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The Glow Instructors set out to design an interactive lesson for primary school
students with the aim of enhancing learning while making the topic fun and relatable. The
lesson entitled The Parts of a Plant was designed to target students aged 7-11 or in Grades 3-
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Evaluators Overview
The project was designed knowing there was a need to test the reliability of the
program in order to meet the needs of the students. The team selected two members from
other groups to fulfill the role of evaluators of the project. Both persons were knowledgeable
in the field of Instructional Design and reported their findings based on their interaction with
our website. The two evaluators chosen for this project were Mr. Michael Reneau and Mrs.
Kanika Cooper-Carrington.
Mr. Michael Reneau highlighted in his feedback that the project was properly put
together and captured the audience that was targeted. On the other hand, Mr. Reneau made
some key observations which needed to be remedied. Mrs. Cooper-Carrington gave the
project a passing grade but also noted some elements which could enhance the overall
project. Further evaluation can be seen in the table located in the Appendix.
Evaluator #1 pointed out issues pertaining to the originality and ingenuity of the program.
Given more time and tools, a more elaborate and inventive program could have been
developed. He also highlighted a very important point of beta testing on various web
browsers to ensure compatibility before launching. Had this comprehensive testing been
carried out, this discrepancy would have been discovered and remedied. This program was
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intended for use by young children and the suggestion for a brighter color scheme will be
taken into account in Glow Instructor’s next kid-friendly interactive project. Evaluator #2
also mentioned the need for the screen presentation to be enhanced and made more attractive
for children and called for the use of authentic video content as opposed to already existing
resources. Glow Instructors have also made note of the necessity to state the production of
original content where applicable so as to remove any ambiguity from the minds of users as
to whether the content is original in nature or externally sourced. The feedback has been duly
received and appreciated and we look forward to revising, developing and launching more
The evaluators pointed out some key areas of the project that were well done and met the
● Content is organized, all the content is relevant and flows in a chronological order.
● All media were properly identified on the storyboard and the application.
● It was evident that there was a vast knowledge of the information shared, and was
● Video, images and other media selected were appropriately used and displayed.
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Things that need revising
The evaluators reports were taken into consideration and feedback on areas that needed to be
reviewed were welcomed and appreciated in order for Glow Instructors to make
improvements.
● The application and storyboard can be seen as originally created by the group,
measuring it to what is out there, the idea isn’t completely original, but it's proven to
be effective.
● It was unclear as to whether the song at the beginning was an original or it was taken
from the internet. More originality is needed where applicable, for example videos,
● The program worked on all Personal Computers, but there was an issue working with
Internet Explorer on some laptops. Perhaps testing of the platform can also be done on
● Graphics chosen was appreciated and matched the topic selected. Perhaps a level of
consistency in the images, either the use of real-life images or only cartoon type
● Screen is properly put together. Perhaps for the target audience more colors would be
needed.
● Screen design was okay, it should be enhanced based on the target audience.
Based on the above identified deficiencies, prescribed revisions were proposed to address
these issues.
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Originality - With reference to boosting the originality of the project, this aspect can be
enhanced by creating our own video instead of referencing YouTube content. For the next
version of our project, we intend to substitute YouTube videos with real-life video content
such as footage of actual plants and interviews with gardeners. It must be noted however, that
the introduction song, narrator (flower image) and navigational tools and buttons were all
originally created by Glow Instructors. Mention will be made of these original creations in
Copyright and documentation - Most sources are properly cited according to APA style;
The images used were graphics from web pages that granted us the right to use their sources
program on various web browsers and not only on various devices. A beta testing of the
project on a plurality of web browsers will be carried out to ensure that the final product is
compatible with and runs efficiently on all Internet browsers. One note though, Internet
Explorer has compatibility problems due to its outdated updates by Microsoft. So the
recommended web browser is 2019 versions of Google Chrome, Firefox or Opera Browser.
Graphic design - The use of cartoon elements were consistent throughout the project both in
imagery and video content. The narrator (Floretta) was created in Photoshop and underwent
rigorous resolution quality controls to ensure the best product possible. The amount of
Screen Design - Revisions would be made to enhance the color scheme of the project, for
example, brighter shades of green to emphasize background leaves and a brighter background
color throughout. It is understood that young learners are attracted to vibrant colors and
imagery which fosters a higher level of engagement with interactive programs such as this.
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Appendix A
Storyboard 4 4 4
Planning
Organization of 4 4 4
Content
Originality 4 4 3
Copyright and 4 4 3
documentation
Format and 4 3 4
Platform
Transferability
Subject 4 4 4
Knowledge
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Graphic design 4 3 3
Mechanics 4 4 4
Screen Design 4 3 3
Use of 4 4 4
Enhancements
Total 40 37 35