30 Day An Essay A Day Revision

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DAY 21 AN ESSAY A DAY REVISION

MISSING CHILD
King and Kong are good friends.
One sunny afternoon, they walked home after a tiring day at school.
While passing the playground, they saw one little boy was crying bitterly. Without further delay
they rushed to get him.
They noticed that the boy was his neighbour's son. He had lost his way home. Both of them
comforted him.
They sent the boy to his home. He looked happy and ran to get his mother. His mother thanked King
and Kong for their kindness. She advised her son to be more careful in the future.
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FUNDRAISING
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A VISIT TO AN ORPHANAGE
Jengkreng and his classmates from Moral Club joined in a trip to one orphanage in Johor
Bahru last week. They boarded a school bus and reached there safely.
They were welcomed by the orphanage staff and the beloved orphans. They brought many gifts for
them. They had several activities there including singing and mini games. They sang a few songs
together and it was really enjoyable.
They had cakes and delicious food for their refreshments after playing some games. It was fun and
exciting activities for them. Before they bid a farewell, they had a photography session. They
promised to visit them again the next year for more interesting activities.
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DROWNING
One windy evening, Jefri and his friends went to the beach near their house. While walking
along the seashore, one unexpected incident caught their attention. A boy was seen
struggling in the raging water.
Without further ado, Jefri dived in the water and swam to rescue the barely alive boy. He lifted the
boy's shoulders and swam to the shore.
While waiting for the ambulance to arrive, Jefri gave a first aid. He pressed the boy's chest to
remove the water he had swallowed. Minutes later, the ambulance came and brought the unfortunate
boy to hospital.
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JAYWALKING
One day, Lopez was walking home with her bosom friend, Jenipar after school. The traffic was congested so
they were unable to cross the road safely. Lopez wanted to use the pedestrian bridge but Jenipar refused and
decided to cross the busy road recklessly.
Cars kept honking at Jenipar when she was trying to cross the road. Luckily one man who saw the incident
stopped his car and immediately scolded Jenipar.
Jenipar apologized and regretted her silly mistake. She knew that it was no use crying over spilled (spilt) milk.
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ANNUAL SPORTS DAY - RAMALAN 2019
SPORTS DAY - NEW ESSAY
SK Tengku Jeng had its annual Sports Day last Saturday. The most awaited yearly event
was successfully held at the school field. Tents were set up for spectators and colourful
flags were seen everywhere.
As the spectators were cheering up for their favourite teams and athletes, Amin and fellow
contestants had a warming up session for the most anticipated event, a 100 meter race. He
was extremely excited but at the same time was nervous.
Amin won the race. The headmaster presented the trophies to Amin and other winners. He
congratulated everyone and praised them for representing their house respectively. Amin
was happy and proud of himself.
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DAY 3 AN ESSAY A DAY
BULLY
Year 5 Unit 6 : Self-protection
Nathan was on his way home from school after seeing his English teacher. When he was about to
reach the gate, he heard some loud noises from the back of the building and that fanned the flames
for him to investigate.
He was in great shock when he witnessed a few mischievous boys led by Sabu were bullying one of
his friends, Maslang. Without any delay, Nathan rushed to get the security guards and reported the
incident.
The next day, Sabu and his friends were called by the headmaster, Mr Najib. They were punished
and given stern action. Their parents were informed and they were given a counselling too. They
also apologised to Maslang.
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Exercise 1
BH Didik 15 July 2019
One breezy morning, Marza and his bosom friend, Rizal were cycling around the park near
their neighbourhood. The weather was perfect and many people were there jogging and walking
along the path.
As they were approaching one corner, suddenly one fast car hit them. They swayed from the track
and fell. It was unlucky for Rizal because he had suffered an ankle injury while Marza escaped
injuries.
The ambulance arrived minutes later and immediately brought Rizal to the hospital. His ankle was
fractured so he was hospitalised for a few days. His family and friends visited him. He had to use
crutches on his discharge day.
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Theme: Animals
Focus: Rescuing animal
Past Year: 2005, 2007, 2010, 2014, 2016
Jetlee is an animal lover. One bright Sunday, as promised, his father, Mr. Brucelee brought
him to city's famous pet shop and bought a pair of hamsters. Then, they went home by a
train.
It was Jetlee's unforgettable moment when his hamsters escaped from the cage. He was extremely
shocked but a little girl siting beside him was excited. Other passengers who witnessed the incident
looked confused.
Fortunately, one lady found the hamster in her habdbag. She put it back into the cage. Jetlee was
relieved and he thanked the lady for her kind deed.
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2. reached
3. put out
FIRE INCIDENT 4. sprayed SCHOOL BUILDING ON FIRE
5. rescued
Year 4 SK Textbook Unit 1 : Our 6.helped WHERE:
Community (Page 4 - Mak Dilah's house 7. finished 1.library
on fire) 2.science lab
FIRE 3.classroom
Common questions: 1.started
2.broke out WHEN:
3.spread 1.weekends
1. Neighbour's house on fire
4.destroyed 2.evening
2. School building on fire
5.burnt
6.extinguished SIGNS:
WHO
7.put out 1.smoke coming out from building
1. fire victims
8.stopped 2.fire sighted
2. witness
9.detected 3.alarm triggered
3. firemen / firefighter
10.sighted 4.call for help
4. neighbours
11.sprayed
5. rescuers
6. villagers VERBS:
VICTIMS 1.saw
7. residents
1. thanked 2.heard
8. headman
2. praised 3.witnessed
3. felt grateful 4.reported
VERBS
4. feeling sad 5.informed
5. escaped injuries 6.called
WITNESS
1. saw 7.arrived
VILLAGERS/RESIDENTS 8.put out
2. witnessed
1. helped 9.saved
3. called
2. donated 10.rescued
4. informed
3. raised (fund) 11.thanked
5. sighted
4. gave 12.praised
6. felt shocked
5. contributed 13.felt proud
7. waited
6. cooperated
7. repaired
FIRE BRIGADE 8. rebuilt
1. arrived
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BULLY
Sadek and Sajat are mischievous boys. They like to bully their friends. They are vandals
too.
One day, they walked around their school compound. While they were passing by the
school garden, the beautiful flowers attracted them. Sadek had an evil plan. He incited
Sajat to vandalise the garden.
They plucked the flowers and destroyed the plants. Leaves were left scattered all around
the place. They also littered some rubbish on the school grounds. Since there were no
teachers and prefects who saw the incident, they continued their misconduct until Mr.
Najib, their headmaster stopped them. They were punished and given stern action.
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Family spending time at the beach. Son spotted a strange bag under
coconut tree. Father found a bag containing lots of cash money.
Father brought it to the police station. Officer told that it was money stolen
from one bank a few nights before. Everyone was shocked. Officer thanked
and praised. It was an unforgettable experience for that family
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2019 Supermarza Forecast
It was a terrifying experience for Sadek yesterday at the beach. A moment
he would never forget in his entire life when he found a strange bag full with
stolen cash money.
His excitement spending the beautiful beach on the weekend turned into a
nightmare. A situation he could only witness in the film.
His father brought the money to the police station and was informed that it was
stolen from the bank a few nights before. The officer praised them for their right
action. Sadek believes that honesty is the policy.
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FAMILY MOVING IN / OUT
A Malay family has just moved into an empty house next to Lee Meng's house. His family helped to
carry heavy furniture. Other neighbours were present too. They worked together in arranging the
furniture and other things. Others were busy lifting some electrical appliances.
Lee Meng too joined together to help his new neighbour. He met his new friend, Ahmad and
introduced each other. He helped Ahmad to carry a few light boxes.
An hour later, they finished the work. Ahmad's parents invited all for some meals as a gesture of
thanks. They gathered together and enjoyed the moments happily. Ahmad's family thanked
everyone and praised them for their kindness. They believe that 'Many hands make light work'.
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CAMPING
A group of adventurous boys went for a camping at a cool and refreshing waterfall.
Once they found a suitable spot, they pitched up their tent under a shady tree. The weather
was perfect on that day and without any delay, they collected some sticks around the
camping area.
Their leader was busy fishing at the river while one of them lit the fire and boiled the
water. They grilled the fish and enjoyed eating it. They set the campfire and played some
games. One of them played the guitar while the others were singing their favourite songs.
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HELPING DISABLED PEOPLE / PHYSICALLY CHALLENGED PEOPLE
When Ahmad Maslang was a little boy, he was involved in a tragic car accident. He survived the
accident but his left leg was amputated. He used crutches to move and that disability demotivated
him.
However, his parents kept supporting him. He doubled his effort and worked hard to overcome the
obstacles.
He passed his SPM examination with flying colours and received a sponsorship to study in a
university. He later graduated and received his degree with a Best Student Award during the
convocation.
After his graduation, he was offered a job. He worked hard until he became a well known
businessman. As a successful person with disability, he motivated other people to follow his steps.
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FOUND MONEY, WALLET, PURSE, HANDBAG or other valuable items
During last weekend, Rafizi enjoyed playing football with his friends at the field near their house.
Suddenly, Rafizi kicked the ball far and it rolled towards the bench.
He ran to get the ball and to his shock, he saw a wallet was lying under the bench. Rafizi took the
wallet and opened it. He found out that the wallet belonged to one old man. He stopped the game
and looked for its owner.
Luckily, there was one old man walking towards Rafizi. Immediately Rafizi stopped him and
returned his wallet. He was happy and thanked Rafizi for his honesty.
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FOOD POISONING
Theme : Health
Topic : Food Poisoning
Year 6 Unit 7 : Healthy and Wise
One day, Pam was feeling sick. She had vomited several times and had suffered dizziness all day long. She realised that she had
eaten fish balls that she bought from one roadside stall a day before.
Her mother brought her to see the doctor and the latter confirmed that Pam was suffering from a food poisoning. She was
prescribed some medicines and was advised to rest until she recovered well.
A few days later, Pam was totally recovered from food poisoning. She regretted her mistake and had indeed learnt a painful
lesson. She promised that she would never buy the food from that stall again.
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TOOTHACHE
Mixed tenses in essay writing

Malik loves eating chocolates and ice-creams. His unhealthy eating habits has caused him to put on
some weight and becomes fat. Since he is a lazy boy, he seldom brushes his teeth.
One day, while enjoying a few bars of chocolates, Malik had a painful toothache and cried bitterly.
His parents brought him to see the dentist for a checking. Malik was frightened when the dentist
started examining his teeth.
The doctor found out that the he had a rotten tooth. The dentist immediately extracted the tooth and
gave Malik some medicines. He also advised Malik to stop taking sugary drinks and chocolates.
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SAVING MONEY
Trial Maran 2018
Tuko nama kpd Lim.

Last school holidays, Lim helped his uncle at the vegetable farm. Lim was excited helping his uncle there.
He collected the vegetables and sold them at the market. Many customers were satisfied with the vegetables.
Lim really enjoyed his work. His uncle gave him some money for his effort. Lim was happy and decided to save
the money in the bank.
His uncle brought him to the bank to open a saving account . The bank officer praised Lim for his right action.
Lim was very proud and thanked his uncle for his kind deed l. He believes that a ringgit saved is a ringgit
earned.
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PICKPOCKET
One lovely morning, Budu went to the wet market. He saw the market was crowded with people
who were busy shopping. Without wasting time, he went to Mr. Jering's fruit stall, his neighbour.
Suddenly, Budu noticed that someone was trying to steal his wallet from behind. Luckily he was
aware and confronted the thief. He shouted for help and in a split seconds, a few customers who saw
the commotion immediately rushed and apprehended the thief.
Budu felt relieved and thanked everyone who helped him. The thief was later brought to the police
station.
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SCHOOL TRIP
1. Normal trip
2. Trip with an incident (punctured tyre)
A trip to Teluk Intan Leaning Tower (no picture)
Last school holidays, Jeng and his classmates went to Teluk Intan, Perak to visit the one and only
leaning tower in Malaysia. They were excited once they witnessed with their eyes the uniqueness of
Teluk Intan Leaning Tower.
Everyone grabbed the chance to take the photographs of the tower and they also took selfies in front
of the building. Later, they joined Mr Jing, a tower guide for a quick tour around the building. They
spent almost an hour there learning more about the tower.
After buying some souvenirs, they left the leaning tower with enjoyable moments.
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Day 2 An Essay A Day Revision : SNATCH THEFT
Theme: CRIME
Topic: SNATCH THEFT
Textbook Reference: Year 5 Unit 6 Self Protection
Subjects 6. Shouted
1. Thief/thieves 7. Witnessed
2. Victim/s 8. Helped
3. Witness 9. Chased
4. Cyclist 10. Called
5. Policeman 11. Apprehended
6. Pedestrian 12. Caught
13. Handcuffed
Verbs 14. Detained
1. Snatched 15. Thanked
2. Stole 16. Praised
3. Robbed 17. Advised
4. Rode off 18. Learnt ( a lesson)
5. Screamed
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One morning, Angelina Joyah and her son were walking to the market. While they were approaching the
market,there was one cyclist behind them, riding in a suspicious way.
In the blink of an eye, the cyclist snatched her handbag and rode off. She screamed for help but the cyclist
managed to escape.
Fortunately, there was one policeman patrolling the area. He witnessed the incident and chased the thief. The
thief was caught and handcuffed.
She thanked the policeman for his quick action. She owed a debt of gratitude towards him. It was indeed an
unforgettable day for Angelina.
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FIRE INCIDENT - Extra essays
Sample Essay #1
A loud siren shocked the residents in Taman Bahagia during one hot afternoon as the fire brigade rushed to rescue a few victims
who were trapped in a fire incident.
The firemen worked hard in putting out the fire and prevented it from spreading over the neighbouring houses. Other firemen
broke into the house to save the trapped victims.
After a few minutes risking their lives in the fire, finally they managed to save the victims, a father and his daughter who fell
asleep when the fire broke out. His daughter was crying in great fear while holding her doll.
Sample Essay #2
One day, Najib’s house was caught on fire. He was trapped inside with his daughter. He shouted for help and tried to escape but
the fire hindered his effort.
Other residents who witnessed the incident immediately called the fire department. The firemen arrived and worked hard in
putting out the fire and managed to rescue Najib and his daughter.
Everyone witnessing the incident was feeling relieved when they saw Najib and his daughter came out from the burning house
unhurt. Najib thanked the firemen for rescuing him and his daughter. He also praised them for risking their lives for his safety.
Sample Essay #3
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One day, Najib’s house was on fire. He was trapped inside with his daughter. He shouted for help but his neighbours could not
help him. They called the fire department and helped to stop the fire.
The firemen arrived and put out the fire. They also saved Najib and his daughter. Finally the fire stopped but Najib’s house was
burnt.
Najib was sad but he was feeling relieved as he and his daughter were safe. He thanked the firemen for saving him. He also
praised his neighbours for helping him.
Sample Essay #4
Anwar's house was on fire. He was trapped inside the burning house with his daughter. He screamed for help and fortunately his
neighbours heard him who immediately called the fire department and reported the incident.
While wanting for the fire brigade to arrive, some of Anwar's neighbours were trying to stop the fire. Minutes later, the firemen
arrived and without any delay, they worked hard in putting out the fire and finally they managed to rescue Anwar and his
daughter.
Anwar thanked his neighbours and praised the firemen for risking their lives in rescuing him and his daughter.
Sample Essay #5
It was a nightmare for Najib and his daughter last weekend when both of them were trapped in their burning house. Fortunately
his neighbours who witnessed the incident and heard his screaming reported the incident to the fire department who arrived
minutes later.
The firemen worked hard in putting out the fire and managed to rescue Najib and his daughter. Everyone was relieved when they
saw Najib and his daughter were safe and escaped unhurt.
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Najib thanked his neighbours for their quick action and also praised the firemen for rescuing him.
Sample Essay #6
It was a close shave for Maslang and his daughter when both escaped unhurt in their burning house last weekend. A miserable
day he would never forget in his entire life especially when the raging fire hindered his effort to escape from the tragic incident.
Luckily his neighbours' quick action in reporting the incident to the fire department was a great relief for him. The firemen
risked their lives in rescuing Maslang and his daughter from the tragic incident.
Maslang was grateful and he thanked his neighbours for helping him. He also praised the firemen for their noble action.
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FALLEN TREE ON ROAD
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Day 1 An Essay A Day Revision : Kidnapping
Be Safe: Year 4
1. Child safety
2. Road Safety Awareness
Self Protection: Year 5
1. School Bully
2. Kidnapping
3. Money Extortion
4. Snatch Theft
Year 5 Unit 6 Self Protection
Child safety
Topic: Strangers, go away! / Kidnapping
4. criminals
Subjects: 5. kidnapper
1. child/ minor
2. strangers
Location:
3. suspects
1. bus stop/taxi stop
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2. playground 11. worried
3. park 12. witnessed
4. roadside 13. helped
5. neighbourhood 14. ran away
6. residential area 15. saved
7. way to school 16. escaped
17. advised
modus operandi 😆😆😆 18. warned
19. praised
1. offering sweets to child 20. thanked
2. asking directions 21. promised
3. persuading child 22. kidnapped
22. trying to kidnap
verbs 23. accompanied
1. waiting the bus/parents alone 24. rushed
2. playing alone 25. chased
3. walking alone 26. arrived
4. approached by strangers 27. caught
5. asking questions/directions 28. detained
6. offering sweets toys etc 29. apprehended
7. persuade 30. pulled
8. play tricks / deceive 31. shouted
9. fall into trap
10. feeling afraid/ frightenened Idioms
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1. play trick 4. skate on thin ice
2. close shave 5. watch one's step
3. sailing close to the wind 6. keep your head down
Child safety
Self-protection
Be Safe...A miserable experience
Pic 1
-last Monday after the school, Mira Filzah waited for the bus alone
-day was getting darker n started to rain
-felt worried n afraid
-no sign the bus would be coming sooner
-she wanted to contact her parenrs but she left mobile phone at home
Pic 2
-suddenly a stranger came to her
-asked for the directions to go to the nearby famous beach
-she helped the stranger by giving the directions
-the stranger gave her some sweets n thanked her before leaving
-then she realized that she should not entertain any stranger
-she remembered her teacher who warned n advised her not to get close or entertain any stranger
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Pic 3
-she started to cry loudly
-her friends coincidently came n consoled her
-she told what had happened
-her friends were shocked to hear her story
-they advised her to be more careful next time
-she regretted for her carelessness
-her friend lent her a mobile phone to call her father to fetch her
-her father arrived later n thanked her friends for accompanying his daughter
-he was very grateful n thanked her daughter's friends
-went home safely
-it was a miserable day for Mira Filzah
Mira had just finished her class. She waited for her father at the bus stop. She felt so worried because her
father was late as she was alone.
Moments later, one stranger approached Mira. He asked her for the directions as he had lost his way.
Mira told the stranger the correct directions and he thanked her. He offered Mira some sweets and left
afterwards.
Later, Mira's friends arrived at the bus stop. They saw what Mira had done before and warned her to
avoid talking with stranger. They also advised Mira to be more careful and avoid being alone. One of
Mira's friends lent her a mobile phone to call her father to fetch her. She thanked her friends and
regretted her action.
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FLOOD
Introductory sentences (sample)
1. Last week, it was raining cats and dogs in Kg. Banjir
2. It was a monsoon season in Kg. Banjir and it had been rained for two weeks.
3. Last week, a flood hit Kg Banjir after a heavy downpour which lasted for a few days.
4. Heavy rains and raging thunderstorm bedevil Kg Banjir and within a few hours, the water was knee-deep.
5. Heavy downpours inundated several houses in Kg Banjir.
6. The heavy rain that poured incessantly in Kg. Banjir for

one week had flooded the low-lying areas throughout the
village.
Sentences on VILLAGERS FLEEING
1. As the water rose rapidly, the villagers were evacuated

quickly.
2. The affected residents were transported in a rescue bot to

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the flood evacuation centre 5. The carcasses were scattered everywhere.
3. Some villagers living in low-lying areas near the river 6. After the flood waters receeded, the villagers found a great
banks were the first group evacuated. shock as the masses and damages were seen everywhere.
4. The rescuers worked hard in transporting the affected Concluding sentences

villagers.
1. The affected villagers returned home from the flood
5. The villagers were fleeing their village to the flood evacuation centre.
evacuation centre.
2. The unfortunate residents went home from the flood
6. Some residents were taken in a rescue boat to the flood evacuation centre in great despair.
evacuation centre.
3. The evacuees were finally allowed to return home after the
Sentences on flood consequences flood subsided.
1. Some houses were submerged in the flood waters while 4. The villagers were grateful that the flood was over and
houses erected near the river banks were completely swept they could return home and continue their daily life.
away.
5. After a week of great misery taking shelter in the flood
2. The flood waters inundated the houses for almost a week. evacuation centre, the evacuees returned home.
3. Many cattles were died in the flood and the villagers' 6. It was indeed the worst flood they have ever experienced
vegetable farms were completely washed away. in their entire life.
4. Thick mud and debris blocked the roads and caused a few New Vocab
to collapse.
1. incessantly: never stopping, especially in an annoying or
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unpleasant way -rescued
-evacuated
2. evacuate: to move people from a dangerous place to -moved
somewhere safe -sacrified
-worked hard
3. recede : to move further away into the distance -saved
Prior lessons (Vocab Acquisition) 3. Flood/water/rain
Subjects n their verbs -rose

-flooded
1.The villagers -swept away
-damaged
-worried -destroyed
-scared -subsided
-moved -rained
-evacuated -caused
-took shelter
-lost belongings Vocabulary related to flood aftermath
-felt grateful
-thanked rescuers Nouns (people)
-returned home
-cleaned the house 1. Villagers
-rebuilt the house 2. Residents
3. Neighbours
2. Rescuers 4. Evacuees
5. Rescuers
-helped 6. Headman
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7. Volunteers
Adjectives
Nouns
1. Shocked
1. Debris 2. Terrified
2. Carcasses 3. Lost
3. Wreckage 4. Destroyed
4. Mud 5. Damaged
5. Landslide 6. Fallen
6. Mess 7. Scattered
7. Chaos 8. Muddy
8. Disaster 9. Thick
9. Tragedy 10. Devastated
10. Loss
Idioms
Verbs
1. go to pieces: Maslang went to pieces when he saw his
1. Subsided house was completely destroyed after the flood.
2. Returned
3. Repaired 2. groan inwardly: On his return from the flood evacuation
4. Rebuilt centre, when Maslang saw the mess in his house, he groaned
5. Cleaned inwardly because he believed that being grateful for his life
6. Cleared is the greatest motivation in that tough situation.
7. Fixed
8. Distributed
9. Donated
10. Helped
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HOUSE BREAK-IN / HOUSE ROBBERY
Bhn 15 Ogos 2015.
House break-in
Incident
Intro
-Ali n Abu are best friends
-they are also good neighbours
-live in the same neighbourhood
-always get together
-study n play together
-love football n both of them represent their school team
-they are nice n responsible boys
-always help friends n neighbours in need
Picture 1
-one bright lovely evening,both wanted to go to school field for a football practice
-they prefer walking because their school is just a stone's throw from their house
-the weather was perfect n they were very excited to reach the field
-they passed by one of their neighbpur's house
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-it was Encik Aman's house
-he was not around at that time
-both Ali n Abu saw two men were approaching the house
-they looked very suspicious
-Ali n Abu felt something bad would happen
Picture 2
-they hid behind the hedges n looked very worried n afraid
-they saw both men were trying to break into Encik Aman's house
-they used force to enter by breaking the main door
-Ali n Abu called the police to inform about the thieves
-they kept monitoring the thieves
Picture 3
-the police in a patrol car arrived in 10 minutes
-the thieves were very shocked n had no way to escape
-they were finally caught n brought to the police station
-the police officers praised Ali n Abu for their quick action n responsible action
-both of them were grateful n felt proud of themselves
-they continued to go to their school for the football practice.
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VANDALISM
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vandalism
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merdeka
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SCHOOL QUARREL
2 Sept 2016 old notes
School quarrel
Ahmad Bashah had a football practice yesterday with his friends. They were selected to represent their school in
Inter School Football Competition. They were trained by their dedicated coach, Encik Mahathir.
Ahmad Bashah was very physical on that day. He had accidentally tackled Mukhriz's leg and had caused him to
slip and fall. Muhkriz was groaning in great pain.
Ahmad Bashah immediately apologised to Mukhriz but to his shock, he was punched. They traded punches until
their coach came to reconcile them.
Both later were advised and they had regretted for their hot temper attitude.
They resumed the practice and went home an hour later.
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ADVENTURE SPORTS (YEAR 5)
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TOXIC WASTE DISPOSAL / ILLEGAL DUMPING
Theme: Saving the environment / Go Green / Crimes
Topic: Illegal Waste/Toxic Dumping/ Trash Dumping
Where:
1. river
2. sea
3. remote area
4. deserted place
What they dump:
1. toxic waste
2. hazardous waste
3. chemical waste
4. trash / garbage
Who the culprit:
1. irresponsible factory worker
2. irresponsible villagers
Who see the incident:
1. villagers
2. group of boys fishing
3. fisherman
4. witness
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What they do next:
1. call the police
2. report the incident
3. informed headman / police
4. gather the villagers
5. catch the culprits
Moral values:
1. saving the environment
2. love the river
3. combat illegal dumping
4. be responsible
5. cooperate with authorities
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SHARING MONEY
Intro
-Najib is twelve years old
-studies at SK Marikh Jaya
-lives at Taman Marikh Jaya
-wants to be an astronaut
-loves to eat spicy fried noodles
Pic 1
-one day during recess he wanted to eat spicy fried noodles
-many pupils were queuing up
-was crowded n noisy
-everyone bought their meals
-Najib joined in the queue
-he bought a plate of fried noodles n a glass of carrot juice
Pic 2
-looked for a place to sit n enjoy the meal
-all seats were occupied he had to wait
-suddenly saw one vacant seat n he rushed to get it before other pupils took it
-he walked carelessly n dropped his plate of spicy noodles
-his glass of carrot juice too fell onto the floor
-he was very shocked n sad
-he had no money to buy new one
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Pic 3
-in a blink of an eye, his childhood friend, Rosmah came
-she offered him a new plate of spicy noodles.
-Najib was very happy n relieved
-he apologised for his carelessness
-he was very grateful for having a kind friend like Rosmah
-he thanked Rosmah for her kind deed
-they then enjoyed their meals together
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SHARING MONEY
It was recess time so, Debby and Debok went to the canteen. They walked quickly and did not want to
miss their favourite meal. As they were walking, out of the blue they heard a sound. A girl was crying
loudly as she lost her pocket money.
They felt sorry for the poor girl. Debby and Debok took their money to treat a meal for the poor girl as
they believed that sharing is caring. The girl stopped crying and enjoyed the meal. The poor girl was
grateful to them. Both Debby and Debok were proud of themselves.
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RECYCLING CAMPAIGN
One day, Mira and Filzah were walking towards the library. Suddenly they noticed a poster
about an Inter School Recycling Competition. Both were surprised because the winning
school would be getting laptops.
Their headmaster called all the teachers and pupils. He briefed all about the competition and tasked
everyone with specific duties. Mira and other pupils started collecting all the recyclable items.
Mira could not wait any longer for the results. During the assembly, the headmaster proudly
announced that her school had won the competition. Their school was appeared in the newspaper as
the winner. Everyone was happy and proud.
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HELPING OLD PEOPLE / DISABLED PEOPLE / PHYSICALLY CHALLENGED PEOPLE
Theme: Helping the elders
Subject:
1. elders
2. old lady/woman
3. old citizen
4. physically disabled people
5. widowed
Where:
1. bus stop / taxi stop
2. market
3. on the bus
4. roadside
5. house
Scenarios:
1. elders wanted to cross the busy road
2. elders carrying heavy basket
3. elders offered a seat on a bus
4. cleaning elder's house
5. repairing elder's house
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6. raising a fund for the elders
7. visiting elders
Moral values:
1. kindness
2. responsible
3. caring n loving
Helping the elderly people
Mira is an old woman. One fine day, she was waiting for a bus to go home after shopping at the market. She
carried with her two big, heavy rattan baskets full of kitchen stuff.
The bus arrived minutes later and she immediately got on and looked for the seat. There were many passengers
on the bus and unfortunately no empty seat for her.
Suddenly one boy who was sitting at the back
called Mira. She turned around and the boy then
offered his seat to her. She sat and thanked the boy for
his good deed.
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Theme : Disaster
1. Natural Disasters
✔️ Flood
✔️ Flash Flood
✔️ Thunderstorm
2. Environmental Disasters
✔️ Pollutions
✔️ Deforestation
✔️ Toxic Waste Disposal / Illegal Dumping
3. Road or Traffic Disasters
✔️ Vehicle Collisions
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✔️ Hit and Run
✔️ One's Negligence (fell etc)
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2016
Q1: Incident
Q2: Normal Story
Trend : I vs NS
2017
Q1: Normal Story
Q2: Incident
Trend: NS vs I
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2018
Q1: Normal Story
Q2: Incident
Trend: NS vs I
2019 (Forecast)
Q1: Incident
Q2 : Normal Story
Trend : I vs NS
Forecast Topics
Incidents
1. Flood
2. Kidnapping
3. Bully
4. Theft
5. Injuries
Normal Story
1. Gotong-royong
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2. School Activities
3. Hobbies

SCHOOL GOTONG-ROYONG
*ENVIRONMENT*
Year 4: Work Hard, Work Smart (school
Gotong-royong)
Year 6: Go Green (Recycle)
*Brainstorming Activity*
*Topic: Gotong-royong*
*😆Where*
-house (compound, living room, backyard)
-school area / compound , classroom
-community or village or neighbourhood
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*😆Focus* -grass cutter
-lawnmower
-cleanliness -plastic bags
-cooperation -lots more
-safety
-unity *😆Verbs*
-healthy lifestyle
-save the environment -organized
-held
*✂Tools n equipment* -briefed
-grouped
-hoe -divided
-rake -brought
-axe/ax -began
-blade/knife -started
-sickle -cut
-shears -trimmed
-saw -chopped
-shovel -sawed
-trowel -washed
-gloves -cleared
-broom -picked up
-dustpan -collected
-wheelbarrow -put
-spade -threw
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-swept -changed
-raked -lots more
-pushed
-carried *😆Incidents during gotong-royong*
-lifted -stepped on blunt objects
-wiped -stung by snake, bee, ants etc
-arranged -fell from ladder, tree, roof etc
-hung -cuts n burns
-painted -heavy objects fall on legs
-repaired -knocked by hammer
-removed -eh mcm2 lagi lah
-cleaned
-gathered *😆Idioms*
-burnt -many hands make light work
-dug -hand in hand
-buried
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Camping with Incident - Fire
It was already late when they were busy preparing the meal for the dinner. They lit (lighted)
the fire and started cooking. The wind blew strongly and caused some sparks to spread.
They were all panicked and their scout master immediately ordered them to stop the fire. They were
all relieved and felt grateful that the fire did not spread and destroy their tents.
The scout master was very angry and he had warned everyone to be more watchful in the future.
They cleaned the mess and enjoyed their dinner happily.
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CAMPING
A group of adventurous boys went for a camping at a cool and refreshing waterfall.
Once they found a suitable spot, they pitched up their tent under a shady tree. The weather was
perfect on that day and without any delay, they collected some sticks around the camping area.
Their leader was busy fishing at the river while one of them lit the fire and boiled the water. They
grilled the fish and enjoyed eating it. They set the campfire and played some games. One of them
played the guitar while the others were singing their favourite songs.
DAY 8
AN
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ESSAY A DAY REVISION
SCHOOL TRIP
1. Normal trip
2. Trip with an incident (punctured tyre)
A trip to Teluk Intan Leaning Tower (no picture)
Last school holidays, Jeng and his classmates went to Teluk Intan, Perak to visit the one and only
leaning tower in Malaysia. They were excited once they witnessed with their eyes the uniqueness of
Teluk Intan Leaning Tower.
Everyone grabbed the chance to take the photographs of the tower and they also took selfies in front
of the building. Later, they joined Mr Jing, a tower guide for a quick tour around the building. They
spent almost an hour there learning more about the tower.
After buying some souvenirs, they left the leaning tower with enjoyable moments.
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SCHOOL TRIP
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DAY 21 AN ESSAY A DAY REVISION

FOUND MONEY, WALLET, PURSE, HANDBAG or other valuable items

Mixed tenses in essay writing

Tuko nama kpd Lim.

A trip to Teluk Intan Leaning Tower (no picture)

FIRE INCIDENT - Extra essays

FALLEN TREE ON ROAD

Self Protection: Year 5

Year 5 Unit 6 Self Protection

Be Safe...A miserable experience

Introductory sentences (sample)

1. Last week, it was raining cats and dogs in Kg. Banjir

5. Heavy downpours inundated several houses in Kg Banjir.

6. The heavy rain that poured incessantly in Kg. Banjir for

Sentences on VILLAGERS FLEEING

1. As the water rose rapidly, the villagers were evacuated

2. The affected residents were transported in a rescue bot to

4. The rescuers worked hard in transporting the affected Concluding sentences

Prior lessons (Vocab Acquisition) 3. Flood/water/rain

Subjects n their verbs -rose

HOUSE BREAK-IN / HOUSE ROBBERY

Bhn 15 Ogos 2015.

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DAY 10 AN ESSAY A DAY REVISION

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