The Charge Of The Light Brigade

It was the dawn of death when my brother and i first joined the
Light Brigade,
my brother carter was brave and more courageous than I, I had about the
same looks as
him too, shaggy brown hair, and tall, but he was more agressive than me.
"I cant wait
till out first battle James What about you?" Well even though i was nerv
ous of the
thought of a battle I answered"Yeah cant wait"."Hey you two!'yelled a vo
ice over yonder
a more experinced soldier that was shorter than me and had blonde hair"h
ey im Edd short
for Eddward, so you guys new rucruits or what?""Yeah this is my brother
Carter and im
James". After an odd conversation of politics and modern warfare, I hard
a cruel sounding
voice say" Hey you new guy come here and take my bags to the barracks!".
The face of this
guy was cruel looking also, he had a scar running down his cheeck throug
h his mouth and
to his chin. At first i thought he was talking to me but i relized he wa
s talking to Carter
" I aint carrying your bags!"Whad' you say punk?'" I said go carry yer'
own bags!" The
other guy started to roll up his sleve whene Edd said"Sloan take it eady
on him hes new"
Carter also started to roll up his sleves whene they were abot to collid
e a tall man on a
brown war horse stoped right inbetween them, by the look of his uniform
i could tell he was
of high athourity."What do you think you'r doin' Sloan!? you had better
go along now or ill
comision you to latrin cleaner for the restof the month!!""y-y-y-yes sir
!"Slaon left us and
scurred of to a nearby barrack."sorry bout' that fellows my names Eric s
econd in command
of the Light Brigade." "Theier new recruits captian" said Edd."Well nice
to have you aboard
and what might yer' names be?"Carter and James"carter said."well boys yo
u batter be gettin'
your bags packes will be leaving by sunrise tommorow, we just recieved o
rders from the General
to charge the Russian base.over night i though horrible things about the
battle and i told carter
about how i was nervous and he said" dont worry ill make shur nothing ha
ppins to you litle bro"
then he fell asleep and soon me. the next morning as i was saddling my b
ag a slodier came over
to me" names Quimby you?" "james" "nice to meet you this your fisrt batt
le" "yeah hop it isnt
my last ethier" youll be alright the battle are tough and grusome. but
im sure youll make it"
even thought im sure he was trying to calm my nerves.. he didnt really h
elp. carter came over
and said " dont worry it wont be tough be side ill be next to ya to help
protect ya" " well
 i know i can trust you but the thought of cannon balls and swords flshi
ng frihtins me"
"ATTENTION!!!!" it was the leader of the light Brigade colonel thompson"
Alright men weve been
throught a tough fit but our orders from the general are to charge the r
ussians mane base
itll be tough, many of you wont make it out ethier.. but i know we will
succede""know lets
ride!!!!!!!" we all got onto are horses and rode to what i was consideri
ng the valley of death.
we were riding in untill we came accros a hill from there we saw they wh
ole russian base
they started firing there cannons at us then the eric said charge! we al
l ran down
and there was a collision of blades and bullets. one russian soldier sla
shed his sword at be
i deflected it and carter shot him in the chest."nice team work!" i yell
ed pf the roar
of the battleas i faught my way throught many saoldiers i noticed carter
s left arm was bleedin
he had been sut...he was fighting of two russian soldiers whene was chr
ginf towards him so
I could help him but before i got there one russian soldier stabbed him
in the stomach"NOO!!"
i screamed then faught of several soldiers defending his body whene the
battle raored deeper
ino the base i relized we were losing and i would have to get a head str
at to our base. as i
set him on the.............that i had made from scratche pices of cloth
and sticks whene i
set him on it he said "brother be strong..." and then he died i was alm
ost to out base whene
i herd the yells and the horses of the light brigade as they were retrea
ting from the russians
whene i reached the base the medics took carter while they looked me ov
er for any fatile
wounds as i looked at my brother i whispered under my breth"the Charge o
f the Lightbrigade was a
futile attempt..."