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Table of Contents
How to Write a Response-Producing Sales Letter
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Todays Agenda
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Preparation
If I had six hours to chop down a tree, I'd spend the first hour sharpening the ax. Abraham Lincoln
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I. Preparation
Proper Preparation Prevents Poor Performance
Youre on the inside looking out, writing for people who are on the outside looking in. - Roy H. Williams, The Wizard of Ads Know your customer/prospect. What motivates them? Read your white mail and talk to your customers. Talk to your best salespeople. Study the work of successful copywriters and their sales letters. All the genius I have lies in this; when I have a subject in hand, I study it profoundly. Alexander Hamilton
II. Attention: How To Get It, How To Hold It The 3-legged stool of profitable direct mail marketing
1. 2. 3. List = 40% of your success Offer = 40% of your success Copy = 20% of your success
1. List
1. 2. Compiled lists Controlled (FREE) Subscription lists
People receiving the magazine are usually highly qualified. High deliverability rate. People usually had to respond to something in order to get the magazine.
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Response lists May be paid magazine subscribers or people who have bought products or services via direct response. Postal mail and opt-in email lists.
List Examples
Chief Learning Officer Magazine These top corporate executives develop, implement or fund enterprise-level workforce development programs. Subscribers are executives at major U.S. corporations. They are not only trainers and human resources professionals but also decision-making executives. Cost per one-time usage - $275/M opt-in e-mail $225/M Postal (Minimum 5,000) SurplusAlert.com Opportunity Buyers This file contains buyers from SurplusAlert.com. They buy products at low members-only prices and resell them at online auction sites such as eBay, uBid, and onSale for a profit. Cost per one-time usage - $110/M opt-in e-mail
2. Offer
Make your offer so great that only a lunatic would refuse to buy" Claude Hopkins - Legendary copywriter, author of Scientific Advertising. Stimulus for action. THE STIMULUS ISN'T THE PRODUCT -- IT'S THE OFFER.
NOTE: Your offer value must match the commitment youre asking the prospect to make.
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Thinking that Your Prospect Wont Read a Long Letter. Being a Slave to the Formal Rules of Grammar. Example: How would you rate a general...
...who rushed into a battle without a plan? A general who squandered blood, sweat and tears without a blueprint? And yet you fight the toughest battle in history. Every day. And its not just your skin thats at risk. But your nest egg. Your home. And those you love. Sig Rosenblum for Bache Financial Planning
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Ouch!
Headline: Ouch! Letter opening: You know how it is these days. Businesses everywhere are hurting. Because there's not enough business to keep everyone busy. That's why you can't think about just matching the competition. If you want real growth in your business youve got to OUTWIT, OUTMARKET and OUTGUN your competitors every step of the way. Now heres the good news. Ill help you do exactly that.
6. Read your copy out loud 7. Make sure your thoughts and ideas transition smoothly - And, so, that said, on the other hand, whats more, best of all, thats why 8. Write as much copy as it takes to get the job done 9. Never end any page but the last in a complete sentence.
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Write
Use Read Find out
"The more simply and plainly an idea is presented, the more understandable it is - and therefore the more credible it will be." Words That Work: It's Not What You Say, It's What People Hear - By Dr. Frank Luntz
Instead of writing
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Case Study
Filtration Solutions
Filtration Solutions manufactures and markets a remote mounted bypass oil filter...that can help over-the-road truckers extend their oil drain intervals dramatically. Thus saving them money on oil changes. Format Non-coated 8.5 card stock folded in half. One side of outer used for address, other side used for color photos of FS customers with their rigs and testimonials. List Compiled list of independent owner-operator OTR truckers Offer Free video demonstrating how the filter works Copy Headline: CALL TODAY FOR YOUR FREE VIDEO See for yourself how the FS-2500 oil by-pass filtration system will help you generate substantial savings. Opening: Cut oil drain costs? Substantially reduce even eliminate soot and sludge? Lower your engine maintenance costs? Extend the life of your engine? Yes. Yes. Yes. And Yes. P.S. When you watch the video youll see the FS-2500 quickly make pitchblack, sludge-and-soot-filled oil so clean you can see through it! Whats more, if you act quickly you can still get in on an exciting promotion we currently have underway for new customers. Call me for your free FS-2500 demonstration video today: 888-440-9056.
Results: 42 appts. 16 new customers, 9 of which closed within 3 months. Publicity in 7 magazines. Investment: $3,600. Source: CSi Complete
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Teaser on outer box read: Dont bother bringing this to your next photo shoot. Inside copy block under blood pressure kit: "One prop you'll never need when working with Boston photographer Chris Beaudoin."
Summary
I. Proper Preparation Prevents Poor Performance If I had six hours to chop down a tree, I'd spend the first hour sharpening the ax. Abraham Lincoln Gain and hold the attention of your reader Additional pointers for successful sales letters
- Play The Q Card For Winning Results - Choose every word carefully - Write in meaningful specifics - Steal smart - Use a P.S.
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Ernest Nicastro
Thank yah, thank yah vuhry much. www.positiveresponse.com 614.747.2256
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Notes