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The lecture was about the various techniques to be used in proofreading during the
autumn term. At the outset, need to have a strict check on grammar and punctuation,
furthermore, keep an eye on similar errors committed in the past, lastly, emphasized on
the logical structure of paragraphs which could be achieved by reading aloud. Overall,
there should be enough time to proofread your work before paper submission.
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There are three main areas of concern for people at local level in the town. Firstly, to make
them understand what services they need, secondly, to enable them to contribute in these
services, lastly, to create public services and public servants. These issues can be
overcome by reducing over directive centralism. Overall, the communication among the
national government, local bodies and citizens should be more transparent.
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There are three main areas of concern for people at the local level in the town. Firstly, they
should understand the varieties of services they would require. Secondly, if citizens want
to receive these services, there should be a proper co-ordination between public services
and public servants. Lastly, the communication among the national government, local
bodies, and citizens should be more transparent.
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In the given lecture speaker emphasize that the climate change is a result of human
actions. To begin with, around 200 years ago industries were being set up in
the northern hemisphere which has now spread in the most part of the world and
producing more harmful gases. To conclude, the industrial growth has adversely
impacted the climate and, therefore, it needs to be addressed immediately.
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In the given lecture, the speaker emphasize that the climate change is a result of human
actions. To begin with, around 200 years ago the industries were set up in
the northern hemisphere which has now spread in the most parts of the world and are
producing more harmful gases. To conclude, the industrial growth has adversely
impacted the climate, therefore it needs to be addressed immediately.
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The speaker discusses the various problems and solutions of allergies. To begin with,
allergy is a body reaction to something which is harmful to it and impact can be mild to
life-threatening. Furthermore, histamine released by the body and the less developed
hygiene conditions help in coping with allergic reactions in the later stage. To conclude,
avoidance of the main causes of allergies is the best way to cope up.
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The speaker discusses the various problems and solutions of allergies. An allergy is a
body reaction to something which is harmful to it and the impact can be mild to life-
threatening. Furthermore, the histamine released by the body and the less developed
hygiene conditions help in coping with allergic reactions in the later stage. To conclude,
the best avoidance from allergy is to identify of the main cause.
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In the given lecture speaker discusses in the Europe, people like to know about travelling
via reading or electronic media which has highlighted America as the most dominant
country in the world. A reason for it could be that most Europeans have migrated to
America. Furthermore, nowadays there are two main questions whether America is
inevitable or imitable. To conclude, America is far ahead and represents the future of
Europeans.
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The lecture discusses about the Europeans travelling experiences of various countries via
reading or electronic media, but they had the most interest in America, as they migrated to
America long ago. Nowadays there are two main views about whether America is
inevitable or imitable? One says the USA is very unusual country as compared to other,
while other says that the country is forerunner in each category than other nations.
Over the years, the loyalty has changed amongst the people which are the most important
criteria for running a successful company. Earlier, the people preferred long-term
employment in a same company with health care and pension benefits; however,
nowadays, this is not the same amongst the young employees and their loyalty is gauged
based on their trust and the kind of skills towards their employer. (65 words)
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The lecture says the importance of Latin writing and its literature. The first reason was it
is capable of great compression. Secondly, due to the nature of Roman educational
system it is linguistic and literary produced the finest orators and writers. The major
drawback, however, was the education was accessed only to the rich classes and, as a
result, the subject matter was limited in the social context. (67 words)
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The experts say that financial aid to the developing countries in the long run is inefficient.
Firstly, long-term aid to those countries who faced problems from drought and have few
industries. Secondly, emergency aid which requires providing the basic services in case
of the earthquake in Haiti. While just pumping in money will not eradicate the problems,
instead, the various institutions should build to organise and develop the social services.
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Nowadays, the standards of the English language have fallen to such an extent that
students and graduates make numerous mistakes in the grammar, syntax and they often
use wrong words in the sentences. While the speaker says that in order to solve these
problems, the children should be taught about the right usage of grammar and framing
the right sentences. Thus, this will develop their right understanding of the language. (70
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The lecture says the reputation of the poets has changed gradually over the years like
fashions, particularly of Alexander Pope. Initially, he was idolised by his friends and
prolific writers, however, the Victorians and other poets criticised for not portraying the
natural scenes of the environment in his poetries that hampered his reputation. After the
1920s, he became more popular and his reputation was at the peak. (70 words)
The speaker tells us about psycho-geography which was first coined by the Frenchman
and it is not any academic subject. It is a study of the effects of geographical environment
on people emotions and behaviour and it includes buildings, landscape and climate.
Furthermore, it is basically an urban thing and people need to pay attention to the
surroundings as well as the entire atmosphere for their behaviour and emotions. (69
words)
It is nearly impossible to describe the history of the novel without knowing its definition. It
started in the late 17th and early 18th centuries where renowned novelists published a
variety of novels. In addition, the Pilgrim prose had a profound effect on prose writing and
people, however, such terms often confuse the readers to define the novel. Instead, it
should define what it is and does? (67 words)
The lecture tells that the philosopher conducted an experiment to imagine what goes or a
person thinks in his mind. Firstly, when we look at other people behaviours, talks, etc. we
can accurately forecast based on our personal experiences that how they will act in
particular situations. Yet, we cannot be sure the thought process that runs in their minds
and this is not only because of culture. (68 words)
The lecture says that in the beginning the English were an academic subject, however, as
demand increased the university did not take seriously as an academic curriculum. They
only accepted if it was made difficult. While many students think it is an easy subject, but
when they read it as a leisure activity they faced the difficulty. Instead, they should alone
read the set books for a suitable response. (69 words)
The lecture tells about the behaviour of psychology of crowds when she caught up in an
accident that turned violent. Firstly, her reactions shifted from peaceful to violence, but
we do not behave in the same way with friends and relatives. Finally, when people are in a
crowd which is a collective mind of all individuals and each individual has a feeling of
freedom to behave in their own ways. (70 words)
John Milton was the most popular for his poetry, particularly, for prose writing where he
wrote about social and political events and its situations. In addition to this, he also wrote
four books on the divorce, but the one book on the divorce was very famous as the
relevance of the text portrayed the defence of freedom of expression and against the
censorship. (63 words)