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During my freshman year at Huntington Park Institute of Applied Medicine I had the trait
of being super shy and timid. Because I was so shy it prevented me from communicating. I was
very intimidated by new teachers that I would not ask them questions, or seek help when I was
confused with a concept. I knew very few people in my class and refused to associate with
anyone because I was so self conscious of being judged. I did not join any clubs because I felt
that I did not fit in. However, after completing and experiencing my first interdisciplinary
project, I realized things had to change in order to improve my communication skills. As the
years progressed, I found myself to be a whole new person. I am now more confident and very
outspoken. As a senior, I feel very comfortable with practically everyone at school. If I have a
concern, I can easily talk with a teacher or counselor. When assigned into group projects, I can
easily argue and defend my opinion without fear of being shut down so easily. I am now even
part of the animal activist club where I have build new relationships. With this new found
confidence, I feel more prepared for college. This new trait will help me not to be shy because in
college no one is going to hold my hand. I will have to ask for help on my own and build
In freshman year, my writing skills were not great. As I entered high school I realized I
overestimated how good my writing skills actually were. My scores were not terrible, they were
average in fact, and they did not exceed my expectations. After the first high school report card, I
realized that I can do so much better in English. I began to use vocabulary words given in class
to study, learn them and use them in my writing. I also learned about MLA formatting and how it
is commonly used for formal essays. After my freshman year, I ended up enrolling into the
English honors class in sophomore year, and the A.P English language in my junior year. I know
I need to continue to improve my writing skills, because then I will be better prepared me for
college. I feel that now, I am able to write better essays in which I can effectively defend my
claim.
Lastly, as a freshman, I was very lazy. Not to say that I am a very enthusiastic person
today, but I have improved since then. It was very noticeable that I was such a lazy person. I
would not submit assignments which affected my grades. I let myself to believe that the teachers
here would do the corrections for me. I would not go to tutoring because I was shy but also lazy
to go, because it meant I would have to walk home. After the first few report cards, I then
realized that I needed to improve. If I wanted to complete my A-G requirements on time I had to
complete the majority of my work. If I was unsure of something, communicate with the
counselor. As a senior today, I am now more attentive and positive of things. This can be seen
because I have taken extra courses like human body systems, medical intervention, speech class
and creative writing. Because of this in college I plan to take elective classes related to my major