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Close-Reading Passages

From Ch.17-22
FOR SYNTHESIS
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PLEASE OPEN YOUR TKM ESSAY ORGANIZER!
WE ARE GOING TO LOOK AT RELEVANT DATES,
PLANS, and START CHOOSING CONCRETE
DETAILS.
USE THIS ESSENTIAL QUESTION TO CHOOSE ONE
CONCRETE DETAIL FROM EACH OF THE THREE
PASSAGES FROM THE TRIAL:

How are Scout & Jem’s “life lessons” through


both their experiences and Atticus’s advice in the
first part of the book tested and, finally, applied
or denied, during the happenings of the trial?
FOR EXAMPLE:
LOOK AT YOUR THEME STATEMENT. EVERYONE
MAY CHOOSE DIFFERENT CDs BASED ON WHAT
WILL HELP THEM MOST FOR THEIR ESSAY.
How is Atticus’ parenting tested?

How is racism tested?

How is courage tested?

How is Otherness used to dehumanize T.R?

How does gossip or rumors affect the trial?


ONCE YOU HAVE PICKED THREE EXCELLENT
CONCRETE DETAILS FROM THE TRIAL PARTNER
PUT THEM IN THE BOX (ON YOUR TKM
ORGANIZER) and start comparing to your
secondary source → super important.
-https://docs.google.com/document/d/19khp1tv
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***Ignore the purple box that says “WAIT FOR
PART 2” you can change that back to white.
-Insert the three most important concrete details.
-Start seeing what Sec. Source quotes can fit.
THIS SHOULD BE DONE BY TOMORROW!
CHECKLIST FOR TKM ESSAY
WHAT YOU SHOULD HAVE DONE WHAT YOU SHOULD START TODAY

➢ PICKED TWO TOPICS ❖ CHOOSE THREE CONCRETE


DETAILS FROM THE TRIAL
➢ COMBINED TOPICS AND PASSAGES
EXPLAINED HOW THOSE
TOPICS INTERACT ❖ START COMPARING THESE
CDs IN THE TRIAL WITH
➢ WROTE A CONCISE, YOUR SECONDARY SOURCE.
WELL-STRUCTURED THEME
STATEMENT ❖ REVISE THEME STATEMENT
IF NECESSARY
➢ CHOSE A SECONDARY
SOURCE “LENS” FOR YOUR
SYNTHESIS
Synthesis Commentary:
REMEMBER from The Yellow Wallpaper Project
we practiced coming up with GOOD, SOLID,
COMMENTARY PRODUCING synthesis.
HERE ARE THE SLIDES WE WENT OVER, BACK
THEN IN FEBRUARY.
Primary Text Concrete Detail Secondary Text Concrete Detail Synthesis (CMs)

“I sometimes fancy that “Rest treatment was 1 Level Synthesis


in my condition if I had about isolating the
less opposition and more individual and depriving Both “TYW” and
society and them of all outer stimuli, Sandry’s article deal with
stimulus—but John says not for their own sake, the topic of rest
the very worst thing I can but for others. Many say treatment.
do is think about my rest treatment was
condition, and I confess simply imprisonment NOO! OMG NO!
it always makes me feel branded as professional Give me more.
bad. So I will let it alone medical treatment”
and talk about the (Sandry 2017).G
house” (Perkins Gilman
3).
Primary Text Concrete Detail Secondary Text Concrete Detail Synthesis (CMs)

“I sometimes fancy that in “Rest treatment was Level 2 Synthesis


my condition if I had less about isolating the
opposition and more individual and depriving While the narrator speaks
society and stimulus—but them of all outer stimuli, of rest treatment as
John says the very worst not for their own sake, but something she must deal
thing I can do is think for others. Many say rest with because it makes her
about my condition, and I treatment was simply better, in reality, it makes
confess it always makes imprisonment branded as her worse.
me feel bad. So I will let it professional medical
alone and talk about the treatment” (Sandry
house” (Perkins Gilman 3). 2017).2
Primary Text Concrete Detail Secondary Text Concrete Detail Synthesis (CMs)

“ I sometimes fancy “Rest treatment was Level 3 Synthesis


that in my condition if I about isolating the
had less opposition and individual and depriving John is motivated as a
more society and them of all outer stimuli, character to keep his
stimulus—but John not for their own sake, wife from “thinking
says the very worst but for others. Many about her condition,”
thing I can do is think say rest treatment was which may imply he
about my condition, simply imprisonment understands that rest
and I confess it always branded as treatment was really a
makes me feel bad. So I professional medical foul, horrible treatment.
will let it alone and talk treatment” (Sandry
about the house” 2017).
(Perkins Gilman 3).
Primary Text Concrete Detail Secondary Text Concrete Detail Synthesis (CMs)

“ I sometimes fancy “Rest treatment was Level 4 Synthesis


that in my condition if I about isolating the John’s motivation is to make
sure his wife does not think too
had less opposition and individual and depriving deeply about her issues, so,
more society and them of all outer stimuli, instead, she thinks about her
stimulus—but John not for their own sake, prison, her home. She is
imprisoned by the walls of her
says the very worst but for others. Many home, same as many women
thing I can do is think say rest treatment was who WERE NOT prescribed
about my condition, simply imprisonment rest treatment. Maybe
Perkins-Gilman is saying that
and I confess it always branded as being told women had to stay
makes me feel bad. So I professional medical in the home was a type of
will let it alone and talk treatment” (Sandry imprisonment.
about the house” 2017).
(Perkins Gilman 3).
Primary Text Concrete Detail Secondary Text Concrete Synthesis (CMs)
Part of the reason this example scores a 4 is Detail

because it draws many conclusions. “ I sometimes fancy “Rest treatment was Level 4 Synthesis
that in my condition if I about isolating the John’s motivation is to
had less opposition individual and make sure his wife
It does NOT just point to the fact that the and more society and depriving them of all does not think too
topics overlap (I know that). stimulus—but John outer stimuli, not for deeply about her
says the very worst their own sake, but for issues, so, instead, she
thing I can do is think others. Many say rest thinks about her prison,
It does NOT state something of a fact- like the about my condition, treatment was simply her home. She is
Level 2 example which just says “it makes her and I confess it always imprisonment branded imprisoned by the walls
makes me feel bad. So as professional of her home, same as
worse.” That’s pretty clear! I will let it alone and talk medical treatment” many women who
about the house” (Sandry 2017). WERE NOT prescribed
It DOES notice key words and phrases and (Perkins Gilman 3). rest treatment. Maybe
Perkins-Gilman is
makes sure the analysis uses those key words and saying that being told
phrases. women had to stay in
the home was a type of
imprisonment.
It DOES end up noticing how the topic overlaps
at an analytical level.

It DOES talk about some of our vocabulary


(Character development, conflict, character
motivation) which helps!
CHECKLIST FOR TKM ESSAY FOR FRIDAY
WHAT YOU SHOULD HAVE DONE WHAT YOU SHOULD START TODAY

➢ CHOOSE THREE CONCRETE ❖ START YOUR OUTLINE!


DETAILS FROM THE TRIAL
PASSAGES This includes, and is on your
TKM Organizer Sheet:
➢ START COMPARING THESE
CDs IN THE TRIAL WITH THEME STATEMENT (Just
YOUR SECONDARY SOURCE. copy and paste it)
Topic sentence
➢ REVISE THEME STATEMENT Concrete Details
IF NECESSARY NOT CMs yet.