Académique Documents
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p.102-103 Example
Businessman businessperson
cameraman photographer
chairman chair, chairperson
congressman representative
craftsman skilled worker
divorcιe divorced person
fireman firefighter
foreman supervisor
housewife homemaker
landlord, landlady owner
maiden name family name
mailman, postman mail carrier
man-hours work-hours
mankind humanity, human beings
manpower strength, power
policeman police officer
repairman repair person
salesman salesperson, clerk
spokesman spokesperson
Eliminate sexist salutations. Never use the following salutations when you are
unsure of who your readers are:
■ Dear Sir
■ Gentlemen
■ Dear Madam
Any woman in the audience will surely be offended by the first two greetings and
may also be unhappy with the pompous and obsolete madam. It is usually best to
write to a specific individual, but if you cannot do that, direct your letter to a particular
department or group: Dear Warranty Department or Dear Selection Committee.
Be careful, too, about using the titles Miss, Mr., and Mrs. Sexist distinctions are
unjust and insulting. It is preferable to write Dear Ms. McCarty rather than Dear
Miss or Mrs. McCarty. A woman’s marital status should not be an issue. Try to
find out if the person prefers Ms. to another courtesy title (e.g., Editor Hawkins,
Supervisor Jones). If you are in doubt, write Dear Indira Kumar.
Watch masculine pronouns. Avoid using the masculine pronouns (he, his,
him) when referring to a group that includes both men and women.
Every worker must submit his travel expenses by Monday.
Workers may include women as well as men, and to assume that all workers are
men is misleading and unfair to women. You can edit such sexist language in
several ways.
a. Make the subject of your sentence plural and thus neutral.
Workers must submit their travel expenses by Monday.
b. Replace the pronoun his with the or a or drop it altogether.
Every employee is to submit a travel expense report by Monday.
Every worker must submit travel expenses by Monday.
c. Use his or her instead of his.
Every worker must submit his or her travel expenses by Monday.
d. Reword the sentence using the passive voice.
All travel expenses must be submitted by Monday.
Discourteous Courteous
We must discontinue your service unless Please send us your payment by November 4
payment is received by the date shown. so that your service will not be interrupted.
You are sorely mistaken about We are sorry to learn about the difficulty
the contract. you experienced over the service terms in
your contract.
The new iPad you sold me is third-rate Since the iPad is still under warranty, I hope
and you charged first-rate prices. you can make the repairs easily and quickly.
It goes without saying that your suggestion It was thoughtful of you to send me your
is not worth considering. suggestion, but, unfortunately, we are
unable to implement it right now.
Pompous Contemporary
aforementioned previously mentioned
as per your request as you requested
at this present writing now
I am in receipt of I have received
contingent upon the receipt of as soon as we receive
be advised that for your information
due to the fact that because
endeavor try
forthwith at once
henceforth after this
herewith; heretofore; hereby (drop these three h’s entirely)
immediate future soon
in lieu of instead of
pursuant concerning
remittance payment
under separate cover I’m also sending you
we regret to inform you that we are sorry that
Comparison/
Contrast But conversely equally however
In contrast in the same way likewise on the contrary
On the other hand similarly still yet