Career Research Paper

CRITERIA

Essential
information
included

EXCELLENT

Educational requirements
College or tech school that offers
this degree in GA
Licensure and/or credentialing

information included
10 tasks or skills performed in

this career
Interview with someone in

this field OR pros and cons of

this career, OR a typical
schedule for this career
Employers/companies in Georgia

hiring for this position.

50-40 points

All paragraphs are well constructed

and includes several supporting
details, along with an introductory
sentence and concluding sentence.
Introductory and closing paragraph
present.

GOOD

ONE required
element of
essential
information is
missing

Written reportmechanics

1-3 grammatical, spelling, or

punctuation errors
10 points

Citation of
sources

All sources are accurately

documented in the proper format

All sources are

accurately

20 points

TWO required
elements of
essential
information is
missing

POOR

FOUR OR
LESS of the
required
elements of
essential
are present
in report

SC
OR
E

19-10 points
39-30 points
Almost all
paragraphs are
well constructed
and includes
several supporting
details, along with
an introductory
sentence and
concluding
sentence.
4-6 grammatical,
spelling, or
punctuation errors

Written reportorganization

FAIR

9-0 points
Paragraphin
g structure
was not
clear and
sentences
are not
typically
related with
in the
paragraphs.
7-8 grammatical, More than 8
spelling, or
errors
punctuation
errors

All sources are

Some
accurately
sources are
Paragraphs
include related
information but
are not typically
constructed well
or information is
repeated in
paragraphs

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INTRODUCTION
Have you ever felt unsafe at work?
Certified Industrial Hygienists strive to
protect workers and the public from many
types of dangers. They defend workers
from biological, chemical, ergonomic,
environmental, and physical threats. A
career in Industrial Hygiene encompasses
science, math, and working with people.
How does one become a CIH? (1.)

EDIT

Did I use any resources to create this paragraph?

If so, how do I properly cite them?
Did I write in complete sentences?
Did I include the main idea or thesis of the
paper?
Did I introduce the topic well? Could someone
else reading it know what to expect in the
paper?
Does the information in the paragraph flow and
make sense? (READ ALOUD)

ST

PARAGRAPH

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Is each sentence grammatically

correct?
Read the paragraph out loud- does it
make sense? Does it flow?
Are my sources cited within the
paragraph?
Did I add the source to my
bibliography?

Bibliography
1. n.p. American Board of Industrial
Hygienist. 2014. October 19, 2015.
<http://www.abih.org/>