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1. INT. JESSE’S ROOM. NIGHT
A high school student Jesse Hoffman(Age: 17) is sitting
on his table writing under a yellow table lamp. We can
hear Jazz on a radio(All Blue by Miles Davis). The camera
moves around the room, we can notice a lot of books
mainly the genre of literature. We can also see a CD
collection. The collection must have at least a 100 CD’s.
The camera comes back to Jesse. He stops writing and
starts drinking juice. After a few seconds he starts
writing again. The music comes to an end and the radio
starts.
Radio:
Ladies and Gentlemen, that was All Blue by Miles Davis.
Great piece of art, I believe the whole album is probably
one of the greatest Jazz Albums of all time. Well enough
said, this is Peter Limber signing off. See you next week
on SunJazz
Jesse gets up, closes his notebook and turns off the
radio. He walks towards the bathroom, washes his hands
and dries them with the towel. Jesse wears his Jacket and
walks out of the room. The title of the movie is shown on
the door of the room.
Jesse:
Thank you for dropping me
Nick:
Your welcome
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We can see Jesse walking in school, we can still hear the
Jazz and everyone around him are talking and ignoring
him. We can’t hear what they are talking about; the only
thing we hear is Jazz. He walks towards his locker, opens
and takes out two notebooks and pens. We can see a few
literature books in his locker too.
While the music is being played we hear a knock on his
headphones and the music is being paused. It is Chase
(17), another high school student.
Chase:
Still listening to the old man music buddy
Jesse takes off his headphones and puts them back into
the locker.
Jesse:
What's up Chase?
Chase:
Sup Jesse, how was your weekend ?
Jesse:
Uh, I don’t know where to start, why don’t you go first?
Chase:
I went to Bonham’s
Jesse:
Nice, how was it
Chase:
It was great
Jesse:
Really yeah
Chase:
Yeah I mean it was alright, what about you, how was your
weekend
Jesse:
My math class starts in a minute and then I have a
meeting with the counselor
Jesse moves away from the locker and towards the class.
Chase walks with him.
Chase:
I didn’t ask you that question
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Jesse:
Well I didn’t answer it
Chase:
What’s up with counselor though, why do you have to go?
Jesse:
You didn’t read the email did you. 10 minute meeting with
counselor in your free period. You have to visit her this
week. College application, future plans, job, wife, kids
all that
Chase:
Yeah well, would be a miracle if I’d get any of those
things especially kids
Jesse:
Kids you can adopt, it’s the wife that’s the issue
Chase:
What, you ignored the job
Jesse:
Ok I have math, see you later
Chase:
Ok
Teacher:
Mr. Hoffman, Mr. Hoffman
Teacher:
Mr. Hoffman, what are you listening to and what are you
writing?
Jesse:
Uh I was writing notes and I was listening to. Uh notes
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Teacher:
Well can you help us with this question?
Jesse:
Yeah I can but from my experience shouldn’t you know the
answer I mean you’re the teacher, it’s a shame you don’t
Teacher:
Very funny Mr. Hoffman
Jesse:
Oh thank you, how nice of you
Teacher:
Well “may” you help us with this problem?
Jesse:
Yeah sure
Jesse walks towards the board, takes the marker and the
second he presses it on the board the school bell starts
ringing. Jesse looks towards his teacher and smiles.
Jesse:
Goodbye ma’am
Jesse walks outside the class like the rest of the class.
Wilson:
So what’s the plan that sounds like something I would say
to my husband when we are free on the weekend?
Jesse:
And what’s his usual answer?
Wilson:
I don’t know you tell me
Jesse laughs
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Wilson:
But you better not give me the response, so what do you
plan to do?
Jesse:
From what I understand the best option would be to wait
until an idea pops in my head and I can just do whatever
that idea tells me to do
Wilson:
Really?
Jesse:
I don’t know, you tell me
Wilson:
Jesse, come on please take this seriously. We only have a
few minutes
Jesse:
Well its not like I have 2 minutes to decide, when ill
get there ill see
A long beat
Wilson:
Jesse, I see something great in you, I actually do and
it’s not something I say to all students. Trust me. I see
that you have a demand for something, a demand for a
profession in your mind, thing is that you have to clear
your mind and look clearly on where you want to go
because honey there are a lot of places you can go
Jesse:
Is that also something your husband says to you on the
weekend?
Wilson:
I’m serious
Jesse:
Oh yeah
Wilson:
Yeah, I’m serious that you take this seriously
Jesse:
Yeah
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Wilson:
Jesse think about it like, what do you really want to do,
where do you see yourself, I don’t think you have that
much time because you’ll start applying in less than 7
months so you better start tick toking that big brain of
yours because its not about what you study, its about
what you do with the things you studied and that’s whats
important
Jesse:
Did you study motivational speeches in NYU?
Wilson:
Alright, good talking to you, I’m off to my break, oh my
god, 6 more interviews today and I have to do them rest
of the week
Wilson:
Kill me
Jesse:
Is that also something your husband says?
Chase:
What’s up?
Jesse:
We already did that this morning
Chase:
Ok well, how was the interview
Jesse:
Freaking future, everyone wants you to think about these
days. Future, future, future, what are you going to do,
what are you going to do after, what are you going to do
before, all that nonsense. I honestly don’t care,
something will happen somehow and I will be that that
someone who knows about it
Chase:
Cool, mines tomorrow, I don’t know what to say
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Jesse:
I don’t know, why are you looking at me?
Chase:
Thought you had some bright ideas
Jesse:
Why though
Chase:
You’re always writing and reading those books of yours
Jesse:
How does that have to do anything?
Jesse:
Ill tell you this though; you can convince the school
that you want to get into porn producing
Chase laughs
Chase:
I’m sure, ill just tell me that it incorporates the
aspect of biology and psychology into this area of study
Jesse:
Funny thing is that you take neither of these subjects
Chase:
God
Chase:
Give me some of that (points towards the sandwich)
Jesse:
Go get it with your own money
Chase:
I don’t have any so yeah
Jesse:
What did big daddy didn’t give you piggy money
Chase:
Yeah, I spent it on producing a porn film
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Jesse:
Well then, change your career or in this case your future
Chase:
Dude seriously I’m really hungry
Jesse:
Steal it from McCoy; seventh graders are always stealing
money from him
Jesse:
I’m sure he has another wallet, rich bastard
Chase:
Lord, by the way Mrs. Carter is looking for you, she said
she needs you to be in her office immediately, wants to
talk to you about something
Jesse:
Seriously, when did she tell you?
Chase:
I don’t know, like 20 minutes ago. Point is that what
would I do right now while your gone to Mrs. Carter.
Seriously first you don’t give me money and now you leave
to hang out with Mrs. Carter
Jesse:
You idiot, while you’re here, do yourself a favor, go to
the library, pick up a dictionary and look at the
definition of the word “immediately”
Chase:
I will immediately do it right after you pay me for the
food
Jesse:
Oh I’m so sorry that I’m late
Mrs. Carter:
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You’re twenty minutes over the clock, didn’t I tell you
friend Chase
Jesse:
Yes
Mrs. Carter:
And he said he will immediately tell you and that I
shouldn’t worry, I have been sitting in my office for the
last 20 minutes, counting every second as a second that
you would knock but no reply, where have you been?
Jesse:
That’s the issue Mrs. Carter; you have your answer in
your statement?
Mrs. Carter:
Question
Jesse:
Yes question. I would suggest you don’t trust Chase in
the future, please he has hard time understanding the
meaning of immediately and he will listen to you from on
ear and take out through the other. Its what most
magicians do with ropes and sticks
Mrs. Carter:
Well ok do me a favor and meet me after school for a few
minutes
Jesse:
Our last class is English so yeah
Mrs. Carter:
Yeah, our last class is English. Perfect
Jesse:
But why though, I mean. Don’t tell me you want me to help
you mark the juniors tests again please, for Christ’s
sake, that was the most boring time of my life and I have
been to the church various times
Mrs. Carter:
No, no, no, I got something bigger that you need to do
Jesse:
Mark the seniors tests
Mrs. Carter:
No Ill tell you about it but its definitely bigger than
marking seniors tests
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Jesse:
Checking university applications
Mrs. Carter:
Just be there church boy
Teacher:
If you’d like to perform these kinds of acts please do it
in front of the whole class and don’t hide. Please we’d
like to see and some of us would really (emphasis) like
to see
Chase:
Oh no, it’s all right, it was nothing. I’m sorry, will
not happen again I promise
Teacher:
She would be disappointed if it was nothing, it should
have been something
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Chase. Chase looks back and then points a figure point at
his head and loads it.
(CUT TO)
This is the same class but now we see it around 15
minutes later from the scene before. We can see students
getting out of class, Jesse gets out and then Chase. He’s
about to say something to Jesse but then the teacher
comes behind him and stops him, Jesse stops too, to see
what happens.
Teacher:
Mr. Chase, why leave right now. You have a few things to
say to the principle or if you want I can orate it for
you
Chase:
Ma’am I am so sorry, I was just, I was just so. You know
its German that just goes into me and yeah German
Teacher:
Oh good to know, thank god someone is enjoying my lessons
Chase:
Yeah for sure
Teacher:
Then lets tell the principle and make sure you tell him
why you love it, he will be delighted
Jesse:
Yes ma’am
Mrs. Carter:
Firstly don’t call me ma’am when we are alone. I’m not
that old or superior. I’m only 29 chill out
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Jesse:
You’re 29
Mrs. Carter:
Yeah what did you think?
Jesse:
I don’t know
Mrs. Carter:
Then why were you so surprised when I said 29?
Jesse:
I was just you know, I was
Mrs. Carter:
Yeah you were, I’m actually 31
Jesse:
Yeah there you go, I was just confused
Mrs. Carter:
I’m 34
Mrs. Carter:
Yeah I was telling you, don’t call me Mrs. Carter; call
me by my first name
Jesse:
Yeah ok umm what did you me to do…. Joy
Joy:
Now we’re talking. Ok so these days, or I must say for
the past few weeks. I have been really busy with a few
things at home and my mind is at two places at once.
There are a lot of distractions and I cant focus on one
thing. Do you understand?
Jesse:
Yes Mrs. Carter, I mean Joy, I do speak English and I do
understand but what I don’t understand is that why would
you hire me as a psychologist
Joy:
No I wasn’t hoping you to be a psychologist, you’re too
young and too fond of doing jokes and not listening
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Jesse:
Got that right
Joy:
Ok listen, freshmen students, 9th graders. They started
doing literature and its very important that their basics
are right. Its probably one of the most important classes
as without their basic literature basics they wont be
able to do the rest of the years and its very important
that they have a teacher who has full potential and focus
in their class.
Jesse:
Ok so are you asking my help to find a new teacher for
that time period or are you helping me sort out some
problems you are having and I promise I’m willing to do
so.
Joy:
Well
Jesse:
Well, am I too young and too fond of jokes?
Joy:
Well, that’s not exactly what I’m asking
Jesse:
Yeah I forgot, we didn’t come to the point in which we
discuss what am I supposed to do
Joy:
Well
Jesse:
Well
Joy:
Well
Jesse:
Well Mrs. Carter I meant Joy, sorry Joy yeah “well”
Joy:
I want you to teach the 9th graders. Look you are a great
student I mean you are literary genius. You read all the
books a summer before the school started. You know all
the books by heart, you have an affection towards
literature, its almost like you are attracted to it. You
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know this stuff, you like it, you read it and I’m
guessing you also write it because I’m sure you weren’t
taking down notes today. And plus I’m sure you know that
I trust in this stuff. No wonder you’re just wandering or
sleeping or writing in class listening to your old man
slow music which sounds really sad and that’s why because
you know everything, literature is in your blood
sometimes I feel you know more than me. Look I know you
think that this 34 year old is crazy and wants a junior
year student to teach 9th graders, and that this junior
year student has no experience on teaching and
nonetheless, no experience with 9th graders. Listen its
not much, its just this term or I should say till the
school year ends. They are reading “The Great Gatsby”
.Its simple and I know you hate me now and probably stop
attending English class at all, although it wont effect
your grade, its all I need, please, just this term. I
will be there to supervise you but at the same time I
need to focus on my own things too which means that ill
be in my office working or sorting things out and you’ll
be in class teaching 9th Graders. Yeah, well
Jesse:
Well
Joy:
For Christ’s sake
Jesse:
Fine ill give it a shot only because you made an argument
that I didn’t want you to lose so yeah
Joy:
Ill email you the details, I have class with them three
times a week and thankfully you are free in two of those
lessons which is perfect because they can just revise in
the third lesson or give them an assignment
Jesse:
This is confusing already but its ok, its literature Joy.
It must be as fun teaching it as reading and
accommodating it with your own heart and soul
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Jesse:
Oh my god, what have I gotten myself into. Can you even
imagine? I have to teach a bunch of silly and pricky 9th
graders how these stupid writers wrote these stupid books
to impress some stupid people without any stupid reason.
Honestly I don’t even remember The Great Gatsby. This
teacher is literally removing the soul outta me. I am in
pain and agony and I don’t know what to do. No literature
geniuses this is not an exaggeration. I don’t use
literary terms in my daily conversation and especially
the ones with God and myself. Even God would think that
this man screwed up big time.
Jesse:
What am I going do, what am I going do, what am I donna
do, what am I going do. And honestly, what problem is she
having anyway, what the hell is that 34 year old teacher
facing at home that it splits her brain in half and that
she cant concentrate on teaching. Heaven’s sake, freaking
literature.
Jesse:
You know, I actually started to like you guys and you
guys were actually nice but now guess what suckers, I am
not giving you much love
Suddenly the door opens and Jesse’s mom Jessica walks in.
Jessica:
Umm Jesse darling, dinner is ready. You can stop talking
or I would say shouting at your vivid imagination
Jesse:
Yes mum sure, no problem
Chase:
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Hey Charles Dickens, what’s up? All right so listen to my
story right. Yesterday I’m going from home to school in
my car I decide to stop at McDonalds because I got really
hungry
Chase:
Hey, I’m still not done with the chick I had sex with in
McDonalds yesterday. Were you even listening to the whole
time? Did I call you Dickens that upset you or something?
Jesse:
Look I cant do it, I don’t want to let your class down,
oh I’m sorry I apologize for entering at this pivotal
moment
Jesse see’s that there are five women in the area talking
to Joy.
Jesse:
I deeply apologize
Joy:
Jesse, wait. Just one-second ladies
Joy:
What’s wrong?
Jesse
Look I can’t teach these students. I have never done it
before and I don’t know how to teach them, I mean
literature is freaking huge. Where do is start?
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Joy:
The second part is not a problem at all. You start with a
question “what is literature”. You tell them what it is
and built the conversation from there. It’s a piece of
cake
Jesse:
Please don’t use metaphors like “piece of cake” with me.
I reach too much of them in the Great Gatsby yesterday
Joy:
There you go, you’re right on track. Look at the literary
terms and define those. Literary terms like metaphors,
similes, and exaggeration. This and that. Start with the
basics, there are at the back of your hand, you just have
you copy them and paste them on their witty little 9th
grader maggot sized brains
Jesse:
Ok ok, all right. Not that hard. But how do I resolve the
first part the teaching one, how do you teach. Where is
your answer to that?
Joy:
Look its very simple, just…
Joy:
Coming, just a second. Look listen the answer to your
first problem is simple. The way you teach anyone is very
simple, you need the students to like you because if they
don’t they wont listen to you. So this is want you do,
make it simple, interact with them, ask questions and one
more thing, which from what I notice you’re pretty good
at. Crack jokes, make it humorous, and make fun of your
music.
Jesse:
How is that related and not funny, Jazz is awesome
Joy:
All right fun, but come on make it interesting, make it
funny and make it cool. Try to make it a TED talk, add
your own philosophies. Imagine if you were in their shoes
what kind of first literature class would you have
wanted.
Jesse:
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Well I understand but can I really do it
Joy:
As you start to walk out in the way, the way appears
itself; it’s just the matter of starting the journey and
putting your first step on the ground
Jesse:
Is that Rumi?
Joy:
Yep, but my version of Rumi
Joy:
Yes I’m coming (Towards the lady), all right then good
luck (Towards Jesse)
Joy:
Hey guys, settle down and pay attention. There had been a
small change…
Joy:
Ok fine, there has been a (pause) change. Out of three
lessons you have with me per week, two of them will be
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take by this fellow here. He is a junior year student
Jesse and his area of expertise is literature. He reads
it, he comprehends, he loves and I’m guessing he also
writes it.
Joy:
So he will be taking your classes and no that doesn’t
mean I’m not your teacher. I will always be here either
assisting or watching Game of Thrones on my laptop in my
office and no that isn’t the reason I’m not teaching. Its
some other reason and none of you are allowed to ask. I
will make your tests and exams; I am also the one who
will mark it. He (pointing towards Jesse) is here because
he is good or I’m must say great at it and I’m sure it
will help you guys. All right then Jesse, sorry for
taking your lesson. Please continue
Jesse:
Hey guys, as you all heard I’m Jesse
Jesse:
Ok, so lets get started
Jesse:
Oh ill tell you when to take notes, not right now.
Currently we will just discuss something.
Jesse:
Can anyone tell me what this word means?
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Jesse:
Anyone
Jesse:
Yes you, sorry first what’s your name?
Girl:
Helen
Jesse:
Yes Helen
Helen:
Literature is a form of writing that has an intellectual
or artistic value and is known to be better than other
books
Jesse:
Better than other books
Helen:
It’s writing is more superior compared to other pieces or
genres of writing
Jesse:
All right, anyone else or everyone agrees
Jesse:
So everyone agrees, ok. Helen yes, literature is very
artistic, intellectual and somehow to an extent superior
but these are some qualities of literature, what I asked
for was its meaning and the meaning is actually in the
story of how literature came to be.
Jesse:
It all started with some litter. Now all of you must be
thinking that I’m starting to talk about litter when here
its written liter which isn’t a word. Litter has two
“T”’s when here there is only one. Well be patient and
ill explain it later. The real story is one behind
literature and honestly its quite dumb. It all starts
with litter as a word. There was this man who was really
poor and didn’t have much to eat or actually nothing to
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eat at all. Every night we used to go through “litter” in
different garbage cans outside restaurants and homes to
find something to eat and everyday he used to get
something but not much and some days he wouldn’t get
anything at all so he didn’t really have a good luck but
no matter what he kept looking, that was his routine and
job. Now most people would say that he should get a job
or if this routine is not working he should try something
else. This is what “most people” would think that’s not
true. One day the poor man was going through liter and he
found a mysterious bag. He opened the bag and he found
gold. Yes he found gold, after a long time of bad luck he
found something useful from which he would buy food or
whatever he needed. Well most of you must be thinking how
come there is gold in literature. Well I told you that
this is a story and its stupid and fictional but at the
same time it is also an Allegory. The poor man symbolizes
literature writers and that’s what they do. They dig into
litter to find their gold. The old man uses this gold to
buy food but these writers they use it to write their
glorious stories and that’s we will see how F.Scott
Fitzgerald has used it in the Great Gatsby. What did he
do with the gold? Did he write his glorious stories or
use it to buy a fortune of condoms.
Jesse:
Oh I hope she didn’t listen(point towards Joy’s office).
And another important thing about gold is that its value
never disappears. It always has its importance and its
significance. It’s just like literature. The value will
never decrease and its importance will never diminish. (A
long beat) Ok so lets get started with it but before that
we need to look at a few basics.
Jesse:
Lets start with literary terms
Jesse:
All right then, let’s start
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The class has ended and the students are packing and
leaving the class. Jesse is turning off the presentation
when a student gets up and asks a question.
Student:
You didn’t tell us why liter is spelt wrong?
Jesse:
Good question
Jesse:
Basically literature is very stupid but at the same time
its very artistic. It allows everything to happen. There
are no set rules or regulations. That’s why you can have
liter written like that.
Jesse:
All right guys thanks, see you in your next class
The whole class has left except for this girl who seems
really quite and sad. She is wearing a grey hoodie and
has glasses. She slowly gets up ad leaves the class.
Jesse takes a look at her. Joy comes out of her office.
Jesse looks at her and walks up to her.
Joy (serious):
Bullshit, condoms and drinking references
Jesse:
I’m sorry, you told me…
Joy:
Make it humorous and you were successful, the class
really liked it and I’m sure they learned something.
Thank you so much, well done
Jesse:
Thanks
Joy:
You know you can do it, you’re really good and I hope you
enjoyed
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16. EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE. LATE EVENING
Jesse walks towards his house and enters it. He is
drinking coffee, has a bag on his back, he also has a
water bottle in his hand with a McDonalds bag.
Jesse:
I had you know (pause) I just wanted to drink coffee and
eat McDonalds. You know, I wanted to celebrate my good
day
Jessica:
Why what happened today?
Jesse:
Umm, nothing special
Jessica:
Then what were you celebrating
Jesse:
My good day
Jessica:
What happened that made it a good day
Jesse:
Nothing special
Beat
Nick:
Wash your hands, change your clothes and have food with
us
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All four are having food. Jesse, Nick, Jessica and Ava.
Jesse isn’t eating that much as he ate McDonalds. He is
drinking a lot of water though but Ava is eating a lot,
she is 12 years old.
Ava:
I had my Global Studies test today
Jessica:
Right how did it go
Ava:
It was all right
Nick:
Meaning
Ava:
Meaning that there wasn’t something I didn’t know but at
the same time I don’t know if what I wrote was right or
not. I just wrote what I thought the answer was. Most of
the questions were very conceptual
Jessica:
Right, what about you Jesse?
Jesse:
What about me?
Jessica:
How was your thing?
Jesse:
What thing
Jessica:
How was school?
Jesse:
It was good
Jessica:
Good
There is a silence
Nick:
I want you to get a job
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Jesse:
You talking to mum
Jessica:
No he’s talking to you and how dare you?
Jesse smiles
Jesse:
What kind of job?
Nick:
Well you know practically anything, I just feel you are
kind of quite with us and don’t tell us much, its not
that we are worried about you, its just that we really
want to know what going on?
Jesse:
All right, how will this job help me in telling you about
my exuberant life?
Nick:
Well a job will teach you about responsibilities, money,
and management. All these things that you should know
before you go off to college?
Jesse:
All right
Beat
Jessica:
And you know, with a job you will have something to share
with us because from what I see you are absolutely
nailing school and there are no as such challenges for
you. So this job will just bring something out.
Responsibilities and stories
Jesse:
I don’t think you have read many stories have you, or at
least the good ones
Nick:
No, this is just for…
Jesse:
Yeah sure lets gets a job, how bad can it be and plus it
actually might be interesting.
Nick:
Oh that’s good
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Jesse:
Where exactly is this job?
Nick:
Jessica told me you liked Jazz so…
Manager:
Hey, Jonathan
Jesse:
Its Jesse
Manager:
Yes Jesse, we need three martinis on table 9 and you’re a
fan of Jazz
Jesse:
Yeah somehow
Manager:
Oh that’s good, well these bands are saying that they
want to do Scat singing. I was embarrassed on asking what
that is, can you give me an idea
Jesse:
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Well, its basically umm, its, uhh. You know it’s hard to
explain but it’s amazing so they should definitely do it.
People will love it
Manager:
What if they don’t?
Jesse
If they don’t, you can fire me, but they will
Manager:
I can’t fire you. I need you. Now go serve those martinis
Jonathan:
All right great, Ready Charles
Charles:
Yeah
Jonathan:
Bass and drums, whenever you’re ready
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Chase:
I was in a middle of a book, Charles Dickens
Chase:
No joking right now Jesse
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throws them to the sofa. He then picks out a CD and
inserts it in his speakers, he waits a second and a song
starts playing. It’s the same song that we were just
listening to. Jesse takes off his jacket and bag. He
takes out a notebook from his bag and a pencil and lies
down on his bed. He opens the notebook and it states
Chapter 1. He flips around and around and we can see that
he has written a lot. The flipping stops at half of the
notebook and that’s where Jesse starts writing again. The
camera moves throughout the room.
Jesse:
“Poetry between lines”, now after this lesson we will
finally start reading The Great Gatsby and I’m going to
be honest with you, it is not easy. The language is
slightly complicated and for some of you it’s also
slightly unnecessary but when you will get the hang of
it, it’s amazing and you want to read it again and again.
This is where “poetry between lines” comes in. Can anyone
tell me what that means?
Jesse:
Still no one, all right then. What you guys have a party
to go to and don’t want to waste time and just get outta
here
Jesse:
No seriously, what you guys didn’t invite me. I’m only
two years senior to you guys, its not like I’m a
university graduate teaching you
Jesse:
Ok fine, I’m not invited, I’ll be the asshole that will
tell you what this shit means (laughs), basically poetry
between lines means that there is always a hidden meaning
or a rationale in literature sentences. You can’t take
them for granted; you have to look in between them.
That’s what she said. (Loud laughter, quite girl still
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the same) Every sentence needs to be read and
comprehended carefully as there is always something in
it. An ordinary sentence in literature always has a
special story in it. So here in where our lesson ends but
before you go I must tell you. Tomorrow you have to write
something because I only take two classes a week and your
third one is dedicated to an assignment. This one is very
much linked to the concept behind “poetry between lines”.
You have to write a literary text of around 300 hundred
words, it’s not much and you can write on anything.
That’s the hard part because you can write anything you
want and plus there is a word limit.
Jesse:
Yes
Student:
Isn’t that a good thing, you can write anything and plus
the words aren’t that much
Jesse:
Give it a shot tomorrow and we’ll see
Long beat
Jesse:
Alright then good
Class gets up and leaves, the quite girl is the first one
to leave. Jesse gets his bag and goes to Joy’s office. He
enters and Joy has her head on the table and is sleeping.
Jesse:
Joy
Jesse:
Wow you look
Joy:
Terrible
Jesse:
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Yeah, why do you have so much tissue paper (Jesse knows
the answer)
Joy:
Oh I was just, I was just really tired and sick, that’s
why this beautiful face. I have a fever and my nose
starting bleeding. Whenever that happens I take tons and
tons of tissue paper even though that much is not needed.
Jesse:
Oh well, I’ve given them an assignment and you can check
it
Joy:
Yes I can hear you from here. It’s a challenging
assignment
Jesse nods
Jesse:
One more thing, who is the girl in the grey sweater with
glasses, she seems very quite
Joy:
Um, not sure who you’re talking about
Jesse:
The one who sits in the middle and her expressions never
change. She has glasses and straight hair. She is very
pretty or I would say that she has exceptional features
that exceed the expectations of a pleasing looking person
Joy:
Her name is Patricia. Everyone calls her Patty, why
Jesse:
Oh, I just. She seems very bright and she is very quite
so I just wanted to know her name.
Joy:
Ok well, Patty is her name
Jesse:
Thanks (Long pause), listen can I check her essay
tomorrow. You can check the rest but can I check hers
Joy:
Yeah sure, why not. It makes my life easier
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Jesse:
Great, great. Ill come to you tomorrow after school and
take the notebook.
Joy:
Yeah sure
Jesse:
Yes Mr. Cal
Mr. Cal:
Can I ask you a question?
Jesse:
Can you?
Mr. Cal:
Can I?
Jesse:
You may
Mr. Cal:
You have been coming here for a year now, everyday you
come. You drink a medium cappuccino with 2 and half
teaspoons of sugar and everyday you are writing something
on your notebook. Everyday I’m wondering what is this
child writing and I just couldn’t do it. Today I got the
balls to ask you
Jesse:
Mr. Cal, before I answer this impractical question of
yours, can I ask you something
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Jesse:
Why would a guy like you, in his 50’s I’m guessing, need
some balls to ask a 17 year old a question like this?
Mr. Cal:
Look, I think I’m just a little scared of you. You are so
straightforward and serious unlike other teenagers who
have my hand crafted beautiful coffee. I’m sorry for
saying this but you kind of seemed like a serial killer
and you were writing the names of the people you want to
kill or have killed.
Jesse:
You think. All these are names. If they are, then I’m
some successful and efficient murderer
Jesse:
I’m writing a book. It’s a literature book
Mr. Cal:
What’s it about
Jesse:
Well, its about life, about people, about what people
want (pause) Well it’s a love story actually. Yes I know
it’s hard for you to believe because I have been coming
to this coffee shop for a year now and I never brought a
girl or anything
Mr. Cal:
Wow
Jesse:
Yeah but this love is different. It’s all through writing
Mr. Cal:
Though writing
Jesse:
Yeah, it’s through writing. It’s about conversation
through writing but it signifies the importance of your
voice. Literally
Mr. Cal:
Can you explain?
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Jesse:
Well I can give you an idea, do you have time?
Jesse:
The guy and girl are talking through writing not texting.
They don’t tell each other’s names, they don’t tell their
email, number, social media or any other type of shit.
They have a conversation by writing something on the
wall. For example the guy writes and then leaves and then
the girl writes and leaves. It highlights the falling in
love through that conversation. It also talks about the
other things going on their lives and what they think
their lover looks like, or feels like or “sounds” like.
Mr. Cal:
Wow
Jesse:
Yeah, when ill complete it. I’ll give it to you. Don’t
mind me asking but you can read right
Mr. Cal:
Yeah, yeah, yeah sure
Jesse:
Great, ill give it to you and you can then see the whole
story and the details. I can’t just tell you. I think
you’ll have more fun just reading it
Mr. Cal:
Ok then
Jesse:
Ok
Jesse:
Mr. Cal
Mr. Cal:
Yeah
Jesse:
You’re the first person I have told this about you know
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Mr. Cal:
Its good to know I’m someone’s first in someone’s life
Jesse:
You’re the first person who I know that can make some
decent coffee
Nick (shouting):
Jesse, you should start getting ready for work
Nick:
All ready so quickly
Jesse:
Lets go
Nick:
Really liking this job
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Manager (to Jesse):
Oh yes here you are. Go to the bar, its your bar duty
Jesse:
Ok, just give me a second
Manager:
We don’t have a second
Jesse:
Do you have anything less than that
Manager:
Go to the bar
Jesse:
Just a second
Manager:
No
Jesse:
Did you know that 7 seconds have already passed?
Manager:
I don’t care
Jesse:
8, 9, 10
Manager:
All right go
Jesse:
Good
Jesse goes towards the Jazz band room and doesn’t see
Patty sitting. Jesse is confused and he looks around the
club to find her yet she’s not there. He takes out her
notebook and looks at it, then looks around yet she’s not
there.
Manager:
Hey Jesse, 10, 11, 12, 13
Jesse:
Yeah, all right I’m coming
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Manger:
14, 15, 16
Joy:
Essays weren’t bad. They were quite decent. I would say
that it was a challenging task as you could write
anything and some of you were jumping over ideas like
rabbits. You didn’t have one thing in mind and that
allowed your story to drift apart but some of you did
have that idea and went with it. The thing I’m happy is
that you guys used literary devices and explored them so
good. Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
You can start
Jesse:
All right
Jesse:
Before we start with our lesson. I’d like to read you
something.
Jesse takes out a notebook from the bag and sits on the
chair. The class is quite and patient. He opens the
notebook and flips around a few pages.
Jesse:
I looked, I saw, I observed.
Jesse:
The depths of hell were beneath me as I sat on a bridge.
The bridge connecting two dots, two points, two events.
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One including a stumbling block of gold coins and one
including fallen troops of a pivotal war. Both sides
gazed their star shiny eyes at me reaching for help.
Extending their arms in desire. Sitting on the bridge I
looked, I saw, I observed the pains of these two. The
pains that replicated how a blind person feels when he is
told the world is colorful. The pain that creates a
transparent wall around them. It limits them, it
restricts them. It limits them to do anything further,
anything to fix their situation. It limits them to break
the stumbling block and it limits them to win the war. It
limits them to an extent that they feel like a narrating
poet shifted to a quite library. I stumbled my feet on
the bridge, surrounded by two sides. My eyes moved left
and right like an 80’s metronome. They couldn’t stop,
they were confused. My feet stayed still, afraid to jump
into hell and afraid to move an inch on either side.
That’s when I saw, I looked, observed and I witnessed. I
witnessed the suffering of two sides and how they were
dependent on what I feel and what I feel is sorrowful and
gloomy. I’m in a situation where I want to join both
sides but I can’t. I felt like a witness and a witness
melancholy is a chess game against the so-called
Euphemism. Meaning that the heart of a weeping witness
can never be softened.
Jesse:
I read this quite a lot of times to truly understand it.
It took me a while to appreciate what a witness feels and
how he or she thinks. Witnessing two sides suffering and
desiring for help. That is the pivotal point of a weeping
witness
Helen:
I didn’t get it
Jesse:
Yeah well it will definitely take a while
Student:
Who wrote it?
Jesse:
Well it was one of you guys for sure and whoever wrote
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it. It was absolutely beautiful. They should participate
more in class
Jesse:
All right back to class. Guys we start the Great Gatsby
today. So who can tell me about the author? F. Scott.
Fitzgerald.
Jesse:
Yes, you (while pointing at a student)
Jesse:
Hi
Patty:
Hi
Jesse:
Can I sit with you?
Patty:
Sure
Jesse:
Brilliant essay
Patty:
Yeah thanks
Jesse:
Well I still don’t understand something
Patty:
What
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Jesse:
Stumbling block of gold coins
Patty:
Yeah what about it
Jesse:
What does it mean?
Patty:
Financial situations
Jesse is surprised.
Jesse:
How come?
Patty:
Well it’s a stumbling block meaning that it’s a difficult
situation and it’s of gold coins that represent money.
So, it’s a difficult situation regarding money also known
as a financial situation.
Jesse:
Wow
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
And is “fallen troops in a pivotal war” literal
Patty:
Of course not
Jesse:
Then, what does it mean?
Patty:
It means a death of a very important person who is needed
for a very important situation
Jesse:
Holy shit, that’s amazing
Patty:
Thanks
Jesse:
That was really deep I mean, I feel like you write poetry
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rather than you write essays. I mean it’s an essay but it
sounds like a poem
Patty:
Poetry between lines
Jesse:
You took it literally
Patty:
Yes I did
A long beat.
Patty:
I have actually witnessed these two things
Jesse:
Sorry what
Patty:
I have actually witnessed these two things. A death and a
debt
Jesse:
Right
Patty:
And I’m confused on what to solve. My parents split up
when I was 6
Patty:
One of them is debt due to the fact that he is an
alcoholic and the other’s father just died who was the
only source of life for her. I don’t know who to help
Jesse:
Sorry to hear that
Patty (quietly):
Yeah
A long beat
Jesse:
Do you want to go for coffee?
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Patty:
That would be great
Jesse:
I actually saw you at Abe’s
Patty:
The Jazz Club
Jesse:
Yes
Patty:
Yeah I love that place, only place where I am actually
myself. I feel connected to anything
Jesse:
I work there
Patty:
You do
Jesse:
Yes I serve drinks and sometimes advice Jazz stuff
Patty:
Oh nice
Jesse:
It is
Patty:
I actually can expect that from you. You know, working at
Abe’s
Jesse:
Wait how
Patty:
You’re a huge fan of Jazz
Jesse:
Yeah…. Wait how do you know?
Patty:
You always leave your phone on a table when you’re
teaching
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Jesse:
Ok and
Patty:
Well I sat on that table and start listening to the huge
collection of Jazz you had. It was pretty amazing. You
had such a diverse kind of Jazz
Jesse:
Wait, you were listening to jazz while I was teaching
Patty:
Well yeah, I knew all the literature terminologies
Jesse:
Ok well
Patty interrupts
Patty:
I was listening to Miles Davis while you were explaining
the difference between a metaphor and a simile
Patty:
This is it
Jesse:
What
Patty:
It’s my house, thanks for walking me to it
Jesse:
Oh great, wait who do you live with now?
Patty:
I stay 3 days at my dad’s house, 3 days at my mom’s house
and 1 day I stay at a friend’s
Jesse:
Wow
Patty:
Yeah its not easy but thanks though
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Jesse:
For what
Patty:
Today was a fun day; a witness can feel good and be
softened sometimes
Jesse smiles
Patty:
Yeah ok bye
Jesse:
Bye
Patty walks away and gets into her house. We can now see
Jesse’s expressions. He is smiling and blushing. He walks
away.
Ava:
Jesse, food is ready
Jesse takes Ava by the hand and starts dancing with her.
Ava:
Whoa
Ava:
What does that mean
Jesse:
Nothing, come on lets go have food
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33. INT. CAFETERIA. DAY
Jesse is sitting alone in the cafeteria having food and
writing his book on his notebook while listening to
music. Chase comes and sits with him.
Chase:
Hey
Jesse:
Hey
A beat
Chase:
That foreign girl left school
Jesse:
How come?
Chase:
Well her parents found out about the shit and took her
somewhere else. Her parents were damn rich and they
didn’t want any bad influences so they shifted to this
cocky ass school. It’s filled with rich kids
Jesse:
Rich kids huh
Chase:
Yep. Freaking rich kids
Jesse:
Well, it can’t be bad
Chase:
Of course its not. It’s an expensive school, who wouldn’t
want to go there
A long beat
Jesse:
You miss her right
Chase:
Oh yeah
Jesse:
No wonder you walk up to me today
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Chase:
Jesse I’m sorry, didn’t hang out with you for a week now
Jesse:
Three weeks
Chase:
Crap
Jesse:
Yes
Chase:
When you have sex every other day, you forget the number
of weeks
Jesse:
Really
Chase:
Yes
Jesse:
You had sex with the foreign girl every other night
Chase:
No
Jesse:
Then
Chase:
I had sex with her every other night and day
Jesse:
Ok then
A long beat
Jesse:
When did she leave?
Chase:
Yesterday
Jesse:
Didn’t you hit her the other day?
Chase:
Yes I did, we had sex for the first time that night
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Jesse:
Wow
A long beat
Chase:
We had a complicated relationship
Jesse:
I can imagine
Chase:
How come
Jesse:
I was being ironic
Chase:
Right
Jesse:
Have sex every other night and day with a foreign girl
whose language you don’t understand (a long beat) And
have a mortal combat slap contest before you bang each
other into your beds
Chase:
That’s right
Jesse:
Where was she from?
Chase:
No idea
Jesse:
What language did she speak?
Chase:
No idea
Jesse:
That’s means she didn’t speak English
Chase:
No she didn’t
Jesse:
You couldn’t understand a word she was saying?
Chase:
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No I couldn’t
Jesse:
What was her name?
A long beat
Chase:
I don’t know
Jesse:
Congratulations
Chase:
What were you listening to?
Jesse:
Herbie Hancock
Chase:
Hand cock
Jesse:
No its, Hancock. Oh my lord
Chase:
Hand cock. What, does he jerk off while playing the
piano?
Jesse:
Oh man, why didn’t I just say Dave Brubeck
Chase:
Hand Cock
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Jesse:
Its Hancock
Chase:
Do you want to go to a party tonight?
A long beat
Jesse:
Yeah sure
We see Chase and Jesse entering the party and they start
shaking their heads slightly to get into the music. Chase
grabs a drink and starts drinking it and then takes
another, gives it to Jesse and he takes it.
Jesse:
Are you sure we’re invited?
Chase:
Anyone who is not a freshman or a sophomore is invited
Jesse:
Right
Chase:
All right then boys, lets party
Jesse:
Wait, wait, whose party is it?
Chase:
No clue
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Chase:
Jesse, LEAVE YOUR SHIT AND COME PARTY. GET DRUNK BRO, ITS
ALL COOL
Jesse:
Isn’t it school tomorrow?
Chase:
YOU SAY THAT WORD ONE MORE TIME, I WILL RIP OUT YOUR
TOUNGE AND FEED IT TO THE MUTE. They might just make
better use of it
Jesse:
But…
Chase:
Was that good?
Jesse:
Yeah
Chase:
Do you want more of it?
Jesse:
Definitely
Chase:
Well its waiting sister
Jesse:
Let’s go
Jesse:
Not a harm to do this once a lifetime. NOT A HARM AT ALL
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includes dancing with them, taking weird photos with
them. We also see Chase making out with them and at some
points there is more a than one girl he is making out
with. At some points we also see them playing beer pong.
Jesse:
Hey Chase
Chase:
Yeah buddy
Jesse:
What was the name of the girl who went into the room
with?
Chase:
There were so many, I didn’t know who to ask
Jesse:
Holy shit
Chase:
Jesse
Jesse:
yeah
Chase:
Thanks man
Jesse:
For what
Chase:
For coming
Jesse:
You wish
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Chase starts laughing hard and so does Jesse.
Chase:
Hey Jesse
Jesse:
What
Chase:
Hand cock
Chase starts laughing hard and move his legs while lying
down on the ground. He can’t control his laughter.
Jesse:
You stupid ass, at least its better than the other shit
they are playing
Chase:
What the hell are you looking at Jesse? Want to bang some
girls in other houses?
Jesse:
Chase
Chase:
Yeah
Jesse:
Whose house you said we were in?
Chase:
I didn’t
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Jesse:
Then whose house are we in?
Chase:
I don’t know and why the hell do you care?
Jesse:
All right I’m going home
Chase:
Wait, Charles Dickens
Jesse:
I need to go, I need to get to school early in the
morning
Chase:
You’re drunk and you don’t have a car
Jesse:
I have legs and my house is not that far
Jessica:
Wait, Jesse. Where were you last night?
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Jesse:
What, I didn’t even have breakfast
Joy:
Hey Jesse
Jesse:
Hey Joy
A beat
Jesse:
Can I sit down?
Joy:
Sure, sure
Joy:
So how is it going?
Jesse:
Um, it’s going fine. Its good
Joy:
Really
Jesse:
Yeah, I mean there isn’t anything bad happening
Joy:
Right, well I can see the classes are going gr….
Jesse interrupts
Jesse:
How are you?
Joy:
I’m fine; I’m in the usual state of life
Jesse:
Right, you’re eyes are red
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Joy:
Oh yeah, well having trouble sleeping these days. There
is nothing wrong, its just that I cant sleep or I don’t
know how to sleep
Jesse:
Yeah. Is this a part of adult’s usual state
Joy:
Oh yeah, big time
Jesse:
Adults
Joy:
Yes adults
Joy:
Adulthood. It’s like looking both ways before you cross a
road and then an airplane hits you
Jesse chuckles
Joy:
You know the classes are going really great, I’m really
proud of you
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
Yeah really
Jesse:
Right
Joy:
I mean you should definitely consider it for your career.
I mean you’re applying to universities soon and I’ve
heard that you don’t really know where you’re going. Why
not teaching? From what I see, you’re really great, its
like you’re showing your true self and expression. Ones
teaching and the other I would is writing. By the way,
how’s your…
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Jesse:
I need to tell you something important
Joy:
Oh ok, sure
Jesse:
Well it’s about you know that thing
Joy:
What thing
Jesse:
That thing the other day that you know we saw
Joy:
What did we see?
Jesse:
That thing
Joy:
Jesse what is it, what do you want to tell me, what is
this thing?
Jesse:
I actually don’t want to tell you anything; I want to ask
you something
Joy:
Right, go ahead, but no thing
Jesse:
Yeah, no thing
Joy:
Ok then go ahead
Jesse:
Where would you take a girl out for a small date?
Joy:
hmm, now that’s a no thing question, what kind of a
date?
Jesse:
Like a date, that doesn’t look like a date but it’s a
hangout but primarily a date
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Joy:
What the hell?
Jesse:
Like something casual but romantic but kind of a date,
but not really but yes. And its romantic but its not
Joy:
Are you describing European cinema?
Jesse:
No, but cinema, not bad
Joy:
Yes
Jesse:
You’re a genius
Joy nods.
Jesse:
You’re an absolute genius, thanks
Joy:
I know
Jesse attempts.
Joy:
Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
You might be a literature genius but girls is another
subject? The moment someone passes that subject is the
day he truly witnesses himself and what he’s really worth
Jesse smiles and leaves the office. We can see Joy making
a large smile and slightly laughing.
Jesse:
You know, I don’t even need clothes
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Jessica:
What are you doing an internship at porn place. Are you
writing porn scripts for them?
Jesse:
No, it’s just that I don’t need clothes for winter?
Jessica:
What do you mean you don’t need them, it’s going to be
cold and you need warm clothes to keep yourself warm
because you need to get warm in the cold?
Jesse:
Oh really I didn’t know that, wow mum, you’re a genius
Jessica:
That’s why we are here, to buy warm clothes for you. Ava
has done her shopping, your dad has his shopping, and I
always do my shopping
Jesse:
Oh yes, even when it’s not necessary
Jessica:
Well at least, I do it you lazy toad
Jesse:
Its ok, ill you know, ill wear four to 5 t-shirts to keep
myself warm or something and I’ll wear two pajamas at the
same time and if it makes you really happy. I’ll wear
three pairs of sock. I hope it fulfills your “warm”
requirements
Jessica:
Jesse seriously, what’s with you and shopping?
Jesse:
Its dreadful waste of time and gold coins
Jessica:
And what
Jesse:
And gold coins, I meant money
Jessica:
Right, take these clothes and try them on?
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Jesse:
But it takes too much effort?
Jessica:
You think putting on five T-shirts isn’t enough effort?
Jesse:
Thanks for buying me clothes, now that I think about.
They actually aren’t that bad
Jessica:
I’m glad…. I told you so
Jesse:
About what, being brilliant and central
Jessica:
How does someone become central?
Jesse:
I don’t know, you asked the question?
Jessica:
I meant have you given a thought about university
Jesse:
Uh well, does listening to the Jazz collection of
Berkley’s Jazz graduates count
Jessica:
No it doesn’t
Jesse:
Well does “no” satisfy your answer
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Jessica:
Surprisingly yes, it does satisfy. Anyway you have loads
of time
Jesse:
Ill be applying in 9 months
Jessica:
Nine months
Jesse:
Yes next year is my last year, not this year
Jessica:
Well have you given a thought on what you want to study
ignoring where you want to go?
Jesse:
Well, I don’t think so. I didn’t really take it into
account
Jessica:
Don’t you think it’s time?
Jesse:
Well it might be
Jessica:
Right it might be
Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
Well sorry to say honey, but I’m slightly worried about
you
Jesse:
How?
Jessica:
Well you’re doing great. Perfect grades, a novelist, has
nothing wrong in his student record, has finally gone to
a party
Jesse:
How did you know?
Jessica:
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You came in our house drunk and you looked like shit. You
woke up me, Nick and Ava and you kept telling us
different stories about two people who communicated
through writing on walls. It was weird night. You also
kept saying Hancock in your sleep
Jesse:
Oh my lord
Jessica:
Yes
Jesse:
Oh shit
Jessica:
Coming back to the point, I’ll just lay it out there, at
least think about what you want to be? Honey, trust me.
There is a lot you can do, it’s just that you’re not
telling yourself to do it, you’re asking yourself to do
it and every time you ask the reply is always “no”, try
to be bossy around yourself
Jesse:
All right
Jessica:
Good
Jesse:
Who was that?
Jessica:
Well my colleague (laughing)
Jesse:
Why are you laughing what is he your new boyfriend or
something?
Jessica:
No
Jesse:
Then
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Jessica:
He also works as a publisher; he read all your previous
short stories. He says as soon as your new book comes
out, he wants to publish. Isn’t that great and guess
what. No money, no thing. Just your book, edited and then
placed in the store. It’s a great opportunity and maybe a
window towards fame. So what do you think?
Jesse:
No
Jessica:
Why
Jesse:
Because I don’t write for other people. I write for
myself
Jessica:
Well that’s not very nice
Jesse:
Well sometime you have to tell yourself no, not ask
yourself
Jesse:
Daisy’s character as you all described was varied in many
words. Delicate, considerate, lavishing, such huge words
you guys were listing. But if we take all these words,
put it into grinder, add some milk and chocolate into and
then pour it into a cup. What will happen?
Student:
The cup will turn gold
Jesse:
Excellent Josh, absolutely. The cup will turn into gold
because of the effect of these huge words but to describe
the beauty of this cup, there is only quote that we can
refer to. The quote describing Daisy’s voice
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Jesse clicks key on the keyboard of the computer and the
next slide shows up. The quote is written on the board.
Jesse:
“Her voice was like a set of musical notes that will
never be played again”
Jesse:
I think this quote was not just describing her voice but
it was describing her as an individual. It covered the
huge words you guys were using to describe her.
A long beat
Jesse:
Thank you
Patty:
Hey
Jesse:
Hey, Shit
Patty:
What
Jesse:
What do you mean “what”, we walk half an hour the other
day and you don’t tell me that you play Jazz piano
Patty:
Well you never asked
Jesse:
I never asked you about your sad story about your parents
but you told me anyways
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Patty:
You read the passage in front of the class and that
passage included their story
Jesse:
In an extra metaphorical yet genius way which I sadly
couldn’t deeply comprehend
A beat
Patty:
Well I play piano
Jesse:
Well can you play a piece?
Patty:
Yeah I’ll do it, what do you want to hear?
Jesse:
Anything
Patty:
Anything you know, or anything
Jesse:
Anything
Patty:
Alright
Jesse:
Wait
Patty:
What
Jesse:
Something that you made up yourself, not a cover
Patty:
Ok
Patty:
Yeah that was it
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Jesse’s mouth is open and he can’t say anything.
Patty:
So what do you think?
Jesse:
Um, what is it called?
Patty:
Well I call it Tables and Chairs
Jesse:
Right why
Patty:
Well…
Jesse:
Do you want to go for a walk?
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
Let’s go
Jesse:
I honestly don’t get it, you waste time sitting in my
class while you should be recording, performing, swinging
peoples arms and hands. There should be people looking up
to you. Seriously the power of Jazz is in your hands now
Patty:
Stop exaggerating; you just heard one song that I made
Jesse:
That’s exactly my point, I heard one song and done that’s
it. I’m shocked
Patty:
Well it was Jazz and you like it, that doesn’t mean
everyone is going to
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Jesse:
Jazz is incredible. I have been listening to it for 5
years now. 5 years, I have 100’s of CD’s in my
collection. I work at a Jazz club and shit you not, I
have written Jazz article that yes, have been published
and I’m telling you it is dying. It is dying in the hands
of helpless people who are brilliant with their hands and
their minds but they aren’t telling the whole world. They
are not showing it
Patty:
Are you referring to me?
Jesse:
For heaven’s sake, Of course I’m referring to you and
people like you. You guys are the true reason it is
dying. The true reason Jazz is dying
Patty:
Whoa, pump the brakes there. You are blaming the entire
100-year history of Jazz on me
Jesse:
You are damn right. Jazz is not dying because people
aren’t patient enough to listen and appreciate it.
It is because of people like you who don’t have the
guts to show it to the world what a beauty it is
Patty:
Wait what about you. You’re writing novels, short
stories. What have you done with them?
Jesse:
Wait, how do you know this?
Patty:
I told you I already know the stuff that you are teaching
in class so I just go over the notebooks you have in
your bag. For some reason you always put your bag
right next to my table. I look in the bag and there
are tons of short stories and a novel that you are
writing. I didn’t read it because that would be
ethically wrong.
Jesse:
And looking into somebody’s bag is not
Patty:
Well… that’s not the point, what are doing with your
talent in terms of writing?
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Jesse:
Nothing
Patty:
Then why do you blame the 100-year history of Jazz on me
when I should blame the 1000-year history of
literature and writing on you? And to be accurate,
writing is much older than 1000 years.
Patty:
By the way, what’s your novel about?
Jesse:
Uh. Lot things. It’s about Love, hope, communication,
problems; it’s a practical play with human emotions
Patty:
Interesting, what’s the story?
Jesse:
It’s actually a story about two people. It’s told from
two perspectives. The girl and the guy. Both of them
have different personalities and different
backgrounds and they fall in love yet they don’t
know each other contact, and the way they look
Patty:
So how do they?
Jesse interrupts.
Jesse:
Through writing
Patty:
Writing
Jesse:
Well both of them are actually of this online class and
they were asked to do a group project on that online
class. They both find a location, its kind of like a
studio to meet, the guy goes there and the girl
isn’t there. The guy, he writes a note to the girl
telling him that he came and she wasn’t there. The
girl came around half an hour late and the guy was
gone. She read the note and she replied on that
note. This kept on happening and happening. They
kept on talking through writing. At the same they
were going through issues at home and to seek for
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advice they use to write it down on the note in the
studio. They used to talk, share issue or problems
and it’s a love story
Patty:
Wow
Jesse:
It’s all right
Patty:
Where did you get this idea?
Jesse:
Come with me
Jesse:
This is where people write their thoughts. I got the idea
when I saw this wall
Patty:
Wow
Jesse:
I know, people have an interesting way of expressing
themselves. The walls sink their emotions inside them and
feel what they are feeling. They know exactly what it
feels
Patty:
Those two characters in your story. Do they know what the
other person is feeling?
Jesse:
Oh yes, they do. They are like the wall. They absorb what
you’ve given them, they understand and that’s all you
need
Patty:
Its like, “tables and chairs”. They are perfect. They
complement each other and nothing can break their bond
Jesse:
So that’s what your song is about?
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Patty:
The perfect match
Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
Do you want to go out?
Patty:
Where
Patty smiles.
Jesse:
A movie
Patty:
Yes a movie and then we could
Jesse:
Go to Abe’s
Patty:
Yeah we could go to Abe’s
Jesse and Patty are smiling.
Patty:
I got to go home, homework; I need to do it at home, my
work. My homework at home
Jesse laughs
Jesse:
Bye
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melancholy is a chess game against Euphemism”. We can
hear Jazz in the background. We don’t know what the song
is called but its familiar as we have heard it before in
the film.
Jesse:
Can I steal my charger?
Jessica:
If it’s your charger then you can steal it?
Jesse:
Yes it is my charger
Jessica:
Ok
Jesse:
Mom
Jessica:
Yeah honey
Jesse:
You know that publisher?
Jessica:
Yeah
Jesse:
Don’t say that “no” to him just. Tell him I’ll give a
thought when I’m finished with the book, which I almost
am
Jessica:
Thank the lord, who knocked some sense into you
Jesse:
Well, I don’t know, someone just did
Jessica:
All right, all right. Tell her she can visit anytime
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Jesse:
Tell who
Jessica:
Whoever she is, I don’t now her name
Jesse:
Oh lord
A beat
Jessica:
Jesse, honey. One more thing
Jesse:
What
Jessica:
You have to take Ava to the mall tomorrow. She needs to
buy something for her friend’s birthday
Jesse:
Seriously
Jessica:
Yes darling
Jesse:
Ok darling
Jessica:
Thank you darling
Ava:
Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah did you find anything?
Ava:
Lets just go to the bookstore; she’s not that close of a
friend anyway
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Jesse:
Damn, children’s respect for books is just outstanding
Ava:
Yeah well, who reads these days?
Jesse:
A lot of people for your information
Ava:
Well, she should be happy I’m at least getting her a
present; at least I’m spending some cash on her useless
yet usual happiness
Jesse:
You’re spending some cash
Ava:
I meant you are
Jesse:
All right let’s go
Ava:
Here let’s buy this
Jesse:
It’s been 6 seconds since we got here, did you even read
the title of the book
Jesse:
Well, I’m not saying it’s a bad book
Ava:
Oh no, yes it must be an amazing book and I may need it
as some point
Jesse:
That point is not that far
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Ava:
Oh lord
Jesse:
Oh yes
Ava:
I’ll find another book
Jesse:
So have you found it?
Ava:
Um, I’m confused between The Island adventures and the
mystery of Carlo Catherine
Jesse:
The island adventures sounds kind of gay, get the other
one and lets go
Ava:
Well at least its better than a brief guide to the
menstrual cycle
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Jesse is writing in his notebook while listening to music
(it’s Take Five by Dave Brubeck). He stops writing, turns
off the music and then turns off the lamp. He gets a
blanket and wraps himself into it. We can see that he is
thinking. Suddenly we see Joy’s husband getting into the
car and kissing another girl. It’s the exact same scene
that we saw during the party. The scene happens and Jesse
wakes up, it’s morning.
Jesse:
Shit
Joy:
Oh Jesse, yeah come in. Sorry, I couldn’t sleep last
night. I was, forget it
Jesse:
Yeah ok
Joy:
Ok, yeah I was just trying to get some sleep to function
throughout the day
Jesse:
Ok, was the sleep enough or should I come back another
time
Joy:
Oh no, it was perfect. It was brilliant. Couldn’t be
better, thank god you woke me up because if the principal
found out I was sleeping besides giving lessons I would
have lost my job and my sleep for the next few years
Jesse:
Ok, I actually came to talk to you about something
Joy:
Oh yes, how did it go with the girl. Did she say yes?
Jesse:
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Well we can put a pause of that for a second because
there is something else I need to tell you
Joy:
Yeah sure
Jesse:
Well, its hard to explain and I would say its hard to
listen to
Joy:
What do you mean?
Jesse:
What I’m about to tell you is?
Joy:
Is what?
Jesse:
Well as much it is hard for me to tell, it would be much
harder to listen and absorb
Joy:
Well what is it?
Jesse:
Um
Joy:
Come on then, I don’t have all day. Please tell me
Jesse:
You’re husband is having an affair with someone else
Joy:
Oh
Joy:
How, exactly how did you know?
Jesse:
Well, I, um, remember that big party opposite your house
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Joy:
Why wouldn’t I, I couldn’t sleep that night
Jesse:
Well I saw your husband leave the house and… walking up
to the car and… there was a. …there was a woman… in the
backseat of the car…she came in front and that’s
how…that’s how I got to know
Joy:
And you decide to tell me after a good 2 weeks
Jesse:
Well
Joy:
I totally understand, its not that easy to tell a person
that
Jesse:
Well yeah, I’m sorry. I troubled you with this sudden
news and even that late
Joy:
I knew a few months ago
Jesse:
What?
Joy:
Yes
Jesse:
How, why, what?
Joy:
What, when, where… who. I know all
Jesse:
Well, does he know that you know
Joy:
No, I know all the 5W’s of what’s happening between them
except one…. Why
Jesse:
Oh I’m sorry
Joy:
What do you have to be sorry about, are you the one whose
having an affair with him
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Jesse is silent.
Joy:
Her name is Annie Dolly Pollock. She is a model. 24. She
goes with him, drives with him, eats with him, sleeps
with him, does what not. Currently my husband say’s that
he’s working in Missouri on this new project while I know
they are writing bedtime stories in a 5 star hotel right
across her home
Joy:
I have known it for a few months now, talked to
psychologists about it. But I’m not doing anything. I
can’t move an inch or I must say I don’t want to move an
inch. I don’t want to tell him or do anything about
because I’m either too tired and I’m pretending to be
tired. Either way, I’m doing nothing about this
Joy:
Oh my god. You know we had some story. The story, that
can’t be written in books nor converted into some
paintings. It can’t be imagined but it can be felt. I
felt it, I use to feel it everyday I woke up besides him.
I stared at his eyes and felt the warmth in my heart and
body. But not anymore. I don’t think he exactly felt what
I was feeling. Now I understand that for him out story
was an uncertain child play but he didn’t know what it
was to me. For me, it was, it was (Joy cries a little
more). It was, it was the world for me. It was the world.
Either I was foolish to feel it or I was too foolish to
make it my world or he was too smart to not think that
way. It allowed him to live a little further in life.
Leaving his cute little teacher slash English teacher to
a 24 year old hot sexy model who will filter out the
money from his pocket and give him the joy on bed
everyday of his life. What it’s good for him. Makes him
feel more like a man, more like himself, while I’m here
teaching. You know Jesse, while you’ve been teaching I
have been thinking inside this office of mine. Thinking
about “why”, why would this happen and I have two
answers. One is that life plays dice with you. Sometimes
you get a higher number, which allows you to succeed, and
sometimes you get a lower one and you fail. Currently I
might be getting the lowest of numbers continuously. And
the next answer is that I think I just made a fool out of
myself
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Jesse’s mouth is open and Joy seriously starts crying.
Jesse goes up to her and hugs her.
Joy:
I am a fool Jesse, I’m a fool. I don’t know what I’m
doing, why did this have to happen to me. Why to me
Jesse:
Quite, quite, its alright, its alright, its alright, its
alright, nothing to worry, everything will be ok,
everything will be ok
Jesse:
Its ok, Joy, its ok. Everything will be all right, it
will be all right. It will be fine, it will be, and it
will be. I promise. It’s alright, its alright, its
alright
Jesse:
Thanks
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Patty’s house and Jesse hugs her and she goes inside the
house.
Jesse:
Ok, its winter and it’s all out last class before the
winter break. I don’t want you to read any further guys
we are almost done with half of Gatsby and our speed is
perfect. I don’t want any reading this winter but I do
want some thinking. Think about the story, the rhythm of
the story. Where is it going, where will it go? And,
write down what you think, I want some writing when
school is back on. Alright guys, Merry Christmas and a
Happy New Year
Joy:
It will be all right
Jesse:
You look beautiful
Patty:
Forget me. Look at you. I mean thank god you’re not
wearing the shitty clothes you wear at school. I
walk everyday with you after school and I have never
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seen you wear things better than a hoodie and ripped
pants
Jesse:
Well
Patty:
Well here you are
A beat.
Jesse:
Thanks
Patty smiles.
Patty:
So what movie are we watching?
Jesse:
Ok well, there were multiple options, it wasn’t easy to
choose but here you go
Patty:
Ladybird
Jesse:
Yes, Ladybird
Patty:
Have you seen it?
Jesse:
Will, if you would move your legs and enter the cinema
Patty:
Ok
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each other, they stare and smile. Their heads move closer
and closer to each other and at one point they kiss. The
camera see’s them kissing and we can also see a scene
from LadyBird in which Ladybird and Danny kissing.
Jesse:
Great movie
Patty:
Oh yeah, it was worth it. I mean definitely worth our
time
Jesse:
Yes, yes
Patty:
Great choice
Jesse:
Thanks
Patty:
Oh no problem
Jesse and Patty both are standing and are very silent.
Jesse:
You kiss great
Patty:
Oh yeah, thanks, you too. I mean you kiss great. You do
Jesse:
Thanks, thanks
A long beat.
Patty:
Do you want to go to Abe’s?
Jesse:
Um, depends on if you want to go?
Patty:
Well if you want to go, then I’ll go
Jesse:
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Oh, I’ll go if you’ll go
Patty:
I mean, you work there and are probably bored of it so
I’m not sure if you want to go, but if you do we can
Jesse:
Yeah, yeah you’re right, we shouldn’t go, but if you want
to…
Patty:
A junior with a freshman
Jesse:
Now, that’s called a movie
Ava:
Oh my god, this is nice. I really like it, thanks mom and
dad
Jesse:
Wait. Ava there is a gift from me too
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Jesse hands her a gift. It’s small. Ava takes it and rips
the packaging. Ava see’ s it’s a book. She looks at its.
The book is “A brief guide to the menstrual cycle”.
Ava:
Oh lord
Nick:
Ava darling, what is it?
Ava:
Oh, it’s a book
Jessica:
Which one
Ava:
A brief guide to middle school
Jessica:
Awe, that’s nice
Nick:
All right Jesse. Here is your present? We gave it a
little thought this one and it’s very special to us
Jesse:
Damn
Jesse:
Wow, this is. This is really something, thanks you guys
Jessica:
Your welcome
Jesse:
Yeah, this is awesome. Wait, I still don’t get it, how is
this any useful to you guys
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Nick:
Well your mum was huge Peggy Lee fan and I was a huge
Billy Holiday fan. When we were dating we used to spend
hours debating on whose better. Both of us had these CD’s
Jessica:
We thought of combining them and giving both of them to
you
Nick:
You listen to them and tell us whose better because
obviously you have a more experience with Jazz and also
have a much better taste
Jesse:
Wait, you guys used to listen to Jazz?
Nick:
Well sometimes, these were the only two people we heard,
we didn’t really give a thought to the rest of Jazz
Jesse:
Right
Jessica:
Well listen to them and tell us whose better
Jesse (laughing):
Ok
Jesse:
Wait just got to pick this up for a second
Chase:
Hey man, Marry Christmas
Jesse:
Merry Christmas to you too
Chase:
Listen up, party, same place, 8 o clock
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Jesse:
No
Chase:
Why
Jesse:
I don’t want to get drunk on the holiest day of the year
Chase:
Is that the reason or something else?
Jesse:
This son of a …
Jesse:
Yes
Patty:
Hey, it’s Patty
Jesse:
Hey hi, wait where did you get my number
Patty:
Your name, address and phone number are on the first page
of your notebook
Jesse (smiling):
And you took note of that?
Patty:
Well… not the point
Jesse smiles.
Patty:
Listen, I need to meet you today no matter what
Jesse:
No matter what, is that right?
Patty:
Yes
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Jesse:
Then, when do you want to meet?
Patty:
Well anytime is good
Jesse:
What about now?
Patty:
Time couldn’t be better
Jesse:
Alright great
Patty:
What’s the closest point where we could meet?
Jesse:
Abe’s
Patty:
That’s right, Abe’s
Jesse:
Bye mom, dad, Ava. See you in a little while
Nick:
What, where are you going?
Nick:
Oh right
Jessica:
Yep
Nick:
JUST DON’T TAKE THE CAR
Nick:
Just don’t take the car
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Jesse:
Ok
Nick:
By the way Jesse
Jesse:
What
Nick:
I’m glad you have some sort of relationship now
Jesse:
What do you mean? What, what, I mean who told you?
Nick:
Can’t hide from me, little fellow
Jesse:
How did mum know because she’s clearly the one who told
you?
A beat
Nick:
No idea
Jesse:
Hey, what’s up?
Patty:
Hey, yeah
Jesse:
You also jogged
Patty:
Oh yeah, I still haven’t learned how to drive
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Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
Why didn’t you drive?
Jesse:
Well dad needed the car for some reason
Patty:
Oh right
Jesse:
So, what did you want to tell me or show me or anything?
Patty:
Well, Merry Christmas
Jesse:
Oh Merry Christmas. Wait what. You made me run 3 long
miles just to tell me this
Patty:
What’s Christmas without any presents isn’t it?
Jesse:
What is it this?
Patty:
What
Jesse:
NO
Patty:
Stay quite everyone is looking at us
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Jesse:
WELL THEY SHOULD I MEAN, WHAT, WHEN, HOW
Patty:
Well, you know it just came into my mind and I had
already done half the work so yeah
Jesse:
I MEAN WHAT
Patty:
What do you mean, what?
Jesse:
I MEAN WHAT. THIS IS THE THING. THIS A BIG DEAL
Patty:
Well, it’s not that big. I could always do it but I just
did this time. It’s not that big, it’s just something
there. I mean look; a lot of people have done it all
right. You should know
Jesse:
WHY WOULD YOU SAY SUCH A THING, YOU DID THIS STUFF. YOU
ACTUALLY DID IT. YOU ARE THE PROTECTOR
Patty:
The Protector, do you think I got promoted to the
position of God or something
Jesse:
WOW, wow. Just amazing. I’m so proud of you
Patty:
Awe thank you
Jesse:
Well it’s not me you should be thanking for
Patty:
Then, who else? You gave me the idea, you motivated me
and you helped me tell myself rather than ask myself
Jesse:
I mean just wow
Patty:
Well yeah
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Jesse lifts up the CD and the camera see’s it. It is an
album. The cover includes the backside of Patty sitting
on a bench. The album cover is “Irony” and below it says.
“Jazz piano album by Patricia Smalls”
Jesse:
Irony, Jazz piano album by Patricia Smalls, shouldn’t you
have Patty Smalls
Patty:
Well it’s the first album
Jesse:
Yeah that’s true. But it’s amazing. It’s grand
Jesse see’s the back of the CD. The back is the same
picture but it only includes the bench, not her and it
has all the name of the songs written.
Jesse:
8 tracks. Hollow, Craft, Take some shapes, The Following,
Tropical, Allegory, ABC and Tables and Chairs
Patty:
Yeah, I had written all these songs before expect for
maybe ABC and Craft but rest were written before I
decided to make this album. The day you took me to see
the Wall that absorbs, I went back home. I went on amazon
and I ordered 170-dollar recording equipment and here it
is. My very first album
Jesse:
Unbelievable
Jesse:
I will listen to this. This is the best Christmas gift I
have ever gotten in my life
Patty:
Well it could be the worst present after you actually
listen to the album
Jesse:
Oh no, oh no
Patty:
Oh maybe, oh maybe
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Patty:
Alright I have to go now, its Christmas and yeah
Jesse:
Yeah ok, yeah
Patty and Jesse both walk away from each other. After a
few seconds Jesse turns his background to take a last
look at Patty.
Jessica:
Patricia Smalls, hmm who is she? You have been listening
to this CD since you got here
Jesse:
Oh oh, you don’t know. She’s a very famous Jazz pianist
from, from a city in Canada somewhere. This was her first
album that’s why she looks really young, yeah. That’s why
she looks young. She’s a very famous pianist in the jazz
world
Jessica:
Right, right
Jessica:
Yeah, do you like her?
Jesse:
oh yeah. I mean she’s an excellent pianist. She has
amazing melodies, chords etc. She is amazing, she is
unique, she’s from Canada and I would love to meet her
because she is so famous and awesome
Jessica:
Yeah right
Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
Yeah, so besides her piano, what do you like about her?
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Jesse:
Oh um, what do you mean? I have never met her before of
course; I just listen to her music. That’s why the smile
on my face you see
Jessica:
Right, what’s her age now
Jesse:
I don’t know
Jessica:
Hmm, so what other albums did she produces rather than
Irony?
Jesse:
Oh loads, loads
Jessica:
Do you know their names?
Jesse:
Well yeah, there is… there is
Jessica interrupts.
Jessica:
You know Jesse. For the last few weeks we have been
looking at some sides of you, which we haven’t seen, in a
long time. The joy and happiness, I’m glad we saw it
again and we saw something different rather than your
monotonous emotions. (Long beat) You know most parents
get concerned when their son or daughter has reached an
age where they experience these relationships and times
but I’m not. I’m not one of those parents who see this as
harm. It changed you in a much better way and I hope it
will really help. She’s some excellent lady who is
creating that smile on your face and I must say an
excellent and brilliant pianist. Don’t let that spark go
honey. She’s special and she better stay for some time
and even she doesn’t. It’s ok. It’s life. You have to
experience everything to really define experience.
Jessica:
By the way, I came to tell you that you have work today
and I think you’re a little late
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Jesse gets out of the bed in hurry and goes to change
clothes but then pauses.
Jesse:
Wait, its Christmas
Jessica:
Well you get double the money on Christmas
Manger (shouting):
Scott
Manager:
Take these beers and serve it to the big table right
there, serve it properly. If you spill it, we lose profit
and we lose jobs
Scott takes the tray and goes to the big table. Manager
turns towards Jesse.
Manager:
There is a crisis
Jesse:
Right, there always is but it turns out to be a an
everyday problem which can be solved with a few seconds
Manager:
No, but this time there is an actual crises. Like you see
all these people in the club right now. Buddy, they are
all going to go if this is not going to be resolved
Jesse:
Ok, well what’s the issue?
Manager:
Well, the band is not coming. They cancelled at the last
minute
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Jesse:
Well, isn’t there any other band here or there? Any
contacts you have or even solo musicians
Manager:
No
Jesse:
How come?
Manager:
We just don’t
Jesse:
Did you look at different contacts or at least ask if
anyone knows anyone
Manager:
Well I’m asking you?
Jesse:
What are you asking for?
Manager:
What bloody hell have I been asking for the last few
minutes?
Jesse:
Yeah well what the hell is it?
Manager:
Jesus Christ (A beat) I NEED SOMEONE TO PUSH THEIR ASS ON
A FREAKING INSTRUMENT AND IT NEEDS TO BE PURE, CLASSIC
BORING WHOOPING BALLS JAZZ. DO YOU FREAKING KNOW SOMEONE?
You know forget it, forget that I even asked?
Jesse:
Wait I actually might just know someone and she might
just do it for free
Jesse:
Ok so what would be your thoughts on doing a performance
at Abe’s and with a huge crowd? Just you and the piano
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Patty:
Um just wait a few minutes
Jesse:
Ok
Jesse ends call and puts his phone back in his pocket.
The manager then comes up to Jesse.
Manager:
So what did she say?
Jesse:
Oh she said she’ll call me in a few minutes and that’s it
Manager:
You know if she doesn’t come we are doomed and she better
be good
Jesse:
The second part wont be an issue
Manager:
What about the first part? Without the first part there
is no second part
Jesse:
Well yeah
Manager:
Well, when is she coming?
Jesse:
She said she would call me in a few minutes
Manager:
Well it’s been a few minutes
Jesse:
No, it’s been a few seconds and Jesus Christ. Just wait
for a few minutes. People are just not leaving as yet
Manager:
Well I cant
Scott:
Sir, people are asking about the music
Manager:
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What are they asking?
Scott:
About the music
Manager:
What about the music?
Scott:
They are asking when will someone perform
Manager:
Oh lord
Jesse:
Yeah
Manager:
People are asking about the music
Jesse:
What are they asking?
Manager:
About the music
Jesse:
What about the music?
Manager:
They are asking when will someone perform
Jesse:
Oh lord
Jesse:
She said she would call in a few minutes
Manager:
Well it has been few minutes and your phone isn’t doing
shit
Jesse:
Why don’t I just call her!
Manager:
Yeah
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Jesse calls Patty and the phone is ringing. It rings for
a few seconds and then Patty suddenly enters the club
with her phone ringing. She ends call.
Patty:
Hey
Jesse:
Hi
Patty:
So I’m here
Jesse:
But I thought you were going to call me in a few minutes
Patty:
No I told you to wait a few minutes
Jesse:
Oh right
Patty:
Yeah
Manager:
Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Manager:
Besides talking to this girl, call that stupid ass
pianist and tell her to bang on the freaking instrument
Jesse:
Sir, this is the pianist
Manager:
Oh right, well the piano is right there, play it, make
people dance, sing if you can and don’t do anything which
you know you cant
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Manager is on the stage with instruments in the
background. There is a big piano and a drum set. With
that there is also a violin. Manager walks towards the
mic, he taps it to see if it works. Jesse and Patty are
standing right next to the stage. Everyone is patiently
waiting.
Manager:
Sorry for the wait, ladies and Gentlemen. Tonight we have
a very young fellow with us who’s an expert in Jazz
piano. She will play for us and I hope you enjoy. Please
welcome Patricia Smalls.
Manager:
Don’t you think she is young?
Jesse:
Is there an age limit on playing piano?
Manager:
Well no
Jesse:
Then she’s not young
Manager:
But still I mean, don’t you think…
Manager:
Never mind
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Patty doesn’t seem to notice anything, as she is fully
concentrated on the piano. People start getting up on
their seats and dancing. The manager and Jesse are also
dancing.
Manager:
Hey, Jesse. Jesse
Jesse:
Hey, do you like it?
Manager:
Like it. This is the greatest pianist I have ever heard
Jesse:
Yep
A beat.
Manager:
Listen, I need to tell you something important
Jesse:
Yeah what, please you need a drummer and a violin player
Manager:
Oh no, oh no. The girl’s got all of the instruments in
her
Jesse:
Alright good
Manager:
What I need to tell you is that you have been promoted as
assistant manager
Jesse:
WHAT
Manager:
Yes, I feel like serving drinks is not your specialty,
it’s handling a crises and that’s something you can do
and have been doing
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Jesse:
That’s great news, that’s really. My dad would be proud
Manager:
I’m sure he will
Jesse:
Yeah
Manager:
And one more thing
Jesse:
Yeah
Manager:
You have to come every night
Jesse:
Oh lord
Manager:
And you get triple times the money
Jesse:
Oh yes
Manager:
All right then, enjoy the dance
Scene ends with Patty doing a slide on the piano and then
hitting a huge chord.
Jesse:
Joy Carter, JOY CARTER
Jesse hits his head on the pillow again and then yawns
loudly.
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73. EXT. OUTSIDE JOY’S HOUSE. DAY
Jesse is standing outside a house. He takes out his phone
to check if it’s the right address. This is the house
right opposite to the party house. Jesse is slightly
nervous as he presses the bell. We hear a ting in the
background as he pressed the bell. A few seconds later
Joy opens the door and comes outside.
Joy:
Hi, Jesse. Please come in
Jesse:
Thanks
Jesse:
Nice house
Joy:
Oh thank you
Jesse:
Yeah. Your library is unbelievable
Joy:
Oh thanks, I’m sure you have a bigger one
Jesse:
Actually no
Joy:
What
Jesse:
Yeah, I rent books. Its financially much more efficient.
(A beat), the only one I really had bought is The Great
Gatsby
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Jesse:
I needed it throughout the year so yeah
A long beat.
Jesse:
You didn’t really have to
Joy:
Oh please, of course I do
Jesse:
Ok
Jesse:
I can help you know
Joy:
Oh no, please don’t
Jesse:
Ok
Joy:
How much sugar?
Jesse:
Oh um, 1 and a half is good
Joy:
All right
Jesse:
Thank you
Joy makes her tea and then sits down right next to Jesse.
Both of them start drinking their tea and relaxing.
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Joy:
How is your book going?
Jesse:
Oh it’s going exceptionally well
Joy:
That’s good, that’s good. When are you printing it?
Jesse:
Well the idea is to finish it by the mid of January and
then it will hopefully be in market by mid of March
Joy:
Oh why so late?
Jesse:
Um, I have to edit the book, type the book, create the
layout and the front and back cover and then it takes
time for printing
Joy:
What about publishing?
Jesse:
Oh that’s not an issue
Joy:
How come?
Jesse:
I already have a publisher who will publish it the second
it gets printed
Joy:
Very nice publisher
Jesse:
Yeah, I also have to decide the title
Joy:
What you still hasn’t done that?
Jesse:
No, I always add the title in the end expect for maybe
one thing I wrote
Joy:
The Short story “Untitled”
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Jesse:
Wait, how did…
Jessica interrupts.
Joy:
I’ve read some of your short stories. Some of them are in
magazines and in newspapers aren’t they
Jesse:
Yeah, but who told you about it?
Joy:
Well, I found it out from somewhere
Joy:
Yeah
Jesse:
Yeah
A long beat, they both take sips from their tea. Jesse
looks at Joy, Joy see’s him back and Jesse smiles.
Joy:
May I cut the cake for you?
Jesse:
Yes that would be very nice of you
Joy carefully and slowly cuts the cut and gives the piece
to Jesse.
Jesse:
Thank you
Jesse:
Wow, this is really good. Did you make it?
Joy:
No but I mean I paid for it which requires as much as
effort as making it
Jesse:
That’s true but great selection of cake. I’ll give you
that for sure
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Joy:
Well… my husband came back
Jesse:
When
Joy:
Yesterday… he has gone out with his golf buddies right.
He goes every Saturday. I don’t know what he does
there…He came back yesterday hugged me tightly liked he
hadn’t seen me in two months and 8 which he hasn’t. He
told me all about his thing and why it took longer and
yeah. He said there were some issues with the company
that he was trying to resolve. I don’t know exactly but
yeah it was something
Jesse:
Ok
Joy:
He…. He has been really happy. I think that lady right
there has fulfilled his requirement. The happiness that
is present in him. He thinks of himself as a man now. A
girlfriend, a wife, a house, a car, a great job, and a
collection of gold golf trophies. He is living the
utopian life explained in books and I’m sitting here
waiting. Patience isn’t a virtue, Jesse. Its not, I’ve
been practicing for God knows how long and I haven’t
gotten what I think I have been waiting for. Either I’ve
been waiting for the wrong thing or something is out
there waiting for me to realize that patience is not the
answer and it never is. (Long pause) The relationship I
have made with this man was really worth my time. I could
actually die for him but now I realize that I can’t live
for him.
Beat and then Joy cries even more. She is letting it all
out.
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Joy (while crying a lot):
I don’t even know why I got you here. You have things to
live up to, things to dream, things to do in life and I’m
here telling you stories. I’m sorry Jesse, I’m sorry. I’m
sorry. Giving you all the classes, crying myself out to
you, inviting you to my house and serving you horrible
tea. I’m so sorry
Joy:
Why aren’t you saying anything, please I’m tired of
waiting for answers
Jesse puts his tea down and then takes Joy’s tea and puts
it down. He moves closer to Joy, takes a tissue and then
starts wiping Joy’s tears. He does this a few times and
then takes some water and puts it in his hand and rubs it
against a tissue. He then takes that tissue and cleans
the dark marks under Joy’s eyes.
Jesse:
I think you have to stop talking to really start
listening
Jesse:
Joy, no matter what’s going on in your life. Murders,
death, unemployment, a stupid idiotic husband, whatever,
I just want you to remember something. I’m not a big
expert in adult issues and marriage stuff but this thing
is for certain (pause). It’s not the end; your story is
not finished unless you want it to be. Your story, your
life is just on the verge of its beginning and it always
will be till you die. Every moment in your life is worth
it if you know what you can do with it. It’s your life,
do whatever you want with it because if you wont it will
shrink itself. And I know you can do a lot. You have
implanted the love of literature in so many students and
they took that love and did something with their life.
This means that you practically changed their lives. You
are one of the smartest people in literature. You
understand its depths, its patterns and figures. Only
some people have that power, you have the power to
comprehend that stupid gibberish Shakespeare is writing.
You know, if you could that God knows what you can do
with the rest of your beautiful life. Yes, it’s very
beautiful, I can see it. If you have it use it, don’t
waste it waiting, but use it doing. To actually make
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people love you, first you need to learn to love yourself
and that can only be by spending time with yourself and I
know you can do it.
Joy:
I hope you don’t mind me, lying down like this
Jesse:
Oh no
Joy:
Ok thank you
Jesse:
And Joy one more thing, never say “I’m sorry” to me, I
think you changed my life … thank you
Joy:
Your welcome
The camera zooms out and see’s Joy lying down on Jesse’s
lap. Jesse takes his tea and starts drinking it.
(CUT TO)
The class is getting out the class and taking test
papers. The teacher is giving them out. She has different
expressions while giving out the papers. Jesse takes his
paper and there is an A* there.
Teacher:
I don’t know how you do it? Not once I see you looking at
the board in my class
Jesse:
Well you don’t have a class; honestly no class is
actually difficult. In addition to that you don’t want me
to look at the board in your class. You want me listening
and that can be done without looking
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Teacher:
I still think you’re a genius, you have a perfect record
kiddo
Jesse leaves.
Jesse:
Hey
Patty:
Hey
Jesse:
What are these, you have been recording or writing some
new stuff
Patty:
Yeah, there is another performance at some other club
that I have a chance to do. So I was just writing
something new
Jesse:
Another gig that’s great, where is it?
Patty:
Has Jazz
Jesse:
Never heard of it
Patty:
Oh they haven’t opened it; I’m basically playing at the
opening
Jesse:
Oh wow, so basically. Your playing will conclude the make
or break situation of the restaurant
Patty:
Yeah, in cruel words. That’s exactly how you would put it
Jesse:
Right, by the way. Nice sweater
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Patty:
Oh thanks, it was my grandmothers, nice jacket
Jesse:
Thanks, this was and is still mine
Patty:
You know I always wanted to be a boy in terms of
clothing, boys are more in advantage because they don’t
have that much variety it terms of what they want to buy.
With limited options you put in less time shopping
Jesse:
Yeah agreed but when you’re a girl, it takes you less
time to figure out who to date because all the guys have
the same mental level
Patty start laughing and so does Jesse. They then get out
of school and continue walking.
Jesse:
This one is your mum’s
Patty:
Dad’s, you always confused the two
Jesse:
Yeah, you know I would like to come inside one day
Patty:
I don’t think that’s a good idea. I enter and the depths
of hell are bestowed upon me. You know what I’ve been
trying to feel these days
Jesse:
I don’t know, what?
Patty:
Exactly that, nothing. I’m trying to feel nothing because
now I don’t care about my two shitty parents in this
shitty environment. I don’t have a single feeling left
for them. Just a plain white face displayed towards them.
Who would you give to a psychopath and an alcoholic?
Nothing, you wouldn’t give a shit about them. You know
what’s my plan?
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Jesse:
What
Patty:
To run away
Jesse:
Like Forrest Gump
Patty:
Similar, he ran after Jenny right. We’ll I’m running away
from these two shitholes and I will run towards my dream.
Haven’t really got the logistics ready but ill just go. I
wont wave a single goodbye towards them but I will
definitely thank both of them separately for giving birth
to me but that’s about it. After, it’s just my heart and
I
Jesse:
Sounds really nice
Patty:
Yeah it does, let’s see when that happens
Jesse:
Yeah, well then I have to go
Patty:
Ok goodbye
Jesse:
Ok here is the thing. Ask the guy. Give him a date
Jessica:
What are you talking about?
Jesse:
The publisher
Jessica:
Right yeah
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Jesse:
Yeah, tell him that he will have the book in a printed
format by the mid of February. Please don’t get over
excited, I’m on the verge of saying no too
Jessica:
I didn’t move a muscle
Jesse:
Right yeah you didn’t, well, tell your publisher, he will
have the book in a printed format with back cover and a
cover page which I will design myself. He can fix the
grammar and what not. He can’t change the legit words
though even if they don’t make sense. I want the thing
done; he needs to print it in a proper paperback format
and it needs to be in stores. He cant talk to me between
me giving him the book and me seeing the book in the
store. Is that clear?
Jessica:
Yes
Jesse:
Deal
Jessica:
Deal
Jesse:
Deal
Jessica:
Great
Jesse:
Yes, Hello
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Jesse starts moving his hand freely in the air to relax
it and removes the sweat from his hand. He then turns
down the radio.
Patty:
Hey, hey Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
What took you so long in answering?
Jesse:
Oh nothing, I was just not in my room. I was downstairs
making myself an egg sandwich
Patty:
You were making yourself an egg sandwich
Jesse pauses
Jesse:
Yeah practically
Patty:
Right listen; I need to tell you something
Jesse:
What’s up?
Patty:
I played today at the club
Jesse:
Oh yeah, how did it go?
Patty:
Well it wasn’t bad, I mean the audience clapped a lot but
I knew I did some mistakes regarding the chord
arrangement in my scale. It was messing up with the
augmented 7th in the pentatonic scale on the 5th
Jesse:
Ok, ok. It’s a mistake that no one normal notices so that
means it’s really good
Patty:
Ok, that’s good but there is something else
Jesse:
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What
Patty:
Well there was a Jazz critic there
Jesse:
Oh okay
Patty:
Yeah, well he said he really liked me
Jesse:
Ok
Patty:
And he said he wants to work with me
Jesse:
Wow
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
WOW
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
WOW
Patty:
Yeah, when do we stop?
Jesse:
WOW
Patty:
Ok please move on
Jesse:
What does he want you to work on?
Patty:
Ok, I gave him my album. He said listen to it
Jesse:
And…
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Patty:
And he wants me to go for auditions
Jesse:
Now, these are good facts
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
What kind of bands are these auditions for?
Patty:
Jazz bands, Jazz bands who don’t have pianists
Jesse:
And…
Patty:
It’s classical Jazz
Jesse:
That’s awesome
Patty:
Yeah, I’m really excited
Jesse:
That’s really good, I’m so proud of you
Patty:
Awe, thanks
Jesse:
Yeah, so what is he going to do with the CD?
Patty:
I don’t know yet, I actually don’t know
78. INT. CD STORE. DAY
Jesse and Patty are standing in the CD store looking at
something that we don’t know as they are facing towards
the camera. Both of their mouths are open and are
extremely surprised.
Jesse:
Holy shit
Patty:
The holiest
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We now see that Jesse and Patty are looking at a shelf in
the CD store which is filled with Patty’s CD’s. The shelf
is titled “Recent classical Jazz”. A lady passes by the
shelf and picks up the CD.
Patty:
Look; she actually picked up my bloody CD
Jesse:
Yeah
Jesse:
Ok, I have to pay for these
Patty:
Yeah I’m sure
Patty:
You know, you do have the money to buy five more
Jesse:
I have to buy eggs for my mum
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Andre:
Jesse, can I tell you something?
Jesse:
If you want to, sure. But if you don’t, I wouldn’t
suggest you say it
Andre:
I want to
Jesse:
Then proceed
Andre:
Thank you
Jesse:
What
Andre:
Thank you
Jesse:
What for, Andre, I mean
Andre:
Thank you man, thank you
Jesse:
Ok, ok, but what for?
Andre:
Thank you
Jesse:
Ok
Andre:
I just wanted to let you know that; it is your class that
makes me feel alive. Rest of the school is bullshit. I’m
nobody outside but in here with you I’m something. I am
not ignored by the extraordinary dialogues and by the
poetry between lines. I’m not ignored, I’m called for.
Thank you Jesse
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Jesse feels emotional and hugs Andre back.
Jesse:
Your welcome, my man. These books are given to you and
these characters are given to you as a gift. Do what you
want with them but it would be mean to return them?
Ava:
Hey, could you help me? My weird English thing is on
Oliver Twist and I believe that’s literature. Is it not?
Ava:
Hello, Jesse
Ava:
Jesse, hello. I have an issue which you would enjoy
solving
Jesse ignores.
Ava:
Come on, it’s written by Charles Dickens. Don’t you love
him or something?
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Jesse ignores.
Ava:
Ok, fine I’m going. By the way, this is a really good
pianist. Who is it?
Ava:
Patricia Smalls, never heard of her
Ava leaves.
Jesse:
Not bloody Charles Dickens
Jessica:
You woke up late?
Jesse:
I actually woke up around 6:30
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Jessica:
What have you been doing since 6:30?
Jesse:
Sleeping
Jesse:
I’m thinking of leaving my job
Nick:
Why
Jesse:
Dad, everyday is practically the same. There is nothing
more to this job; I can’t get any better than this.
Everyday is a plagiarized version of what happens in the
day before that. I have learnt my responsibilities, I
think I have spent a useful time with you guys and talked
to you about my life and I just want to drop it now
because honestly, it’s a total waste of my time
Jessica:
But aren’t you like assistant manager now and are
recommending songs to band and stuff like that
Jesse:
The idea wasn’t to become the assistant manager, it was
to talk to you and learn responsibilities. I really think
I have done that successfully
Nick:
Well that’s true
Jesse:
Yeah
A beat
Nick:
Well it wouldn’t be a harm if you quit the job
Jesse:
Yeah it wouldn’t
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Nick:
If you really think its waste of time then sure, quit it
Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
Aren’t you making tons of money now?
Jesse:
Yeah
Nick:
How much have you made?
Jesse:
Quite a lot
Jessica:
How much?
A long beat
Jesse:
Well I have been working for around 4 and half months and
I have been assistant manager for around 2 months then…
Nick:
Jesse, how much did you make
Jesse:
Around 500 dollars
Nick:
What do you plan to do with that money?
Jesse:
Mum, I want my book to be published by own money
Jessica:
Ok but it takes much more than 500 dollars
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Jessica:
What is it this?
Jesse:
Money, you’ve never seen it
Jessica:
Yes, I have but how much is this and where did you get it
Jesse:
It’s around 1500 dollars
Jessica:
Where the hell did you get it, have you been selling
drugs or something?
Jesse:
No, but far worse than that
Jessica:
Guns
Jesse:
Far worse
Jessica:
Have you taken a male prostitute as a career now?
Jesse:
Oh, no, no. Not that bad
Jessica:
Then, what is it?
Jesse:
I have been selling my birthday presents and Christmas
for the last three years just so I can get money to print
and publish my book
Jessica:
You have been writing it for three years
Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
And you sold all the presents
Jesse:
Not all of them
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Jessica:
Not all of them
Jesse:
Not all of them, I didn’t sell the CD’s you gave this
Christmas because that is the best thing you have ever
gotten
Jessica:
And the cheapest
Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
Well then
Jesse:
Yeah, I’m sorry
Jessica:
Well you are publishing your book, the one who have been
writing for three years now and I always want my son’s
book to be in the shop so yeah
Jesse:
Yeah, you’re not sad
Jessica:
Would sadness bring the presents back?
Jesse:
No bloody way
Jessica:
Do whatever you want honey, I’m not sad at all, your
dream is my happiness
Mr. Cal:
It’s really coming along is it?
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Jesse:
Ha-ha, yeah I hope it is
Mr. Cal:
All right then son, don’t forget to send me a copy
Jesse:
Yeah ok
Mr. Cal goes away and Jesse continues typing his novel on
his laptop. A few seconds later, a figure approaches
Jesse. We can’t see her; we can only see her shadowed
back. Jesse pauses and looks up and is surprised. We now
see Joy with a cigarette in her hand and smoking.
Joy:
Do you smoke?
Jesse:
No
Joy:
Have you tried it?
Jesse:
Like a puff and even that a few years back
Joy:
Did you like it?
Jesse:
It freaking sucked
Jesse:
Are you a regular smoker?
Joy:
No
Jesse:
When was the first time you tried it?
Joy:
Like around 7 to 8 minutes ago
Jesse:
Do you like it?
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Joy:
No
Jesse:
Then why are you smoking?
Joy:
I don’t know, I was tired of the air that’s all
Jesse:
Right
Joy:
Are you down with your coffee shop?
Jesse:
I’ve got like a sip left
Joy:
Drink it
Joy:
Do you want to sit here and talk or do you want to go
somewhere?
Jesse:
I would prefer we go somewhere
Joy:
Right, get up then
Joy:
Jesse
Jesse:
Joy
Joy:
I want to thank you for the classes, there is just one
month left and you will be done with them and I want to
thank you for your dedication and your brilliant
teaching. I really think you can figure that out as a
career
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Jesse:
Oh thanks, yeah I’m considering it
Joy:
Yeah that’s good
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
How’s that girl you like?
Jesse:
What girl?
Joy:
Come on there must be one
Jesse:
Oh yeah
Joy:
Oh yeah, a handsome man like you must have someone
Jesse:
Oh yeah
Joy:
Now that’s an answer, so tell me. Is there someone?
Jesse:
Oh yeah, well there is someone
Joy:
Now we’re talking, and you like her
Jesse:
Yeah, she makes me happy. I haven’t been really close
with anyone that much you know
Joy:
That’s brilliant
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
What do you guys do together?
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Jesse:
Well we go for movies, we walk together, we sometimes go
to the Jazz club and listen to Jazz
Joy:
Yeah ok
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
I always knew you had someone, I knew it from the look in
your eye
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
Is she a big fan of your old music too?
Jesse:
Yeah she is, she also plays that retired music
Joy:
Oh yeah, I figured
Jesse:
Ha-ha
Jesse and Joy keep walking and talking. They laugh and
they seem really happy.
Jesse:
Ok, yes, I have been drunk a few nights in my life. Like
heavy, heavy. Once I think I was fifteen I got so drunk
that I forgot my own name and where I live. Some of my
friends recorded the whole thing but I don’t know where
that went
Joy:
You forgot your own name
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Jesse:
Yeah, one of my friends told me that my name was
“Dickhead” so I started going up to everyone and saying
“Hello, my name is Dickhead, how are you?”
Joy:
Jesse, Jesse, I have to tell you something
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
Yeah
Jesse:
Well what is it?
Joy:
Jesse, I got a job in New York. I am leaving right after
the final exams, I wont be here next year
Jesse:
You got a job in New York?
Joy:
Yes
Jesse:
That’s awesome
Joy:
Thanks, but aren’t you like mad that I’m leaving
Jesse:
Oh mad, why would I be mad. I’m sad, that’s for a fact
but this is great, this is wonderful. What’s the job?
Joy:
Well it’s teaching but they pay double the money
Jesse:
Oh that’s great
Joy:
Yeah, I’m glad you’re not mad
Jesse:
Yeah, of course, I’m not. Why would I be?
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Joy:
Yeah
Jesse:
Joy, is there something wrong?
Joy:
Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
I need your help in one last thing and that’s all I’m
asking
Jesse:
Yeah sure anything?
Joy:
Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Joy:
I don’t know what to do with my husband. I don’t know
Jesse:
You dirty bitch. You idiotic dirty bitch. What the hell
is wrong with you?
Joy:
What
Jesse:
WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHAT?
Joy:
Quite, quite. My house is literally right there
Jesse:
I DON’T GIVE A SHIT. JOY, YOU LITTLE BITCH. WHAT DO YOU
MEAN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING
Joy:
I don’t know, please speak quietly
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Jesse:
JOY, YOU DO WHAT YOU WANT WITH THAT SICK BASTARD. OK DO
YOU WHAT YOU WANT. YOU ARE HUMAN AND YOU DESERVE TO DO
WHAT YOU WANT, WHAT YOU DEMAND. SO I WANT YOU TO LOOK
INTO YOURSELF AND TELL YOURSELF WHAT YOU WANT TO DO. NOT
ASK YOURSELF, TELL YOURSLEF. DON’T YOU DARE ASK
Joy:
Ok ask not tell, no I mean tell not ask
Jesse:
YES
Joy:
YES
Jesse:
YES, WHAT DO YOU WANT TO DO?
Joy:
I WANT TO SLAP THAT SON OF A BITCH SO HARD THAT HE FALLS
AND THEN I WANT TO THROW MY BLOODY DIVORCE PAPERS AT HIS
FACE AND THEN IF I REALLY WANT TO DO THIS. I WANT TO
PIERCE A KNIFE ON HIS BLOODY CAR
Jesse:
NOW THAT’S WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT JOY
Joy:
Thank you Jesse, thank you so much
Joy kisses Jesse on the cheek and then walks towards her
house.
Jesse:
How much?
Shopkeeper:
Well one page is 2 cents and you printed around…
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Shopkeeper:
40,000 pages so that will be…
Jesse:
Woah, woah. 50,000 pages
Shopkeeper:
Give me a second
Shopkeeper:
Yeah, you’re right. 52,981
Jesse:
What the hell?
Shopkeeper:
Yeah
Jesse:
Umm, that’s the word count
Shopkeeper:
Oh yeah, man I need to get new glasses
Jesse (whispering):
And possibly a new brain
Shopkeeper:
Huh
Jesse:
Oh, I just said that it’s about to rain possibly, in a
few days
Shopkeeper:
Yeah that’s true
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Shopkeeper:
So 256 pages, double side printing
Jesse:
Yeah
Shopkeeper:
Ok
Shopkeeper:
So, 200… no no, 256 multiplied by 2, by 3 sorry. Because
its double side printing is… 259. Yeah 259 cents which is
2 dollar 59
Jesse:
Umm, can you give this to me
Shopkeeper:
Yeah
Jesse:
You confused the addition sign with the multiplication
sign
Shopkeeper:
What was the difference again
Jesse:
Uh forget that
Jesse:
Its 7.68 but here you go ten dollars, I have hard time
trusting you with counting of the money and also keep the
change. I have trouble you counting the change too
Jesse:
Here is just the printed version of the book and the USB
contains the front cover and the back cover
Jessica:
Right
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Jesse:
Yeah
Jessica:
Wait the book doesn’t have a title
Jesse:
Yeah right. So basically tell the guy to edit it first
and then send it to me and then ill give him the
title. Then he can print it and publish it
Jessica:
Right, highly inefficient but fine
Jesse:
Yeah
Jesse:
Thanks mum
Patty:
Hey Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
I went for the auditions
Jesse:
Oh yeah
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
And…
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Patty:
I didn’t get it
Jesse:
You didn’t
Patty:
I didn’t
Jesse:
Well that’s surprising
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
What did they say?
Patty:
Well, they said I was a little too much for their band.
They were mainly looking for rhythm players and they
thought that I had too much shine to play rhythm
Jesse:
Oh wow, so more of a compliment than a rejection right
Patty:
(slightly laughs) Yeah
Jesse:
But I know you would get something, I just know it. I
don’t know the bloody rationale behind it and there is no
logic behind my thoughts but I know that you will get it
Patty:
Yeah I hope so
Jesse:
Hey, hey. What’s up?
Patty:
What
Jesse:
What’s up, what’s wrong and I’m a hundred percent that
it’s not the auditions. Music is one thing that no one
can take it away from you. I promise
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Patty:
Yeah I know that
Jesse:
Then, what’s up?
Patty:
Well… sometimes people react against each other as if
they are reacting against you. It’s like the war between
two people but you’re the one that is getting attacked.
You as a witness are suffering the fight caused by
someone else
Patty:
My parents got into a fight. It’s not a big deal. I have
seen so many of these that I feel nothing while they are
fighting. Literally nothing, I taught myself how to shut
down, listening from one year and taking out from the
other but this one was different. I took my mum shopping
because she was taking too many medicines and I thought,
she needs to get out of the house once in a while so yeah
shopping. I hate it but she likes it. The one time I go
shopping with her, my mum and me see our dad shopping
with a hot ass woman. She kissed him every time he handed
her a few hundred bucks to buy something. The sight was
horrible. It was awful. My mum starts crying, goes up to
him, and slaps him. They make a scene. They shout, argue
even when they are divorced 7 years they still have a
peculiar demand of making a scene in a public place.
Security comes in and kicks them out. Normal right, it is
totally normal because I have seen it multiple times but
in different locations and time periods. So totally
normal but that wasn’t the thing. It was what happened to
me. I got home and I get these weird flashbacks of their
divorce and everything. I get these memories and it was
just different. You know what I mean I just felt quite
different, I felt abandoned and I felt like I don’t
belong. It was like I don’t have a home. I don’t know the
roots causes but that was it. I felt homeless. You know,
what do you think?
Jesse:
Get up
Patty:
Just get up
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Patty gets up.
Patty:
Ok done
Jesse:
All right, let’s go. We are going somewhere
Patty:
Where
Jesse:
Somewhere
Patty:
And where is that somewhere?
Jesse:
Its somewhere
Patty:
But…
Jesse:
Patty, let’s go. Trust me, we are going somewhere that is
worth going to ok. No argument, lets just go
Patty:
Ok
Patty:
What are we doing here?
Jesse:
This is a ramp; the ramp is polished wood that makes it
very smooth and slippery. At the end of the ramp as you
can clearly see is a lake with freezing water. I’ve heard
a man died in the water once. They investigated, it
wasn’t that something attacked him; it was just that the
water was too cold
Patty:
What does this have anything to do with us?
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Jesse:
Well, honey we are going to slide it?
Patty:
What
Jesse:
Yes
Patty:
No
Jesse:
Yes
Patty:
No
Jesse:
Yes, listen; it’s not that bad
Jesse:
Patty, Patty no. We are going to do this. No matter what,
we are going to do this
Patty:
No
Jesse:
Yes
Patty:
Why
Jesse:
To help
Patty:
How the hells with this help me?
Jesse:
It will Patty, it will, trust me, it will
Patty:
How, how do you know it will help me?
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Jesse:
Because I have been there, I know how it feels. I know
how you’re feeling
Jesse:
Patty, three years ago, I felt homeless. I didn’t know
what to do, where to go, didn’t have any goals. I was
confused, I was troubled. I thought the world was
fighting me and I didn’t know what caused it. I was in
that conflicted mindset in which I didn’t know what to
do. It was like I was lonely. I had a few friends; a nice
family but I didn’t have myself. I had people but myself
was missing. That’s why I felt homeless. One day my mum
brings me here and she asks me what do you want. And I
said what do you mean? She said what do you want? And I
said “I don’t know” and then was like, don’t ask
yourself, tell yourself what do you want… but to actually
tell yourself, you have slide down this ramp to actually
reveal what you want. To actually find out.
Patty listens carefully and then takes off her jacket and
then takes off her jeans. Jesse does the same.
Patty:
Why are you sliding?
Jesse:
Oh, its fun. I did it ten times after that. You really
start to like it after the first time you do it
Patty:
Right
Jesse:
Alright ready
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
Set
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
On your marks
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Patty:
Just say “go” you bloody…
Patty:
Jesse, Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
I want to run
Jesse:
You want to run?
Patty:
Yeah, I want to run away from here. I don’t know what the
hell I’m doing here. I want to run away to New York and
start a life there. I haven’t figured out the logistics
but…
Jesse:
Patty
Patty:
Yeah
Jesse:
You know when you run away. Don’t worry about me. Maybe
ill get there for university. So, don’t think we are
separating. No we are not, no we are not. We will not be
separated… ill send the book by mail. It’s getting
edited; it’ll be in stores soon
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Jesse is with his class. It is his last class with these
students. We can see that he has no presentation; he is
just talking with them and isn’t really teaching.
Jesse:
Ok, so we conclude the Great Gatsby. We looked at its
aspects; we dwelled into its importance and most
importantly, we took the characters as ourselves, we
stepped into their shoes that I believe is the biggest
achievement. Now, tomorrow you have your last class and I
don’t take that class so just watch the movie to get some
visual idea and the girls can enjoy Dicaprio’s face.
Thank you so much for allowing me to teach you guys, it
has been my pleasure and I hope you enjoyed learning from
me than I enjoyed learning from you guys. Thank You
Jesse also packs his bag and gets out of the class.
Suddenly Joy comes behind him and taps him on his
shoulder.
Jesse:
Oh hey
Joy:
Listen
Jesse:
What
Joy:
This is the last you’re seeing me, so please mail me your
book at this address
Jesse:
Wait, what do you mean?
Joy:
Jesse, this is time I’m actually telling myself
something, please don’t ask any questions. I’m just
saying that its goodbye for now
Jesse:
Ok
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Joy and Jesse hug each other and then Joy runs off, Jesse
follows her. We hear a song in the background (A giant-
dog I’ll come crashing).
Joy’s husband:
Oh hey darling, sorry I’m late. I was at this meeting and
I was you know, you know what I was doing. So, listen bad
and quick news. I have to go for a few days on business,
is that okay?
Joy slaps her husband across the face and Joy’s husband
falls. Jesse see’s this and is surprised.
Joy:
Yeah it is, you bastard
Joy takes out a few papers from her purse and throws it
at him and then takes out a knife and makes a deep
scratch on the car.
Patty:
What’s up, what has happened?
Jesse:
Oh nothing, nothing
Patty:
What do you mean? You look surprised. Did something big
happen around him
Jesse:
Joy punches her husband in the face, called him a bitch,
threw divorce papers at him, scratched that expensive car
and then drove off saying that this is goodbye
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Patty:
Holy shit and you say its nothing much
Patty:
By the way Jesse
Jesse:
Yeah
Patty:
You’re the best teacher I have ever had
Patty:
And one more thing Jesse
Jesse:
What
Patty:
This is a great day
Jesse:
How
Patty:
Well a person called, he wants me to do many solo shows
and performances in New York
Jesse:
Patty, that is… that is just… that is
Patty:
Don’t complete the darn sentence, let the feeling flow.
You don’t always have to put it in words
Jesse:
Patty, I really think today is the day you should run
away. I don’t why but it just seems perfect
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Patty folds her sleeve and with a marker it’s written 2nd
April, 2019: Let’s run away. Both Jesse and Patty smile
looking at this.
Patty:
Not much and I think I forgot what I wrote, it’s really
time to move on
Patty:
Jesse, I think this time I’m really telling myself to do
something, not asking myself. I’m getting the feeling of
control and I’m glad you…
Jesse:
Let the feelings flow
Both Jesse and Patty kiss and they kiss for a good 7
seconds and then Patty hugs Jesse tightly and whispers
“thank you” into his ear. Jesse moves closer to Patty and
whispers into her year.
Jesse (whispering):
You and me are the perfect complement. There is no
greater bond than two witnesses witnessing the change in
people’s lives.
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Patty (to taxi driver):
Airport please
Jessica:
This came for you
Jesse:
Ok
Jesse goes into the living room of his house and there is
a big package, it’s a big cardboard box. Jesse opens it;
he smiles and then takes out a book. We can only see the
back cover of the book but we know its Jesses. He smiles
and carries the whole box away.
Mr. Cal:
Genius kids
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doorstep. She lifts the package, rips it and opens it.
She see’s Jesse’s book with a sticky note on it. It says
“To Joy (the best teacher, person, believer in the
world). Joy laughs while looking at the book.
Jesse(V.O):
Dear Patty. A witness melancholy is a chess game against
Euphemism. The words said by one of the greatest people
on earth and also said by one the greatest pianist’s on
earth yet I still disagree. I think that you should
change the word melancholy. It shouldn’t be sadness that
you are witnessing anymore. It should be the light of Joy
and happiness. Patty, you have taken a role as witness in
the best way possible and now it’s time that people
witness you as one of the greats in the world, which you
truly are. This book is dedicated to you and two other
very important women in my life. You three show me the
light in the darkest of times and allow me tell myself
things rather than ask myself. This is the lesson that I
have learned and continue to learn. This book is the gold
in my litter.
(CUT TO)
The End
Credits are rolled.
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