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Examples of essays Mrs Frikha Raja

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1/ Space tourism
* ADVANTAGES:

- It’s the only chance to discover another world.


- To discover an outer space and satisfy one’s curiosity.
- For relaxation, entertainment, pleasure.
- Discover new things, become more and more open -minded and experienced.
- It can be worthy doing a suborbital flight as it can be a rich source of information.
- Space Tourism will be widespread in the future.

* DISADVANTAGES:

- Very expensive tours


- It’s useless to spend a lot of money just to prove that someone can be the first one to
discover the Space
- It’s shameful to spend exorbitant prices on space flights while thousands of children die
every day because of hunger and illness.
- I am afraid of visiting other planets

- It’s a waste of time and money

2/ Education for all

• What are the causes of illiteracy and how to limit it?

Causes Solutions to overcome the problem.


Poverty -To donate money, free books,
Hunger -to provide nutritious meals for pupils at school
Distant schools -To build schools
Illiterate parents -Sensitize parents to the necessity of education.
-The role of humanitarian organizations (unicef , Unesco , WFP)


• The importance of education:
1. Ameliorate the economy of the country.
2. To provide a greener future to our children.
3. Decrease the dependence on foreign workers.
4. Liberate the country from the problem of illiteracy.
5. To have better, literate generations …

• Write an ad to incite people to help poor, illiterate children in the world.

3/ Virtual learning

Traditional learning

Advantages. Disadvantages
- Children will be more concentrated. - Students undergo many kinds of
- Kids will not miss the unique opportunity to pressure from frightening teachers
mix with others - Teachers are using many ways of
- Students will be more self-reliant punishment
- Make friends. - School uniform.
- The pupil becomes responsible and self - - Bustling.
confident. - Being bullied by others.
- Verbal and physical communication. - Schoolbags.
- Time and place constraints.

Virtual learning

Advantages. Disadvantages
- Students study whenever they want. - No teacher to control the students
- Don’t have to study for long hours. - Children aren’t old enough to manage
- Flexibility: you can learn whenever and time commitment.
wherever you like. - Learners lack verbal and physical
- Being home educated. communication.
- Taking private lessons. -Setting in front of the PC for a long time
- Students are willing t o devote much time to can be harmful to your eyes.
their courses. -No physical action –no eyes contact.
- no uniform /no school journeys - Little verbal or physical communication
- No bustling /not bullied by other pupils –- - no chance to overcome psychological
- More confidence / more commitment problems (bullying – fright...)
4/ Lifelong learning

Advantages of lifelong learning:

- Lifelong learning prepares the learners for the whole life because it is an opportunity
for them to update their knowledge.
- Ongoing learning enables us to renew our human knowledge and cope with new
technologies.
- Lifelong learning is a tool to gain self-autonomy and be socially privileged.
- It makes the learner’s experience highly valued.
- This new venture helps fight against illiteracy and facilitates social integration.
- Enabling all the members of society to have a share in the development of their
country.
Lifelong learning is a programme of education aiming at educating the adult people. It
is very important because it pursues knowledge from cradle to grave.

Disadvantages of lifelong learning:

- The older we get the harder we learn and the less enthusiastic we become.
- It may be at the expense of other interests.
- Some people hold discouraging attitudes towards adult learners.
- It may become useless if it is not well - organized.

Technology is considered as a controversial issue. Write an article to a Newspaper in which


you give both negative and positive effects of this phenomenon on our life.

- Technology as a blessing
- Makes us live more comfortably thanks to different types of inventions
- Facilitates communication with other people (using the internet to chat)
- Facilitates research of information with those inventions such as the internet
- Helps in progress and development
- Helps to gain time
-Helps to treat diseases

- Technology as a curse
- Technology used by some people for immoral goals such as cloning
- Addiction of many children to different technological gadgets and as a result they neglect
their studies
- May destroy the relationship between our family members
- Using technology to invent weapons, bombs, chemical weapons
- Mechanization of our society
- Side effects of some inventions on our eyes, ears.

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Advantages of Play station
- Means of entertainment
- Learn how to deal with complex situation
- Develop cognitive skills
- Reinforce patience
- Flexibility and adaptability
- Interactive
- Disadvantages of Play station
- contact with different forms of violence
- get into bad habits
- enhance laziness
- lead to addiction
- neglect studies
- lose contact with real life

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Why do women choose to opt out?

* Reasons behind opting out:


- Corporation fails to satisfy their professional needs
* Goals behind opting out
- To gain more freedom, recognition, money
- Having their own business.
* Solution to keep women in their positions
- Provide them with more flexibility
- Identify potential, competent managers, award their contributions and give them key
positions in the company.

* Writing

Nowadays, women have a big role in society, nevertheless, some women choose to opt out
and start their own business. Give your opinion about this issue.

Plan
- Introduction
Speak in General about women nowadays and their role in society
- Body
Why do women choose to opt out?
* Reasons (E.g. Corporation fails to satisfy their professional needs)
* Goals (to gain more freedom, having their own business)
* Solution for the Corporation (provides them with more flexibility, identify women with high
potential and give them big positions)
- Conclusion
Do the maximum with business women in order to keep them in their positions by offering
more compensation.
The brain drain is a controversial issue: Is it a loss or a gain? Give your opinion about this
issue.

- The Brain Drain

Why do people emigrate?


- Better job opportunities
- Earn more money and ameliorate one’s living conditions
- Marriage purpose
- Better circumstances for scientific researches and inventions
- Pursue one’s high education / studies.
- Political persecution.
- Health problems
- Solution
To retain highly educated people in their home countries, the government should provide
incentives for them (more money; key positions; better job opportunities)

Reverse brain drain: immigrate to developed countries then come back to one’s home
country

* Reasons
Because their country needs their skills so, they bring their expertise, talents and hopes so that
their country profit from them.

* Consequences
Economic recovery.
Key positions for them

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advantages and disadvantages of the MP4:

* The benefits of this invention:


₋ listen to music.
₋Watch video clips.
₋ Play many games.
₋ Have fun and makes a person more comfortable.

* The disadvantages of this invention:


₋ Causing harm to the eyes (to watch video clips) and ears (listen to loud
music).
₋Can destroy family bounds.
₋To be addicted to this technological device.
₋ No concentration.
₋ Neglecting one’s studies studies.

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Avoid the risky habit of smoking

*Negative effects : Lung cancer / Heart disease / Respiratory illnesses / Stroke / Waste of
money
* How to quit
- Must have the desire to give up smoking, the confidence and the determination to quit this
bad habit
- Remind yourself of the negative effects of smoking
- When you feel tense or like to smoke, get your self busy
*Benefits of quitting
- Have a better health for the smoker and his family
- Save money
- Cut the risk of health problems
- To smell and taste better
- The cough goes a way
- The breath smells better
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. Examples of attitudes:

Loving people and being prudent


Taking care of friendship
Being brave and fearless
Loving one’s country
Respecting all people and not being jealous.
Being self –confident
Being frank and sincere
Be better than others in every situation
Be always lovely and loving
Be always truthful and honest

Honest
Courageous
Cool
Prudent
Accepting loss and gain
Avoid violence by tolerance
.Peace is better than war so try to be a peaceful man
.The most important values people should respect
Solidarity is a noble reaction which strengthens relationships between people in different
.countries
Lesson 6 URBAN EXODUS
Country life

Advantages drawbacks

*a higher rate of life expectancy: people in *fewer means of entertainment.


the countryside live longer because they are *fewer means of transport.
healthier. *fewer amenities.
*a sense of community between the *the bad quality of streets.
inhabitants: they have a more socially *boring.
vibrant life.
*a clean air and a better quality of water
because there is less pollution.
*a clean environment and an ecologically
healthy atmosphere.

The city / town life

Advantages drawbacks
*interesting life with more means *traffic jam.
of entertainment. *polluted air and water.
*easy transport *noisy.
*better job and study *crowded
opportunities. *dangerous with higher rates of crime.
*more accidents.

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Staff management

Write an article about bad / poor staff management, problems which may exist between
managers and employees, and its implications on the company.

Managers’ attitudes Employees’ feelings

-don’t encourage their employees. - Demotivated to work


-fail to keep them interested. - Disappointed.
-don’ trust them. - Physically present, but psychologically absent
-don’t respect them -Threaten to strike
-don’t care about them as people
-threaten to fire them

Consequent effects on the company. Crisis, low productivity, underperformance.


2) How should employers and employees behave towards each others?

- There should exist a mutual respect among them.


- The employer should consider his workers as human beings, not as machines and should
treat them in the same way.
- The employer should punish the worker if he underperforms and should reward and
encourage him if he is competent.
- The employee should work seriously, consider the company as his own and care about its
future.
- Both the boss and the worker should communicate with each others and there should exist a
dialogue between them.

Job ads

you have just completed your university studies. Choose an advertised job and write a
letter to apply for it. Talk about the reasons for your writing, mention your
qualifications, personal and physical qualities, experience and special achievements in
that domain.
Formal layout:
A. The sender’s address.
B. Date.
C. Name and address of the receiver.
D. The opening (Dear sir/madam’/ receiver’s name).
E. The lettre / the body.
F. The closing (yours faithfully / sincerely / truly)
G. Signature.
H. The sender’s name in block letters.

Revolution Street Zarat 6026


Middle East virtual school.
21 Nobel Street, London.

Dear Sir,

In replay to your advertisement in the “Time” newspaper for an English teacher, I would like
to be considered for the position.
The qualifications you ask for are closely related to those I have. I have a doctorate in
English with a certificate in translation from English to French. I have also replaced a teacher
for 6 months, and have worked in a translation office for 2 years. For the social qualifications,
I am a man with great abilities to communicate specially with kids who were the main thesis
in my doctorate.
For using the computer, I have a diploma in using all the windows and of course I am
excellent at using the net..
I hope that you will consider my application favorably and I am waiting for your answer as
soon as possible

Yours faithful.
(Signature)

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