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To begin with, it should be acknowledged, albeit with some reservation, that die-
hard anti-globalisation activists are not too far off the mark in their contention that
globalisation has, in fact, disconnected the world that it purports to link. After all, the
polarity inextricably tied with the entire phenomenon is hardly anything new – even pro-
globalisation magazines such as The Economist have openly conceded that one of the
most worrisome impacts of globalisation is its propensity to widen the already substantial
income gap, thus dividing the world into two separate groups, the bountifully rich and the
desperately poor. The reason is simple: globalisation arises from the breathtaking
progress of science and technology, which indubitably allows for a considerably greater
flow of information, capital as well as labour. While such an enhanced flow of vital
resources is often touted by many a globalist, it is scarcely without drawbacks, the most
patent of which is a global downward trend in the wages of unskilled labours, whose
glaring lack of technological know-how has ineluctably put them to an undeniable
disadvantage. The proliferation of sweatshops in cheap-labour countries such as the
Philippines, Bangladesh and China, where illiterate children toil from dawn to dusk just
to eke out outrageously low wages; the soaring inequality in many countries ranging from
sub-Saharan nations to Singapore, as attested to by their escalating Gini coefficients,
which measure the severity of income disparity; the extent to which the poor are mired in
misery around the world – all seem to stand out as unwholesome monuments to the
seemingly divisive nature of globalisation. This being the case, anti-globalisation activists
seem justified in their scathing criticism that globalisation disconnects the world.
Furthermore, it is also possible to take this argument one step further and
scrutinise its inherent assumption that globalisation is the chief culprit that should bear
the blame for the greater conflicts and disunity in the world. Nothing, of course, could be
further from the truth. Even without globalisation, the world in which we live has already
been beset with raging trans-national disputes, since time immemorial. Indeed, the lack of
globalisation may very well turn out to be remarkably more divisive than globalisation
itself – after all, as Paul Krugman and numerous other scholars have noted, prior to the
spread of globalisation, national autonomy was all that mattered in the formulation of
policies that are of paramount importance. It is all too simple to make globalisation the
scapegoat for the disjoint state of today’s world, but to do so would be extremely
inadvisable, even naively crass. That is to say, the premise upon which the assertion in
the question rests is unequivocally dubious, and the assertion, therefore, should not be
agreed upon wholeheartedly.
In conclusion, while there is no denying that the arguments brought forth by anti-
globalisation activists are not entirely baseless and illogical, it remains too reductionistic
to avow that globalisation is only capable of dividing the world. Frankly speaking, while
globalisation may be imperfect, an adamant resistance to this phenomenon, which has
become ‘a fact of life’ (Kofi Anan), may turn out more divisive and detrimental to global
prosperity than globalisation does. Essentially, it boils down to a matter of choice, not
between good and evil, but between two evils, both of which are potentially deleterious,
yet one is indubitably more inimical than the other. Faced with such a choice, it would
certainly serve us well to accept globalisation as a necessary evil that can benefit us
tremendously, rather than look down on it with sheer contempt.
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Examiner’s remark:
An excellent essay; some sharp insights and original opinions. Good structure and use of
knowledge to support your stand. One crucial part missing in your thesis though: explore
the idea of loneliness – disconnection on an individual level – arising due to life in a
crowded, connected metropolis. Excellent command of the language, but some simple
errors; be more careful.