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pam benjamin
skunk river 12
d.w. lichtenberg
ian tuttle
thoroughbread 22
all caps poem 24
andy o. dugas
elise hunter
the men 36
keely hyslop
lauren becker
closest 62
his days 64
chris cole
charles kruger
greg gerke
c.r. stapor
kamchatka 85
meghan thornton
the number 89
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No one believed when the story came through on the AP wire. Two copy
editors and a composing room intern grabbed it off the reel and passed it
around the press room jokingly. It was straight out of “Weekly World
News;” maybe Batboy was behind this caper.
“No man can eat 50 eggs.” The announcer Louisiana drawled into the
microphone. The Pork Palace was stuffed to capacity; the folks of
Trotterville loved their eating contests. The preferred consumptive was pork,
but the mayor’s son Ricky Lee watched “Cool Hand Luke” fourteen times
last week on TBS and wanted eggs.
“I can eat 100 hot dogs pork OR beef!” Jim Bob screamed to the adoring
crowds with raised fists. He could hork down strait pork, but always had
problems with the bread. It stuck to his mouth, and he had to chew, but the
hot dogs always went down whole. They piled in little meat tube pyramids
in his tummy and Jim Bob was known to massage his belly to restack the
contents. It never worked if there was bun involved. “So let’s see about these
piddily eggs!” A small wager between competitors had four large men
hunched over 200 pealed white chicken eggs, medium size. They glistened
in the sweaty summer sun, their yellow yolks ringed with grey because
Margie Sue overcooked more than a few.
The prize was three thousand dollars and pride, but side bets reached over
thirty grand. The whole town of Trotterville was invested; even third graders
had Pokemon cards doubled down. Everyone loved when the fat men came
to town. These traveling monstrosities were better than Santa; the town
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would be buzzing about the eggs for weeks to come, but these Santa’s
squared gifted disaster and exploded stockings.
This was Jimmy Ray’s first rodeo. He joined the competitive eating circuit
three days previous, but trained his whole life for moments like this. He’d
always been obese, not just fat; his folds needed to be powdered twice a day
to avoid crevice rot. He didn’t mind being made fun of, he’d made money
off it. “Jimmy Ray! Jimmy Ray! Betcha can’t eat three bologna sandwiches
in one minute!”
“Jimmy Ray, Jimmy Ray! Betcha can’t eat two snails and a jar of peanut
butter in under two minutes!”
His youth was spent preparing for the big time, and he’d finally made it.
Those eggs didn’t stand a chance; he planned on chewing every other one:
swallow, chew, swallow, chew. His mama would be so proud.
Travis and Trevor, the eating twins, were rumored to train on whole pigs.
Their daddy owned a butcher shop in Louisville, and would bury a pig in a
pit, Hawaiian style, letting the boys split the whole animal in a sitting for
practice. They were best with ribs and oysters, separately, and took New
Orleans last month. They played to the crowd with tandem dances and
football style end-zone celebrations. Trevor “The Python” Jones was favored
to win because he’d had his back molars removed last year and could
swallow almost anything whole.
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The contest was less dramatic than the town of Trotterville hoped for. All
four finished their 50 eggs. Big Jimmy Ray finished first, followed by
Trevor, then Jim Bob and Travis. All were within thirty seconds of one
another. They slid off the stage and rolled back to their shared room at the
Motel 6 on the main drag. None vomited their precious cargo. Jimmy Ray
even went to the chicken and waffle house for dinner and ate three crispy
leg-thigh combos with extra butter and syrup for dipping. Some kids asked
for his autograph; he burped in a young girl’s face to which she lovingly
replied, “I’ll never wash this face again.”
The egg gas was funny at 7pm. All four reposed on their beds, farting
loudly, shaking the walls; the smell wafted under the door and caused
complaint in the next room. The whole area surrounding their stink vacated.
They laughed and caroused, pulling one another’s fingers, until Travis and
Trevor decided to show the newbie a childhood trick. “Have you ever lit one
on fire?” They asked.
“We do it all the time. It’s easy. I can make a fireball as big as your head.”
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Skunk River
an excerpt from A Welcome End to Knowing
He was going out to check the Skunk River. That was what Billy told his
mother the night that he ran away. It was 1992 and one of the first days of
spring. The war was over. He was sixteen years old and he’d never had a
father’s acreage, and the faint outline of Buxton in the valley below—a
former coal-mining town, a former “guru” town, with its golden domes and
flags on masts. He looked up as the moon broke out from between clouds
and there was brightness on the path and brightness in the fields. He knew
Two miles from the highway he veered left toward the lake, taking a
shortcut through last year’s crop. The corn stalks, once waxy and resilient,
draped against the row, leaves eaten to mesh, and the color of chalk. The
corn had full-on spit its insides out. Billy walked through rows of corn that
into the pit of the earth. He reached down and grabbed the dirt, filling his
pockets with it, until the silt stained his hands and poured from his pants like
an hourglass.
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fertilized. One spring a tornado had touched down yards from where Billy
and his dad were stringing barbed wire at the edge of the field. They sat in
the tractor’s cabin until the hail stopped and the black swirl passed, and then
Billy’s father said, “Get the nails. Ten more yards of fence and then it won’t
Now Billy walked east towards the highway, past the silo and his
father’s shed, which always smelled of chemicals and exhaust and which his
father filled with harrows, plows, the John Deere and walls lined with metal
oil canisters, solvents, laquers, and paintbrushes. His father kept everything.
kicked up by the wheels of the truck as his older brother veered suddenly
off-road, and felt the lurch of the truck bed and the sting of twine knotted
into a D ring as it wrung through his palm and he tried to hold on. In his 11-
year old memory he had skinny legs and knobs for knees but his brothers, all
three of them, were strong and shirtless. They drove on like this for what
seemed like miles—Martin, the oldest, driving, the red-headed twins also in
He could only hold on for so long. The rope bit his hands. His
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stomach went taught then slackened. But it was more than that. He wanted
to let go and fall and feel the dust and the scrapes and be alone. He wanted
to stop trying so hard. The rope slipped farther and farther and Billy watched
his brother’s tanned shoulders shrink and this time when the truck jumped
Billy flew. He hit the truck bed once and seemed to bounce off, then
elbows bled, his gut in his throat. He laid back again in the dirt and the
Fifty feet ahead, Martin had slammed on the breaks and leapt out. His
stride was hard and long, almost angry. His pupils tightened into fists, and
for a moment Billy imagined his brother was coming to knock him in the
face.
Mississippi riverboats. But he was fiercely loyal. Billy would always cherish
in his mind the image of his oldest brother kneeling with his back to the
barn, a cigarette in his hand, and only the faint orange light of sunset over
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“I hate that fucking truck,” Billy said, brushing off his bloody knee
like it was nothing. Billy looked down and saw something glinting in the
dirt. It was the watch he’d taken from his dad’s dresser that morning—the
same watch his dad polished like a goddamn trophy. He had asked their
mother about it after breakfast. Did you put it in with the laundry? Billy tried
to stuff it back into his pocket, but it was too late. He waited for his brother
to say something.
Martin was quiet for a second and then he looked back towards the
From the ground the sun seemed to spray off Martin’s back, off his
bowed head and heavy boots like something bronzed and heroic. And Billy
in the dust, a gash in his eyebrow oozing thick coagulated blood, his arm
limp, was smiling. Martin reached an arm out to Billy and Billy grabbed it
“Get out of the truck,” Martin yelled to the twins, walking ahead.
Billy stood for a moment. There was a blue dome of sky with thick,
muscular clouds touching the fields of corn whose sway was almost
straight through the horizon like a movie set, past the cornhusks, ripping
apart the papery blue, which to Billy seemed impenetrable. The twins each
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swung their legs over the side of the truck bed, and Billy slid in beside
Martin. He heard a breeze coming through the crop and then the hollow
sound of the rusted hinge as he pulled the door shut and he wondered if he
And the wonder of everything: of running until the air burned like fire
in his lungs; of anatomy and motors—the way the eye bolt and rotor and
bearings fit; the wonder too of mother, of swimming, of the turn towards
frightened him because it was happening now, too soon. The Hoplite house
of four brothers, all born to pull behind them a century of farming, to carry
was on that day that Billy knew that his brother, Martin would not be staying
long in Keokuk.
That night Martin and Billy crossed paths in the hallway and neither
said a thing. It was hot that night and Billy lay shirtless in his bed, curled
around his arm as if it was separate from him, and he did not sleep.
Two days later Martin told their parents he was leaving. Billy waited
behind the door as Martin stood in the dimly lit den towering over their
father, who dressed neatly, his thick white nails trimmed too far. Martin
squared off against their father and looked him in the eyes, and spoke clearly
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and softly. “I’ve got a job in California,” Martin had said. And father stood
almost numbly, his crossed arms and wide stance full of sanctity and heft.
Billy slumped back down onto the bed. Martin stepped forward,
smiling his wide smile that seemed to put everyone at ease. He nodded.
"See ya," was all Billy could muster, and he watched his brother turn
and go.
That summer Billy did the detasseling, which was the hardest job
imaginable, for two extra hours each day during a drought. Every night for a
month he closed his eyes and all he saw was corn. Corn mosaics and corn
Pollacks and corn on trees and corn growing from ears. He saw corn in the
reservoir and corn coming from his father’s mouth. As Billy left home that
night—running away for good this time—all he could think was no more
corn.
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I remember my mother telling me my sister was a drug addict for the first
time. It was on Valentine’s Day my freshman year of college. My long-time
girlfriend had just broken up with me a week before and I’d ask her to be my
Valentine even though we’d broke up, but she said no.
I remember the first time I had a poem published. I was in high school and
my high school literary magazine had decided to publish my poem on page
one of the journal and I was strangely proud of myself in a way that I’d
never known before, to the point where I mostly didn’t know how to feel,
and didn’t feel anything at all really. Which is the way, I think, I feel about a
lot of things these days.
I remember taking a shit after this girl dumped me. There was no toilet paper
so I used a Safeway advertisement.
I remember taking the F train to work every day. When the train went over
the Manhattan Bridge, I turned 180 and took in the view of the city. I felt
like a tourist, but it never got old.
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D.W. Lichtenberg
I remember the first time I had sex with this particular girl. I didn’t come
and I was embarrassed for her so I didn’t say anything.
I remember the first time I very straight-forwardly and honestly told a girl
that I like liked her. It didn’t go so well. But that didn’t stop me from
continuing to use the strategy.
I remember tonight and a girl kind of breaking my heart for the third time.
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Thoroughbread
They embrace long enough for one trolley to arrive and depart outside, and
then a second, and finally a third. The sun sets a little more. The lights turn
yellow, and red, and green.
He knows that he should not care so much. But the comfort is so great.
Holding her, he remembers way back to the night she invited him in to
her house. They were sitting side by side in his new car. The steering wheel
offered him a place to rest his hands while they both watched the clouds turn
leaden in the dusk.
“Tonight?”
She just got out of the car, leaving the door open, and he scrambled to
catch up.
Just inside the door the cool darkness of the house lapped at his ankles
and he shivered.
And her mother appeared, and he tried so hard to stay composed, but
gasped in spite of himself. She wore a bone-colored dress, and she had piled
her hair into a black tower of curls. His eyes went instantly to the
adornments on her shoulders. They looked like streamers, or crepe paper
ribbons. But they were snakeskins, draped like sashes over her clavicles and
around her neck.
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Ian Tuttle
The chill of the house surged around his legs and he thought of his car
parked in the gravel drive. He thought of the steering wheel, the firm,
controllable connection it provided to the concrete, reliable earth, and he
turned and walked away with as much dignity as he could manage.
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Ian Tuttle
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Ian Tuttle
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Andrew O. Dugas
1.
He had just finished the dishes when she came home from work, iPhone in
hand. He dried his hands and leaned in for the welcome-home peck.
"End of the quarter." She set down the phone and shook off her coat.
She made a face. Once upon a time that question would've have piqued her
interest instead of her dread. "What?"
"It's just the office." She unclasped her auburn hair and shook it
loose. Once upon a time that gesture would have fanned the flames of his
longing. "What did you want to show me?"
He lifted a white coffee cup from the sink and tilted it like a
cannon, pointed right at her.
"What?"
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Andrew O. Dugas
She tilted it for better light, already knowing what to expect: the brown
circle of coagulated coffee at the bottom. She sighed. "And?"
"And?" He crossed his arms. "We've talked about this a million times—"
"Oh for Chrissake! I come home from a hard day and this is how you greet
me?"
He rolled his eyes. "C'mon honey, is it too much for you to just rinse out the
cup so this doesn't happen?"
"Honey, honey." He tried to take her hand but she pulled away. "This is
about the cup. Don't make it about us, okay?"
"Honey, please!"
2.
Later, after The Bachelorette and after she'd been too quiet for too long, he
snuck a peek into the home office. She was curled up asleep on the futon
loveseat.
In his mind, he would gently rouse her, lead her to their bed, where they
mingle in the heat of their bodies and make slow love.
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Andrew O. Dugas
"Yeah, you can help me. You can tell me who the fuck this Randolph is
that's texting you at eleven o'clock at night."
She grabbed the phone. He tried to hang onto it but she dug her nails in.
She sat up, her fingers dancing across the small screen. "I told you, it's end
of the quarter. Some people are pulling an all-nighter."
"Oh really? I don't remember any Randolph and why is he in your address
book in the first place?"
She handed him back the phone. The screen asked for a password he didn't
have.
"What?"
She looked him in the eye. "I said: I. AM. OVER. THIS.
CONVERSATION."
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3.
When she came into the kitchen, she went straight to the coffee and filled
her commuter cup. Her iPhone beeped and she pulled it from her coat
pocket, her thumb sliding and tapping on the screen.
"Aren't you going to have any breakfast? I made your favorite. Waffles with
fresh blueberries."
He sat down and patted her chair. "Come on. I even heated the maple syrup.
You can't go to work without any breakfast."
"Honey, I don't even have time to put on my makeup. I'll have to do it on the
bus." She didn't look up from her phone.
He crossed his arms. "I made this breakfast for you. The least you can do is
sit down and eat some. Don't be rude."
He slapped the table with both hands, making the plates jump. "Really?
Really?" He pulled the phone from her grip and smashed it against the table.
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He smashed it again and again until pieces came loose and tumbled into the
hot maple syrup and across the stacks of purple-smudged waffles.
"No, I'm not crazy." He dropped the phone carcass and kicked it into the
corner. "THAT'S. JUST. THE WAY. I. ROLL!"
4.
The receptionist, a thirty-ish man wearing a tight pink Oxford shirt and a
single diamond stud earring, eyed him warily when he entered. "And how
may I help you, sir?"
He stated his name and that he was here to see his wife.
"Just wait one little second." He picked up his desk phone and tapped the
keys. "Hi, it's Randolph in reception. I hope this isn't a bad time… Your
husband's here … Well, that's what he said … Five-ten, brunette, handsome
in a kind of Ben Affleck meets young Bruce Willis way… Okay, sure, of
course."
"They are SUPER busy—end of quarter and all that—but she said she'll be
right out."
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Andrew O. Dugas
He didn't know what to think. "Did you say your name was Randolph?"
"That's me." The receptionist crooked his eyebrows. "I hope she isn't
gossiping about me behind my back!"
"No, no. Nothing like that." He looked around. To either side he could see
cubicles and office workers in mid-scurry. "Is there another Randolph that
works here?"
"Just me, sweetie." The receptionist smiled like the devil. "She has been
talking about me, hasn't she?"
He straightened and cleared his throat. "Hey honey, I was just in the
neighborhood and I…"
"I told you we're crazy busy. What is it? Did something happen?"
"No … I …"
She took him by the elbow and walked him back to the elevators. "You have
to leave. I can't talk right now." She pressed the Down button.
One of the elevators opened with a ding. She said. "I think we're done here."
She pushed him into the elevator. "I said: WE'RE. DONE. HERE."
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Andrew O. Dugas
5.
That evening he prepared salmon filet and arugula salad. He chilled a nice
blanc the guy at the wine shop recommended. He put Casablanca into the
player. They'd watched Casablanca at the Red Vic on their first date and on
his last birthday, she'd given him the blue ray disk.
Then he waited.
When seven o'clock came and went, he tried calling her cell phone, then
remembered. He called her office instead, pressing this and pressing that
number until her extension was ringing.
"Hi."
She didn't let him finish. "I'm not coming home tonight."
She was silent. Then: "I can't have this conversation right now."
"If it's about the phone, I'm really sorry. Please." For the first
time in his marriage, he was afraid.
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She kept her word. She never came home again either.
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The Men
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Elise Hunter
“It’s ok, I think I need some time alone. With the men.” Nora flashed
her that sad, tight smile, the I’m-more-practical-than-you-will-ever-
comprehend smile.
“I need a cigarette anyway,” said Suzanne. “Holler if you need
anything.” Once outside, Suzanne found shade next to a dumpster, away
from the searing heat. She tried not to picture what was in the dumpster. Her
hands trembled as she reached for the pack of menthols in her back pocket.
Nora had announced her decision at their parents’ house a month earlier,
with a gallows resignation. She said she didn’t want to run out of time, and
she was going to take action. As she spoke, she curled her knees up to her
chest.
“Always such a sensible girl,” said their mother, patting Nora’s knee.
“Love is totally unnecessary these days anyway,” said Suzanne.
Everyone looked at her. Their mother inhaled sharply. “I just mean that you
don’t need two people anymore. In this day and age. One person can totally
raise a kid. People do it all the time. I mean, it’s not that you’re not loveable.
You are loveable, of course. It … takes a village?” Suzanne felt her face
growing hot. Their father just shook his head.
Suzanne took a long drag on her cigarette. She hadn’t understood why Nora
asked her to come today. Nora had plenty of friends. But, these friends were
married, some of them pregnant. She figured that was why.
Suzanne heard footsteps coming towards her and she crouched more
tightly into the crevice next to the dumpster. She didn’t want to be caught
loitering outside of a sperm bank by someone she knew. Especially someone
cute.
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Elise Hunter
The footsteps stopped close by, probably on the other side of the
dumpster.
A man’s voice spoke: “Dude, I don’t know about this. What if my kid
finds me later?”
“It won’t. You have to agree to that first, and I never do.” The second
man’s voice was deeper, more gruff.
“What job do you say you have again?” said the first one.
“Geologist.”
“Geologist?! Ain’t no rocks around here, nothing but plains.”
“They wouldn’t let me in if I told them I work at BevMo.”
Suzanne pressed her ear against the side of the dumpster. She put out
her cigarette when she saw plumes of smoke rising from their cigarettes.
“What job should I say I have?” said the one with the higher voice.
“How about engineer? Or lawyer. Lawyers are popular, I hear.”
“But won’t they check?”
“Never did. Not once. Didn’t check on my bad heart either.”
“You’ve got a bad one.”
“I sure do. They don’t call your doctor or anything. But dude, don’t
worry, I make like six grand a year doing this. You won’t regret it.” He
hacked out a laugh.
Her hands clenched in fists, Suzanne emerged from the other side of the
dumpster. She marched by the men, pausing briefly to take them in. They
both wore faded jeans. One had sandy hair, and he looked down at his feet as
she passed. The other one scratched his pencil-thin beard and squinted back
at her, stupefied. Suzanne could not guess which one was which. She
decided that they were the most ordinary men she’d ever seen.
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Elise Hunter
The late afternoon sun blazing at her back, Suzanne swung open the double
doors, determined to save her sister from making a very practical mistake.
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Quiet Lightning » sPARKLE & bLINK
I nominate Catholicism
that lonely, lecherous moralist
who chaperoned every trip
to the wedding bed
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Keely Hyslop
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Keely Hyslop
willing go-betweens
a house full of messengers without wings
a small madness
Grows massive,
Monstrous when fed
By love, becomes
Aware of itself,
Aware of its preferences,
Peculiarities; married for a year,
Then there was a desert,
A breakdown
Of a car, a mind,
A narrative. My mother fed
My father’s madness
Until it became its own
Institution capable
Of holding meeting,
Passing bylaws.
My mother fed
My father’s madness
Until it rumbled
Through the city
Like a public bus,
The wrong bus
Carrying her in a great arc
Away from her
Destination and then
Back to her point of origin.
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Keely Hyslop
My father tried
To end himself
So many times.
He was unsuccessful.
He placed his hands
Around my mother’s neck,
Tried to squeeze the air
Out of her. He was unsuccessful.
I carry his name. Hyslop.
It’s a name that remembers.
My mother doesn’t
Carry it. I carry the madness
It takes to tell.
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Keely Hyslop
And I believe
her. On the floor
amid the crush
of gyrating
bodies. The crowds
part for her
cactus green skirt
swirling over
exposed calves.
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Keely Hyslop
Women’s bodies
heal themselves and
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Keely Hyslop
create a more
complex passion,
a so much more
compelling strength.
But still, women’s
minds resent the
careless body’s
resilience.
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believe that under the notion of a perfect model of splendid, humane, and
divine life for all the people of the world, Khomeini introduced the Sharia,
or Islamic law, literally meaning the path to the water source, forcing
women to cover most of their body, but mainly the evil, seductive forces that
lay within the strands of their hair—all of it—under the thick fabric of a
chador.
stingy man who didn’t believe in giving into the material pleasures of
worldly objects and experiences, was sick of paying for his wife’s monthly
hair removal bill. For, like most Iranian women, Khadije Saghafi was hairy,
and her husband believed that if she was covered at all times of the day (and
sometimes at night even in their bed) she wouldn’t care if her husband or
anyone else saw her hairy legs or her hairy arms, or the hair that extended
from the side of her face down to her chin. With the new implementation of
the veil, his wife’s body and most of her head covered, he would only have
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Shideh Etaat
to worry about paying for her eyebrows and maybe the hair on her upper lip
at most, to be removed by Haleh Khanoom who owned the salon down the
street.
And thus, “O Prophet! Tell your wives and daughters and the
avoid being molested. God is the Forgiver, Merciful,” from the Koran,
turned into seventy-four lashes on your bare back for being a slut and not
covering all of your hair and body (well, except your hands and feet). Let us
not forget that Khomeini had the best interest of all his fellow comrades’ in
It is rumored though that Khadije, frustrated with the summer heat and
the layers of thick fabric she was forced to wear by her husband and his
regime, being an educated woman and having read the Koran in its entirety
at least two hundred times, and finding no text stating that a woman’s entire
body and hair should be covered, was so angered by her husband’s new
laws, and his underlying frugality when it came to her hair removal needs
(for it wasn’t for him or for any other man that she did it, it was more for
herself, to feel beautiful and clean and to respect and care for her body—
which she saw as her own private temple, or mosque in this case), it is
rumored that one day she decided to walk naked through the crowded streets
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Shideh Etaat
of Tehran. It was a boiling summer afternoon, too hot even for tea, and she
walked with the most beautiful arched eyebrows, the smoothest arms, legs
and upper lip anyone had ever seen, and a well-managed, thin strip of hair
below, thanks to the always reliable Haleh Khanoom and the white string
The religious clerics, and Khomeini himself thought she was a ghost,
Qiyaamah, or the Day of Resurrection was upon them. Tears formed in their
eyes as they got on their knees and bowed to her, mumbling Allah O Akhbar
under their breaths, suddenly feeling the heaviness of their sins, and praying
for forgiveness. But the women—well, the women knew better than that.
And as their husbands meditated on their wasted lives, and watched the
phantom move through the city, stopping even the loud shouting of men in
the bazaars, the cracking of sunflower seeds between their teeth, the
persistence of car upon car on the freeways, as even the birds came down
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Alive
I am not a monster. All my life I was burdened with a sense of boredom and
emptiness. I spent my teenage years searching for activities that would fill
into an addiction. I began questioning myself, wondering how long this was
going to last, all while tearing my family apart. Every night, my mom would
sit me down, crying, asking what was wrong with me. And every night I
would say the same thing, and she would just cry and sniff her way to her
room with my sister and two brothers behind her, oblivious to the situation.
duties and made me a cake. I paid no mind to the cake. All my birthday
getting older; I hated having my life being so useless. My mother threw a fit,
but at that point I didn’t care. My mother and I both knew that our
relationship had turned from a loving and caring one, to a tolerant more
systematic agreement.
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Eriq Martin
high was slightly fun at times, but it wasn’t enough. I had to take my search
for a fulfilling activity to new heights. Within a two-month time span, I had
into numerous houses. It seemed that police didn’t exist whenever I broke
six thousand, three hundred and twenty eight dollars. About half of that
exactly how to use the money until one day a car sped past me on Young
Street racers dump thousands of dollars into their cars, praying for a
faster and lighter ride. On an empty street, cars can reach up to 200mph.
What really interested me, however, were races on busy streets. There are
two main reasons why racing on a busy street is more exhilarating than
racing on an empty one: high chances for collision, and high chances for
incarceration.
experienced. Dodging a car by only a few inches gave this rush that I had
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Eriq Martin
never felt before. There were rays glaring past my window. I was in a vortex
raced for 3 months. I never got pulled over, never lost, and never got into an
One Monday, I went to the usual spot on Young street, but there were
there wasn’t any traffic. At the meeting spot I met a guy named Zach. He
was the kind of person who never had to do any real work in high school
because his looks and jersey number carried him on a pretty pedestal. I will
forever remember the name Zach. I will forever be in debt to him for helping
streetlights. Looking down the pitch-black road was like looking at the gates
Everything was going smooth; the entire race Zach and I were side-
by-side going around 150 mph. A corner was coming up, so I slowed down,
but Zach sped up—he was ahead. After the turn I slammed on the gas,
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Eriq Martin
attempting to catch up, and when I was two feet behind him red lights
flashed and a screech filled the air. Zach managed to swerve out of the way,
but I was lucky enough to hit Desmond. He was just in the wrong place at
I ran out of my car towards the body with a sense of urgency. When I
arrived, I had the best feeling I had ever experienced. Watching the blood
run down the side of his head, slightly grinning when I noticed his leg was
As the words slid past his bloody lips, more blood would begin to pour out. I
didn’t help; I just stood there looking at him with that same grin on my face.
He died with his eyes open, and as I looked into them, I saw his
sorrow and pain. I killed this man, and it felt so damn good. I became
mesmerized. This man’s life was gone because of me. I had taken control; I
had beaten the Grim Reaper to his prize. I had finally found my calling—my
waiting for my entire life. The very first night I went out to intentionally kill
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Eriq Martin
because nobody pays attention to bums. They could be screaming for help,
but everyone would just believe they were crazy. We live in a society today
where most people don’t have the slightest care for the people financially
beneath them.
black trench coat, knife in one hand and a camera in the other. As I passed
looked around to make sure we were alone I walked towards him. When I
reached him, he was sleeping directly on his back. Looking down, a million
After standing over him for almost five minutes, I finally came to a
conclusion. I simply placed the sharp knife to his throat and cut across.
Blood came spewing from his throat like magma from a volcano. The bum
squealed, attempting to gasp for air only to inhale more of his own blood.
There wasn’t a grin on my face anymore; it had turned into a full on smile. I
with his glossy eyes and let out his final word—“Why?”—and lay dead on
his pile of newspaper and cardboard. I pulled out my camera and took a
couple of pictures. After putting the camera away I felt the need to answer
his question. I got close to his ear and whispered, “Because it’s fun.”
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Eriq Martin
Once every other night I would find a bum on the street and slice his
throat. Once in a while I would change it up and simply stab them in the
back numerous times. Seeing their blood leak out and the agony on their
faces is indescribable.
By the time I turned nineteen I had evolved. I moved up from bums on the
loved to scratch. The act of torture is where original happiness comes from.
The Coliseum, the Roman gladiators used, was a torture complex. Gladiators
fighting to the death for the crowd’s enjoyment. My coliseum was the
hit a house that has kids younger than fifteen. There are girls who are getting
pregnant at fifteen years old. If they are old enough to get pregnant, then
Breaking in while they were asleep, tying up the entire family with
rope or electrical wires found around the house. The sheer thrill of
I would first kill the sons and daughters. I wouldn’t kill them first
because I wanted to finish them quickly. I did them first because the cries of
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the parents excited me. The brilliant red of their blood reflected in their eyes.
Their eyes would match what I saw in Desmond’s: sorrow and pain.
Sorrow, it overtakes your body, fills you with hatred and weakness.
You’re willing to take your own life in order to end it. It’s a suicidal disease
caused by death itself. Watching your own son die, cuts up and down his
naked body, fingers sawed down to little stumps of clotted blood. The whole
ordeal takes a toll on your body. It begins to shut down; some go into a
hysterical state, screaming out nonsense. Others become sick and vomit. The
human mind can cause the most remarkable bodily effects if given the right
stimulants.
down first. He cries and sweats as if he were in the Sahara Desert. The
mother sometimes just sits there. Maybe she is so out of it that she can’t feel
a thing. Before I even rub my knife against her, she’s already dead inside.
She doesn’t care anymore—her child, the person she carried in her womb for
around two in the morning. A reporter, who was tracking me, called me a
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Eriq Martin
He, nor anyone else, realized the pain I had to go through. Not finding
what makes you happy is a crime in itself. All I did was what was best for
me. Any human—deep down—would kill his or her own mother if they
knew it would be in their own best interest. That is what I have learned, and
that is what I have been doing. It’s not that my daddy didn’t love me
enough, or that I was teased as a kid. It’s just my human nature; I am only
following my natural instincts. People who deny that are only denying the
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Closest
She is 5’4” and a little bit fat, but not really. She has light brown hair,
shorter in back, that falls in her face. She sucks at the ends sometimes, but
only on the left side.
She is kind of shy. Her best friend’s name is Julia but we call her Jules. They
used to come to this coffee place almost every day after school. They poured
out most of the coffee and put in lots of cream and Splenda. They were
learning how to knit. Some college girls did “Stitch and Bitch” sitting on
these worn out orange couches near the windows. Lisa and Jules tried to
always sit at this red table near the door. It was closest to the couches.
I came in sometimes after school with my best friend, Hannah. Lisa told us
to get out but we got hot chocolates with whipped cream and sat at the
closest table to them, licking the whipped cream off of those little coffee
stirrer straws and using them to sip our drinks. We played games on our cell
phones and Lisa sometimes told us to shut up.
Soccer started a month ago, so Hannah and me stopped going in much. One
time, we walked by and saw Lisa sitting at the red table with a man. Hannah
thought he was 37, but I think he was around 27. The police report says one
of the girls who works here said he looked about 29 or 30, so I was closest.
But one of the stitch and bitch girls said he looked about 35, so Hannah says
she was closest. I think the coffee girl knows better because she saw him
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Lauren Becker
close up when he bought coffees for Lisa and him. The report says he bought
her coffees about five times.
Hannah thinks the man was tall but she doesn’t know anything ‘cause he
was sitting. She says he had brown hair and a biggish nose. I didn’t think his
nose was that big. The report says the coffee girls looked at pictures but said
he wasn’t in them. They don’t pay that much attention to anyone except for
guys they know. We thought he was probably one of her teachers.
Jules says his name is Eric and he’s Lisa’s boyfriend. They met on the bus.
Jules never met him. She says Lisa wouldn’t let her at first because she
didn’t want to look like a little kid. Jules says Lisa is in love with Eric. Lisa
never told her what he does or where he lives.
It’s kind of cold today. Soccer got cancelled and I came here. I told Hannah I
wanted to go by myself. I don’t care if it hurt her feelings. She never had a
sister anyways.
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Lauren Becker
His Days
I bought the raspberries at the farmers’ market because I know you love
them, he said. I thought to tell him I do not love raspberries, but blueberries,
but he did not attend to the things I loved. His bad days became mine. He no
longer needed to warn.
On his good days, he did not call. He found more good days. He found a girl
and took her to the farmers’ market, where she chose raspberries. He made
scones for her and invited me over. She was tall with brown hair; some
thought her pretty, including her. She looked like me.
He told me about her and we both listened to things she knew. She was a
pediatric nurse, she grew up in Maryland, she used to dance ballet. They
laughed about her ugly feet. I liked her. I felt lonely and went home.
We met awhile before at a café where he watched for the few minutes it took
me to complete Thursday’s New York Times crossword puzzle. I thought
guys only spoke to girls in cafes when they were interested. I thought when
he asked me to get together, it was a date.
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Lauren Becker
On a good day, I told him. He said he wondered why I hadn’t been around as
much. It was too close to turning into his story. I was on flat ground. I didn’t
want to descend.
Waiting was unnecessary. Good or bad, they were his days. They had little
to do with me when they didn’t have to do with him.
I thanked him for the caution. When we parted, my love for him halved. I
stopped for ingredients. By the time I arrived home, it was halved again.
I made blueberry scones. They were the best scones I ever had.
The girl who looked like me—the ballerina—left him. He called me, crying.
I listened to voicemails while doing crosswords. I had two weeks. I did not
have time to take care. I was lighter, safer. I got better, faster.
I did not prepare to lose. I did not prepare to win. I did neither.
After, he didn’t ask how it went. I didn’t offer. I told him I liked blueberry
scones. He made me blueberry scones. I told him they were good. They were
not as good as mine.
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Quiet Lightning » sPARKLE & bLINK
we are hidden
and exposed
our bodies and the ground
wet with so may things
« 58 »
Chris Cole
« 59 »
Chris Cole
sometimes
we can't fit
and it doesn't mean
that we don't belong
it just means
we don't belong
there
not where
there are rules
not made to be broken
or promises
not meant to be kept
we live in an age
that values
attention
but not all
attention
is good
pick a day
to do something bad
pick a day
to be anything
they wouldn't approve of
pick a day
to break every rule
that won't hurt you
or someone else
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Chris Cole
« 61 »
Chris Cole
the stars
they hang there
like i could actually
touch them
like i could actually
touch you
from this far away
through all of the smoke
and mist and haze
and miles
through all of the things
i have to do
just to keep shit going
i could touch you
if i could only reach you
if i could just make my arms
as long as these thoughts
as close as the stars
when there are no city lights
to hide them
and their meaning
it all changes
with each day that passes
as they move across the sky
as we move across the grid
that's got us locked in tight
to whatever it is
we think we're accomplishing
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Chris Cole
« 63 »
Chris Cole
we’re dropping
young beats
off a cliff
over ancient rhymes
just to see
if they can fly
or if they float
we came here
from opposite directions
yet we seem to go in circles
spinning around each other
but it doesn’t feel like a revolution
it doesn’t seem like we’ve made it
all the way around
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Chris Cole
sometimes
the only way to break loose
is simply to break
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Quiet Lightning » sPARKLE & bLINK
I remember her clearly, one Christmas morning, the guests arrive to the
grand old house on Westland Avenue, 11 o’clock, flinging her arms with
that flamboyance that made me love her so, and calling out in that trumpet of
a voice, a gift from her actress mother, “Bar’s Open” — and how she made
it sound like the opening of a horse race and oh how we all galloped.
And Jim.
We met drunk and that’s how I found the courage to follow you home
To that dim studio above the Sunset Strip
And push you back on the bed and climb on top
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Charles Kruger
And the night we tried to drive to every gay bar in San Francisco
And ended up crying for the drunks at Twin Peaks and I said how pathetic
they were
And you asked, “aren’t we?”
And we laughed.
And the long nights of opera and how you taught me to hear it.
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Charles Kruger
And then one day you were gone and I had a drink or two and that was that
All of this, you see, is a history of the booze and that is the only lover.
The rest is imaginary.
Does that make sense?
It is what it is.
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Charles Kruger
And when you called years later to tell me you were sick
I pretended not to understand what THAT meant
And never went to visit and drank to forget
And you loved me and you called me from your deathbed
And I didn’t … I didn’t … oh hell
And now I’m Rip Van Winkle and the young men no longer
speak of my honeyed eyes or my sparkle.
And when I found my boozy lover he left this message:
“Let the past be the past”
That I am envious
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Charles Kruger
And I am sorry
And I am not sorry
But still …
« 70 »
Quiet Lightning » sPARKLE & bLINK
The Bookcase
In January his girlfriend inherited a nice bookcase from her Aunt Ruth. He
came home from work one day, folded his ham slices into bow-ties and ate
while examining the bookcase. “This is a quality bookcase,” he said, but his
mouth was full and he littered ground ham on the bookcase.
His girlfriend rejoiced over the bookcase. It looked old, like how
Vienna might have once looked. He claimed to love Vienna and so she
thought he would stare at the bookcase and finally let her be.
The bookcase occupied him because it was empty and it smelled like
1978 and 1978 was a good year. He was seven and eight that year. A lot of
ice cream and orange soda, but he hated penmanship class.
He went to the basement for a while, but there wasn’t much to look at
down there. That bookcase you like is upstairs, a voice in his head told him
and he returned to the bookcase with a bottle of kahlua.
At midnight he made a little bed in front of the bookcase. He sang it a
three verse love song.
The Bee
They were wrong for each other, but they were in the same car. She was
Norwegian and didn’t make a big deal about it. He liked that, but less and
less. A bee flew into the car and she laughed.
Why is she laughing in such a dangerous situation? he thought. I’m
driving. The insurance company calls me if we crash. She gets carted around
night and day and what if I told her she’s only in my presence because going
to a swimming pool alone is weird? I don’t want guys hitting on me.
Did she laugh thinking of their favorite Shakespeare quote? The fault
dear Brutus is not in our stars but in ourselves. How many more times could
that be funny? She didn’t even like Shakespeare—Ibsen forever! And she
loathed how he carried that academic hauteur even though he said he didn’t.
But it’s summer and I’m trying to make it work because unemployment is a
bitch and the musk smell behind his ear still invites me.
The bee was in the back. It was mad because she was laughing at it.
You motherfucking woman, I’m a bee and I’m stuck in a car. It’s hot and
I’m hungry and you laugh at me? Still the bee kept trying to get out the rear
window. Glass was glass but sometimes he would creep over a lip and buzz
away.
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Greg Gerke
The lute music CD remained on the phone table for five months though they
didn’t have a phone anymore. They didn’t have children either and there
were no substitutes.
His friend Paul had given the lute music CD to him for a birthday
present. Something different, said the accompanying card. When dusting she
refused to dust the front cover displaying a Flemish print of a bleak, country
landscape. Even if some part of her happened to like lute music, the CD
repelled her because he had ignored it so.
In bed at night she would look at his back. Sometimes he spoke in his
sleep. I actually don’t like you Paul, he said, or Get on top of me.
She wanted to start smoking so she could de-ash all over his naked,
sweating body. She’d be more unhealthy, but a little happier. Things would
even out or at least she’d hurt less and he’d hurt more.
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Greg Gerke
The Iron
The iron came from a rummage sale. He said, Why not? Her mother had told
her never to buy used appliances. She didn’t love him so much anymore so
she didn’t argue.
He didn’t take much when he left and the iron stayed behind, on a
high shelf with an old National Geographic. Its underside speckled with
black dots, its dial set to linen.
She used to like to iron, but not now. She would come home after
work, fix a drink, put on dance music and sit down.
The iron hadn’t moved in three months. He’d used it once when they
went to an event at the University. It works really good, he’d called from the
bathroom, holding the iron away from his body like a relic.
I hate you, she whispered.
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Greg Gerke
« 74 »
C.R. Stapor
Kamchatka
The glasses were half empty, but then they were full. Her tongue tipping the
bottle. Twittering ear. Biting the line then nibbling neck. Full again she said
shoot, we have to shoot. The glasses or Billy, she purred, slipping off her
panties. Pale thighs shimmering behind the cheap plastic vodka. He reached
for the shot. Said fuck.
» I caint do but two fifty.
» Hafta downgrade. Got some decent Berettas.
» Sheeet.
Rain pissing her off the thick foliage loving it. Vomit speckling his
chin. Islanding up in the deep puddles of rainfall. He collapses. Again. She
says something but he doesn't care. Screaming doesn't help. Limply he hands
her the gun, keeping his head down. Away from the body, the blood.
Ten miles outside Sevierville the Camaro stops. Smoke from the
hood, an impotent key. Stuck in two feet of mud with an engine giving up.
She's mad and to prove it fills the whole night sky with her petulant rage.
» Whooo! Damn!
» He don't matter—
» Hell kinda liquor's this?
» But that money, now, that money—
» Cam-chat-ka?
» But that money'd matter greatly. Am I right?
Her legs again, his eyes. He hears her but the words are screwy.
Coming from somewhere far below.
» Really ain't got no Magnum at two fifty?
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C.R. Stapor
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Quiet Lightning » sPARKLE & bLINK
The Number
I could tell by the way she didn’t hold my hands, how they were just limply
sitting in my grip like a pair of old socks, that she didn’t forgive me. That
“Other couples have been through worse than this,” I said, “Lots
wedding gifts.
Deb said nothing. Her gaze drifted down to my hands and stayed
there. I let go of one of her hands to lift her chin. She tilted her eyes away to
somewhere beyond my right ear. Beside us, the fridge began to hum.
I felt it important to clarify. “And look at them, happy as can be. I didn’t
I said, “Aren’t you going to talk to me? Why won’t you talk to me?
“I …” she started and that was it. Her mouth opened for the merest
second and then shut. I relaxed. I let go of her chin and it dropped. A red
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Meghan Thornton
curl fell over her eye. She looked so defeated. But I hadn’t really done
“I’d only just met her. Nothing even happened. She gave me her
number and that was that. I only took it to be nice—so I wouldn’t hurt her
Deb shook her head. She was staring at our hands again. I wondered if
she was staring at the matching gold bands there. I thought I could almost
hear what she was thinking. I touched my finger lightly to her ring. I felt the
She looked at me then, and I wished she hadn’t. I’d never seen her
“Yes, you would. You would have if I hadn’t found her goddamn
number.” Her whole face was trembling as she spat this at me. I could feel
her hands tremoring too—like the kitchen tiles she was standing on were on
“No, baby, I wouldn’t …” I tried to put my hand to her cheek and she
“I did! I tried—I did! You know some women—they just don’t care.”
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Meghan Thornton
“No. I don’t.” Deb had taken her hands back from me and crossed her
arms in front of her. Her breathing came in and out with a violence, like she
God, I wished I were a better liar. Why couldn’t I have just told her
my junior year of college, when Deb and I had been dating for about a year.
There was some study done where they interviewed a bunch of guys and
asked them, “If you could get away with it, with no one ever knowing,
would you cheat?” The number who would was something like 90%. Maybe
not that high, but about that. Back then I’d pitied the schmucks that felt that
way, that took that test. My guess then was that they’d never loved anyone,
All this time that I was thinking this, Deb was probably thinking
something similar. Maybe about some article she’d read in Cosmo about
cheaters, something like that. She was closed up in thought, like a flower
shut down for the night. But I had to get in there. I was desperate to get in
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Meghan Thornton
Deb looked at me and what I saw there in her eyes was disgust and
“It was stupid. I don’t know why I did it. I felt like I was just being
“That’s how it starts,” she said, as if she were expert on the subject.
“That’s how it starts? Please, you telling me you think I’m capable of
“I don’t know! I didn’t think much about it. Hon, you gotta believe
She started to cry then. She leaned back onto the kitchen stool where
my jacket still hung, the other contents of its traitor pocket still lying on the
“Hey … Deb,” I tried to get close to her, to hold her, but she pushed
me away.
“Nothing’s stopping you from calling her,” she said, angry now that
she had let herself cry. She didn’t like to cry in front me, in front of anyone,
« 80 »
Meghan Thornton
“What? Of course I’m not—I’m not calling her.” I didn’t see where
“I don’t want to call her. I don’t want to. I want you. I just want you.
That’s all I ever wanted.” I was surprised by how easily this confession
came—how urgent it felt. Deb was standing right there, but it was like I
“Then why?” She pushed the business card at me. The way she held it
in her palm, thumb crushing its middle, I couldn’t see the guilty side, the
side with the red lipstick and the phone number. I wanted it nowhere near
me. I wanted it gone. I plucked the thing out of her hand by its corner. I held
in the garbage disposal. It rested there in the drain, clinging to the rubber
splashguard until I tapped it in. I turned on the water and threw the switch.
The garbage disposal whirred. I couldn’t tell when it was finished. There
wasn’t the usual satisfying shift of sound when the blades freed up. The
paper was too thin to make much difference I guess. I switched it off, half-
wondering if it was still in there, pressed against the dark chamber wall.
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Meghan Thornton
“Promise me anyway.”
“I promise,” I said, smoothing her hair back, pulling her into me,
feeling her tears wet my shirt. “I promise.” I said it again. I felt I should.
Deb and I stood like that for a while, me holding her while she cried.
She got quieter and quieter. Then she pulled back and looked away from me,
embarrassed like I’d caught her licking the spoon she’d been cooking with.
“I’m gonna go up and have a shower.” She smiled this little, flat smile
and I could see she was going to forgive me. This would be over—not today,
but eventually.
disappeared into the dark living room. She didn’t even turn the light on. A
I looked at the mess on the floor. I made a little pile with my shoe and
then put it all back in my pocket, not bothering to sort out the wrapper or the
pocket lint.
That damn business card, I was thinking. That damn blonde woman
with the lipstick. It turned my mind back to the sink, to the disposal. Hadn’t
I heard somewhere that you weren’t supposed to put paper into the disposal
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Meghan Thornton
system? I was suddenly sure I’d heard that. The card was small but still,
could be enough to stop up the works. It only takes a small thing. One
I walked over to the sink and looked down. I couldn’t see much
beyond the guard. I stuck a couple fingers in and peeled the rubber back.
Then I stopped. It had occurred to me, what if my wife came back right then.
The water wasn’t going upstairs yet. If she came back, and I had my hand in
that garbage disposal, I knew what it would look like. There was no question
of what it would look like to her. I couldn’t chance it. I turned the water on
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