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1. Nowdays businesses face problems with new employess who just finished their Commented [W72]: nowadays

education and lack some interpersonal skill such as the ability to work in a team. Commented [W73]: employees itu e-nya yg double bukan s

What do you think is main cause of the problem? How can it be resolved?

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which is nessesary to succeed at entry-level positions in the workforce. In this essay, I would Commented [W75]: spelling

like to identify the causes of this situation and propose some corresponding solutions. Commented [W76]: workplace/office :tempat kerja

workforce itu tenaga kerja...

The unsettling main cause is university, the places that are expected to train student for the
real job environment, are not placing enough encourage on critical thinking or independent Commented [W77]: g butuh koma disini kan ada conjunction

research skills student’s. A wide range of factors contribute to the fact that university has a Commented [W78]: encourage :verb
encouragemnet :Noun
lot of universities-leavers have lack of many applied, it causes most people focus on students'
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academic performance much more than practical skills. Futhermore internet and technology
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have the key role of cause to decrease interpersonal skill. People become more introvert and 1.contribute, 2.has, 3 have, conjunctionya 1. Apa have nya jadi
then cannot communicate effectively. noun?

Fortunately, several solutions have been found. The most urgent solution is curricuum of Having
Atau lacking
education must be geared to students' needs in their future job. Essentially, university has to
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look at how to meet the demand of enterprise and provide more practical skills and
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knowledge for students. For instance, university have a compulsory "Internship” program in
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the pre-final year of the graduation. after that The university give the company independency education is.....
to administer skills assessment tests, after requisite training for the same of course, that the
result will be the base of recruitment. In addition, Should university emphasize students to Must be itu harus pki conjunctionnya... emang bisa di reducing???
attend the seminars and lectures of well-known entrepreneurs, it will surely help them to be Commented [W714]: Has
professional in worklife. University :collage:Higher education institution..
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related courses in campus, threrefore the key to address is by establishing new programs such tpi verbnya trus singular

as intership and training. Atau this institution gives

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shortcoming
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situation:circumstance

Uda bagus kok vin, cumaaa yah spelling2 dikit aja