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Anna Gonzales is a patient in your dental practice. Read the case notes
below and complete the writing task that follows.
CASE NOTES
WRITING TASK
Mrs Gonzales reported at my surgery You can delete the final –s because the
today, 13/11/2008 for replacement of her following nouns is plural (i.e. no final –s on
partial dentures. On examination there verbs when used with plurals).
appears white patches on the left side of
her tongue.
Mrs Gonzales had undergone (underwent) Simple past tense is better here because you
partial resection of her tongue, and was are referring to a particular event on a
reported (for what was later confirmed as) particular day rather than a period of time in
cancer, of the tongue on13.08.08. She has the past (for which the past perfect that you
not made any further appointment with have used would be used).
you afterwards, and I am much concerned I suggest this change to try and make it
about the recent developments on (in) her clearer that the cancer was actually
mouth. confirmed–the use of reported is less
definite (i.e. it might have been reported but
later been found to be absent).
These are redundant/unnecessary i.e.
1. we can assume the cancer is of the
tongue because that is what has been
operated on, and
2. the earlier use of present perfect
tense and or further indicate that you
are referring to the time after the
operation.
Preposition choice. (The use of on would be
OK if used with her tongue.)
NB A more general point: the notes make
clear that Mr Murphy is the surgeon who did
the resection so it would be useful to remind
him of this–this would require a change such
as: You may recall that your performed a
partial resection of Mrs Gonzales’ tongue,
for what was later confirmed as cancer, on
13.08.08. She has not …
Could you please examine, diagnose and
treat the patient as you think appropriate.
I shall defer further treatment of partial
denture, until I hear from you.
Thank you for seeing Mrs Gonzales for
me.
Yours sincerely,
Anilkumar Vattekad
Mr. T L Murphy
321 Elizabeth Street
Melbourne 3000
13th November 2008
Dear Mr Murphy
Re: Anna Gonzales, D.O.B. 07.09.1941
I am writing to refer our mutual patient Mrs. Anna Gonzales to you who is suffering from
white spots on the left border of her partially resected tongue.
Mrs. Gonzales presented at my surgery today requesting replacement of worn and
discoloured partial dentures. Clinical examination shows apparent recurrence of white
spots on the left side of the partially resected tongue. As you know, the partial tongue
resection was done three months ago. Carcinoma of the sectioned tissue was confirmed
by pathology report. You would also be aware that Mrs. Gonzales is a smoker, which was
discussed as a probable cause of her tongue cancer.
I think Mrs. Gonzales has not had a follow-up appointment with you for a quite some
time and I am concerned about her tongue's current appearance. I would appreciate your
assessment and management of this patient. I am going to delay further appointments for
the partial dentures until I hear from you.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any further information.
Yours faithfully
Xxxxx