experienced on the topic of social media. Though the study was not done by the writers, they
provided a step by step description of the procedure and results. The article in collaboration with