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What is
show,
not tell?
Show
Tell
The powerful
moon breathed
down upon me.
Questions
Write down questions you have
about the events of the film.
L/O: to be able to use the writing skill of show not tell to create effective descriptions.
ALL will create pieces of writing that use show, not tell.
Most will create engaging pieces of writing that use the interesting, out-of-the-ordinary
vocabulary choices in order to show, not tell.
Some will create extremely imaginative pieces of writing, daring vocabulary choices in order
to show, not tell.
Peer Assessment
Check your partner has planned for
Varied vocabulary (adjectives, adverbs, similes, personification ). Does
it seem as if it will be interesting and out-of-the-ordinary or is it
daring?
Showing, not telling (words that will create a sense of atmosphere,
such as describing shadows rather than simply saying the moon was
shining on a dark night)
Overall, decide if the piece is going to be interesting or daring.
Give a target, such as: plan for more unusual adjectives or create a
sense of atmosphere. Give advice to help them make a better plan and
therefore written piece.
Get writing
You are describing the setting and only
the setting at this moment.
Possible sentence starters
Peer Assessment
6+
Your writing uses adjectives and adverbs to bring it to life. You have
put some thought into the vocabulary you have chosen and
sometimes, there are some really effective words. You manage to
show,
not tell sometimes.
Award
a level.
Homework
Write a paragraph to describe the setting; the place
where the action happens. Remember that you are
the girl in the film so you are writing using I (first
person).
Paper written or typed.
Due Monday 2nd December
Watch film here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=rMNNXCm7mUc&safe=active