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Day 17 Unit 3
Position is unclear Establishes position with Establishes position with Extends topic by cohesively connecting
and lacking supporting claims, supporting claims and is claims from multiple sources in order to
relevant and however, does not familiar with counter create a balanced point of view.
balanced support. acknowledge arguments against position. Establishes position with supporting
Style and tone are counterarguments Maintains an appropriate claims and addresses the
absent from against position. Reflects style and tone for argument. counterarguments against position.
writing. basic understanding of Revises argument for style, Creates a common ground between
tone. tone, clarity and cohesiveness. opposing positions. Reflects sophisticated
style and tone.
The Hook
Claims
Thesis Statement
Restate Thesis
Question 1. In our country, 16-year olds should be allowed to vote because many important
issues, such as money for college, will have a significant impact on them.
A. “It would be unfair to say that a 16-year-old’s thoughts aren’t legitimately valid, but they’re very
often lacking in life experience and should be taken with a grain of salt.”
B. “They’re not shaped by enough life experience to know what’s what, far less make valid
choices around running the country”
C. “Giving 16 year olds the vote would result in two things; one – they wouldn’t bother, two, if they
did, they’d just tick the same box their parents had talked about.”
D. “Student activists around the country have demonstrated, many teenagers, have very well
thought out positions and frankly, in many cases, they’re leading the adults”
Question 2. My local government should ban soda from all public places.
A. “Medical evidence indicates that the rising thirst for Soda, the so called "liquid candy," has
been a major contributor to the obesity and diabetes epidemics.
B. “The caffeine found in soda can help give a tired worker a boost in energy to continue their
shift, without resulting in a more dangerous habit”
C. “Soda is often used a quick remedy for people experiencing low blood sugar”
D. “Many people who want to clean their toilet bowls, rely on soda to do the job with its
carbonated properties to clean stains”
Question 3. Toy guns should be banned because they inappropriate toys for young children,
who fail to understand the safe handling of a weapon.
A. “If every child who played with toy weapons turned out to be a killer then there would be
nobody left alive on the planet...It’s part of growing up and role playing and exploring.”
B. “Found that children who are reprimanded for gun play become “dispirited” and “withdrawn”
believing they’re doing something wrong and, as is the nature of contraband, they’ll go
underground and find another way.”
C. “Playing with toys guns, saying ‘I’m going to shoot you,’ desensitizes them, so as they get
older, it’s easier for them to use a real gun.”
D. “Toy guns are a classic toy that should not be tossed out simply because of some worried
parents”