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Corruption Must Be Eradicated!

Talking about corruption, corruption is a big problem for a large nation because corruption has

a negative impacts on our country's economy and also can creating poverty and social impact.

Corruption has a negative impacts on our country's economy. there are 3 tangible impacts from

the many impacts that affect the economy that will be mentioned. First, corruption can reduce

state income. because if we look at Indonesia's per capita opinion based on existing data it is

low. In May 2013, per capita income was at $ 4,000 USD. State revenues are mainly reduced

due to the decrease in tax revenues. Tax becomes a source for financing government spending

in providing public goods and services. The condition of the decline in income from the tax

sector was compounded by the corruption of tax officials to enrich themselves and the group.

Second, corruption can weakening government capacity and capabilities in development

programs that improve the economy. Corruption can reduce the budget for maintenance of

public facilities, such as road repairs that can hamper the economy. The quantity and quality

of goods and services also decreases due to the large costs for the process that occurs due to

corruption. Damage to the roads, collapsing bridges, overthrowing trains, cheap rice that is not

feasible to eat, exploding gas cylinders, fuel which, damaging people's vehicles, inadequate

and uncomfortable public transportation, collapsing school buildings, is a series of reality of

low quality goods and services as a result of corruption. Finally, corruption can also increasing

national debt. The global economic condition that experienced recession hit all countries

including Indonesia, which forced these countries to make debt to encourage their economies

which were slowing down due to recession and to cover budgetary costs that were in deficit.

With such conditions, the existence of corruption is further aggravating the financial condition.

foreign debt continues to increase February 2019. Indonesian government debt reaches Rp.

5.275 trillion. In brief, the impact of corruption in economic


And also corruption can provide social impacts. The real impacts that occur on the social

aspects in this society are only a few impacts which are mentioned from the many impacts that

occur. First, the high level of unemployment is evidence of corruption. Poverty in a country

causes because of the high unemployment rate. And one of the causes of high unemployment

rates in a country is the power of corruptors. Second, corruption can also lower one's social

solidarity with each other. The number of corrupt actors also affects the nature of togetherness,

because corruptors are only interested in individual interests. this triggers a lack of awareness

of solidarity with others that we should care about for each other. Finally, corruption can hinder

the government from eradicating poverty. Basically, the government has a plan and budget in

overcoming the problem of poverty. But the number of state officials who carry out acts of

corruption, one of which is by way of misappropriating the government budget given to

overcome the problem of poverty, which ultimately results in a slow pace in alleviating the

problem of poverty. In brief, the impact of corruption in creating poverty and negatve of social

impact.

In short, corruption is the big problem for the big country. This problem is very crucial, because

when this problem starts to emerge, then it is not immediately eradicated by the government,

it can slowly destroy the country. Not only the government has to eradicate it, citizens also

have to help the government in eradicating the problem by not asking for additional funds with

the aim of personal gain when getting a job or taking the least money from the project obtained.

Therefore we must be together in eradicating corruption which can destroy our beloved

country. So that there will be no more impacts arising from corruption.

Thesis Statement

Talking about corruption, corruption is a big problem for a large nation because corruption has

a negative impacts on our country's economy and also can provide social impacts.
Topic Sentence 1

Corruption can destroy a country becase has a negative impacts on our country’s economy

Supporting Sentence 1

Corruption can reduce state income.

Detail 1

Indonesian per capita income is low.

Detail 2

In May 2013, per capita income was at $ 4,000 USD.

Detail 3

State revenues are mainly reduced due to the decrease in tax revenues.

Detail 4

Tax becomes a source for financing government spending in providing public goods and

services.

Detail 5

The condition of the decline in income from the tax sector was compounded by the

corruption of tax officials to enrich themselves and the group.

Supporting Sentence 2

corruption can weakening government capacity and capabilities in development programs

that improve the economy

Detail 1

Corruption can reduce the budget for maintenance of public facilities, such as road repairs that

can hamper the economy.

Detail 2
The quantity and quality of goods and services also decreases due to the large costs for the

process that occurs due to corruption.

Detail 3

Damage to the roads, collapsing bridges, overthrowing trains, cheap rice that is not feasible to

eat, exploding gas cylinders, fuel which, damaging people's vehicles, inadequate and

uncomfortable public transportation, collapsing school buildings, is a series of reality of low

quality goods and services as a result of corruption.

Supporting Sentence 3

Corruption can increasing national debt

Detail 1

The global economic condition that experienced recession hit all countries including Indonesia,

which forced these countries to make debt to encourage their economies which were slowing

down due to recession and to cover budgetary costs that were in deficit.

Detail 2

With such conditions, the existence of corruption is further aggravating the financial

condition.

Detail 3

foreign debt continues to increase

Detail 4

February 2019, Indonesian government debt reaches Rp. 5.275 trillion.

Topic Sentence 2

corruption can also creating poverty rate and social impacts.

Supporting Sentence 1

Corruption can increasing the level of unemployment rate.


Detail 1

Poverty in a country causes because of the high unemployment rate.

Detail 2

And one of the causes of high unemployment rates in a country is the power of corruptors.

Supporting Sentence 2

Corruption can also lower one's social solidarity with each other.

Detail 1

The number of corrupt actors also affects the nature of togetherness, because corruptors are

only interested in individual interests.

Detail 2

this triggers a lack of awareness of solidarity with others that we should care about for each

other.

Supporting Sentence 3

Corruption can hinder the government from eradicating poverty.

Detail 1

Basically, the government has a plan and budget in overcoming the problem of poverty.

Detail 2

But the number of state officials who carry out acts of corruption, one of which is by way of

misappropriating the government budget given to overcome the problem of poverty, which

ultimately results in a slow pace in alleviating the problem of poverty.

Concluding

In short, corruption is the big problem for the big country. This problem is very crucial, because

when this problem starts to emerge, then it is not immediately eradicated by the government,

it can slowly destroy the country. Not only the government has to eradicate it, citizens also

have to help the government in eradicating the problem by not asking for additional funds with
the aim of personal gain when getting a job or taking the least money from the project obtained.

Therefore we must be together in eradicating corruption which can destroy our beloved

country. So that there will be no more impacts arising from corruption.

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