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Total Score:

Content (30 pts) Organization (20 pts) Use of English (20 pts) Vocabulary (20 pts) Punc./Spell./Mechanics
(10pts)
30 Task fully achieved / 20 Effective Top, Supp. & 20 Accurate use of grammar/ 20 Wide range of 10 Hardly any spelling
Entirely relevant to Conc. Sent. /Suitable Good use of complex vocabulary/ Accurate mistakes/ Correct punc./
topic use of transitions structures form & use Very neat format
22,5 Task adequately 15 Acceptable Top, Supp. & 15 Adequate use of grammar 15 Adequate range of 7,5 Few spelling mistakes/
achieved / Acceptable Conc. Sent. / Problems Some mistakes in complex vocab./ Some errors Some problems with
format and length with the order structures of form & use punc.
15 Limited variety of 10 Poor Top, Supp. & Conc. 10 Limited use of grammar / 10 Limited range of 5 Frequent spelling
ideas / Some gaps & Sent. / Many problems Many errors in use vocab./ Frequent mistakes/ Serious
irrelevant ideas with the order errors of form & use problems with punc.
7,5 Poor variety of ideas / 5 Absence of Top, Supp. & 5 Poor use of grammar / 5 Poor range of 2,5 Severe spelling mistakes.
Too many gaps & Conc. Sent. / No clear Reader can’t understand vocabulary/ Too many Poor use of punc. &
irrelevant ideas

organization errors of form & use capitals/No para.format