BACOOR NATIONAL HIGH SCHOOL – VILLA MARIA ANNEX

Molino III, City of Bacoor, Cavite

RESEARCH III:
RESEARCH PROPOSALS DEFENSE & REVIEW
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ORAL DEFENSE SUMMARY OF COMMENTS

Names: Jesleen Ross C. Taroy, Patricia Ann F. Ontar, Ram Jeruel B. Vasquez
Year & Section: 9 – SSC - Einstein
Date of Oral Defense: March 17, 2017

Title: Perna viridis (Mussel Shell) and Crassostrea iredalei (Oyster Shell) as Liming Materials
in the Soil for the Growth of Basella alba Linn (Alugbati): A Comparative Study
Authors: Jesleen Ross C. Taroy, Patricia Ann F. Ontar, Ram Jeruel B. Vasquez

Table of Comments and Actions Taken

Comments Action Taken Page Number

Bibliography:  Find other articles that the dates p. 21
 Change the date of 1983- are up to date
1984 from the reference of  Follow the APA format
Chua, etc.
Methodology:  The researchers include the p. 17 - 18
 The soil sample must have process of the soil test in the
a pH less than 5.5 (Please methodology
consider the comments in
the defense)
Research:  The researchers find a plant that p. 1
 Change the plant of the grow in alkaline soil that needs
study high soil pH, and changed from
 Remove “Effects of” in Pechay (Brassica rapa) into
the title Alugbati (Basella alba Linn)
 Removed the phrase “Effects of”
Statement of the problem:  The researchers follow the p. 11 - 12
 Change the specific suggestion of the panelist to
objectives change the statement of the
problem into like this:
 Is there a significant difference
on the growth of plant after
applying pulverized oyster and
mussel shells?
Assumptions:
 Include the descriptive
property of Alugbati
Hypothesis:
 Revise the hypotheses
Conceptual framework:
 Correct the conceptual
framework
Theoretical framework:
 Discuss the parameters
Citation:
 Include the date of the
reference of Craswell
Background of the study:
 Recognize the
introduction
 What is the importance of
Alugbati?
 What are the effects of the
acidity of the growth of
Alugbati
 Introduce oyster, mussel,
and Calcium Carbonate
Definition of terms:
 Use operating terms
 Include the variables of
the study
Research III Adviser
 The researchers added the p. 12
statement that says in our study
that we will also look to the
change on the descriptive
property of the plant before and
after the application
 The researchers totally change p. 13
their hypotheses that based on
their statement of the problem
 The researchers only use null
hypotheses as commented by the
panelist
 The researchers change the figure p. 15
on the conceptual framework
 The researchers include details p. 15 – 16
about the parameters of the study
 The date included in every p. 8
citation, including the citation of
Craswell
 The researchers included the p. 3 - 4
importance of Alugbati as the
plant of the study
 They also included some details
about the effects of the acidity of
the growth of Alugbati
 They introduced the definitions
and uses of oyster, mussel, and
Calcium Carbonate
 The definition of every terms are p. 13 - 14
revised and turn it into operating
terms
 The researchers included the
variables as commented by the
panelist
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ROEL D. RUIZ