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EXT. SAVOY HOTEL . DAY

Miniva and lotson are coming out of the lawyers office and he
is explaining their predicament.

LAWYER
So like i said there is little or
nothing i can do to change things
the only way things can change is
in the case i explained to you.

LOTSON
This is not good,

MINIVA
Mr mwemba am sure there is
something which can be done

LAWYER
As i said there is only one way you
will have access to the accounts
that is if all the kids are dead or
they disappear but since it is
comfirmed that all of them plus the
deceaseds elder brother are still
living there is nothing i can
do,now if you can excuse me i have
a client waiting.

The lawyer leaves and lotson looks more worried and


disappointed than miniva who looks a bit calm

CUT TO:

INT.KATWISHIS HOUSE. DAY


The kids are in the living room,belinda is fliping through
the channels on tv,mark is on the phone checking mails on
face book and jr is just not in the socializing mood as he
paces about.

BELINDA
Whats your problem why cant you
just sit

JR
I dont wnat to sit,when you called
you said it will just be a couple
of minutes we have been here 40
mins and he is still not here
2.

MARK
You heard he said he had a break
down why cant you just be patient

JR
Unlike you i have things to do,i
cant just sit here idly waiting for
some man

BELINDA
Jr can you just shut up and wait

JR
I don't want to sit, matter of fact
am off

Just as junior is about to go katwishi walks in, forcing Jr.


to go back and sit

KATWISHI
Hey sorry for keeping you waiting
for all this time, I had a serious
tire bust, other wise am glad all
of you managed to show up as what I
want to share with you is very
important.

INT.THE JOINT . DAY

The waiter has just delivered some drinks

MINIVA
I cant believe that bastered made
me last in his will
LOTSON
What do you mean you cant believe
you assured me that you had
persuaded him to change everything
in your name.

MINIVA
So now you think I made it all up

LOTSON
Am not saying you made it all up
all am saying is you should have
ensured that everything was in
order before you became comfortable
3.

MINIVA
I did all I could, you heard what
the lawyer said it was a day before
he died when he changed everything
how was I to know

LOTSON
This not good, this is not good at
all.

MINIVA
Lets just put our heads together
and find a solution still have some
time.

LOTSON
I don't have time miniva,we have a
new MD at the company and if I
don't pay back the money I got
swindled in the black dollar
business ill be in shit.

MINIVA
So what do you want me to do,find
all your brothers kids and eat them
up?

INT.KATWISHIS HOUSE.

Katwishi as just gotten a beer from the fridge and comes to


sit

KATWISHI
Your father was a very kind man, he
did everything he could to help the
family that is because he never
wanted to see anyone suffer,
unfortunately we live in a perveted
world where those who do good will
always face unthinkable tragedies
wish i was in the position to tell
you exactly what happened to your
father, or why who ever did that to
him did it. but What I can assure
you is that as long as I live I
will make sure that the killers of
my brother are brought to book and
they pay for what they did.
4.

BELINDA
But uncle you heard the police
said,it was an attempted robbery
which went bad.

KATWISHI
The police made those assumptions,

JR
For them to assume,it means they
had done their home work.

KATWISHI
Jr do you honestly think that if it
was a robbery the thieves could
have been in so much hurry that
they just shot your dad and only
took his phones and everything
which was in the car.

MARK
So you are saying, there is some
one who wanted my father killed?

KATWISHI
Exactly

BELINDA
But why would some one want my
father dead,he was good to everyone

JR
You were not always there you cant
tell for sure, maybe he pissed off
the wrong people,
MARK
My dad was a very honest man

JR
Then explain why he was excuted

KATWISHI
The bottom line is,something
sinister happened to your dad,and i
have a very bad feeling about this
all situation,whoever did that to
your dad,might want to come for you

BELINDA
Uncle what are you talking about?
5.

MARK
Do you mean the person who killed
dad wants to kill us too,but why?

JR
Was the old man involved in
something illegal.

KATWISHI
Am not certain ,its just a matter
of taking precautions, look despite
the fact that all of you were born
from different mothers,your father
loved you and i want you to start
looking out for each other, as long
as am around ill make sure i do
what i can to protect you ,just
promise you will take care and stay
away from trouble

JR
If my dad was into some nasty shit
why cant you just come out, instead
of beating about the bush. he is
dead he aint coming back is he?

KATWISHI
Jr what is important here is to
honour the spirit of your father
and make sure,you stay out of
trouble and if you see anything
suspicious make sure you call me,
dont trust any one

JR
Anyone, so that means you included,
look i have things to do i thought
you will call us here to discuss
when we will be sharing the money
dad left

MARK
This was equally important, i mean
what good will be your money if
something happened to you.

BELINDA
And why do you always want to be
difficult for nothing
6.

JR
You dont get it,this right here is
a waste of time for me,as far as am
concerned the only thing that
connected us is gone, so from here
on to me you are just strangers,so
make sure the next time you call me
you should my cheque am out

JR GETS UP AND STORMS OUT OF THE ROOM,BELINDA GETS UP AS WELL


TRYING TO STOP,BUT HE SLAMS THE DOOR AND OFF HE GOES

BELINDA
Jr can you come back here

KATWISHI
Let him go,just remember everything
i have told you and don't forget
that anytime am here for you

CUT TO:

INT. LOTSONS HOUSE. NIGHT

The door flings open and a deranged lotson walks in and after
shutting the door he walks over to the living room and throws
the car keys on the table as the wife comes in.

MAJORY
I have been trying to call you all
day,why were you ignoring my calls

LOTSON
I have told you that ,if i dont
pick then it means am busy

MAJORY
But how come you picked up the call
when i used another number?

LOTSON
Look am not in the mood of being
interrogated have had a very bad
day

MAJORY
What does she really want from you?

LOTSON
What are you talking about?
7.

MAJORY
Bashi mateo that woman is poison,
and people are talking, they are
rumors that she hired the people
who killed the husband.

LOTSON
This is what i dont understand, why
do you like making this up,are you
the police to find her guilty of
that crime

MAJORY
I dont have to be the police, but
people cant just be talking

LOTSON
I know you hate but,i dont want you
to go on accusing an innocent woman
for what she didnt do,let it be the
last time

MAJORY
Do you know what happened to her
last husband?

LOTSON
I told you to leave her alone,the
poor woman is still morning the
husband and there you go accusing
her of committing a crime she had
no hand in,what is wrong with you?

MAJORY
What makes you think she is
innocent,is it because you are
sleeping with her?

LOTSON
You are sick

He gets up and walks away as majory screams at him

MAJORY
What kind of a normal human being
sleeps with the deceased brothers
wife barely two months after his
death. i Wouldn't even be surprised
to hear that you are acting
together, shame on you.

CUT TO:
8.

INT. MINIVAS HOUSE.NIGHT

She comes from the kitchen with a plate of salads already on


the phone with the lawyer

MINIVA
Come on mr mwemba work with me
here,its not like am asking you to
turn water into wine,all am saying
is we can reach a compromise,i know
its not right but who cares about
what is right when the rewards are
this tempting ,all am saying is be
on our side and ill make sure i put
a smile on your face,i need that
will changed to the way it was
before my husband changed it,i know
its a big decision just promise me
you will sleep over it,thank you
and good night

After hanging up she ponders for a while before dailing the


phone again and as it connects she sits down

MINIVA (CONT’D)
Where are you?ok Am coming over i
want to see you.

CUT TO:

INT. BELINDAS ROOM. NIGHT

The tv is on and Belinda is laying on jacks chest.

BELINDA
I cant believe you made me watch
this horror movie

JACK
Its not even that scary

BELINDA
Are you kidding me,ill come and
dream those creatures,and you wont
even be here when am having night
mares

JACK
All you have to do is call and ill
come rushing
9.

BELINDA
Babe i wanted to ask you
something,but then again its fine
ill just ask some other time.

JACK
Come on just ask,you know you can
ask me anything

BELINDA
Its ok dont worry,lets just watch
the movie

Jack makes her to face him

JACK
Come on just ask am here for you

After a brief hesitation then a deep sigh

BELINDA
I,i was just wondering if you still
feel the same way you felt about me
the same way you did when we first
met.

JACK
Baby i will always love you and
nothing will ever change that.

BELINDA
But then why havent you proposed or
just shown me some form of
commitment that this is not just
some game we are playing
JACK
There we go again

BELINDA
Baby i just want some
assurance,people are asking and am
not getting any younger

JACK
This is between you and me and no
body else,why do you always have to
put other people into this?

BELINDA
Because they are watching moreover
its not just other people its my
familly
10.

JACK
Well i have family too but do you
hear them poking their nose into my
business

BELINDA
Maybe its because you havent told
them what you are looking for,i
just want to get some assurance,is
that too much to ask

JACK
You know what i dont have time for
this am out of here

BELINDA
See what you do,why is it that
everytime i raise this subject you
storm out.

Jack walks away without looking back,as she tries to follow


but he slams the door in her face.

BELINDA (CONT’D)
Jack! Jack ! Can we just talk about
this.

After he goes she leans by the door for a while then walks
back to where they were.

CUT TO:

INT.KATWISHIS HOUSE.

THE VIOLENT BANG OF THE DOOR IS HEARD IN THE BACKGROUND AS


MR.katwishi GETS IN THE LIVING ROOM FOLLOWED BY THE WIFE, WHO
IS THROWING A TANTRUM AND HE IS TRYING TO AVOID HER,

HE PICKS UP THE KEYS TO THE CAR BUT AS HE IS ABOUT TO GO OUT


SHE INTERCEPTS HIM.

MRS.KATWISHI
You are such a looser, I can't even
believe am still here, am talking
to you and you walk out on me who
do you think you are
11.

KATWISHI

Why do you always find it easy to


insult me even when you know you
are wrong?

MRS. KATWISHI
So If I find money in the house and
use it that is a crime which you
have to be yuppy yapping about like
you are a small boy

KATWISHI
Our child needs to be in school,
and if I don't pay, then she won t
be allowed back in class, is that
going to make you happy

MRS KATWISHI
Who is more important in this house
me or your so called daughter

KATWISHI
How can you ask such a question?

MRS KATWISHI
You have made your choice, so I
don't ever want to see you in the
bedroom, you will see what I'll do
to you, and you will be sleeping
with your daughter

KATWISHI
Why are you so heartless, how do
you expect me to sleep with my
daughter

MRS KATWISHI
Get lost

CUT TO:
12.

I/E. LOTSONS HOUSE .NIHGT

Miniva has just knocked and majory comes from the inside to
the open the door and after opening she puts up a disgusted
face upon seeing miniva

MINIVA
Yes bana mateo,is your husband in?

MAJORY
Is there any problem?

MINIVA
No not at all, there is just some
thing which came up and i need to
consult with him

Majory hesitates for a while before going in to call lotson

LOTSON
Who is there?

MAJORY
You see what i told you,now she is
even following you at awkward hours
what does she want

LOTSON
My friend can you just go and watch
tv if you have got nothing sensible
to talk about.

Majory gives him a devilish look as he goes to where miniva


is standing just by the door

MINIVA
And whats her problem?

LOTSON
She doesnt like you,and you showing
up this time has just made
everything worse

MINIVA
She will get over it

LOTSON
So whats the story

CUT TO:
13.

INT.BELINDAS ROOM .DAY

She is on the phone pacing about trying to get hold of jack


who is not responding

She cuts the line and then again its the same thing and after
a while she throws the phone on the chair,she ponders for a
second then she picks up the phone and calls alick

BELINDA
Hi alick belinda here,am good,yah i
know long time indeed, listern
sorry to call you this late just
wanted to find out if jack is with
you,oh ok.ah When you see him just
tell him to call me i really want
to talk to him ok thanx again bye.

CUT TO:

I/E. LOTSONS HOUSE. NIGHT

Lotson just pushes the door as he draws closer

MINIVA
Look from the look of things, we
stand to loose everything if we
dont act fast enough and the time
is now.

LOTSON
I know,but dont you think it is
complicated already and that will
only make things worse
MINIVA
I spoke to the lawyer before coming
here i know i can convince to delay
the reading of the will to the
entire family for a week or two
.but You need to arrange your man
so that he can do the job in 24hrs

LOTSON
Much as that is the only solution,
it will raise a lot of suspicions
,besides my foolish brother is
already snooping around
14.

MINIVA
Do you want the money or not? Mind
you i still can survive and lead a
fairly good life even without that
money, but the same cant be said
for you. we Have come a long way,
dont give up now

Lotson looks troubled as miniva assures him

MINIVA (CONT’D)
Look as soon as we get the money we
can take off and disappear,that way
even if they suspect us we will be
no where to be found.just call your
man let him get on the first flight
tell him he will get 3/4 of the
money the rest when the job is done

LOTSON
Ok,ill do that,but do you have the
money ready?

MINIVA
That is not a problem,ill call the
bank manager as soon as i get home
so that he can get the money ready
by 08.00hrs,

LOTSON
Fine.

MINIVA
Hey why cant you just come back
home with me and spend a night ive
missed you in my bed
LOTSON
Come on not today,i dont want her
to start yapping,lets just do it
over the weekend

MINIVA
Suit yourself.

CUT TO:
15.

INT.KATWISHIS HOUSE. NIGHT

Katwishi HAS JUST WALKED IN A BIT TIPSY HE HERDS TO THE COUCH


AND PUT THE CAR KEYS ON THE TABLE AND PICKS THE REMOTE AS HE
JUST SWITCHES THE TV ON THE DAUGHTER COMES IN FROM HER ROOM.

BETTY
Hi dad

KATWISHI
Hi dear, how have you been?

BETTY
(CONT’D)
Not bad, just in a fix with the
exams coming up in two weeks, I
called your phone but you didn't
answer.

Katwish takes his phone and checks

KATWISHI
Really I didn't hear it ringing, oh
it's off; sorry dear hop it wasn't
urgent,

BETTY
No it's not just wanted to chat
with you about something but its
Ok

KATWISHI
Am here you can talk to me

BETTY
It's not a big deal dad, so when
are you supposed to travel for the
stated.

KATWISHI LOOKS HER INTENTLY


16.

KATWISHI
Baby I know when there is something
on your mind, am sorry I missed
your call, but am here now.

HE REACHES FOR THE REMOTE TO PUT THE VOLUME ON MUTE AS BETTY


STRUGGLES TO FIND WHERE TO START FROM.

BETTY
I know I should probably not be
saying this, but mum is just………..

MRS WALKS IN ON BETTIES LAST WORDS

MRS KATWISHI
Your computer is still on and you
are here,you don't pay any bills
here

BETTY
Mum am still studying just came to
say hi to dad

MRS KATWISHI
Your father will be here, go and
switch it off

BETTY
Mum this will just take a minute

MRS KATWISHI
I said go and switch it off or else
ill go in there and ill break it

KATWISHI
She's already told you that she
hasn't finished what
17.

MRS KATWISHI
(CUTS IN)
Am I talking to you! This is why
the girl is lazy and doesn't want
to work it's because you support
even the nonsense that she does.

KATWISHI
(Calmly)
Discipline and harshness are two
different approaches, and I think
you are just being plain harsh for
nothing.

She ignores his last remarks

MRS KATWISHI

Iwe so you didn't hear what I just


said

betty now bitter pushes herself up giving her mother a devilish


glance but she doesn't seem to care as she goes to the sofa and
grabs the remote in the mean time katwishi just glares at her and
walks out as she continues with her remote.

A COUPLE OF TRANSITIONAL SHOTS AROUND THE CITY AND IN THE


TOWNSHIPS AS WE ENTER INTO A NEW DAY.

THE TOWN IS BUZZING WITH THE EARLY MORNING ACTIVITIES AS


PEOPLE GET ON WITH THEIR DAILY ACTIVITIES

WE CUT TO THE AIRPORT AND LOTSON LOOKS AT HIS WATCH AS HE


WAITS FOR ZAKES

BELINDA IS AT THE ORPHANGE WITH THE KIDS IN THE PLAY GROUND

JR IS IN A DARK CORNER BEING HARASSED BY THE DDRUG PUSHER AS


THEY HIT HIM AND DEMAND HE PAYS UNTIL HE PRODUCES A PHONE
AFTER THE GUY INSPECTS IT,HE PUNCHES HIM AND GIVES HIM A DAY
TO PAY THE MONEY
18.

MARK IS IN THE STUDIO ENJOYING THE MUSIC AND THEY SEEM TO BE


HAVING A BLAST

CUT TO:

INT.MINIVAS HOUSE.DAY

She paces about before connecting to lotson

MINIVA
Where the hell have you been

(V.O)LOTSON
I told you i was at the airport
waiting for this guy.

MINIVA
Is he in?

LOTSON
He is am just trying to get a place
for him to stay ill call you later.

Lotson walks over to the car and after opening ,zake is just
sitting with a smoke in his hand, lotson opens then dash
board and takes a brown envelop.

LOTSON (CONT’D)
Here is part of the money, the
other part you will get when you
finish the job, i dont want any
mess ups or delays, here is the
photos and the places where these
people are found. once Again
whatever happens to you i dont know
you and we have never met. here Is
the key to the room, you will be in
room 7 right at the far end .if You
need to clear out something or you
have a problem locating the target
,call other wise don't call me are
we clear?

Zakes just looks at him and gets out of the car as lotson
tries to give him further instructions he Has already walked
away.

Lotson the dials minivas number

LOTSON (CONT’D)
Hi ,we are set
19.

MINIVA
OK.

After hanging up miniva holds on to the phone for a while as


if to celebrate the moment then she takes a sip from her
wine.

CUT TO:

INT. PEOPLES LODGE .DAY

Zakes has thrown everything on the bed as he opens his small


bag, and takes out the file and photos.he Opens the envelop
and there is a gun and a four geared knife.he Takes a pull
from his cigarrete and with the ashes of the same cigarette
he burns the eyes off katwishi picture.

FADE TO BLACK.

END OF PILOT

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