Excellent Very Good Satisfactory Limited

Part A: Analysis
(15 Marks)
What makes the Describes hero Describes the Describes some Gives little to no
protagonist in the qualities specific to qualities of a hero qualities of a hero examples of hero
novel you read a the protagonist and provides and with a few qualities displayed
hero? studied in the text examples from the examples from the by the protagonist
4 Marks and gives quotes texts. With some text read. in the book.
and examples from specific quotes.
the text to back up
ideas.
How was one of Detailed Description of a Some description No character is
the characters in description of how character including of a character is described or little
your novel the author their voice and made with little descriptions are
constructed by the described a appearance are examples taken made with no
author? characters voice made with from the text. examples taken
8 Marks and appearance examples from the from the text.
are described with text provided.
specific examples
from the text.
Use of specific Students Narrative specific Some attempt is No attempt is
narrative terms. demonstrate terms are used made to use made to use
3 Marks understanding and appropriately narrative specific narrative specific
use of multiple throughout terms. terms in writing.
narrative terms. writing.
Part B: Creative
20 Marks
Students create Students create a An original Some attempt is The character used
and use an original detailed and character is made at creating is not original
character and descriptive created and and describing an (student used a
provide a detailed character profile described through original character. character from the
character profile and present this in both the response Character profile text) and no
5 Marks the written and the character has some character profile is
response. profile. description of handed in.
character.
Students use Descriptive writing Descriptive Some descriptive Little to now
descriptive is evident in the language is used to language is used. descriptive
language to writing. Characters describe both Some characters language is used to
describe character and setting are character and and/or setting is describe
and setting in the excellently setting well. given limited characters and the
creative response. described with a description. setting.
range of A clear structure
The response has a descriptive words can be seen in the There is some There is no clear
clear beginning and language used writing. structure to the beginning middle
middle and ending. appropriately. scene with a vague and ending.
12 Marks beginning middle
There is a definitive and end.
beginning middle
and ending to the
scene.
Spelling, Little to no spelling There are little Some spelling and Many spelling and
punctuation and and punctuation spelling and punctuation errors. punctuation
neatness of errors and writing punctuation errors Writing can be errors. Writing is
writing. presentation is of a and writing is of a read but needs to difficult to read.
3 Marks good standard. good standard. be neater.
Part A: Analysis

1) What qualities make a hero? What qualities can you identify in the protagonist in the
novel you read?

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2) Describe how a character in the novel you read was constructed by the author.

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Part B: Creative (Hand in character profile with this section).

Using the original character you have created write a short scene between that character and one
other character from the novel you have read. (Remember to describe both character and setting
to your reader).

(Lined paper provided by the teacher for this part).