Area

TITLES:
I.
Order
II.
Font Choice
III. Colours
IV. Positioning
V.
Transitions

Strengths
I.
II.

III.

IV.

V.

By keeping the titles at the

start you allowed for fluid,
uninterrupted action later on
The choice of font look very
long and eyry which tie in
well with the eyry, disturbing
nature of the film
The white colour of the font
contrasts with the black is
very conventional with the
genre as it makes them
stand out and adds depth
and isolation to the titles
The positioning of the titles
in the center was key at
drawing attention away from
the action, allowing for
enigma codes
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Targets
I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

Mark/
5

N/A the titles order suited the type of film well

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The positioning of the titles felt distant and werent
in the center which makes them look sporadic
The transitions between the titles were very quick
(too quick) didnt give enough time to read
seemed too fast pace

Section Total:
CINEMATOGRAPHY/EDITING
I.
Mise-en-scene
II.
Range of shot types
III. Camera angles
IV. Pace
V.
Editing effects/Transitions

I.
II.
III.

IV.

V.

The dark lighting and

woodland atmosphere is
highly effective
POV Shot was great. Slow
motion was effective. Really
great range used
Panorama and handheld
work hugely effectively to
make the audience feel part
of the action
Quick pace is really effective
in depicting the genre. The
newspaper clips really help
to limit the audiences
viewing as it breaks down
the visuals. The slow motion
and counting down audio is
hugely effective
Cuts are effective in
allowing a quick pace to be

I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

(Wasnt sure if counted as cinematography) but the

ready or not may be more effective if it is louder
as it is slightly muffled
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Perhaps ensure all the newspaper articles are clear
and are not blurred (unless this adds to the overall
piece and is deliberate)

I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

5/5
4/5
4/5
3/5
3/5

19/25
I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

5/5
5/5
5/5
5/5
3/5

INTRODUCTION OF:
I.
Characters and
relationships
II.
Locations
III. Storyline
IV. Genre
V.
Enigma codes

I.
II.

III.
IV.

V.

Clearly shown from the start

the relationships between
one another
Location fits with the genre of
the film and is kept
mysterious which adds to the
effect created
Storyline makes sense, it fits,
clearly shown and easy to
understand
Genre is established quickly
and clearly through the use
of screams and quick jumps
between scenes
You never fully know who
either character is or why
theyre in that situation so
adds to the mystery

I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Maybe add something to show a bit of the past or

explain to the audience/get them to infer why
theyre their

Section Total:
SOUND
I.
Suitability of soundtrack
II.
Pace matched the pace of
visuals
III. Audio levels
IV. Clarity of dialogue
V.
Use of ambient sound

I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

Built up the suspense to the

climatic moment well
Speeding up of music fitted
the running well
Majority of the filming was
audible
Clearly heard almost every
word
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I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Some of the killers lines dropped off and weren't

hearable when he wasnt facing the camera
Same as before, struggled to hear the dialogue
when not said to camera. Also, I feel like the woman
screams too clearly with tape over her mouth
Some moments like the killing scene could have
been made more dramatic with certain sound effects

Section Total:

OVERALL TOTAL:

I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

4/5
4/5
4/5
4/5
4/5

20/25
I.
II.
III.
IV.
V.

5/5
5/5
3/5
3/5
3/5

19/25

81/10
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