ENL 1101 ENGLISH 2 ASSIGNMENT 1: 15% Instructions: Analyse the given piece of writing, focusing on: Unity Coherence

nce Topic sentences Supporting sentences Concluding sentences

Then evaluate and write your comments and critique on the piece of writing. Remember to justify or elaborate your views/opinions/critique. Maximum page/s: 1-2 page review/critique only. Given on 1 June, Due on 8 June.

Allocation of marks: 50 marks(15%) Analysis: 20 marks Elaboration/depth: 10 marks Organization: 10 marks Language and Vocabulary: 10 marks

Mickey Mouse a worshipped icon of millions of people regardless of age all around the world. Day after day the number of people worshipping this icon has been growing since the birth of this creature. Well to many it may seem a harmless idol but in my opinion, Mickey Mouse is an devil in disguise influencing the minds of young and old people to adopt the culture of the devil which doesnt blend well with the moral values of society and should be banned.

Recently, there is an emerging culture among society especially youngsters who dress in clothing and accessories that may seem alien to us. Youngsters dress in huge earrings, funky and inappropriate clothing seem to be norm in our culture these days. Why do they do so? Where did they get such an inspiration? The

verdict from Mickey Mouse as shown in the picture! Mickey Mouse should be banned as it is a devil disguising itself in a form of a harmless mouse which is influences the minds of the young ones. As we all know, young people are pretty undeveloped so they easily get influenced by what that seems popular among their peers.

Another good example will be todays girls dressing. The so-called sexiness was an idea originating from the dumb-looking Mickey Mouse! As we can see, theres 2 big white holes from its cloth and that is where those fashion designer get the idea of designing those holed clothing for girls. Those so-called sexy clothing will result in a increase in crimes rates as they may provoke some perverts to conduct crimes such as rape and murder. No wonder these days we hear of cases of people being raped and murdered. Fresh in our mind is the case of Canny Ong the IT specialist from America who was found rapped and murdered. This kind of clothing are deemed neither appropriate in any occasion whether formal or informal

Another good reason for banning Mickey Mouse is its ears which seemed to be influencing the mind of youngsters to follow its hairstyle. Its black and big ears has influenced the youngsters to tie their hair with 2 buns on top of their hairs. Its pretty disgusting and ugly for such a hairstyle. Children nowadays keep asking their parent to tie up their hair like Mickey, just to show that they are cute and to identify themselves as Mickey Mouse fans. In my opinion its pretty dangerous for them to do so as they might come into contact with people disliking Mickey Mouse and they may end up being bashed up or insulted. This will be create a scar in a form of a phobia for these little boys and girls for life. So, I urge that Mickey Mouse be banned so as to protect the safety of our young ones.

The last point will be the exorbitant prices charged by Walt Disney for branding rights. Accessories, t-shirts and shorts bearing Mickey Mouse usually cause a bom in terms of pricing even for the middle income group. Young children usually out of peer pressure persuade their parents to get them this items so as to belong to a peer group. In some instances, this goods may even be inferior in quality. So I can conclude that Mickey Mouse is a robber in disguise in a form of a tame and cute mouse to rob the hard earned money of parents

Last but not least, I would like to urge the public to boycott Mickey Mouse in every form. This is necessary to avoid bigger problems in the future. As we know Mickey Mouse is a form of devil in disguise and a devil will always try to influence our minds to do evil so as to create the destruction of manking. On this grounds,

I would urge the people of the world to Say No To Mickey Mouse The Devil in Disguise