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Duration
1 hours (longer if
Theme
Nature
Subject focus
English
Age group
Upper KS2
Learning objective: To write descriptively, in the style of an author.
necessary)
Resources required
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Seat mats
Outdoor clothing if
necessary
A quiet area outdoors
Suitable natural items to
use
Paper for maps if using
Bird mics/apps to use for
bird song if no birds
around!
Adult Support
Teacher modelling at
beginning of writing task
Adults to circulate and
offer support where
needed
LA and children with
motor skills difficulties
may need scribing
An adult could also work
with less able children to
create a group text.
Extension tasks
Can you write from the
point of view of one of the
pigeons?
SHOULD: Describe their scene in the first person, using similes, adverbs
and adjectival phrases to make their writing come alive.
COULD: Vary the length of their sentences for dramatic impact.
Some could also act as pupil teachers, to help others improve what
they have written.
Starter
Begin lesson with silhouette of Kester riding a stag on screen, taken from
- Class discussion about the image: what do you think it shows? What words would you use
to describe it?
- Quick drama starter activity, in pairs. Imagine you’re this boy… How do you feel? What has
happened to bring you to this point?
Main activity
Read from the beginning of chapter, up to phrase (or from beginning of book to p. 9)…
‘More like the only food company now, since the red-eye came and killed all the animals. Every last one,
apart from the varmints.’
Partner talk: what has happened? What do you think the red-eye is?
Bring back together and discuss. (Children may wish to relate discussion to the starter image- how
is the boy riding a stag, if all the animals are gone? If not, this will be discussed later)
Explain the situation, using the following quote which is from p.15-6:
‘The red-eye wasn’t a bomb though, it was a disease. A disease worse than a nuclear bomb, if you
ask me. ‘Like… animal flu,’ Dad said. A flu that turned animal bodies and brains to mush and, just
before they died, made their eyes burn bright red like they were on fire… (N)o one really knew
where it had come from. And before anyone could find out, the virus had spread everywhere. Not
just to the animals we ear, but to nearly every living creature- wild animals, pets, animals in zoos-
right around the world it went- till the jungles were full of bodies, birds fell out of the air and fish
floated in silvery slicks on top of the sea.
It killed all the animals in the world.’
As a class, suggest ideas and mindmap what a world with no animals would be like. (Could discuss
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effects, eg no pollinators= no flowering plants; no fresh fruits; etc).
Generate a class list of vocabulary, eg…
devastated; dismal; silent; grey; unnatural; eerie; abnormal; etc
(Display as learning resource for rest of lesson)
Explain to the class that the book is written in the first person from Kester’s point of view, but
they’re now going to be writing from their own point of view, imagining and describing they’ve
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stepped out into a world without animals, using the vocab and ideas they’ve just discussed.
Hotseat teacher in role- children to ask questions: eg What can you see? What can you hear?
Teacher can extend answers, using descriptive language to inspire pupils.
Children to orally rehearse in pairs. Imagine they have stepped out into a world with no animals,
and describe to partner what’s around them.
Choose strong individuals to repeat in front of class, and note down key language/phrases.
Model a paragraph to pupils, and pick out success criteria with children
-First person; descriptive and emotive language; similes; short sentences for dramatic impact;
adverbials; focus on senses, etc.
(NB- If the combination of first person and descriptive writing is too much for some less able
writers, then focus on descriptive phrases and sentences instead, as that is the key skill here. LA, or
less keen, writers could also work with an adult to create a group piece.)
Then, pupils to draft their own version! If completed, they could write up using the frame provided.
Mini plenary: share with a partner- give them 2 things you liked, and 1 to improve.
Plenary
At the end of the lesson, take pupils outside. Ask them to close their eyes and listen to the
sounds of nature- what can they hear? Now, imagine that they lived in Kester’s world.
How would what we hear be different?
Discuss elements of the way we live that could contribute to animals disappearing- global
warming, over-farming, deforestation, etc… Talk about living more sustainably in order to
avoid this!
Now return to original cover image- if all of the animals are gone, how can there be a
stag?
Read p.29-31 (pigeons): What do children think happens next?
Follow up activities
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