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For the Division of Health Sciences
Academic style
For the Division of Health Sciences
Activity 1
Academic style
For the Division of Health Sciences
I think that the internet has really affected public services like hospitals.
If you look at what happens now you will see a doctor who works in the
city uses the internet and amazing robots lots more to operate on
patients living in the countryside. This means that he can look after
patients living in the country which means that they have fewer
disadvantages than in the past when they needed services.
Academic style
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Impersonal writing
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Activity 3
Activity 4
– Stick the needle into the guy’s stomach.
– Insert the injection into the patient’s abdomen
area.
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Sciences earning
Activity 5
Not academic Academic ?
don’t
won’t
haven’t
can’t
?
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Activity 6
Compare the number of verbs used:
– Researchers are finding better ways to treat the
disorder. They are using the results of the current study
to help them.
– Research into more advanced methods for the
treatment of the disorder has utilised the results of the
current study.
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Activity 6
Compare the number of verbs used:
– Researchers are finding better ways to treat the
disorder. They are using the results of the current study
to help them.
– Research into more advanced methods for the
treatment of the disorder has utilised the results of the
current study.
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Activity 7
Example sentence:
The government decided to open a new clinic in the outer
suburbs and this was welcomed by the residents.
Activity 8
Example sentence:
Drug-resistant kinds of bacteria are emerging and this is
worrying health experts.
Activity 9
Example sentence:
The pharmaceutical company disposed of the chemicals
which contaminated the local supplies of drinking water.
Passive voice
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Activity 10
Activity 11
Activity 12
References
For the Division of Health Sciences
De Silva Joyce, H & Feez S 2004, Developing Writing Skills Book 2, Phoenix Education,
Albert Park, Victoria.