Unit 10 Feedback

Franki Portas Feedback. 23/04/2018

LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

Pass is the highest grade you can achieve for this learning outcome. You have investigated a
range of media adaptations (3). commenting on the success of this. However, can you
please re-embed this work. It is hard to read.
For P2, the adaptation ideas for a creative product, you have commenting on the feasibility,
constraints but the target audience is a little lacking at times. Can you please ensure that
you add in the audience terminology (demographics, psychographics and socio-economic
groups) and cover who the primary and secondary audiences would be for each adaptation
idea.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Grade for LO2 Part A (Treatment): P (the highest grade you can achieve is a Merit)
Grade for LO2 Part B (Storyboard): M (the highest grade you can achieve is a Distinction)
Overall Current Grade for LO2: Pass

Treatment Feedback:
● An excellent treatment here, just a few things to add to secure a Merit grade
(required for this grade).
● Add more detail to the target audience profile, add primary and secondary audience
and also the audience terminology.
● Research composers for the media form and genre similar to what you are adapting
and add some to the soundtrack section, commenting on the work they have made
and relevance to your work.
● Explain casting in relation to the audience.
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Storyboard Feedback:
● I cannot see the storyboard, this needs adding to your blog again. I have not been
able to read the content and provide much feedback, but what is below, is based on
your pitch feedback:
● Add more detail in the description box. Explain setting, costume, lighting, props
(mise en scene).
● Add movement arrows to the storyboard.

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: 18th May 2018