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NAME : SITI NUR HIDAYAH BINTI YUNUS

MATRIX NO. : S47356


GROUP : G33
LECTURER : MADAM NORAINI BINTI MOHD SATTA
ACADEMIC WRITING SKILLS (BBB3101) - PROCESS WRITING

INTRODUCTION :
INTRODUCTION

“Cyber-bullying is poised to turn into biggest online concern, already affecting up to 38% of all children”. This quotation came from Dr Marty
Wild emphasizing on how bad cyberbullying is a form of bullying or harassment using electronic. Cyberbullying and Cyber harassment are also
known as online bullying. It has become increasingly common, especially among teenagers. So, people should avoid being the cyberbully if
want to have a better day in this harmony’s world. Opponents may think that cyberbullying should not be suspended from school. However, I
strongly believe that it should be suspend because of some reason.

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NAME : SITI NUR HIDAYAH BINTI YUNUS
MATRIX NO. : S47356
GROUP : G33
LECTURER : MADAM NORAINI BINTI MOHD SATTA
ACADEMIC WRITING SKILLS (BBB3101) - PROCESS WRITING

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Firstly, cyber bully should be suspend because it can interrupt the emotions of the victims. Cyber bullying is one of the current issue that
may cause many problems to people. Cyber bullying is a serious matter that can occur through SMS, text and apps, or online in social media,
forum or games where people can view, participate in or share the content. If it is not be prevented, it’s can affect the physical health and the
emotion which is the victims will be get the health problems such as anxiety, depression, and lack of appetite. Anxiety is essentially worrying
about the future, about the things that haven’t happened yet and probably won’t. If this happen continuously, people may get depression and
then lack of appetite because always thinking about the problems will happen. According to Nixon (2014), he agree that the victims and the bullies
have psychological problems and physical health such as depression, anxiety, problems in sleeping and headache. All the related false stories
that written in social media have cause the victim to be worried and afraid to deal with everyone. Next, the cyber bully should be suspend to
prevent committed suicide among teenagers. The suicidal case are increasing day by day, so this case may be the problems to all the country.
Suicide happen because they are depressed, psychotic, impulsive, crying out for help, philosophical desire to die and they are make a mistake.
According to McNamee (2014), few studies state there is evidence that cyberbullying can cause a risk of suicidal thoughts. So, every action is
needed to make sure the rate of suicidal cases in the world can be decreased.

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NAME : SITI NUR HIDAYAH BINTI YUNUS
MATRIX NO. : S47356
GROUP : G33
LECTURER : MADAM NORAINI BINTI MOHD SATTA
ACADEMIC WRITING SKILLS (BBB3101) - PROCESS WRITING

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Secondly, cyberbully should be suspend because to give some lesson to them. All the lesson given are in order to give some awareness
among cyber bullies. This is because the cyberbully may tends to do something in the future which is in the school and later, in the universities
and also at the workplace. So the others people who see friend or someone you know is being bullied, you must make a report to inform at the
discipline teacher. They have to make a report to school for ensure that the cyberbully not continuously bullied the people. As discussed by
Clifford (2012), awareness can change the thinking. That awareness allows a positive environment to emerged. So, this is a positive decision if
cyberbully be suspended from school. In this situation, if people who have a positive perception. So the rate of cyberbullying can be decreased.
In other hand, the cyberbullying is a bully. There is no cyberbullying that can bring the positive impact for human’s life. So the cyberbully must be
prevented. Even if they can’t determine who the cyberbully is, they can offer the student resources they may need at the time. Most of people in
school have access to counselling services and other resources that can help student to understand and deal with cyberbullying. This is because
most school have some type of disciplinary process and also have rules against any form of bullying or harassment. As mentioned by Hinduja
and Patchin (2014), students know that the cyberbullying is unacceptable and will cause discipline’s problems. So, to prevent the big causes
happen, the cyberbully have be suspended from school. The students need to see the school take action to stop cyberbullying when it is occurring.
If students know that the school takes it seriously, that it has policies and procedures designed to prevent the behaviour, the students will be
more likely to report cyberbullying when they see it or when it is happening to them. So this situation will be bring the positive affect to all people.
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NAME : SITI NUR HIDAYAH BINTI YUNUS
MATRIX NO. : S47356
GROUP : G33
LECTURER : MADAM NORAINI BINTI MOHD SATTA
ACADEMIC WRITING SKILLS (BBB3101) - PROCESS WRITING

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Lastly, cyberbully should be suspend because to respect the victim’s feeling. This is because, some victims are very sensitive in social environment,
so they may sad with the humiliated that have been given to them. They also feel disinterested in school. If the cyberbully still at the school, the victims may
feel down and scared. Usually, some of the victims may not attend to the school because of scared with the bully’s people. According to Gordon (2018), the
rate of victims attendance at school are more absent than non-bullied kids. This is because, they skip school only to avoid from facing the cyber bully. All of
that because they feel sad by the message that are shared. The victims becomes lose their concentration or study in school because of anxiety and stress
with the cyberbully. They may out of school or lost interest in further their studies. So the cyberbully must be suspended from school. This situation shows us
that, all of the consequence may happen if the cyberbully not be suspended from school. As we all known, the concentration is very important in our studies.
Concentration has many uses and benefits. It assists in studying, enables faster comprehension, improves the memory, helps in focusing on a task, job or
goal, and therefore, achieving them more easily and efficiently. In other hand, the victims may feel like humiliation all days. As we all known, the humiliation
defined as the emotion you feel when your status is lowered in front of others. You may feel annoyed with yourself when you make a mistake or when be a
victims. According to Robinson and Segal (2018), the cyberbullies may be hunted you everyday, and everywhere. So there is no place that you can feels safe.
A few clicks may be witnessed by all the people in the internet. This is shows us that, the spreading of news very fast in the internet. Any of false stories about
the victims may make they humiliated. So the cyberbully should be suspend from school to respect the others feeling.

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NAME : SITI NUR HIDAYAH BINTI YUNUS
MATRIX NO. : S47356
GROUP : G33
LECTURER : MADAM NORAINI BINTI MOHD SATTA
ACADEMIC WRITING SKILLS (BBB3101) - PROCESS WRITING

CONCLUSION :
CONCLUSION

In conclusion, cyberbullying should be suspended from school. So I not agree with some opponents may think that it is not be suspend from
school. Therefore, cyberbullying should be suspend because it may affect the emotion of the victims. Other than that, all of the punishment are
in order to give some lesson to cyberbully. Besides that, to respect the victims feeling for make sure they have a better day in life. So, I think
there is a lot of bad thing of being the cyberbully. Because of that, people should aware with this cyberbully’s cases to prevent the cyber bully is
continuously happen.

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