SULIT

111911
Bahasa Inggeris
Kertas 1
Sept.
2008
1 314 jam

JABATAN PELAJARAN NEGERI JOHOR

PEPEFUKSAAN PERCUBAAN

SIJIL PEPERIKSAAN MALAYSIA 2008

BAHASA INGGERIS
Kertas 1
Satu jam empat puluh lima minit

JANGAN BUKA KERTAS SOALAN IN1 SEHINGGA DIBERITAHU

Arahan
1 . Kertas soalan ini mengandungi 2 bahagian: Bahagian A dan Bahagian B.
2. Jawub kedua-dua bahagian.

Instructions
1 . This question paper consists of' two sections: Section A and Section B
2. Answer both sections.

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Kertas soalan ini mengandungi 2 halaman bercetak.

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 Section A: Directed Writing
(35 marks)

You are advised to spend about 45 minutes on this section.

Question 1
Your school has carried out a cleanliness campaign to raise awareness among the
students about the importance of keeping the environment clean. As the secretary of the
Environment Club, you have been asked to write a report to the principal about the
campaign.

In your report, include the following:

date
aim
slogan of campaign
number of club members involved
teachers involved
two relevant examples of
- activities
- benefits
- problems
one point of your own

When writing your report, you should remember to:

address it to the principal
give it a title
use all the points given

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 Section B: Continuous Writing
(50 marks)
You are advised to spend about 60 minutes on (his section.

Question 2

Write a composition of about 350 words on one of the following topics:

(a) Describe a proud moment in your life.

(b) Is it better to be born rich or intelligent? Discuss.

(c) Write a story beginning with:

"I tried again and again ..."

(d) How to be a good friend.

(e) Holidays

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Kertas 2
Scpt.
2008
2 '/~.~;III)

.IAHA.I'AN PELA.JARAN N EGERI J O H O R

S l J l L PEPERIKSAAN MALAYSIA 2008

BAHASA INGGEKIS
Kertas 2
Dua jam lima bclas minit

.JANGAN BIJ KA KERI'AS SOALAN IN1 SEHINGGA DIRERITA1III

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 Section A
[ I 5 marks]

Elaine, a Form Four Arts student in SMK USJ4 in Subang Jaya,

Selangor, is the author of "Ethnic Musical lnstrument of
Malaysia". She is officially the nation's youngest author to write
such a book and this has earned her a name in the Malaysia Book
of Records

Which of the following statements shows that Elaine is well-known?

A She is the author of "Ethnic Musical lnstrument of Malaysia".

B She has been recognised in the Malaysia Book of Records.
C She is the youngest author in Malaysia.
D She is a Form Four Arts student.

T I P S ABOUT SHOES

- Shoes have to be comfortable.

- Choose shoes that fit well.
- Change into a different pair every day
because wearing one pair continuously wears
it out.
- Take care of your shoes by applying shoe
cream or polish.

2. You should change shoes daily in order to

A wear them comfortably.

B make them last longer.
C keep them shiny.

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 Recently, I boarded a taxi at Taman Jaya 1,R.l' Station in Petaling .laya to get
home. It was a 10-minute ride. I am usually very courteous and friendl) with taxi
drivers, as I know they would have had a bad day fighting through trafiic. And 1
was my usual self with this driver.
I gavc him directions to my home but he was rather quiet and did not want to
speak. As we approached the road to my home I told him i t was another right turn
but he stopped suddenly and asked me to get o f f as he claimed i t was difficult to
rcverse which was not the case.

Shashi Nctto

3. Shashi Netto wrotc to the newspaper to express her

A disappointment.
I3 dilemma.
C regret.

'\'he aesthetic beauty and tine craftsmanship of' traditional Malaysian

architecture are well displayed in the series o f paintings by Mokhlar
Harun. Mokhtar's colourful paintings o f Malaysian Kampung scenes are
now available Cor sale.

4. In the extract above, what are the items on display?

A Traditional architecture
I3 Malaysian kampi~ngs
C Colourful paintings
I> Fine handicrafts

I1 Eat colours for good health

5. The advertisement means that you should cat

A fruits and vegetables to have colourful lives.

13 fruits and vegetables to slay healthy.
C' colourfi~lfood to be healthy.
I1 food colouring to be healthy.
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 I 2008 WORST DISAS'TERS SO FAR

Event T Place r D e a t h toll

March Flood Bangladesh

April Typhoon (Nargis) Myanmar
May Earthquake China
June Sunken ferry Indonesia
June Typhoon (Fusheng) Philiphines

6. In total, which disaster claimed the most victims?

A Sunken ferry
B Earthquake
C Typhoon
D Flood

I Prudent Path to Success

When he was 21, he had RM80,OOO in his bank account which he saved by
helping his contractor father. A ycar later, he madc his tirst million. Ilis
advantage was that he was and still is, a prudent and simple man who had
saved every sen he received from his parents since his school days. 'This is true
o f Tan Sri Salleh o f Plaza Corporation who became successful i n the world o f
business i n 1975.

7. From the extract above we can conclude that Tan Sri Sallch is .. . . . .

A calculating.
B miserly.
C thrifty.
D stingy.

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8. In the comic strip above, the lady will

A lose some weight.

B keep her promise.
C control her appetite.

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Questions 9 - 15 are bc~sedon the jbllowingpas,sage.

It is estimated that there are at least 250 rnillion child labourers worldwide.
Many o f 9 children have to work in harsh environments. Children who work
as domestic servants are subjected to physical or sexual abuse. They arc olien
deprived -10-social activity and schooling. Thcy arc poorly paid, or not paid at

all.
Children are also pledged by their parents to factory owners in _- l I- li)r
small loans or they are kidnapped to work in factories. Most are kept in - _ 12--,
tortured and made to work for twenty hours a day without a break. Some are cven
chained to their beds at night to - 1 3 t h e m from running away. 'There arc also
those who work for industries and plantations. 'They perform all kinds o f duties
throughout the day. Most o f them -14- in hazardous conditions, with no heallh
and safety regulations.
In the streets o f the developing world, children are -15p-polishing shoes,
hawking flowers and trinkets, or using other ingenious ways to makc money. For
some, it is the only way o f getting food; for others, it is just the beginning o f a
dreadful life.

9 A those 13 A prevent
B these H stop
C that C bar
D this

14 A have worked
B has worked
C works
D work

11 A replacement 15 A see
B substitution B saw
C exchangc C sees
D seen

12 A detention
B captivity
C custody

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 Section I3
( 1 0 mark\)
Quc\tionc 16 - 25

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Questions 16 - 20
llsing the injbrmation given, write the types of offirs in lhe boxes below.

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Types of Offers
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Buy the first Tower ticket at RM 1,000 and get the
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Only for walk-in sales with valid ID.

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Grandstand F for onlv RM99.
20. Free limited edition of lothTMGP T-shirt and cap.

Questions 21 - 25
I'omplele the sentences below using lhe informalion given.
21. If you want to listen to the live telecast of the F I, you will need a ...................
[I mark]
22. Azrin has decided to watch the FI from different stands. The most suitable deal for
Azrin is .................................
1 l mark]
23. Mr Lim will get ............................................. if he buys RM3000 worth of
Topaz tickets.

24. Sue has to purchase Platinum Grandstand F ticket via .................................

[ I mark]

25. Jason Lee, a student needs to show his student ID or Mycard to enjoy a reduction of
.......................... on Citrine 1 -day Grandstand.
1. l mark]

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 Section C
(25 marks]
Questions 26 - 31 clrc bn.verl on rlw ,fi)llo~.ingpc~.v.vr~g~~.

I 'Tears flowed do\\n the checks o f m y daughter when she called a f c r spending
her lirst night at the remote National Scrvicc training camp in Tarnbunan, located i n the
interior division o f Sabah.

2 M y daughter, M e l i n r a n i , left home on 1)eccmber 29 arid Tor thc Iirsl t i ~ n ci n 17

\ear\. Shc stayed away l i o m the f'amily and underwent a transformation lo uncIcr4tand 5
life better. Pampered with comfortable living i n the city all her lit?, 4he found i t
difficult to adjust to the dormitory there. She was terrified by the palm-sic.cd rhinocero4
hcctlcs, grasshoppers and spiders and she also disliked bathing i n the cold water ~ Ithe I
Foothi1Is o f the C'rocker Range.

3 Hesides the unknown challenges she had to face as a trainee at the camp, her I0
major setbacks wcre missing home-cooked food, family and friends as well as losing
the golden chance of' chatting via the Internet. Among her other trivial challcngcs wcrc
not being allowed to usc her mobile phone on weekdays and not allowed to lcavc thc
camp. She also had to handwash her clothes and undertake various responsibilities and
follo\v a rcgi~ncntedschedule daily. I5

4 M y advice to her was to be ihcused and strong because litc is an a d ~ c n t u r cant!

shc should view her three-month stint there as a privilcge to learr~nlorc about l i l k and
nature.

5 'To give her moral support, I visited her with the whole family at the canip'\
opcn day on January 19. Indeed, it was an emotional reunion which enhanced l i t n i l ) 20
bonding and understanding. She had lost sotne weight. She looked more tanned as well
as trim and fit. She had developed a strong comradeship with other trainees f'roin Sabah
and Sarawak. 'I'he camp is about two hours' drive uphill from Kota Kinabalu and 1 was
ovcrwhclmed by the picturesque villages, scenic hills and the pleasing view 01' Mount
Kinabalu 011 the drivc up. Only a handful o f parcnts turned up to visit the 300 odd 3-5
trainees and participated with them in games and performances. Sornc trainees were
cheerfill. several wcrc solemn and many were visibly missing thcir loved oncs and
home.

'l'heir daily routine was to wake LIP at 5a.m. and they had to stay up until I I p.m.
to coniplctc thcir activities and chores. M y daughter received a monthly allu\va~iceof' 30
RM 150 for participating in the National Scrvicc. Ilaily, the trainees ate .;is mcals. '1'0
my surprise. on thc day we were there, they were given packed rice with chicken. lricd
fish and vcgctables and a bottle o f mineral water for lunch. 'l'his was a l ~ ~ x i lcompared
ry
to the ~ i i c a l sat the rough and tough Outward Bound camp training \vIiich 1 urldcr\vent
in L,umul, Pcrak. in 1989. 35

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7 A month later, my daughter no longer feared insects and had adapled bell lo the
environment. She had fallen in love with the charming view of the 4,0951~1 Mounl
Kinr~baluthat greeted her every morning. I was pleased with the transfi~rmatiunIny 40
daughter went through since she joined the National Service. She apprccialcd life more
and coped with challenges and disappointments positively. Shc had even reached the
summit of Mount Kinabalu which was a great achievement for her. Apart from thal, she
had improved her self-development skills and showed love and care for others. Above
all, she had grown up to be a brave and responsible teenager. Melizarani had developed 45
interexl in spirituality and looked forward to her Sundays because she got to travel out
of the camp to perform prayers at a Hindu temple in Kota Kinabalu. I4er camp
experience had matie her realize how fortunate she had been in many ways compared to
[he other trainees.

8 On March I I , she called home with confidence and reported the activities she 5 0
had successfully completed excitedly. She had also learnt some cul~uraldances. song\
and the Kadazan language.

9 From my daughter's experience, I am sad to note that some parents gavc lilsc
excuses for their children to escape the National Service Camp, not realising that [hey
are missing a once-in-a-lifetime experience. 55

26. a) From paragraph 1, why did Melizarani leave home?

b) From paragraph 3, state two ot'Melizarani's biggest challenges as a trainee at

the camp.

i i ) ..........................................................................................
[2marks]

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31. Based on the passage given, write a summary on:

the positive changes in Melizarani after she joined the National Service training

Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change thc original
meaning.

Your summary must:

be in continuous writing (not in note form)
use materials from lines 21 to 49
not be longer than 130 words, including the 10 words given below

Begin your summary as follows:

At the camp 's open day, Melizarani '.v fumily noticed that she ...

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 Section D
[25 marks]

32 Read the following extract~fromIf and answer the questions that follow.

If you keep your head when all about you

Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about don't deal in lies,
Or being hated don't give way to hating,
And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;

Rudyard Kipling

(a) What advice is given in line 3 of the stanza?

.................................................................................... [I tnurk]
(b) Which line in the stanza above states that patience is important?

................................................................................... I mark]

(c) What does "don 't deal in lies" mean?

.................................................................................... [ I mark]

(d) Who should follow the advice in this stanza? Give a reason for your
answer.

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[ 2 marks]

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33 Read the exlracl.from the short story The Necklace helow orzo' anslrler he quc?.vlion.vlhcrt
.follow.

"What do you mean? You brought it back."

"I brought you back another exactly like it. And it has taken us ten years to
pay for it. You can understand that it was not easy for us, for us who had
nothing. A t last, it is ended and I am very glad."
Madam Forestier had stopped.
"You say that you bought a necklace o f diamonds to replace mine?''
"Yes. You never noticed it, then! They were very similar."
And she smiled with a joy that was at once proud and ingenuous.
Madame Forestier, deeply moved, took her hands.
"Oh, my poor Mathilde! Why, my necklace was paste! It was worth
at most only 500 francs!

a) Why did Mathilde have to work for ten years'?

b) (i) Why was Madame Forestier 'deeply moved"!

.............................................................................. [ I mark]

(ii) What does 'paste ' in the extract mean?

I mark]
C) If you were Madame Forestier, what would you do afier
knowing the truth?

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34 TheLfollowingare the nove1.c.studied in the li~eralurecomponent in Engli,sh Lcrnguc~ge:

The Pearl John Steinbeck

Jungle of Hope - Keris Mas
The Return K. S. Maniam

(.'hoosc crny one of the novels andanswer the.following question.

Did you enjoy reading the novel? Support your answer with evidence from the text.

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1 1 19/PP
Peraturan
Pernarkahan (PP)
Bahasa I~iggeris
Kertas 1 & 2
Sept.
2008

JABATAN PELAJARAN NECERI ,JOHOR

PEYEKIKSAAN PERCUBAAN

SIJIL PEPERIKSAAN MALAYSlA 2008

PERATURAN PEMARKAHAN
BAHASA lNGGERlS
Kertas 1 dan 2

IJNTUK KEG UNAAN PEMERIKSA SAHAJA

Peraturan pemarkahan ini SULIT dan Hak Cipta Unit Kurikulun~

JPNJ. Kegunaannya khusus untitk pemeriksa yang berkenann sahqja.
Sebarang maklumat dalam Peraturan Permarkahan ini tidak boleh
dimaklumkan kepada sesiapa. Peraturan Permarkahan ini juga tidak
boleh'dikeluarkan dalam apa jua bentuk penulisan dan percetaknn.

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Peraturan Pelnarkahan ini mengandungi 1 3 halaman bercetak

 ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 2 ( 1 11912)
MARKING SCHEME

SECTION A

SECTION B

1 16 GP Passport

1 18 ( Student & Senior Citizen Proino

19 1 "99 for RM99
1 20 1 Grandstand Special
21 headset
22 GP packages

1 23 1 1 three-day Topaz ticket free

24 Online Bonanza
25 50%-

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 Some sense with multiple word errors
Requires re-reading beii>re being understood
Li (ii) Only a few accurate simple sentences
8 - 13 Content comprehensible
High incidence o f linguistic error
Meaning blurred
Far short o f required length

Almost entirely impossible to read

U (iii) Whole sections mahe little or no sense at all
0-7 Occasional patches o f clarity (marks awarded)
Vocabulary - simple words used
F r e q ~ ~ eerrors
nt cause blurring
"0" to scripts with no sense from beginning t i l l the end

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SECTION C

26. a) She had to attend1 undergo a National Service training1 course.

(no IOILLI lifling u l l o ~ ~ e d )

b)
She missed home-cooked food.
She missed her family and friends.
She lost the chance of chatting via the Internet.

(pet.mi.s.vihleIijling: line 10- 12 'Besicies ...Inlrrnet)

(,4ny tcbo)
27. 11) She had developed a strong comradeship with other trainecs (from Sabah and
Sarawak) ( 1 mark)

b) (Only) a handful of parents ( 1 mark)

28. 'I'he (National Service) trainees

* Nole : "pnrticipnnts - not accepted
"

29. a) She had grown up to be a brave and responsible teenager.

(permissible liftting: lines 44-45 'Above ...leenuger)

b
She had developed interest in spirituality.
She looked forward to her Sundays to perform prayers at a Hindu temple.
(1 mark)
(perrni.s.sible lifting: lines 45-47 'Melizaruni...Kota Kinahaltl)

30.
The teenagers will be more mature and independent.
The teenagers will be more open-minded
l'he teenagers will understand life better etc.. . ( 2 marks)
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Accept any appropriate answer as long as it is not totally lifted from the test.
S U NLMAKY POI N'SS

Annotate as follows :
CONTENT - I0
LANGUAGE - 5
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TOTAL 15
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-+ -Thy
Clontent Marks
Award 1 mark for each of the points below.
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LIFTED P O I N T S PARAPHRASE -- - -- .-

had lost some weightllooked trimmed looked thinnerlappeared slini and

and fit ---
developed a strong comradeship with built strong friendship with other
other trainees (from Sabah and trainees
Sarawak) I

1 3 ( no longer feared insects 1 not frightened of insects anymore

m a h a a d a p t ewell
d to the environment / had adjusted suitably / satisfactorily to
- -

I 1 1 the dace
had fallen in love (with the charming was fascinated with the enchanting
I view of the 4095m) Mount Kinabalu sinht of Mount Kinabalu
1 6 appreciated life more valued life more
---
7 coped with challenges/ difficuGs / setbacl\s (hettcr-)
disappointments (positively)
8 improved her self-development skills increased her self-development skills

' 1 9

10
showed and care for others

had grown to be (a) brave (teenager)

1 showed concern and affection for
others
had grown to be (a) courageous
(teenager)
11 had grown to be (a) responsible had grown to be (a) dependable
(teenager) (teenager)
12 developed an interest in spirituality increased awareness in religion
2 1 ° 0 k e d w a interested
s in praying in a Hindu
camp to) performing prayers at a temple
Hindu temple ---
14 realised how fortunate she had been understood how lucky she had been
in many ways (compared to the other
trainees)

** Underlined ~ ~ o/phrase
rd is mandafory

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 . *
Summary
Marks for Style and Presentation are awarded based on the average sum total (to the ncarcst
rounded fraction/decimal) of Paraphrase and Use of English. Annotate as follows :

Paraphrase = 5
Use of English = 4

9 + 2 = 4.5 = 5 marks

STYLE AND PRESENTATION DESCRIPTORS SUMMARY

R.IAR~S PARAPHRASE MARKS USE OF ENGLISH

- a sustained attempt to rephrase
the text
5 - expression is secure
Excellent - difficult phrases from text may
be substituted
- noticeable attempt to rephrase
the text
- free from stretches of lifting
- expression is generally secure
- intelligent and selective lifting
but limited attempts to
3 rephrase
Fair
- expression may not
always be secure
- total lifting of text but not a
complete transcript .
- attempts to substitute but only
for single words
- irrelevant sections more
frequent
1 - more or less a transcript of the
text
- no originality
Poor
- irrelevant sections
1 copied
- language is accuratc
- occasional errors
- sentence structure varicd
- marked ability to uhe
original coniples syntax
- pi~ncti~ationaccurate
- spelling correct
throughout -
- language is alnlust always
accurate
- serious errors will be
isolated
- some variation of
sentences
- punctuation accurate
- spelling largely -
accurate
-
- language largely accilrate
- simple structures
dominate
3 - serious errors not freq~~ent
Fair
but noticeable
- spelling ncnrly al\vays
accurate --
- meaning is not in doubt
- serioi~serrors more
frequent
- simple structures ziccurate
but not maintained
- spelling accurate
- some irrelevant parts
I 1
p~
- heavy frequency of' errors
- hampers reading
0- I - fractured syntax i'
Poor
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 32 (a) You must trust yourself even when others do not.
Have confidence in yourself.
(A n.y one)

(b) 'If you can wait and not be tired of waiting'/ Line 5 I I marli 1
(c) Don't tell lies./Don't lie. [ I mark 1

(d) My brother. I-Ie will be more responsible. [ 1 ninrk]

Any one)

Short story - ( 5 rntrr-ks)

33 (a) - To pay for the lost necklace

- To replace the diamond necklace
- To repay their debts
(An,v o m )

(b) - It had taken them ten years to pay for it. [ I mark)
- Mathilde had bought a real diamond necklace to replace hers/Mv~dame
Foreslicr's.
(Any one)

(d) - I would return the diamond necklace to Mathilde as mine was a fake. [ 2 r~larks]
- 1 would sell the necklace and share the inoney with Mathilde.
- I would tell Mathilde Lo pay me 500 francs.
(Any one)

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Question 34
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Content (I 0 mc~rks)
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-T Description of Criteria
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Ilernonstrates fitll knowledge of relevant aspects of tcxt.

Conveys it with very close reference to the text.
a Shows full understanding of task requirements. 1
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Demonstrates sufficient knowledge of relevant aspects of text. I

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a Conveys it with close reference to the text.
Shows understanding of task recluirements.
Demonstrates some knowledge of relevant aspects of tell.
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Conveys it with some reference to the text
Shows fair itnderstanding of task rccli~irements
Merely narrates.
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Demonstrates little knowledge of' relevant aspects of text.

Conveys it with little reference to the text.
Shows some understanding of task requirements.
Very little textual evidence.
a Shows little or no understanding of task requirements.
No testital evidence.

Languagc ( 5 mul-k.v)

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Entirely accurate language.
5 Wide vocabulary used with precision.
A variety of sentence structures.
= Language always accurate.
Vocabulary wide enough, ~ ~ s i ~ aused l l y with precision. ,
Some variety of sentence structures.
Language largely accurate and meaning is never in doi~bt.
Many single-word errors.
3
Vocabulary limited.
Some variety in sentence struc-erepetitive. - - - -
Meaning is fairly clear.
2 High frequency of errors hampers reading.
Generally difficult to understand.
= Meaning hardly comes true.
No organisation.
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Not recognisable as English.
N O response.

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