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A beautiful park in paradise

(Gumbalimba)

Gumbalimba is an amazing site where you can enjoy yourself and discover a lot about the
island and its culture like a one-day destination dream. Many tourists and people visit this
place for such an enjoyable, pleasurable and entertaining environment that is found there. (TIS
)However where the visitor can become acquainted with monkeys and parrots in a natural
setting, tour the history of the island, ride a zipline through the jungle canopy, explore the
wildlife down under while breathing underwater, kayak the picturesque shoreline, eat at a
poolside cafe, and just hang out in a hammock or lounge chair on the beach from treetops to
sea chests there are adventures that abound. A very attractive and fantastic location to relax
with families and friends. As well IN ADDITION where more than two hundred types of
colorful plants decorate and makes the park one of the most pleasant and delightful stop.

The Gumbalimba Park is located in West Bay, Roatan, Bay Islands, Honduras; next to Foster
Resort and Beacher`s Restaurant. In fact, this beachfront park offers not only the water
activities and leisure of the beach and ocean,( The comma before the conjunction but also
appears to be unnecessary. Consider removing it) but also diverse attractions in over 20 lovely
acres. There's a fortune to be found there for everyone in the family and who knows, maybe
some pirate treasure, too; . Gumbalimba Park is named after one of the native sapling species
in Honduras, the Gumbalimba Tree. A conifer that has a bright red, peeling, smooth bark and
dark green leaves.

As stated in informations(It appears that informations is an uncountable noun and should not
be made plural. Consider changing the noun)people comes from all over the country and wide
world WIDE to relish as well as interact with the nature of the site, .therefore to have direct
(The noun phrase direct connection seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider
adding an article).connection with the flora and fauna of this place. The Gumbalimba Park is a
major site. Furthermore(add a comma) the guides do the tours either IN TE water or TE land
and also give details, briefing(add a comma) and recommendationS what is necessary for the
adventures tours. Like SwiMMIN suit (The word Swim suit seems to be miswritten. Consider
replacing it.), ecological sun block, sun glasses, camera, towels, and hat or cap. Nevertheless by
doing the tour It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase
Nevertheless by doing the tour. Consider adding a comma. you get to learn about the different
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a comma or two with the interrupter for instance. Consider adding the comma(s). while
crossing the bridge it cause you to panic. Just as the “Coxen's Cave" gift shop and pirate's cave,
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sentence contains a series of three or more words, phrases, or clauses. Consider inserting a
comma to separate the elements. and maps brings chirp because of such beautiful and
remarkable drawing, metals and armament.

At Gumbalimba Park you will witness the raw beauty of the Caribbean at Roatan's finest
preservation park – Gumbalimba Park. Explore unspoiled trails where flowers and butterflies
give way to the shade of the tropical forest canopy. Make the crossing over Gumbalimba Pond
via scenic The noun phrase scenic rope bridge seems to be missing a determiner before it.
Consider adding an article. rope bridge. Delight in the tranquil sounds of our garden waterfall.
Befriend the brilliant winged citizens of our Bird Sanctuary where friendly parrots and macaws
bring the colors of the Caribbean alive. Ever dreamt of frolicking with monkeys? Enter Monkey
Refugio where you can acquaint yourself with the white face capuchin monkeys. Trace the
steps of the real Pirates of the Caribbean inside Coxen's Cave where you'll encounter the
infamous Capt. John Coxen, his stolen treasure, and colorful sculpted murals depicting
Honduran History only found on this site. Roam through the Botanical Garden and learn more
about exotic plants indigenous to the region. Meanwhile(It appears that you are missing a
comma after the introductory phrase Also. Consider adding a comma)there entertains yourself
with lots of types of adventures tours the like

The Insectarium at Fort Gumba

Gumbalimba Fort – home to the Pirates of Today, Inside the Fort you can become acquainted
with the creepy crawly citizens of our country. Also It appears that you are missing a comma
after the introductory phrase Also. Consider adding a comma Insectarium will enchant you
with the colors and diversity of Roatan's and Honduras' world of insects.

The canopy tour

Discover Roatan from the treetops in a Me Tarzan You Jane style. You will experience a breath
taking The word breath taking seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.rush as you defy
the laws of gravity by sliding down cable The noun phrase cable seems to be missing a
determiner before it. Consider adding an article to cable from the ridge of the mountain
straight down into beautiful Gumbalimba Park. The journey starts at Creation Rock at the top
of Gumbalimba Park where our guides provide and gear you with the finest canopy equipment
(harness, safety harness, helmet, pulley and gloves). Most important at the top, guides will
brief everyone and transform you into Jane or Tarzan. Then sooner or later the rush begins as
you are attached to the cables not knowing what it will feel like to be amongst the birds but
knowing (The verb knowing after the modal verb will does not appear to be in the correct
form. Consider changing the verb form. that you are safe and secure. The canopy tour consists
of 13 stretches of cable and 17 stations, each cable measuring from (It appears that the
preposition from is unnecessary. Consider removing it.) 120 feet in length to 500 feet in length.
Each station is located in the trees between 18 and 60 feet from the ground. In fact one of only
two certified Canopy Tours in Honduras with a three cable (It appears that three cable is
missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).) system.

Snuba diving

Snuba is an easy and safe way to enjoy the coral reefs in Roatan. No prior snorkeling
experience is necessary. You simply breathe through a scuba regulator that is connected to an
air tank. This gives you the benefit of being able to stay under water as long as you want,
having the flexibility to stay at any depth you feel comfortable (maximum depth is 20 feet) and
the ability to come to the surface whenever you want. For this reason It appears that you are
missing a comma after the introductory phrase For this reason. Consider adding a
comma.guides will give instructions in shallow water where you can either stand or sit.
Afterwards, you'll be able to snuba in (It appears that in is not the right preposition to use in
this context. Consider changing it.)the designated trail. It is about 50 yards of sea grass where
one can often see starfish, rays, octopus and juvenile fish. Past the sea grass, you'll find the
coral reef with a spectrum of tropical fish.

Sea Trek

Ever dreamt of being just like Captain Nemo? Well, with Sea Trek you can fulfill your dreams
and keep your hairdo at the same time. If you can walk and breathe - you can Sea Trek.
Experience the thrill of exploring the ocean and all its wonders, without giving up precious
vacation time for specialized training. Ideal for persons eight years and older, Sea Trek is the
world's premier underwater helmet diving experience and it's from Sub Sea Systems.

Power snorkeling / seascooter

Want to add excitement to your snorkeling or dive, try a seascooter underwater propulsion
vehicle. Why kick when you can glide with a seascooter.

Clear kayaking

For example check out the underwater view as deep as 70ft below on clear days through the
bottom of your kayak or paddle over coral formations and sea life 1ft below. Visiting the
Gumbalimba Park with these numerous tours will savour, luxuriate and overwhelming you
with happiness.

As noted above a day at the Gumbalimba Park is a unique occurrence for life. Undoubtedly the
site is a considerable, significant and appreciable as a first experience for tourist and people
that don’t know this place. Moreover while invigorating and des-tress The word des-tress
doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.you can enjoys The
verb enjoys after the modal verb can does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider
changing the verb form. of this wonderful, beautiful park in paradise The noun phrase paradise
seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article. called Gumbalimba
Park.

an amazing site where you can


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enjoyable, pleasurable
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the history of the island


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beacher`s
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Bleachers

leisure of the beach


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Gumbalimba
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the nature of the site


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fauna of this place


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