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To begin with, the fast food has had a big growth in the last years, thanks to the fact that biqhat
many people both poor and wealthy can have easily access to fast food.

Can access easily to

However, due to the low price of this food, there are many people like immigrants, homeless and
those who live in poverty can eat at least one meal for day, otherwise those inhabitants would not
have the chance to have breakfast, lunch or dinner.

However, + a sentence

Like informal. As formal

However, there are people as immigrants, homeless and those who live in poverty who can eat at
least one meal a day due to the low price of fast food, otherwise those inhabitants would not have
the chance to have breakfast, lunch or dinner.

On the other hand, fast food is made from unhealthy ingredients, which cause different issues inside
your body, problems like obesity (fat people), heart inconvenient, and even addiction.

From my point of view, the local government in each country or nation, should tax this type of food,
owing to a large number of people are prone to eat fast food and therefore gain weight, causing the
change of people’s lifestyle, food habits and the way they take care their health. In addition, the
institutions related to control and manage matters related with food, should do Campaigns, which
may help people to realize what they are doing to their bodies.

Do campaigns

To sum up, higher tax on fast food could help to control companies associated with that massive
production of unhealthy food, and may, this producers change their food products and start to sell
healthy food like vegetables or produce.

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Today’s world the global society is getting used to stay only in different places such as home, work
place and shopping mall, causing a (fail/absence/ a lack of) physical activity, also many factors like
work, personal life and so on, changes the lifestyle of adults involving into a circle, which they only
go from home to work, and from work to home, following that type of life until they die.

Work places

Shopping malls

Causing= which lead to

On the other hand, physical activity is ¿really important? Crucial not only ¿for/to? your health but
also for your emotional states and happiness. Likewise (Besides), doctors have advised that grown
up people should take seriously to ¿work out? (do exercise) five days a week to improve their health
conditions. ¿So? Thus/therefore, what can they do to be able of doing this recommendation from
doctors?

No uses interrogante inicial en inglés.

For your health

Therefore formal. So informal

The local government could build public places for doing exercise as main purpose, furthermore
they should create advertisements showing adults that this “parks” are the best way to keep both
in shape and healthier

To do exercise

Nevertheless, another party can take important part/place in this issue, companies, I have heard
that many workers complain against their work schedule, owing to the short free time that they
have, they ¿cannot can not? Think about other activities as physical activity, because of that, leaders
of companies around the world should create a “do exercise time” in their work schedule, allowing
to their workers go to places like GYM, parks, etc… and do exercise, that it would/may/might be the
best way/option.

Can not

To sum up, a powerful cooperation between local governments and companies are the best option
to accomplish many improvements in the adults both lifestyle and health.

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Currently, technology is always improving itself and different fields such as health care,
transportation and now in the human communication. Modernization along with capitalism have
lead mankind to be surrounded by both new and advanced communication devices which allow us
to be closer despite distance. Then it is inevitable not to try to use one of those devices and stay at
home.

First of all, many people who lives abroad (in foreign countries), away from their families are able
to communicate more than ¿10? times in a week and free (you only have to pay for Internet
connection or mobile data), furthermore government and countries issues can be discussed and
solved without the necessity of formal letter and the distance delays or even one person who is
suffering a complicated disease and does not have enough money to travel abroad could receive
medical advise from a specialized doctor living outside

Many people who live.

Ten times a week

On the other hand/ from another point of view, face-to-face or physical communication does not
require an Internet connection, it is more realistic. Relationships between people cannot still alive
using virtual communication tools, due to something special like a kiss, hug or the phrase “I love
you” do have greater impact whether you do it or say it to the person right in front of you;
consequently, the bond or link existing between those people become stronger and real.

To conclude, mankind are surrounded by advanced communication devices and try not to use them
it is going to be really difficult for us, however those devices will not be able to replace a real kiss or
a hug but also there are certain Internet issues that it would not allow a confidential conversation
in government matters. Real communications and human contact remind us why we are a social
specie, otherwise probably/likely we as mankind would not fall in love **to** each other or have
children, and last but not least ancient civilizations could advance along without a need of Internet,
therefore; I think people should choose face-to-face communication.

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