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by Salvador Apud-Martinez
Missing a thesis.
Good thesis- you will need to combine this with the introduction
Run-on
How are we
going to get
there? What
car
companies
need to get
on board
with this type
of
production?
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T he f irst solution is f ine, but the last two aren't. You
need to be detailed about the steps that will be
taken. You can say "don't cut down trees" f orever,
but will it happen? No. T hink of a more f easible
solution like mandating that logging companies
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replant lost f orests or something of the sort.
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Text Comment. Good thesis- you will need to combine this with the introduction
QM Run-on
Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
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Text Comment. How are we going to get there? What car companies need to get on board
with this type of production?
Text Comment. We need them f or paper products. What are you going to do to replace
that problem?