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classes in schools. But what is also true is that not all diseases are preventable.
However, even if we exercise every day and restrain ourselves from smoking and
drinking for all our lives, we may still be devoured by the horror of cancer in our
Commented [ab6]: ‘chronic’ is the correct word
advanced age. Cancers, and other serious and chronical diseases are just too here.
copying of infected cells. For the success of such medical wonders, people carrying
devotion from both the government and medical professionals that achieved the Commented [ab12]: ‘were’ - because of ‘them’,
it is clearly plural.
milestones that have saved millions of lives, and thus it matters, and the funding e.g. Neither of them were interested in going to
university.
not because it saves money, but because it saves lives. To educate people to wear
air masks, to wash their hands frequently and to cover their sneeze save lives, since
these seemingly unimportant deeds could disjoin the links of viral distribution,
as they did unexpectedly well in China’s endeavors to eradicate swan flu in human
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