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Jose Gomez
Professor Ninetta
English 1B
An Unjust War
As long as I can remember, the War on Iraq has been a controversial issue concerning our
U.S. citizens for the past decade. In response to this situation, many people have disagreed and
have spoken out about the purpose of this war and whether is justifiable, due to the high cost of it
and the thousandths of lives lost in it. In regards to this issue, many people realize the dominant
power that Congress and the president have over the citizens. In addition, many countrymen are
conscious of the lack of democracy that exists here in America. Yet, their voices have been
ignored. Many Americans as well as I believe in the idea of committing civil disobedience to
oppose the war; therefore, the best solution to this issue is to desert out of the nation.
Americans have always asked themselves: What is the purpose of this war? Many people
the war and lack of democracy that exists here in America. Some communal and student
organizations have protested in different ways such as: marching and proposing resolutions. For
example, two resolutions were proposed to the government by the California Federation of
Teachers Executive Council and the American Studies Association Caucus on Academic and
addition, some college and high school students have gathered to protests against the war and
A civil disobedience can avoid any possible consequences in the future such as: enemy
attacks and lost of more war casualties. Although the government is currently ignoring our
disapproval for war, they might understand our objections in the future. Concerning this issue, I
believe that the war can lead the Iraqis to attack us just like the Afghanis did. For example, after
9/11 terrorist attacks, many Americans were concerned about other attacks that would occur
anywhere else. In addition to this concern, any soldier that is sent has the high risk and
probability of dying. Unfortunately, there could be high number of casualties lost in war for both
nations. Consequently, besides terrorists, other innocent lives can be victims of this war. Even
though they are terrorists, I believe that killing any person is immorally wrong.
Perhaps, a civil disobedience can lower the rate of suicides and depression among the
soldiers. Considering this problem, the government can notice all the discomfort that troops face
as they get sent to Iraq. According to some data collected by the Army: “There were 23
confirmed suicides among army troops in Iraq in 2003—a rate of 15.6 per 100,000 soldiers
(Rediff.com, 2).” These 23 suicides could have been prevented, if the war had not been declared.
As a result of this situation, many troops feel hopeless and concerned about their relatives when
they are distant from them. In addition, many soldiers return home from war suffering from
depression and other mental sicknesses. Perhaps, they feel depressed because they feel concern
for their family. Furthermore, some studies have shown that some soldiers suffer from a mental
disorder called “post-traumatic stress disorder”. This disorder results from violent experiences
Indeed, any civil disobedience can motivate the legislative and executive bodies to
reform the government into a more effective democratic body. As proven to the public, many
citizens disapprove the dominant authority of our government. As Thoreau points out: “All men
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recognize the right of revolution; that is, the right to refuse allegiance to, and to resist the
government when is tyranny or its insufficiency are great and unendurable (Thoreau, 140).”
Thoreau as well as other citizens would definitely agree with the dominant authority that the
government has over us. Also, the government is not conscious of the over-excessiveness of the
national debt that is estimated to $456 billion dollars by the end of September 30, 2007.
According to data collected by from National Properties Project: “The numbers of military and
additional funds that are expended due to the war (NPP, 1).” This data shows the excessive
money wasted on weaponry that could have been spent on other current issues such as the
poverty in America.
My advice to any draftee would or U.S. troop would be to desert out of the country
because it is much safer than any other choice. Any deserted individual has a better chance of
living without being arrested or imprisoned. Consequently, the penalty for committing treason to
this nation is a sentence of at least five years in prison plus a dishonorable discharge from the
military. According to some data gathered by the Army, approximately 3,300 active troops had
deserted out of the nation into Canada in 2006. On the other hand, some soldiers prefer ending
in prison rather than deserting because they feel scared of facing serious consequences. They
also know that they can live better chance of surviving because they are fed and safer in there.
Perhaps, they may also feel guilty for betraying the nation. Considering this solution, many
people would agree with it such as Martin Luther King Jr. He believes in the idea of defying the
law; however, he would offer a better solution such as protesting in a nonviolent manner. As
King points out: “In any nonviolent campaign, there are four basic steps: 1) Collection of facts to
determine whether injustice is alive 2) negotiation 3) self-purification and 4) direct action (King,
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175).” Unlike my solution King does not propose a solution that guarantees freedom to the
draftees; therefore, I believe that my solution would be more effective because the law cannot
Many Americans would argue against my position and solution for supporting a civil
disobedience because they might believe that it is immorally wrong to violate the laws of our
nation. Just as Van Dusen explains: “But civil disobedience, whatever the ethical rationalization,
is still an assault on our democratic society, and affront to our legal attack on our constitutional
government (Van Dusen, 4),” meaning that she opposes to any law-breaker, despite of any
injustice given to the people. Furthermore, many Americans would believe that our duty is to
defend the honor of our nation. Some people believe that we need to look strong to impress
other nations; otherwise, we would look weak which embarrasses our honor. Considering the
War on Iraq, some people would support it by opposing to any withdrawal from it. In addition,
some Americans believe that it is our responsibility to keep peace around the world by
interfering in any disputes among any countries. As a result of this situation, we could be judged
as an intrusive nation by other countries. For example, around the early 1990’s, Saddam Hussein
main target was to invade Kuwait to take over the petroleum industry. Since Kuwait was a weak
nation with a small army, the U.S. would not allow this to happen. Therefore, they got involved
in their problem and ended helping Kuwait. Despite these issues, we should ignore our pride and
intrusiveness and avoid any further consequences that we can regret in the future.
Many citizens as well as I oppose this war, so as a result of this situation, we believe that
civil disobedience should be carried out by deserting out of America. Although many Americans
oppose to civil disobedience, I believe that my reasons to support it are justifiable enough to end
this war. Considering the nation’s welfare, we should be alerted from foreign possible attacks.
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In addition, civil disobedience should be carried out to avoid mental problems for the draftee.
Moreover, we should consider the high debt that we owe as nation. What would happen if we
ignore these issues? I believe that the consequences would arise which would eventually upset
Americans. Most likely, people would definitely commit a civil disobedience such as deserting,
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