Rhetoric assignment Final

Draft.pdf
by Sting Gagnon

Submission date: 14-Oct-2018 11:22PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 1020076772
File name: Rhetoric assignment Final Draf t.pdf
Word count: 1353
Character count: 6891
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Rhetoric assignment Final Draft.pdf
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

83
Sting,

T his is the beginning of a really strong analysis. I

think that you make several poignant observations
about both of your sources. T hat said, you have

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several mega paragraphs that need to be broken up.
Remember that every time you shif t your f ocus, you
need to start a new paragraph. For example, while
your second body paragraph f ocuses on Rise, you
deal with pathos AND popularity. Each should be
dealt with in a separate paragraph. When you revise
f or your portf olio, make sure you do so with this in
mind. I look f orward to your next essay.

PAGE 1

Strikethrough.

QM Times New Roman | Lang & Design

T imes New Roman

Comment 2
You need a more creative title.

Comment 3 | Lang & Design

Articles should be in italics.

PAGE 2

QM Mega Paragraph | Organizat ion

T his paragraph has a lot going on. You need to split it up.

PAGE 3
 QM Mega Paragraph | Organizat ion

T his paragraph has a lot going on. You need to split it up.

QM Good | Rhet Focus

Good

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PAGE 5

Comment 4 | Cit at ion

T his should be centered

QM Hanging indentation | Cit at ion

T his needs to be hanging indentation

QM Alphabetical Order | Cit at ion

Your sources need to be in alphabetical order

RUBRIC: 30 1 DEFINITION RUBRIC

RHET FOCUS Advanced

Rhetorical Focus: Write f ormally and inf ormally, in-class and out-of -class, f or a variety of audiences and
purposes.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

ORGANIZ AT ION Prof icient

Organize, f ocus, and communicate one’s thoughts clearly and ef f ectively to address a rhetorical situation.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

LANG & DESIGN Developing

Academic Language and Design: Recognize, evaluate, and employ the f eatures and contexts of language
and design that express and inf luence meaning and that demonstrate sensitivity to gender and cultural
dif f erences.

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC

DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED

CIT AT ION Developing

Use your major’s customary citation style to ethically cite and communicate inf o f rom a variety of
appropriate sources

ABSENT

BELOW BASIC
DEVELOPING

PROFICIENT

ADVANCED