Académique Documents
Professionnel Documents
Culture Documents
Stages in writing
* Pre-writing
* Drafting
* Revising
* Editing, proofreading
* Final drafting
Parts of a report
* Introduction
* Body
* Conclusion
Editing Proofreading
Pre-Writing
In this initial stage of writing which involves planning various sections of your document, you must be
able to answer the following questions:
A. What is my topic? What do I expect my readers to do? What is my purpose?
These questions should be foremost in your mind since they direct you on what to do next. Be
specific of your topic as well as how you are going to expound it.
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B. Who are my readers?
The kind of readers we have can determine the manner in which the report can be written.
Since your reader/s might be other professionals, your superiors or your co-workers, your document
should be easily understood by them.
After considering these questions, you may now organize your ideas in a way that you can best express
them. This organization may be enriched by gathering your data through the following:
A. Primary source
1. Interview
2. Questionnaire
B. Secondary source
1. Textual form
2. Tabular form or statistical tables
Drafting
Drafting is the process of writing your notes as sentences and paragraphs. It shows the relationship
between parts and in some details, how ideas work together. The more specific the information in the first draft
is, the better. When you said what you want to say, then you have to stop. Write freely. Never mind first your
spelling, punctuation marks and grammar. Anyway, your rough draft is for your eyes only.
You must have also to work fast. Leave blanks for words not yet thought or complicated ideas not yet
trimmed down. If you get tired or bored, take a rest. Shift to another work or sleep. Go back to it after
refreshing your mind.
Zall as quoted by Magpayo, et.al. in their Book “Contemporary Technical English” enumerated the
following guidelines to follow when writing the rough draft:
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6. If you get tired or bored, take a break. Figure on a work span of 45 minutes at first and expand it to
your most efficient pace.
7. Try to finish a given segment at one sitting. A break in your train of thought might mean losing a
good idea.
8. Above all, leave time in your schedule for putting your completed rough draft aside for at least one
day before beginning to revise it. This will enable you to take a more critical view.
1. Select the part of the paper that you want to work on.
2. Carefully read your notes relevant to that section.
3. Begin to write what you think might possibly be a relevant set of ideas.
4. When you run out of ideas, go back to your notes and read them again. Use them to stimulate a fresh
flow of thoughts.
5. When you run out of ideas again, and your notes give you no further help, you can begin to work on
some other part of your paper or re-read what you have written so far.
If you choose to go over what you have written so far, you can now begin to change the order of ideas, omit
some ideas, or add new ones; you can now cross out, add to, or change any of the words, phrases, clauses or
sentences.
Revising/Rewriting
In this particular stage, words, sentences, paragraphs and figures and others are changed, deleted, added
or retained as one goes into details into seeing what should be included or not included in the final work.
In this step, you reorganize or improve what you have written. Sentences and paragraphs are checked
along their content, position and structure.
Editing/ Proofreading
Proofreading is the process of checking a draft to make sure that the conventions along paragraph
structure, syntax, diction, usage, spelling, capitalization, punctuation and appearance are correct and
appropriate.
In this stage, you check for errors and see to it that your format and other aspects of technical writing are
followed. These include punctuation, capitalization and usage. It is at this stage that you have to proofread
again and again. Check figures, dates and other data. Remember, one wrong number and it destroys everything.
Check, too, if you documented all your sources.
Since it would be very hard for you to see your own mistakes, you must first detach yourself from your
document so that you can have an objective look at it. Set aside first the document and go back to it with a fresh
mind for you to see your errors immediately. Read the paper aloud. For alternatives, you can use online tools.
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Check again and again the following:
Final Drafting
This is putting the document into its final shape. Binding and cover and the like are taken into consideration
during this last stage of writing.
Introduction
Mackay in his book “Study Skills for Academic Writing” (1994) enumerates the following components
of the Introduction.
A good introduction possesses most of these components. However, it should not be longer than the body. It
should be brief to cover a bird’s eye view of the possible questions of the reader.
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Body
The body should develop the main ideas and issues of the document in a very understandable way. Since
this is the main gist of the document, extra care should be considered along its content, diction and standards.
Conclusion
The following are some suggested components of the conclusion as enumerated by Mackay in his book:
ACTIVITY 6
1. Why is it that, for writers, it is not enough to know the rules of grammar?
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2. What do you think is the particular stage of writing that neophyte writers should focus their attention
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3. Which of the stages of writing do you consider the most difficult? Why?
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7. Is it necessary for technical writers to let their reports be read by others before finally submitting
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9. How does introduction motivate readers to continue reading the whole document?
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10. What is diction? How does it affect the clarity of your report?
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CHAPTER 9
Book
Business plan or proposal
Evaluation report
Feasibility report
Recommendation report
Instruction manual
Organizational policies and procedures
Primary research report
Progress report
Proposal
Technical specification
User guide
BOOK
What is a book?
Microsoft® Encarta® Reference Library 2003 defines book as a bound collection of printed or
manuscript pages sewn or glued together along one side and bound between rigid boards or flexible covers.
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who have helped him/her complete the manuscript.
E. Dedication This mentions the persons who have been the sources of inspiration of the
author/s in completing the manuscript, thus offering the book to them.
F. Table of contents This lists the title of every chapter and the corresponding page numbers.
G. List of figures This provides a breakdown of any or all figures, graphs and similar
illustrations found in the book.
H. Preface This familiarizes the readers to the book by characterizing its content and
purpose, identifying or even briefly describing the contents, explaining
the type of reader for whom it is meant, outlining its main contents,
showing any special conventions or terminology used, and others.
I. Body chapters / These are the actual discussions.
main body
J. Appendices These are additional or supplementary materials.
K. Glossary This contains specialized terms and their definitions. Most glossaries use a
two-column layout. Typically the term and its definition make up a
separate paragraph, with the term lowercase (unless it is a proper
name) and in bold, followed by a period, then the definition in regular
roman.
L. Index Found at the end of the book, this lists the topics discussed in the book,
arranged alphabetically followed by numbers of the pages on which
they are found.
M. Blurb Usually found on the back cover or jacket of a book, this gives a brief
detail about the book and the author.
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Description of the product or service to be offered
Investment offering
Feasibility Report
Recommendation Report
Evaluation Report
What are feasibility reports, recommendation reports and evaluation reports?
The following matrix identifies feasibility reports, recommendation reports and evaluation reports:
Feasibility report This report studies a problem or opportunity and makes a plan on how
to go about it by determining whether it is practical in terms of costs,
technology and manpower. It presents information to prove whether a
project can be done and whether it is viable. This asks the question
"Should we implement Plan X?"
Recommendatio This gives a selection of choices, or both and then recommends one,
n report some, or none. It argues for certain courses of action. This asks the
question "Which option should we choose?" (or in some cases "Which
are the best options?)
Evaluation This report states a studied opinion or judgment on the value or worth
report of a plan or a project. It compares a thing to a set of requirements (or
criteria) and determines how well it meets those requirements. This asks
questions like “Did it work?”, “Was it worthwhile?”
NOTE: The distinctions between these three reports are rather fine and sometimes overlap; they usually use
common elements.
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Examples:
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Traditional plan This starts with background and criteria, then the comparison, and
conclusions and recommendations.
Executive plan This one begins with the conclusions and recommendations and
relegates the full discussion of background, criteria and the
comparisons into appendices.
INSTRUCTION MANUAL
What are instruction manuals?
Instruction Manuals are documents containing explanations, steps or procedures on how to operate,
maintain or repair machinery, how to build, do or assemble things, and how to perform certain actions, or what
to do in certain situations. In some cases, there is also a description of the devices being used or explanations of
principles and theories related to the activity being explained.
II. Number of tasks – Make your tasks brief, simple and clear. Remember that procedure refers to the
whole set of activities your instructions are intended to discuss. This may either be:
A. Simple procedures - consist of only one task like changing the batteries of your
remote control.
B. Complex procedures - consist of tasks which are semi-independent groups of actions
within the procedure. For example, manipulating the CD recording is one task in the
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overall procedure of operating your cassette component which also includes other
tasks.
III. Grouping of similar and related steps - Similar and related steps should be grouped and
renumbered according to phase which is a group of similar steps within a single-task procedure.
In assembling cabinet for example, setting up the frame would be a phase; making the partitions
would be another; furnishing it would still be another.
IV. Groupings of tasks. There may be so many tasks that you must group them so that readers can find
individual ones more easily. For example, the following are common task groupings in
instructions: unpacking and setup tasks; installing and customizing tasks; basic operating tasks;
routine maintenance tasks; troubleshooting tasks; and so on.
A. Task approach – Stating steps for all the major tasks that users may need to perform with the
product.
B. Tools approach – Stating instructions on how to use each button or feature of the equipment.
Fixed-order steps are steps that must be performed in the order presented. For example, if you
are changing the oil in a car, draining the oil is a step that must come before putting the new oil.
Variable-order steps are steps that can be performed in practically any order. Good examples are
those troubleshooting guides that tell you to check this, check that where you are trying to fix
something. You can do these kinds of steps in practically any order.
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Alternate steps are those in which two or more ways to accomplish the same thing are presented.
Alternate steps are also used when various conditions might exist.
Nested steps. In some cases, individual steps within a procedure can be rather complex in their
own right and need to be broken down into substeps.
"Stepless" instructions are instructions that really cannot use numbered vertical list for they are
not steps that should be sequentially followed.
1. Use a lot of imperative sentences which sound like these: "Now, press the Pause button" and
"You should be careful not to ..."
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3. Do not leave articles. Make your sentences complete by including all the needed articles and
other words commonly used in instructions.
4. Use graphics. Sometimes, words simply cannot explain the step. Illustrations are often critical
to readers' ability to visualize what they are supposed to do.
5. Consider your format which may include headings, lists, special notices, and number,
abbreviations and symbols.
Primary research reports present original findings and interpretations from laboratory or field research. It
is the actual work someone does in a laboratory or in the field. In this type of report, you do not only present
your data and draw conclusions about it, but you also explain your methodology, describe the equipment and
facilities you used, and give some background on the problem.
On the other hand, a secondary research report is a report that presents information gained largely from printed
information sources or from other sources such as people.
What are the typical contents of primary and secondary research reports?
The following are the typical contents of primary and secondary research reports:
Parts Contents
Introduction Background or the purpose
Problem, Situation that has led to the research work
background
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Purpose, What you intended to do in the research project
objectives, scope The scope of your work
Review of Literature relevant to your document.
literature
Materials, Things used in detail, providing brand names, model numbers, sizes, and other such
equipment, specifications.
facilities
Theory, methods, Intellectual or conceptual framework of your project.
procedures
Results, findings, Data that you collected
data
Discussion, Interpretation or discussion of your findings.
conclusions, Recommendations or ideas for further research.
recommendations
Bibliography Sources of information you used or consulted in your project.
PROGRESS REPORT
What is a progress report?
Progress Report as the word progress implies informs a supervisor, associate or customer about how far
you have gone on a project over a certain period of time. The time element considered is more than three or four
months.
1. It details accomplishments which may imply that the project is going smoothly, and that it will meet the
expected date.
2. It creates opportunities for the supervisor, associate or customer to evaluate your work on the project
and to request changes since it shows findings on the study.
3. It gives you a chance to discuss problems in the project to forewarn recipients.
4. It motivates you to plan a work schedule to meet the deadline.
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What are the organizational patterns of a progress report?
Since you are considering all the functions of a progress report, you have to report in such a away that
you combine two of these organizational strategies: time periods, project tasks or report topics.
B. Project tasks. This breaks down the project into individual tasks:
C. Report topics. This list down the topics and the explanations on the work you have done, the work
you are currently doing, and the work you have planned follow.
PROPOSAL
What is a proposal?
A proposal is a document which asks the reader to approve, fund or grant permission to do a certain
project. It is a tool in bringing in business or investors, and for initiating projects that can profit the organization
or you as the proposer or both.
What makes a proposal different from feasibility studies is that it asks for approval to start with a
project. Feasibility studies, on the other hand, recommends for approval or disapproval of a certain project after
studying its merits.
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What are the types of proposals?
A. According to Origin/Source
B. According to Purpose
C. According to length
Examples:
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Describe the project and the probable results.
Present a timetable.
State the costs of the project and the resources you need.
Sample Topics:
What are the typical contents and organization of technical background reports?
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Since the content of the technical background report relies on the specific needs or uses of a particular
audience, they do not follow a common set of contents. As a writer, you have to determine what should be
presented. They may include the following:
1. Definitions
2. Causes
3. Effects
4. Types
5. Historical background
6. Processes
7. Descriptions
8. Comparisons
9. Applications
10. Advantages and disadvantages
11. Economic considerations
12. Social, political, legal, ethical implications
13. Problems, questions
14. Solutions, answers
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What are the information included in technical specifications and user guides?
The following information should be included in user guides and instruction manuals:
Parts Information
Instructions Step-by-step directions on how to assemble, operate
or troubleshoot the product.
Precautionary information notes, warning, caution, and even danger notices which represent liability
concerns for the manufacturer of the product.
Reference information User guides typically contain plenty of reference information, but only up to a
certain point. For example, if there are numerous commands, a separate book
for commands is necessary. Reference information in user guides is often
presented in tables.
Getting-started information Brief tutorials that will help new users get acquainted with using the product.
About the product User guides also provide some description of the product, a review of its
essential features or its new features.
Technical background Sometimes, users guides will include technical explanations on how the product
works, what physical or chemical principles are essential to its operation, and so
on.
ACTIVITY 7
1. From the Word Box, supply the deleted items in the definitions.
Word Box
Book Project
Expanding Information
Rules and Regulations Description
Laboratory Instructions
Time Element Tool
2. A __________ is a bound collection of pages dealing with one particular subject matter.
5. Primary research report presents findings and interpretations from __________ or field research.
7. A proposal asks the reader to approve, fund or grant permission to do a certain __________.
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8. Technical background reports provide __________ or a background on a topic in an objective,
organized way.
Identify what parts of the book are described in the following statements.
1. A department Store
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2. Resignation
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B. __________________________________________________________
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C. __________________________________________________________
D. __________________________________________________________
E. __________________________________________________________
3. Bonus
A. __________________________________________________________
B. __________________________________________________________
C. __________________________________________________________
D. __________________________________________________________
F. __________________________________________________________
4. Student Activities
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C. __________________________________________________________
D. __________________________________________________________
E. __________________________________________________________
5. Field Trips
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B. __________________________________________________________
C. __________________________________________________________
D. __________________________________________________________
E. __________________________________________________________
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