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Exercise 5 Correct run-on sentences and comma splices in the following paragraphs.
Benefits of Baking
‘There are many ways to reduce stress in your life@ne of the best ways I have
found is through baking, t takes your mind off your everyday problems and
redirects your energyyand you become creative and productive.
‘The benefits of baking include’the pleasure you derive from being creative and
the gratitude you receive from the people who are the recipients of your efforts, /ke
cookies, praise is never hard to swallow. é
Baking also has a down siagit often happens that once people discover that
stress for you equals baked goods for them They begin to find ways to increase your
stress} for examplgyou are assigned to many committees suddenly. The solution?
Ihave not had time to figure it out yet, am too busy baking.
17.3.2 Fragments
Have you ever tried to be concise and put end punctuation after a phrase or dependent
clause, creating an incomplete sentence? These incomplete sentences, known as fragments,
may have a subject and a verb, but they cannot stand alone as complete thoughts or
§ sentences.
° Important: Fragments are considered one of the worst writing errors. Learn what fragments
are and how to avoid them.
You can correct sentence fragments in two ways:
1. Connect the fragment to an independent clause.
Incorrect; had a hard time getting up this
morning. Aithough-+sleptwelHiast
Correction: had a hard time getting up this
morning although | slept well last
night.
2. Change the fragment to an independent clause.
Incorrect: She was born in Northwoods. A-srall
Lown-with-ne-steplight-en Main
‘Street:
Correction: ‘She was born in Northwoods. It is a
small town with no stoplights on Main Street.
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Exercise 6 Read the following short essay and underline the nine fragments. The first one has been
17.3.3
done for you,
My“To Do’ List
Ustart off every weekend with a long “To Do" Ist. nergy. On Friday
night, | reward myself by relaxing, I might watch a movie or go out with my friends,
Or even stay home and read a book,
When Saturday morning rolls around, | take advantage of the opportunity to
sleep in, By noon I'm up and ready to tackle the items on my list. { do a load of
laundry and then head for the grocery store. Where I spend time lookit
luscious tropical ruts and choosing some for my Sunday breakfast.
-During the ate afternoon. finish the laundry and usually discover my enerav
level has dropped. I'm going out iater, so I take a quick nap. Although I haven't
finished my chores. Suddenly, it's Sunday. Before I know it, I read the paper and
enjoy a leisurely breakfast. I check my “To Do” list to see what else I can accomplish.
But I'm always shocked. Here it is, mid-afternoon on a Sunday. Too late to start a
new project. I might as well finish reading the paper. And think about writing a new:
1e go?
list again next week. Where does weekend
Sentence Punctuation
Sentence punctuation helps you create the meaning you want. It also tells readers how to
read a sentence, so learning how to use punctuation correctly is essential. Listed here are
six of the major punctuation marks that you will need to write correct sentences—period,
comma, semicolon, colon, apostrophe, and quotation marks. If you want more detailed
information than you find here, it is a good idea to consult an in-depth style and writing
guide or grammar reference.
1. Period
+ Indicates a full stop at the end of a sentence
1 am thinking about going to graduate school next year.
* Used at the end of an abbreviation
Dr. Ballard has a Ph.D. in linguistics.
2. Comma
«Separates items in a series
We have meat, cheese, and bread for lunch.
+ Separates independent clauses connected by a coordinating conjunction
The car needs gas, but it does not need any windshield wiper fluid.
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