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Brianna Dwyer
Mrs. Pacuk
English 2H Period 1
6 April 2018
Throughout this project, in order for a fulfilled and impactful paper, I had done multiple
revisions over the course of approximately two months. After having written the rough draft I
found that my paper was lacking in reaffirmation of my thesis throughout. Therefore, I decided
to focus on connecting each body paragraph back to my thesis and highlighting the contrast
between the issue, and what needs to be done for progression towards a solution. Additionally, I
ineffectively transitioned from each body paragraph and section contributing to a confusing
construction and organization of ideas. To fix this I made sure to focus on the introduction and
concluding sentences of each paragraph. Lastly, for the best possible paper, I revisited each of
my quotes and evidence. By doing this I recognized that certain quotes were unnecessary or
persevere. Of those that experience active-duty and are lucky enough to survive, it is believed
that their battle would be over once having returned; however, the biggest barrier and struggle
they face is cultivated in what is speculated as their safe place: home. As time has progressed
from the 20th century to the present, policies and reforms have been constituted as a compromise
for Veterans who need assistance in the transition to civilization from a military atmosphere.
Additionally, agencies such as the Department of Veterans Affairs tries to fulfil the same
promise granted by the American people with a nationally provided budget, but fail in the
facilitation for veterans after they return. Stereotypes, stigma, and logistical barriers created by
an ill equipped society and aging bureaucracies have isolated Veterans causing them to not
receive adequate care. These obstacles and current policies are defective and need to be resolved
by initiating social and political change, such as increasing education and adapting policies, in
also known as the GI Bill, and professed the bill gave "emphatic notice to the men and women in
our armed forces that the American people do not intend to let them down” (Leepson). This
promise was relied on by veterans in order to feel a newfound sense of belonging in society, and
have an adept transition back into civilization. But the three provisions of the bill
subsidies for higher education”, as well as supplied $500 million for new VA hospitals” (Carter)
did not fulfill this hope. It can be understood that the government was beginning to understand
the needs of former military personnel, but the supplementary policies did not generate a
meaningful impact on all veterans, and rather only succeeded in aiding minorities.
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Overarchingly, the addition of the GI Bill to the already existent social welfare programs created
a new approach at rehabilitation, and was the basis of an expanded role of American
government. For instance, with the intention of providing a more accommodating society and
aiding Veterans, also came an ulterior motive: “one congressional study from 1988 estimated
that for every $1 the government spent on educational benefits, veterans returned nearly $7 to
public coffers in increased tax revenue or added economic output” (Carter). This economical
boom recognizes the GI bill as a transformative moment during this time period, but also reveals
how the objective of the bill was disregarded by the manifestation of American greed. This
conflict of interest results in an inadequate policy at addressing veterans and their quality of care.
Overall, this bill may be comprised with wholehearted intents and good aspects, but has become
unreliable today because it did not evolve with society and is not accustomed to subsequent
veterans. A veteran explains its disintegration and says, “My personal problems are not
psychiatric... I’m going to college. I’m getting benefits I already earned, but it feels like I got to
beg for them. I’m almost homeless. And every month, the bit I get from the GI Bill, it’s not
enough to make it out there in the real world. And every year, the GI Bill is going down. It
already dropped like $300.00, $400.00 a month” (Rozanova). The GI Bill was defined as a
moment of reinvention for America, but now is only considered as a step in the right direction.
Despite the multiple benefits it provides, it is still an unrealistic accomodation for veterans in
In addition to reform and policies, such as the GI bill, new agencies were created as a
more adaptational approach at providing health care for veterans, and facilitating their transition.
The Department of Veterans Affairs, created in 1930, is an agency utilized for health care,
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benefits programs, and burial or memorial assistance for Veterans. With a federally provided
budget “larger than those of the State Department, the Department of Homeland Security, and
the entire U.S. intelligence community combined” (Carter), the organization prides itself on its
easily accessible resources and the ability to fulfil veterans’ american dream. Although this
organization can compensate for surface-level injuries and hardships they fail to recognize the
personal connection that is required for veterans to thrive. A veteran concludes: “I honestly don’t
think there is much they [psychiatrists at the VA Hospital] can do to help, they can only give you
pills [when] I need more money and full time work, [and] someone to fall in love with and have
a family with” (Rozanova). Although extensive valuable resources are allocated for the
reintegration of veterans, they do not sustain individual veterans personal needs or understand
diverse and dispersed population. Educational and economic support programs fail to keep pace
defective hiring. In recent news, these issues were exposed at a VA hospital in Washington D.C
where patients administered anesthesia had underwent a prolonged procedure due to surgical
instruments that were unavailable after the start of the procedure (CBS news). Other deficiencies
can be described as “doctors and nurses forced to make do by borrowing supplies from a nearby
hospital, while 500,000 items sat unused at a warehouse” as well as “the government rented
items like three home hospital beds for nearly $875,000, that would have only cost $21,000 to
buy” (CBS news). Employees and government officials are crediting these systematic errors to a
failure of leadership: David Shulkin took no action in fixing prolonged problems even with three
VA program offices aware of this issue under his supervision. This disconnection resulting in
poor care for veterans is just one of the most recent examples of how the government is
disrupting the transition for veterans, instead of helping. In recognition of these issues the
government has passed the VA Accountability Act which “will enable the VA Secretary to do
everything necessary to improve veterans’ care to a standard that appropriately reflects the
sacrifices endured by our heroes” (Parkinson). This act is a promise to do better and break a
cycle of reform and failure; however, even though this new legislation will hold employees
accountable it does not address other issues and thus can only act as an ongoing compromise,
Of these existing agencies, veterans mainly access care or treatment through the DOD’s
Military Health System (MHS) and the VA’s Health Care System, both of which have the
resources to aid veterans, but are not easily allocated or given (Institute of Medicine). These
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organizations pose logistical and institutional-level barriers that result in inaccessible treatment
into a newly formed society, veterans must prioritize finding a job, knowingly putting financial
stability over their own health. Although this may seem like the most logical option for veterans
at the time, doctors have the duty to recognize that this will adversely affect veterans’ health later
in life, and thus need to adjust their schedules accordingly. Without the prioritization of veterans,
doctors are disrupting veterans’ transition by not facilitating their recovery, damaging their
health further. Additionally, once having returned, veterans find themselves without the
necessary resources to access the provided treatment such as “for those who did not have a car, it
took a very long time to use the public transportation system in getting to appointments”
(Rozanova). This reflects how even though treatment and institutions are present, they are
physically unreachable and thus inadequate at fulfilling their promise of recovery. These
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programs are also emotionally absent when dealing and treating veterans in need. Distinctly,
studies report that veterans are being unheard and misunderstood because they perceived the
doctors as “too busy, too haughty, or just too unavailable for them” (Rozanova). Veterans who
should be benefiting from these programs are feeling as though they being set aside, and not of
concern resulting in a feeling of unworthiness. A primary reason that the United States of
America cannot provide for veterans in their transition back into society is because they do not
truly comprehend the intensity of their struggles. This includes both barriers that prevent
veterans from getting treatment, and those that cause an insufficient recovery process altogether.
known as stereotypes, which categorize veterans and set unrealistic expectations for their
self-image. This social stigma and lack of support has set basis for an unachievable standard,
ultimately influencing their quality of care. Collaterally, due to the strong expectation of veterans
to exhibit masculine qualities, veterans may never seek or halt treatment with the fear of being
(Rozanova). Specifically, mental illness is more likely to be overlooked internally and disguised
in response to the prominent social stigma created by society (Fletcher and St. George, 2011). It
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can be argued that this divide is created by veterans themselves since it is their decision to not
take advantage of the various resources; however, veterans cannot adapt to societal norms, and as
a result would rather hide their struggles than seek help. Through the unintended creation of
these barriers, society has inflicted unforeseen struggling on veterans because they are or feel
that their not truly able to access care. This prevents veterans from escaping the struggles of their
service, and ultimately commits them into a cycle of suffering.The dismissing of ill veterans is a
custom that has been adopted throughout history, and clearly defies the American promise to
provide for veterans after having sacrificed their lives. For example, in World War I soldiers that
were classified as “psychologically unable” would be killed for perceived cowardness, and could
even be “tied to the barb wire lines that protected the trenches” (Saperstein). History, and long
crude isolation of soldiers has set the basis for today’s society and is yet another reason for why
veterans believe seeking treatment may not be an option; soldiers believe that the exposure of
their illness will affect their career. This association with masculinity has only intensified the
issue causing increasing exploration; in fact, many “...studies suggest that admitting to mental
illness is often interpreted as malingering and may derail one’s military career” (Stana).
Stereotypes and stigma have enshrined the idea in veterans that mental instability will impair
how they are perceived, and thus their everyday life, whereas actually confronting the issue
would prevent further damage. This reveals how society has a moral obligation to omit these
stereotypes, and focus on emphasizing the importance of care so that veterans can ameliorate
Although there are many policies in place to address the needs of veterans by assisting
their insertion back into civilization, the lack understanding from surrounding peers causes for an
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insufficient transition due to a feeling of alienation. Once having returned from war, veterans
may experience either a lack or influx of social comfort and support, both of which prove to be
useless in aiding veterans. This is due to a misinterpretation of one's experiences, and not being
able to relate to veterans, thus making the veterans feel alone or isolated. “Veterans felt that
those who had not served in the war could not truly understand them or their experiences during
service… Most families were making major efforts to provide support to veterans, but due to this
feeling of disconnection, veterans faced difficulties in accessing the support offered” (Ahern).
Due to misunderstandings and misconceptions, veterans feel that their inability to relate to
everyday citizens prevents them from accepting the help that is offered. Additionally, it is
prevalent that citizens might appraise the morality of veterans with the established societal
stigma which can contribute to uninviting treatment. Therefore, society and families have
amended social support forums so that veterans can receive necessary help, however, the policies
or social support itself have proved to be inadequate. Because of this, even though veterans may
recognize the help that is available, they may never pursue the different programs. A study
suggests that “while social support has many beneficial outcomes, those who experience greater
mental health symptom severity are less likely to seek support from others. Identifying contexts
in which social support is beneficial for Veterans with PTSD and depression will help to inform
Veterans Affairs (VA) patient care and caregiver programming” (Painter). Overall, it is not just
our duty to provide support, but also to recognize when it is needed and actually beneficial. By
developing and conducting additional studies, corrupt and mishandeling facilities can increase
their quality of care, which will conclude that maturing interpretation of veterans is needed. It
can also be supported that immediately succeeding veterans’ return is the time at which concerns
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study conducted by Lewandowski, Rosenberg, Parks, and Siegel affirmed that social support can
regulate the outcome of a traumatic event a veteran experienced. Ultimately, Brewins, Andrew,
and Valentine concluded that “lack of social support as a major posttraumatic predictor of the
onset of PTSD” (Stana). In turn, social support doesn't just address disruptive events during
service, but is also essential for a full recovery and prevention of further undoings. As a result,
social support is crucial in the readjustment for soldiers but a lack of understanding has inverted
its success as a recovery method; therefore, society needs to recognize when excess social
support is favorable for treatment, and understand its long lasting effect.
smoother transition for these veterans, health care providers and other important figures such as
teachers and closely related family need to be educated on these health issues. There are two
main forums that veterans utilize for health care: the VA health care system, and common
is “stressing the need for health care providers to be well versed in veteran-specific health issues,
war eras, and reintegration issues veterans face; in order to provide excellent veteran care and
outcomes” (Olenick). There is a direct relationship between the intelligence of those who provide
for veterans and their overall quality of care. In turn, for a more adequate transition back into
civilization the root of the problem must be addressed: those who are personally involved in their
recovery, but misinformed on how to actually provide tender care. Ultimately, “Preparing health
care providers to meet the complex needs of a vast veteran population can be facilitated by
implementing veteran content into curricula that includes veteran patient simulations and case
studies, and utilizes veteran clinical faculty” (Olenick). Veteran facilities need to utilize every
past and present resource in order to strengthen the intensity of care, and need to use past forms
of transgression and malpractice as opportunities to learn and adapt. Even if full education on the
issue cannot be provided for those who help facilitate veterans transition, they should at least be
exposed to material that will deepen their views on what veterans are truly experiencing.
to care incorporating nursing, occupational therapy, physical therapy, mental health, pain
management, nutrition, psychosocial, and social support services to ensure positive health care
outcomes for this population” (Olenick). In turn, by prioritizing health care facilities to address
the imaginative cause of the issue, misinterpretation and absence of education on specialized
needs of veterans, veterans will finally receive quality and adequate care. Additionally, the innate
nature of society to dismiss the issue and misinterpret it has caused a gap resulting in a less
effective care system for Veterans. Society needs to cultivate the particular struggles that
veterans face by increasing their understanding on the issue. As a result, “...we must not deny
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the continued potential for emotional wounds and PTSD. In this sense, prevention issues for
PTSD are no different than for any health- related issue; the first step is education and
inferior to other issues, society is degrading how we address and provide for veterans when, in
everyday citizens and those who are directly involved in veterans’ care will create a more equipt
rehabilitation process because it will eliminate restricting barriers and social stigma.
long term policies and advocating agencies in an attempt to solve mistreatment of veterans;
however, they are not adapted to today’s society, further stressing the need to improve our
nation's engagement by updating resources to make them more accessible. Once having returned
from service, veterans are in search of an occupation that can accommodate to their newly
formed lifestyle. With little support from the government it is hard for veterans to pursue their
wants or dreams, therefore, the government needs to provide different programs that don’t just
address their mental standing. The government should offer vocational programs which may
introduce the donation of a loan for startup business, with the consideration that not all veterans
prioritize education (Carter). By subsidizing these programs and new training methods veterans
will lead a more stable lifestyle. It can be concluded: “successful veteran reintegration into
civilian life rests upon providing veterans with training that builds on their military knowledge
and skill, employment post-separation from service, homelessness prevention, and mental health
programs that promote civilian transition” (Olenick). In addition, policies and reforms that are
already legislated are incomplete when addressing the root of the problem: bureaucracy in the
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have exposed the injustices within the organization, which subsequently adversely affect
veterans. Therefore, in order for a more just system, which will more effectively treat veterans,
the government needs to create effective solutions, policies, and reforms to prevent further
endurance of conflict.
their transition back into civilization. By not giving them appropriate or suitable methods for
encompassing a normal lifestyle, society and the government are selfishly isolating veterans who
sacrificed their lives for ours. The government has created many policies and reforms in
confrontation of this issue, which both succeed and fail; however, they can only be addressed as
provisional compromises reflecting that change and reform is needed. Society has also
participated in this isolation by creating a stigma which affects the willingness of soldiers to seek
care, ruining their chance at reintegration in an unaccepting society. As a result, to move forward
America needs to spark change by addressing these issues, and creating a more suitable
environment for Veterans. Ultimately, we must call upon our government to extend their promise
of a safe return to a promise of “life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness” for all veterans.
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