General Notes: Think of each poem like a story -Intro, argument, conclusion -volta: transition/shift -Petrachan Sonnet- sonnet

consisting of an octave with the rhyme pattern abbaabba, followed by a sestet with the rhyme pattern cdecde or cdcdcd or (according to my notes) 3 quatrains & 1 rhyming couplet at the end -epigram: pithy saying -metaphysical poems -The first eight lines (octet) presents problem -The last six lines (sestet) usually presents some type of solution

Thou hast made me, and shall thy work decay? Repair me now, for now mine end doth haste, I run to death, and death meets me as fast, And all my pleasures are like yesterday; I dare not move my dim eyes any way, Despair behind, and death before doth cast Such terror, and my feeble flesh doth waste By sin in it, which it t'wards hell doth weigh; Only thou art above, and when towards thee By thy leave I can look, I rise again; But our old subtle foe so tempteth me, That not one hour myself I can sustain; Thy Grace may wing me to prevent his art, And thou like Adamant draw mine iron heart. Topic: Death/decay Last two lines are an analogy of the poets relationship w/ God Condition: dying & despair/desperation

Comment [L.J1]: Addressing God/-plea for help Comment [L.J2]: Wishes to absolve sins & enter heaven Comment [L.J3]: Infers that something is brokenlink to forgiveness Comment [L.J4]: Losing light/salvation/faith in God Comment [L.J5]: Static, but dare not indicates moving away from God Comment [L.J6]: Sins? Comment [L.J7]: Sins scare poet as much as death Comment [L.J8]: Believes sins are so numerous/heavy, it will lead him towards Hell Comment [L.J9]: Volta Comment [L.J10]: permission Comment [L.J11]: resurrection language/salvation of God Comment [L.J12]: Volta Comment [L.J13]: Rescue/upliftingcontrast to decay Comment [L.J14]: Cold, unbreakable/unyielding, rust, not malleable Comment [L.J15]: Answer/solution: shows hope/Gods Grace to his initial condition

As due by many titles I resign My self to Thee, O God; first I was made By Thee, and for Thee, and when I was decayed Thy blood bought that, the which before was Thine; I am Thy son, made with Thy Self to shine, Thy servant, whose pains Thou hast still repaid, Thy sheep, thine image, and, till I betrayed

Comment [L.J16]: This poem has links to Batter my Heart Comment [L.J17]: surrender Comment [L.J18]: Irony: made by God & belonged to God Comment [L.J19]: Paradox* Comment [L.J20]: son/sun Comment [L.J21]: subservient position

My self, a temple of Thy Spirit divine; Why doth the devil then usurp on me? Why doth he steal, nay ravish that's thy right? Except thou rise and for thine own work fight, Oh I shall soon despair, when I do see That thou lov'st mankind well, yet wilt not choose me, And Satan hates me, yet is loth to lose me. Lines 1-7 is the main story Paradox: Donneson, servant, sheep, spirit

Comment [L.J22]: Volta Comment [L.J23]: Memorize these two lines Comment [L.J24]: Despair/tense atmosphere Comment [L.J25]: Contrast against earlier line with fight Comment [L.J26]: Paradox ending

This is my play's last scene, here heavens appoint My pilgrimage's last mile; and my race Idly, yet quickly run, hath this last pace, My span's last inch, my minute's latest point, And gluttonous death, will instantly unjoint My body and soul, and I shall sleep a space; But my ever-waking part shall see that face, Whose fear already shakes my every joint: Then, as my soul, t' heaven her first seat, takes flight, And earth-born body in the earth shall dwell, So fall my sins that all may have their right To where they're bred, and would press me to hell. Impute me righteous, thus purged of evil, For thus I leave the world, the flesh, the devil.

Comment [L.J27]: metaphor

Comment [L.J28]: paradoxbrevity of existence Comment [L.J29]: personification Comment [L.J30]: enjambment Comment [L.J31]: face of God

Comment [L.J32]: Volta Comment [L.J33]: Contrast soul to heaven & earth-born body Comment [L.J34]: volta Comment [L.J35]: sins go into Earth & die Comment [L.J36]: given what we dont have

-note repeated images in first three lines of things coming to an end -note death language -problem: impending, certain death -solution: victory over death Some more notes I found on this poem:
Lines 1-4: If the narrator in the poem were a character in a play, this would be the plays last scene. The narrator is in the eleventh hour before death will overtake him, and he knows it. He alludes to the Christian doctrine that life and death come to us by divine appointment. The moment appointed for his deathfor the end of his brief pilgrimage on earthis almost upon him. If the narrator were a runner in a race, this would be his last milehis final lap. He has come to the home stretch on this race, which he has idly, yet quickly run.

If the duration of his life were to be measured by tape, this would be his spans last inch. If the duration of his brief time on earth were to be but a minute, this would be that minutes last point. Line 5 Death, described here as a gluttonous, ever-hungry, all-consuming monster, will, in the wink of an eye, separate the narrators body and soul from each otherforever. Lines 6-10:In death, the narrator shall get to sleep but a moment, a space. For his soul, that immortal, ever-waking part of him will be transported in the twinkling of an eye to the presence of God, the fear of whom already makes every nerve and sinew in his body quiver. His soul, referred to by Donne here in the feminine gender her, will be transported to heaven by flight. Heaven is described here as the souls first seat, or first home, meaning of course, that the soul will return to where it came from. While the soul, the eternal constituent of every individual, takes flight to heaven, the body, earth-borne and therefore, perishable, returns to the earth to perish with it. Lines 11&12: The narrator then addresses his sins, and tells them to go where they are destinedto hell, the place they compelled him to go as well. Lines 13&14 But the narrator himself is destined for other placesfor heaven, to be precise. Donne borrows heavily here from the Christian doctrine of salvationthat sinners who believe in Jesus and repent of their sins will benefit from His atoning death on the cross on their behalf. Christ, being sinless, died as substitute for sinners, so that His righteousness might be imputed to them at the final judgment. Thus purged once and for all of the three evilsthe world, the flesh, and the devilhe would be ready to embrace the One he has trusted in. If poisonous minerals, and if that tree Whose fruit threw death on else immortal us, If lecherous goats, if serpents envious Cannot be damn'd, alas, why should I be? Why should intent or reason, born in me, Make sins, else equal, in me more heinous? And mercy being easy, and glorious To God, in his stern wrath why threatens he? But who am I, that dare dispute with thee, O God? Oh, of thine only worthy blood And my tears, make a heavenly Lethean flood, And drown in it my sins' black memory. That thou remember them, some claim as debt; I think it mercy, if thou wilt forget.
Comment [L.J37]: death Comment [L.J38]: allusion to garden

Comment [L.J39]: volta Comment [L.J40]: allusion to Job Comment [L.J41]: reference to crucifixtion Comment [L.J42]: for sin Comment [L.J43]: river of forgetfulness Comment [L.J44]: poet is sorrowful & repentant

-Q: why is the poem damned? -salvation/anxiety poem -note the repetition of if in the first few lines

-Note all the question marks

Poem X Death be not proud-Theres lots of materials online & you probably know this poem well; see : http://www.helium.com/items/677411-poetry-explication-holy-sonnet-10-johndonnes-address-to-death http://thepoetryofjohndonne.wikispaces.com/

Batter my heart, three-person'd God ; for you As yet but knock ; breathe, shine, and seek to mend ; That I may rise, and stand, o'erthrow me, and bend Your force, to break, blow, burn, and make me new. I, like an usurp'd town, to another due, Labour to admit you, but O, to no end. Reason, your viceroy in me, me should defend, But is captived, and proves weak or untrue. Yet dearly I love you, and would be loved fain, But am betroth'd unto your enemy ; Divorce me, untie, or break that knot again, Take me to you, imprison me, for I, Except you enthrall me, never shall be free, Nor ever chaste, except you ravish me.

Comment [L.J45]: Father, son, & Holy Spirit Comment [L.J46]: What poet is expecting God to do even though He hasnt done it yet Comment [L.J47]: Refers to poet-he needs to be mended Comment [L.J48]: In case the poet grows too bold Comment [L.J49]: note the alliteration Comment [L.J50]: reference to blacksmith? Comment [L.J51]: simile Comment [L.J52]: connect to Sonnet II Comment [L.J53]: violent rebellion

Comment [L.J54]: physical violencepassionate love *note the paradox

-poet needs to reestablish faith