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Arran Bull
Shape Task
Shape Task
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I love the gradient effects on the racoon, especially on the eyes.
I like how the background is the same grey colour as the racoon. It blends in really
well because the grey part of the head is connected to the background with no
outline, making it look appealing and interesting.
The shaping on both pieces is really fluent and makes them look visually appealing.
Both pieces have a really bold and nice colour palette that perfectly match the
animals they represent.
I like the Lighting effects on the lion because it gives the piece a lot of depth.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I dont really like the shape of the mane because it looks to simple, sharp and not
really hairy. Next time, I should shorted the spikes on the shape and add more of
them, but also smoothen their tips to make it look more like a lions mane.
While I like the lighting effects on the lion for giving the piece depth, I wish I could
maybe smoothen it because it sort-of looks unnaturally plastic which isnt very
pretty for what is meant to be a lion.
I wish I couldve added whiskers to the racoon because it would of added more
authentic detail to it.
Rotoscope
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I liked the self-shaded/cartoony look of the image because its what
Im aiming for in my childrens book.
The colour palette is pale which replicates the source material of
this image: a zombie film.
I like how the name tag label is at a 3D angle that matches the
angle of the tag; it gives the piece more depth.
I love how the shirt realistically creases and bends on the sides and
the pockets because it looks professional and detailed.
What would you improve if you did it again?
Maybe for next time, I should add different shadings and textures
onto the Rotoscope for when I ever want to go for a more realistic
look for a project.
Try to make the level of the eyelids the same on both of them as
they look quite uneven.
Film Quotes
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I love the font choice and the text colour because its the same as the
Jaws logo, completely fitting the source material of the image.
I love how the orca boat from the Jaws film is a white silhouette because it
looks visually appealing as a silhouette and it blends in well with the text.
It also goes great with the quote itself: Were gonna need a bigger boat.
What would you improve if you did it again?
The wave effect underneath the sharks thin is looks a bit off because
theres like a straight line in between a couple of waves on the bottom of
the thin when really the whole line should be curvy. I would of also wished
Id put a curvy line underneath the boat because it would of looked
consistent with the rest of the image.
I wish that instead of a shark thin, I used a white silhouette of the shark
leaping out of the water with his mouth open, ready to eat the boat. The
silhouette also has outlines showcasing the sharks mouth, jaw, eye and
gills to really make the shark look scary.
Text Based
Text Based
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like all of the the interesting ways and angles the text bends, pops, curves
etc. It would be really boring if the text was just straight with 90 degree angles.
The font is bold and thick which makes the text easy to read. This is especially
helpful when it comes to some of the more skewed and distorted text.
The colour choices are really nice with some pretty cool gradient effects.
I love the texture on the first one because it looks really interesting and
actually blends in well with the text.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I dont really like the the bevelled grid-based textures on the second piece; it
doesnt really look appealing when its on text. Next time, I should just stick to
bold shades and gradients for text.
Even though I like the choice of font, I wish I couldve used different fonts so
theres a much greater variety.
I could of maybe experimented with effects other than gradients and shadows
on the texts.
Comic Book
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like the choppy, cut-out style of the outlines, it gives the picture a
special charm.
The cell-shaded colour palette is very bold and interesting. I also
like how I given the man yellow skin considering that it is Matt
Groening: the creator of The Simpsons.
What would you improve if you did it again?
The placement and the shading of the colours looks really jagged
and misplaced. Next time, I would like to keep the colours in side
their corresponding areas and making the lining of the colours
smoother with better rotoscoping.
I wish I could change the colour of the background to make it
standout from the mans colours.
The colour palette, while bold, could use some more variety of
primary colours.
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I like this pieces cut-out art style. It makes the image look like its
from a very stylish and gorgeous-looking comic book.
The images effects are some of the best Photoshop work Ive
done so far. Its certainly an improvement from the last comic book
piece. The colours are bold thanks to the cut-out art style, the way
they blur and blend looks very appealing, especially on the
jackets creases and I love the way the buildings in the
background fade into a cloudier colour the further away they are
from the screen. These features definitely add depth to the piece.
Thanks to the lighting of the piece and how detailed the cut-out
style is, it looks really close to the original image. But it still
manages to stand out from the original image because of the
added filters.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I think I couldve used the polygon lasso tool a bit better when
filtering Newt Scamander (the main man on the image). Some
areas look out of place compared to the original image and I think
I could improve my skills with the polygon lasso tool for next time I
do a piece like this.
Instead of blending in with the background colours, I maybe
couldve added more colours to the background objects, like the
car and other towns people. I think it couldve made the image
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I loved how I created a combination of for each image and other assets in the comic: I gave
each of them a cut-out filter, and then added a poster edge filter over the cut-out filter to
give the comic a nice-looking art style thats reminiscent of early Marvel/DC comics.
The specific combination of layers Ive created also makes everything pop and easy to see
thanks to the blocky shading from the cut-out filter and the black outlines from the poster
edge filter.
I love how I plastered the MYSTERIOUS DOOR sign onto the door through Photoshop;
even though the sign isnt actual on the real door thats on the photograph, I think it looks
like it was on the comic, thanks to all the amazing distortion, perspective and bevel tools I
used.
The emoticons and movement directions (e.g. the arrow and the question mark) makes the
piece more charming and expressive.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I feel that the colour palette for this piece is way too dull and dark at times: I think I should
make the colours more bold, bright and vibrant next time with better lighting on the
photographs and trying some colour alterations when editing the images.
I feel the explosion effects could look a bit less geometric and more realistic to make them
consistent with the comics art style.
Illustration
1. Rough
Sketch
2. Fine-lining
3.
Colouring/Final
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I love the character art style here. It looks simple but also visually
appealing: the big eyes, mouth to one side, expressive face, the hairy
spikes on the back etc.
The colour palette looks really nice when its done with colouring pencils
because it really gives the illustration a storybook look.
I find the inky outline of the illustration to look really appealing and
stylish.
What would you improve if you did it again?
The character design here looks way too similar to Sonic the Hedgehog,
even with little changes in design and colour palette, which may mark
this design as plagiarism. Maybe next time, I should try and alter the
design even more to make it differ from Sonics look more.
I would like to try drawing this illustration on a computer using a graphics
tablet so that I can use more graphical and advance drawing and filling
tools.
arrative Environment
Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
I adore the lighting effects on the image: the way the light bounces on the
objects, the way the shadows are presented on the image, the beautiful
glow around the sun, the thin line of fog above the ocean to show how far
the ocean is from the view of the image. It really makes the image look
graphically professional.
I love the reflection of the sun on the ocean because smudging the look of
the sun for its reflection really makes the ocean look like water as it should.
The colour palette is very bold and vivid, combined with the lighting effects
really makes the image look appealing.
I love how the birds slowly fade into the sun as they get closer to it. With
each bird having a different fade effect, it really gives them depth.
What would you improve if you did it again?
I wished I couldve made the clouds fade into the top of the sky so that it
really shows the transaction from day to night. It doesnt look very natural
the way its just plastered onto the screen without any effect towards the
background.
The clouds themselves dont look very natural as well. In my eyes, they
kind of look like theyre made of plastic. I wished Id either make the clouds
look more like real clouds where they have messy outlines and fill, or got
rid of the bevel on the image so it blends in better with the rest of image
when it comes to visual style.
Initial Ideas
Idea Generation 1:
Idea Generation 2:
Idea Generation 3:
Mood boards of
chosen idea:
Visual Style:
Character
designs:
The Hedgehog
The Hare
The Hedgehogs
Wife
Proposal and
feedback:
Proposal
Dimensions
14-15 pages, A4 landscape (297 x 210 mm)
Export Format
PDF (Portable Document Format)
Advantages: Can be easily ported to other software with the same format,
Lossless compression, Easy for viewing, High resolution
Disadvantages: Large file size, Isnt freely editable
Story Overview
One Sunday morning, a hedgehog decides to go check on his turnips when all
of a sudden, he spots a hare, who even after the hedgehog greets a friendly
hello, mocks his small legs. Enraged, the hedgehog wagers the hare a race for
a large penny. After he accepts his challenge, they arrange to meet at a furrow
field in half an hour, and so the hedgehog quickly goes home to grab his wife
so he can get his revenge on the hare for insulting him. He plans to make the
hare run himself until exhaustion by making his wife stand at the other end of
the furrow; because both of them look similar, the rabbit will think its the one
hedgehog beating him in every race, making the hare constantly wanting a
rematch. When they start the race, he falls for the trap, thus making him run
himself to exhaustion.
Production Methods
For the character illustrations, I have a particular process in mind: I
will draw them them on paper in pencil first, then Ill scan them
onto the computer as PDF files, import the images to adobe
illustrator and finally, using a graphics tablet, trace over the
drawing on illustrator and fill the colours in digitally. Digitising the
character designs will give them a professional look which will be
suitable for a childrens book that can potentially be published.
The backgrounds will be done using Adobe Photoshop using the
same techniques Ive used for my Narrative Environment piece.
These are the following: rotoscoping, clipping masks, warping
shapes, adding lighting, glow, shadow and gradient effects etc.
Audience
The book will be aimed towards children from both genders around
ages 3-9. This is for children who want to read a fairy tale that feels
fresh and non-clichd which is why Ive picked a fairy tale that has
not really been adapted before. This also for kids who want to read
a book that has very stylish illustrations all over and not something
so detailed to make it easy on the eyes.
Deadline
19th November 2016
Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
I have a large and detailed variety of ideas in my generations, bringing up all the
necessary points and making them clear to understand. The mood board has a
great variety of different themes and styles but maybe I should make them more
clear and relevant to the story of my book. I need to complete the proposal
because theres a lot work that needs to be started on it.
I disagree with the one point of criticism towards my mood board when it was
how irrelevant my images were towards my story. Its not so much showing
Script
Development:
Final Script:
1. It was a beautiful morning outside; the church bells rang, the birds were singing, the bees were buzzing; the
flowers were blooming, while the sun was shining brightly upon them. Every creature was happy, including the
hedgehog. While his wife was busying doing the dishes inside of their treehouse, he was outside, standing by the
door with his arms folded, whistling the most smoothing melody youll hear from a hedgehog on a Sunday morning.
2. After whistling for a little bit, he decided that while his wife was busy with the dishes, he would go on a little walk
into his turnip patch to see how his turnips were doing. He closed the door and set off with a smile towards the path
that leads to the field where the patch lies. His walk was cut short however, just by the front of the field when he
spotted a hare that was examining his cabbage patch in the field.
3. When the hedgehog spots the hare, he wishes him a nice, friendly good morning, but the hare, who was quite a
distinguished gentleman, rudely ignores him. Instead, he sarcastically asks the hedgehog How on Earth are you
running around in this field at an early time like this? The hedgehog replies Well, Im actually taking a walk,.
TAKING A WALK?! laughed the hare Im certain there are better uses for those puny legs of yours.
4. This remark made the hedgehog furiously angry! Is that so? said the hedgehog, Well then I challenge you to a
race! If you accept, I bet youll be on your knees, sobbing in defeat. The hare laughed, Please dont make me
laugh! But hey, I dont care if you embarrass yourself. What will we wager? A large, gold fifty-pound coin, said the
hedgehog.
5. Well then, I accept your challenge, said the hare as he shakes hands with the hedgehog I suggest we rally at
the furrow fields. Good idea! Meet me there in half an hour the hedgehog arranges I am very hungry so Im
going to go home to have a quick breakfast. The hare was agreeable with the hedgehog and so they depart. As the
hedgehog strolls back home, he thought to himself He may be a distinguished gentleman with long legs, but hes
still an arrogant fool who must be taught a lesson.
6. As soon as he arrived home, the hedgehog says to his wife Honey, put your house duties on hold. I need you to
come to the furrow field with me. Whats the matter? asked the wife. I bet a fifty-pound coin with a hare that I
could beat him in a race, replied the hedgehog. Have you gone insane?! How do you think youre going to beat a
hare in a race?! Shouted the wife. Dont worry, I have a plan, the hedgehog said he may beat me in speed, but I
can outsmart him by a mile, but Ill need your help. Come with me and Ill explain on the way. Well, ok, said the
wife.
Final Script:
7. Later on, the hedgehog arrived to the top of the field and the hare was already there, waiting for him.
When I arrive somewhere due, Im always on time. Thats means you are late! Said the hare in a cocky
manner. Oh well, shall we start then? Of course the hedgehog answered. On your mark! and they both
took their places in their corresponding furrows. The hare counted 3, 2, 1, GO! and blasted through the
field like a rocket.
8. When the hare arrived at the other end of the field, his jaw dropped to the ground, as he saw the
hedgehog as he called out Im already here! The hare wondered, Something fishy is going on here. He
called out I want a rematch! Lets run back to the top of the field!
9. Again, he counted 3, 2, 1, GO! and took off the same way as last round: like a rocket. When the hare
arrived back at the top of the furrow, the hedgehog called out to him Im already here! Again? the hare
said in shock, I want yet another rematch! Thats fine by me, said the hedgehog we can go all day for
all I care. With that being said, the hare ran 73 more times through the field. And each match ended the
same way: the hedgehog beats him while calling out, Im already here! But the hare never lost his
determination until the 74th time he ran, which he couldnt even finish.
10. The hare was exhausted from all the runs through the field so many times, and dropped to the ground.
By then, the hedgehog walked up to him with a smirk on his face and his hand out, waiting for the hare to
pay the wager. The hare was on his knees, sobbing in defeat, just like what the hedgehog predicted as he
holds up a fifty-pound coin, waiting for the hedgehog to take it from him. The hedgehog then proceeds to
take the coin off the hare: You see Mr. Hare, this is why you shouldnt judge people on appearances, said
the hedgehog. The hare drags himself home, still on his knees crying.
11. Once the hare gets out of the hedgehogs sight, he calls out his wife from the other end of the furrow,
who was dressed up like him, Thank you honey! I can always count on you, said the hedgehog. It was a
very successful plan. Its a good thing we look very much a-like, said the wife. She put her head bow back
on her forehead and they happily set off home with the large gold fifty-pound coin. Ever since that day, no
hare has ever accepted a race with a hedgehog because the hedgehog showed an example on why you
should never judge a lesser creature, no matter how distinguished you may be.
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