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Choose one of the three following prompts and go through all five steps in
order to write a well organized paragraph (5-8 sentences).
1. Name a hero in your life and describe why you consider them your hero.
3. What kinds of qualities does Odysseus have that make him a good leader?
TASK:
B. Write first draft. Put your ideas down in writing and create first paragraph.
C. Revise. On the paragraph, list where you could add details to make your
paragraph more interesting and more understandable. Meet with a partner
and complete a peer edit sheet.
E. Re-write the paragraph with the added details and fixed grammar mistakes.
TURN IN – all parts of the writing process. Make sure your name is on each
page. Staple the pages together.
Capitalization
• Do all sentences begin with a capital letter?
• Do all proper nouns begin with capital letters?
Punctuation
• Are periods and commas used correctly?
• Are quotations punctuated correctly?
Verb Usage
• Do all main verbs agree with the subject in person and number?
• Are verb endings correct?
• Is the verb tense correct?
Noun Usage
• Do regular plurals end in “s”? Are irregular plurals
correct?
• Are articles (“a,” “an,” and “the”) used correctly?
• Is it clear what every pronoun refers to?
Correct Spelling (Be careful of words that sound the same but have different
meanings.)
• What words are misspelled?
• Were those words corrected?
Descriptive Words
• Are words used that give a picture of what is taking place?
• Are transitional words used?
Word Variety
• Do sentences begin with different words?
• Did the writer use a variety of words in each sentence?
Organization
• Is there a main idea sentence?
• Are there detail sentences?
• Does my story has a beginning, middle and end?
• Are the parts of the paragraph in the correct order to make sense?
3. What do you think is the strongest part of the paragraph ?. What makes this
element so strong?
4. Is there a part of the paragraph you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest? Give some
suggestions for how to improve that part?
5. After reading the paragraph, what would you like to know more about? Is there a part that leaves you with
questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this paragraph.
6. Do the ideas of the paragraph follow in logical order? Where can the writer strengthen
logical transitions between sentences?
7. Did you notice any major typos or grammatical issues? Please note anything glaring in this space.
8. Did your partner fulfill all the requirements on the writing process task?
If not, which one or ones still need to be added?