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Sentence
Support,
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Support
Clincher
Sentence
An Example….
In the summer, hosts of big red-and-yellow
grasshoppers, with heads shaped like horses, will
descend and eat holes in all the softer leaves. Walking
sticks fly like boomerangs. Shining brown leaf-shaped
palmetto bugs scurry like cockroaches. Spiders like tiny
crabs hang in stout webs. The birds snap at small moths
and butterflies of every kind. A blue racer, the snake
that moves across the cleared sand like a whiplash, will
with one flick destroy the smooth, careful cup of the ant
lion in the hot sand. The whole world of the pines and
of the rocks hums and glistens and stings of life.
What makes a good paragraph?
Unity. All parts of the paragraph work together as
a unit to express and support one main idea.
Coherence. The ideas in the paragraph are
arranged and connected in a way that will make
sense to readers. (created by paying attention to
the order or organizational pattern of the ideas,
and the connections made between paragraphs.
Elaboration. The paragraph’s main idea is
developed or expanded using plenty of supporting
details.
To create a good paragraph….
…focus on the order of your ideas.
Showing Spatial • Into, next, over, in, here, above, across, behind,
Order before, inside, beyond, down, around, there, under