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College Writing II
12 February 2019
What is Education? The word itself, according to the Oxford Dictionary, is derived from
Old French which is an idea where the child, who lacks in knowledge, should be taught by
someone who can further accumulate the child’s knowledge by increasing its “physical, mental,
and spiritual development.” In this case right now, the United States is falling behind in the idea
of education in the international rankings based on their overall score from U.S. News & World
Report in 2019. Many educators might as well just blame on the children who will lead the future
from today. Unfortunately, as educators point fingers on the students, they should blame on
funding and government that are not regulating the physical school buildings. The most noticed
factor on poor standardized test scores is the fact that large school sizes (more than thirty
students per classroom) can be harmful to every student’s learning than having small class sizes.
Is Smaller Better?: When It Comes to Schools, Size Does Matter by Sandy Cutshall is more
informative than Janet French’s ‘A Wall of Noise’; Teaching classes of 30, 40 kids demands
creativity, sacrifices because Cutshall’s article provides clear background knowledge and
information about class size effects as she compares data collected from different schools.
Janet French is an education reporter of Edmonton Journal in Alberta, Canada as she has
a lot of experience from her fifteen previous years of reporting. For example, French worked for
The Star Phoenix and Nelson Daily News to ensure that every journal she publishes reaches out
to the Canadian public. She graduated from The University of British Columbia with a degree in
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journaling. From the article, ‘A Wall of Noise’; Teaching classes of 30, 40 kids demands
creativity, sacrifices, French interviews parents, students, and educators in the Alberta
community located in Canada about their opinions on their poor quality education schools when
it comes to teaching enormous class sizes (more than thirty children per instructor’s session). She
also then further emphasizes the background information from each parent, student, and teacher
from The George Washington University as well as her Teaching Credential from University of
California (Berkeley). During her research, Sandy Cutshall has published many peer-review
articles on education, especially on foreign language development and learning since she has
teaching experiences with adults. In her article, Is Smaller Better?: When It Comes to Schools,
Size Does Matter, Cutshall researches the benefits of shrinking down class size in every school
district in the United States. She also provides examples of schools progressing on decreasing
class size by portraying schools that have been creating a sense of community and
acknowledgement for every student. Besides that, Cutshall also expresses her reason why
schools throughout the country still have large class sizes that surpass the fire hazard by the room
occupancy limit.
First of all, both pieces of writing are aware that smaller-sized classes in smaller school
a tight bond between a student and a teacher. From that point, teachers would know and support
their enlightened student based on their desires. Cutshall indicates, according to the U.S.
Department of Education, that there are less crimes and drug usage in small-sized schools (2).
The point that Cutshall is making, is that when the amount of students surpass the expected
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capacity of a classroom there is less personal attention from other teachers that will then lead to
them doing unlawful actions such as smoking marijuana in the Illinois state. One thing that is
really neat about Cutshall’s claim is that students can no longer belong to a group with a low
socioeconomic status, like working in industrialized jobs, as the future will now explore and
follow their teacher’s footsteps into higher education if they are acknowledged in small-sized
class very often. Whereas in large class sizes, teachers can easily ignore the students’ internal
conflicts if they cannot remember every students’ identification or background knowledge. From
French’s article, ‘A Wall of Noise’, French identifies Louise Sevigny’s second grade daughter’s
struggle of not finding quality peace time when she has to concentrate on her classwork caused
by the noise of constant chit-chatting in a crowded classroom (2). French emphasizes Louise’s
darling, can only accomplish her assignments whenever there is no one inside her classroom, yet
since there are more than 30 classmates in her class, it makes it hard for teachers to reach out
every single individual who needs assistance without the usage of their voice. Similar to the idea
from Cutshall’s citation, every student needs to be acknowledged of their personal desires in
order to succeed and grab on to the college railroad tracks. However, Cutshall provides statistical
evidence to influence superintendents and school principals with clear numerical data to why
they should ponder frequently about shrinking down class sizes. Also, Cutshall delivers her proof
from a governmental resource that usually records the percentage of students doing a certain
activity. Whereas a complaint from a parent who does not have much education other than a high
school degree, the interview between the two can be quite biased since the parent lacks further
educational knowledge beyond high school. Based on this fact, French also does not provide any
numerical statistics from an official source and just interviews with people overall. These two
articles can in fact, prove that it is vital to create tight strings between the master and the pupil,
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however, Janet does not present any numerical evidence to indicate that strong relationships will
Along with the mentioning of relationships, students obtain better access to information
dance well with an amputated leg or how to present concepts in front of a large crowd when
being timid or anxious in that moment. In fact, French depicts another impediment from a child
in the kindergarten level––except with special needs (like Down Syndrome), William Fry, as he
does not receive sufficient guidance on how to properly hold a writing utensil from two aides
because they are both occupied with other pupils with special needs as well (2). Based on the fact
that two adults have more children to watch over with special needs (like autism or being
mentally retarded), is equivalent to nurturing of a room full of babies who need to be fed often in
different and unexpected times since they have certain digestive system that is unique to other
infants. Same thing with Fry’s developing technique of holding a pencil is worrisome since he is
not meeting the educational standards of other children who at least know how to write each
letter of the alphabet in kindergarten level. Similar to Fry’s innocent knowledge being ruined,
Cutshall cites from the 2002 report, Dollars & Sense: The Cost Effectiveness of Small Schools,
that the class of 2000, from the Providence school system in Rhode Island, had individual
struggle based on their low parental education when it came to interfering with college readiness
by the time they graduated (2). Cutshall not only focuses on the class size aspect, she analyzes
outside sources that can affect the learning environment of children such as class conflict from
their parent’s socioeconomic status in this capitalist society. It is the same information from ‘A
Wall of Noise’ which is when students have internal conflicts that cannot be manipulated easily
with a snap of a finger, it can be difficult for them to be integrated or accustomed into any
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education system. On the other hand, with ‘Wall of Noise’ French cites her observations from
teachers in Canada, where their social construction of groups can be different from the groups
encountered in the American education system. Other point to indicate is that French also
narrows down the idea that only children with special disabilities need the most attention
whereas Cutshall claims that every child with any internal or mental conflict need as much
attention like any other student in order to be competent in their future profession or job. As
these two pieces of writing emphasize that the understanding of each student’s background
information is essential to form strong relationships between teachers and students. From there,
teachers will then soon encounter resources to help their students achieve their desires.
particular subject to be discussed. For example, in an architecture class, a student would need to
have advanced computers to draft and design blueprints for ideal buildings. Or even having the
opportunity of becoming a marine biologist by being able to visit and observe aquatic species of
laughing dolphins. From the perspective of Cutshall, she reports that the high school, New
National Academy Foundation, started to operate a children’s museum, which then initiated the
process of teachers guiding their students closer to actual professional workload with technology
(3). Sandy supports the concept that smaller class sizes tend to specialize on a certain subject (i.e.
architecture, engineering, symphony or theatre) that will recognize the students’ actual interest of
actually leaning closer to what their desired career will resemble in the near future. Thanks to the
technological resources, it will be more facilitating for students to receive feedback and
corrections from teachers and actual professionals who have experience in that field. The
advantage of having a professional from a specific field can allow students to expand their
curiosity and engage into something they would want to research in their luminating future.
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From this growth in curiosity, it would make it easier for students to also form connections with
professionals so that way the professionals can understand what topic each child should be
taught. Referring back to the technological resources of Rimbey, Canada, Janet French reaches
out to a tenth grade English teacher, Cade Bengert claims that there are only a limited number of
Chromebooks for his students to give, and the booking of the laptop cart is a hassle (3). In other
words, Mr. Bengert demonstrates to French that the lack of having efficient resources can be
harmful to students who are stationed in crowded classrooms. Unfortunately, in the rural
Canadian education system, students are more likely to be in the low-end scale when it comes to
the preferred quality education here in America. Similar to Cutshall’s depiction of students
having at least professionals to guide their college education, French focuses on the scarcity of
technological resources when it comes to completing certain tasks. From here, Cutshall focuses
on a variety of different sources that can benefit the student, whereas from ‘A Wall of Noise’ just
focuses on the physical and tangible resources like laptops as if they were their sole guides to
college success. Going back to the conflict of a parent’s socioeconomic status, when the status is
low, it can harm the student’s learning since the parent is not a reliable source when it comes to
homework help. From there, it is reasonable to why French only focuses on laptops being the
only sun of knowledge. With Cutshall, she is more surrounded by progressed schools in college
success whereas French is more pessimistic about education not progressing quickly and
efficiently. Similarly, Cutshall and French would agree that having outside resources can
improve learning by having small class sizes, except, Cutshall indicates that having a garden of
Sandy Cutshall’s educational article, Is Smaller Better?: When It Comes to Schools, Size
Does Matter, is more reliant than ‘A Wall of Noise’; Teaching classes of 30, 40 kids demands
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creativity, sacrifices by Canadian journalist, Janet French since Cutshall’s article contains a
variety of logistic evidence and research of different schools with different class sizes across the
United States. From Sandy Cutshall’s marvelous writing piece, she takes evidence from different
and reliable sources such as the United States Department of Education and schools that are
development individual. On ‘A Wall of Noise’, Janet French only focuses on the Canadian local
schools in a specific area of Canada and interviews teachers in the official education system yet
has vague knowledge to further emphasize the causes that cannot be controlled easily by
students, teachers, and parents. In the education that is present to this day, it is still very reliant
on its crutches, however, the more problems that are noticed and announced clearly, there will be
competent progress on the long-run in order to improve every student’s ability to grasp the
Works Cited
Cutshall, Sandy. “Is Smaller Better? When It Comes to Schools, Size Does Matter.” Techniques:
Connecting Education & Careers, vol. 78, no. 3, Mar. 2003, pp. 22–25. EBSCOhost,
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French, Janet. “‘A Wall Of Noise’; Teaching classes of 30, 40 kids demands creativity,
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