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In English there are a number of conventions that should be used when writing a formal or business letter. Furthermore, you try to write as simply and as clearly as possible, and not to make the letter longer than necessary. Remember not to use informal language like contractions.
Addresses:
1) Your Address The return address should be written in the top right-hand corner of the letter. 2) The Address of the person you are writing to The inside address should be written on the left, starting below your address.
Date:
Different people put the date on different sides of the page. You can write this on the right or the left on the line after the address you are writing to. Write the month as a word.
Salutation or greeting:
1) Dear Sir or Madam, If you do not know the name of the person you are writing to, use this. It is always advisable to try to find out a name. 2) Dear Mr Jenkins, If you know the name, use the title (Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms, Dr, etc.) and the surname only. If you are writing to a woman and do not know if she uses Mrs or Miss, you can use Ms, which is for married and single women.
Ending a letter:
1) Yours faithfully If you do not know the name of the person, end the letter this way. 2) Yours sincerely If you know the name of the person, end the letter this way. 3) Your signature Sign your name, then print it underneath the signature. If you think the person you are writing to might not know whether you are male of female, put you title in brackets after your name.
First paragraph The first paragraph should be short and state the purpose of the letter- to make an enquiry, complain, request something, etc. The paragraph or paragraphs in the middle of the letter should contain the relevant information behind the writing of the letter. Most letters in English are not very long, so keep the information to the essentials and concentrate on organising it in a clear and logical manner rather than expanding too much. Last Paragraph The last paragraph of a formal letter should state what action you expect the recipient to taketo refund, send you information, etc.
asap = as soon as possible cc = carbon copy (when you send a copy of a letter to more than one person, you use this abbreviation to let them know) enc. = enclosure (when you include other papers with your letter) pp = per procurationem (A Latin phrase meaning that you are signing the letter on somebody else's behalf; if they are not there to sign it themselves, etc) ps = postscript (when you want to add something after you've finished and signed it) pto (informal) = please turn over (to make sure that the other person knows the letter continues on the other side of the page) RSVP = please reply
The example formal letter below details the general layout that a formal letter should conform to. Each aspect of the formal letter is detailed more fully below the image.
There are a number of conventions that should be adhered to when producing a formal letter. It is important that the overall structure is as clear and concise as possible and that you avoid the use of colloquialisms.
Addresses:
1) Your Address Your address should be displayed in the top right-hand section of your letter. This will enable the person that you are writing to, to reply to your letter. 2) The Address of the person you are writing to This address should be displayed beneath your address on the left-hand side of your letter, remember to include the name of the person that you are writing to. (If known)
Date:
This should be displayed on the right-hand side of the page on the line beneath your address and should be written in full format:
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1) Dear Sirs, If you do not know the name of the person that you are writing to, use the greeting "Dear Sirs,". In some circumstances it is useful to find a name, especially if you are writing to make a request as this will show that you have done your homework and your letter is more likely to receive a response. 2) Dear Mr Jones, If you know the name, use one of the following titles: Mr - for a male Mrs - for a married female Miss - for an unmarried female Ms - for a female whose status is unknown or would prefer to remain anonymous Dr - for a person with the status of a doctor This should be followed by the surname only (not the first name).
Concluding a Letter:
1) Yours faithfully, If you do not know the name of the person, end the letter with "Yours faithfully,". 2) Yours sincerely, If you know the name of the person, end the letter with "Yours sincerely,". 3) Your signature Sign your name, then print it underneath the signature. If it is potentially unclear what your title would be then include this in brackets next to your printed name.
Content of a Formal Letter
In modern society there is a trend to use a shorthand writing style, for instance replacing the word "you" with "u" or replacing the word "weekend" with "wkend", there are many other examples. This casual approach and informal writing style can easily be transferred, sometimes subconsciously, when a more formal style is required.
Introductory Paragraph
The introductory paragraph should be concise and should clearly state the purpose of the formal letter whether it is to lodge a complaint, make an enquiry or to request something.
Main Body
The main body of the formal letter should clearly state the points that you want to make in your letter. As a general rule it is a good idea to keep this as to the point as possible to ensure
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that the recipient remains engaged. Longer letters may be more appropriate when making a complaint as you may require to add more detail in order to convey the importance of what you are putting across.
Concluding Paragraph
The concluding paragraph of a formal letter should outline what action you would like the recipient to take: to make a refund, to send you information etc.
Application of Formal Letter Writing Techniques Letter of Complaint
A letter of complaint is a formal letter sent to an individual or organisation in response to receiving poor service or a product that is not fit for purpose. An example of a letter of complaint would be a letter sent to a tour operator who has provided a bad service while you have been on holiday. This type of formal letter does not necessarily need to be concise as it is important that you detail your arguments and points as much as possible.
Letter of Enquiry
A letter of enquiry is a formal letter that makes an approach to an individual or organisation either speculatively or in response to printed public domain material whereby you are requesting some information. An example of a letter of enquiry would be a letter sent to an company requesting a copy of their catalogue or brochure. By their very nature letters of enquiry are short and to the point, it is usually beneficial to include other methods of contact in case the company needs to get in touch with via other means.
Letter of Request
A letter of request is a formal letter much like a letter of enquiry but specifically asks an individual or organisation to take an action. An example of a letter of request would be a letter sent to request sponsorship for a charity activity. It is important to stress the importance of being clear and concise with this format of letter as the recipient must remain engaged and interested in what you have to say.