A Formal Email Structure A formal email usually consists the following parts: To: C.C. B.C.C. Subject: Salutation Message Closing Remarks Signature Block Notations (optional) Mind-map for Email Writing 7 Questions Approach This is a structured method of covering relevant information: WHAT? Essential message WHO? Persons concerned WHEN? Days, hours, timelines, deadlines WHERE? Places HOW? Circumstances, explanations WHY? Causes and/or objective HOW MUCH? Calculable and measurable data
Formal Email Writing Techniques Direct Best for: Good news Non-emotional issues Audiences that prefer a straightforward approach
Indirect Best for: Bad news Sensitive situations Less direct readers (some international) Issues that need explaining
Subject Line ( Message Category Word) To apply An application for. Applying for. To invite An invitation to Inviting you to.. To remind A reminder about. Reminding about. To notify A notification about Notifying you about.. To request A request for Requesting you for..
Salutation Dear Sir or Madam, Dear Sir, Dear Sirs, Dear Madam: Dear Mr. Pandey: Dear Ms. Joshi, Dear Mr. Ramesh Pandey, Dear Ms. Anita Joshi, Dear Dr. Sanjay Shrestha, Dear Board Members, Dear Partners, American(:) Dear Manager, Dear Recipient, Dear All, Ladies and Gentlemen: Dear Valued Client, Dear Bikash jee, Dear Bhawanaji, Dear Aman Sir, Dear Kabita Maam Dear Peter: British(,)
Email Message (IDA) First Paragraph INTRODUCTION: Interest/Purpose/Reference/Reason (I) Second Paragraph BODY: Details/Discussion/ Description(D) Third Paragraph CONCLUSION: Action/Expectation/Request/Commitment (A)
Email Message Presentation The Introduction This paragraph should introduce why you are writing the email and sum up the key points in the following paragraphs. Include a statement that shows you are knowledgeable of the audience to which your email is directed. The Body Provide background or history regarding the purpose of the email. Talk about key points you are making. Include a justification of the importance of the main points. List any important dates, discussions, and conversations that are relevant. Ask questions, if necessary. Conclusion Summarize the main points of the letter. Restate the problem and resolution if pertinent. Include deadlines. Present call for action Look to future
Tips for Direct and Indirect Emails Direct Introduction: Establishes a reason for writing Presents main idea Body: Provides and explains details Conclusion: Reminds of any deadlines Presents call for action Looks to future
Indirect Introduction: Acts as a buffer with a positive or neutral statement Compliments the readers, agrees, appreciates, thanks, apology and more Body: Explains situation first Leads up to the point/issue States point/issue If possible, links bad news with benefits Does not place blame Conclusion: Does not apologize Gracious closing
Closing Remarks Sincerely, Affectionately, Best Regards, Kindest Regards, Hopefully, Truly, Faithfully, With Appreciation, At your service, Thank you, Kind regards, Kind thanks, Kind wishes, Many thanks,
Warm wishes, Warmly, With appreciation, With gratitude, With sincere thanks, With sympathy, With warm regards, Yours, Yours cordially, Yours respectfully, Yours sincerely, Yours truly, In appreciation, In sympathy,
Signature Block Sarthak Khanal( Mr.) Research Officer National Human Rights Commission Pulchowk, Lalitpur Ph. +977 1 5010015 Fax: +977 1 5010016 E-mail: sathak.khanal@gmail.com URL: www.nhrcnepal.org ( Office logo can be added.) Notations Notations are optional. There are usually three kinds of notations:
(a) P. S. (= postscript): An addition to the letter, below the place where you have signed your name. It is suggestive of some omissions or inclusions in your email conversations.
(b) Encl. ( = Enclosure (s) ): Other files you want to attach to the letter, such as a rsum, a receipt, or a letter of certification.
(c) RSVP(Please reply) : An abbreviation often included in invitations to request that the invitee let the host know if he or she will be attending.